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Posted: 13 years ago
its really nice. Every character is having some role to play. I think cv have to follow some ideas from IF instead of stupid track like arvi separation due to some lame reasons.
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Posted: 13 years ago
At the Karangars
It was morning in the Karangars and archu was visiting so they could decide when is the henna ceremony.
Archu: Dk sir told me that we will meet and finalize the wedding date
Priya: Thats great
Priya's tone was sad
Archu: what happened Priya you look upset
Priya: I wish that aai baba could have stayed here for a little while
Archu: You know that they are busy
Priya: I know
Archu put her hand on Priya's shoulder
Archu: Mandira told me that they will come at the wedding but shes coming to the henna ceremony your baba has meetings this week
Priya smiled
Archu: check if Purvi is awake
Priya: Ok
Priya left
Purvi was asleep so Priya checked Purvi's phone. She saw that Arjun sent her 20 messages last night and she sent 18 plus Arjun called her last night. Priya smiled evily and texted Arjun, Hi darling are you awake yet? Priya gigled and tried to wake up Purvi.
Priya: Purvi wake
Purvi(sleepingly):No I dont want to go to school
Priya was confused
Priya: Purvi you graduated you dont have to go to school
Purvi: Stop lying Priya and let me go to sleep tell aai that I will miss school today
Priya smiled and decided to play a prank on her
Priya: But Mrs.Metha will get mad at us
Purvi: I dont care shes a witch anyways
Priya: Ok should I tell her that
Purvi: No!!
Then she woke up wide awake
Purvi; Oh I get it so you tried to tease me well i'll show you
Purvi hit Priya with her pillow
Priya hit back with another pillow they both started hitting eachother with pillows when Archu came in
Archu: priya Purvi!
Both girls stopped and looked at Archu
Archu: Stop being so childish
Both just looked at Archu then looked at eachother and smiled and they started hitting Archu with Pillows. Archu joined in
All 3 were laughing and smiling.
At the Deshmuks
manav: Sachin!
Sachu came in
Sachu: Yes baba
Manav: wheres Archana?
Sachu: she went to her aai's place to discuss about the henna ceremony and besides why are you bothering about her. Its all her fault that Ovi is despressed
Manav: Sachin! Stop blaming Archana she never even knew that Ovi loved Arjun
Sachu: baba why did you even go to the engagment last night
Manav: Sachin Purvi is also my daughter and i also agreed to this relationship
Sachin: So aus aurat asked you if you agree
Manav: Yes she did
Sachu: baba you are getting divorsed with her in 2 months and that means your relationship with Purvi will be no more
Manav: No mine with Archana but Purvi is my daughter. So you are saying that i will lose Ovi and Teju
Sachu: no they are your daughters your real daughters
Manav: SO you are also saying that I will lose you becuase remember Archana didn't give birth to you
sachu: But baba that woman adopted her without you
Manav: Well I accept her as my daughter like I accept you as my son
Manav left the room
Sachu was angry
Sachu: I have to get rid of that woman very early but how
at the hotel
Teju and Archu went to the hotel where Ovi was staying.Archu wanted to see Ovi so Tej took her.
Tej knocked on Ovi's door and Ovi opened the door she smiled at Tej but frowned when she saw Archu
Ovi: What if she doing here
Tej: Ovi be polite
Archu and Tej went in
Archu: I wanted to see how you were because you were angry last night so
Ovi: Why are you worried about me?
Tej: Ovi! Shes being nice to you so you should be nice to her
Ovi rolled her eyes
Archu: Listen Ovi i know you are angry but your angry is justified. You loved Arjun
Ovi: I love Arjun. Hes my life.
archu: You have to understand that arjun doesn't ahve the same feelings for you your love is one sided
Ovi: Shut up! you are so selfish! You only love Purvi if you had any other daughter you would ignore them thank god you dont otherwise they would be crying in one room
Then Teju slapped Ovi
Ovi: Teju you-
Tej slapped Ovi again
Archu was shocked
Tej: If you say another word against Archu aunty you will see the worst of me
Ovi: Teju you slapped me? how could you? Im your sister your real sister!
