Poem about Arman

Hei everyone, i love writing poems, so after a lot of thinking and not thinking and persuasion by Jai, i have decided to write a poem about the current situation of Arman..let me know what you guys think...

Emptiness this heart feels,
is as deep as the silent ocean,
Just to breathe,
takes everything that i have,

Oh God,
stop this madness,
Make this heart understand,
that my love can be never mine,

Pain and pleasure, Love and heartbreak,
they say it comes and goes,
Then why does this heart still bleed,
why can't this pain end,

Try as i may,
wish as i might,
To forget you,
is impossible,

You are in every breathe i take,
You are the day to my night,
You are the beat of my heart,
You are the reason i am alive.

very nice👍🏼 keep writing

Originally posted by: PariD

very nice👍🏼 keep writing

Thanks a lot..Pari...is it ok to call you Pari...really nice name...

Originally posted by: arjunaluis

Thanks a lot..Pari...is it ok to call you Pari...really nice name...

Abhi, beautiful, it brings out the depth of pain and longing that both feel for the other.

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Abhi, beautiful, it brings out the depth of pain and longing that both feel for the other.

Thanks a lot Jhanvi...😊😊

very nice


but i thnk if both would be a little more sensible outspoken trust each other more than their own people then the scenario would be diff n may be u would get a chance to compose happy poems

Originally posted by: fansush

very nice


but i thnk if both would be a little more sensible outspoken trust each other more than their own people then the scenario would be diff n may be u would get a chance to compose happy poems

Very very true...i feel the same...but with this 10 days to divorce i think something will happen and they indeed will be together...and then i shall compose happy poems..i could do one for Arvi...i just want to see people's reaction to this one...if they like it then i shall come up with other ones...thanks for your comment...

Abhi so u opened the thread at last good going..What a beautiful poem..Fantastic fantastic..Loved it all...Keep writing dear..The depth and emotions portrayed are just fantastic..Kudos to you my dear ⭐️👏

Originally posted by: sipokobusak

beautiful 👏

Thanks