Tej: Shut up Ovi! I shouldnt have taken archu aunty here come on aunty
Archu: but tej
Tej: please aunty
Archu: Ok
Archu and Tej were leaving archu looked back at Ovi with tears in her eyes
They were both at the front of the hotel
Tej: im sorry aunty i shouldnt have taken you there.You were being so nice to Ovi but she just insulted you. Im sorry
Tej was crying and Archu took Tej's hand and was holding them
Archu: Its not your fault and please dont cry you are my good girl right? Archu wiped Tej's tears and kissed her forehead
Tej: You are so nice aunty Purvi is lucky but I want to tell you something my aai left me and my family 18 years ago and babas facing a divorse with her but I feel that there is a reason behind her leaving us. Aaji said that its becuase she loved money but I have a feeling that Aaji knows the truth. I want to hate her but I cant
Archu: maybe there is if you meet her ask her
Tej:I will
Archu: Well look theres a gol guppa stand over there lets eat some
Tej: O
Teju and Archu went to the Gol guppa stand and ordered 2 plates of spicy gol guppas. They were both feeding gol guppas to eachother. They were both happy.
In arjun's car
Purvi and Arjun were talking to eachother in the back
Arjun: I just remembered I got this sweet text from you this morning
Purvi: Text? I didnt send you a text
arjun was confused and showed her the text
Purvi: Oh that must have been Priya I will get her today
Arjun: Aww I wish it was you
Purvi smiled
Then she saw a park
Purvi: Can we stop here?
Arjun: of course Driver stop the car
Purvi saw a swing set and went there Arjun followed. Arjun started to swing Purvi. Purvi smiled and laughed. Arjun was just admiring her. Then it started raining. Purvi went in the rain and started enjoying the rain. Arjun joined her and they both hugged. They were both having a great time.
Precap: Prem meets Arjun
I hope you enjoyed this part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was nice...update soon...thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Your story line is getting interesting...Can't wait for the next update!!!
Good Job!!

That deserves...
3 CLAPS!!!
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LOL!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy it ws amazing...lovd it..hope u will give us a great arvilicious wedding...waiting for dat..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
At the Karangars
Purvi came in the house wet and the Priya came out of the kitchen
Priya: Purvi! why are you wet?
Purvi: It was raining
Priya: Oh
Then she smiled
Priya: I thought you went with Arjun and in a car?
Purvi: Um ya I did
Then Tej came in
Tej: Priya do you know where my-
Then she looked at Purvi
Tej: Purvi why are you so wet?
Priya: She went out with Arjun and it was raining and they were in a car
Tej smiled
Tej: oh I see
Purvi: Im going inside
Priya: But can you tell me how you are so drenched
Purvi ignored her and went inside
Priya and Tej smiled and gave eachother a high 5
Purvi was drying her hair and she was remembering when she was in the rain with Arjun. At the Kirloasakers Arjun was remembering the same. They both went to their windows and looked at the moon. Purvi remembered when Arjun said that whenever she missed him just look up at the moon.
At the Kirlosakers
Aditya walked up to Arjun who was in his room
Aditya: Arjun
Arjun: Ya
Aditya: Arjun actually I was thinking of going back to work. I asked Dk uncle he said yes and I'm just gonna tell you. I sent everything to the Mumbai Hospital.
Arjun: So your going back to being a doctor awesome. you should
tell Priya
Aditya:Why?
arjun: becuase she doesnt know that you work
Aditya: ok
Adi left and Arjun went to sleep
At the Deshmuks
It was morning and Archana was on the phone with someone
Archu: i want the best henna artist. I will pay double. Ok bye
Manav was listening
Manav: Archana here some money for the henna ceremony
Archu: I cant take it Manav.
Manav: Please
Sachu was watching
Manav: Im Purvi's baba if you dont take it i will feel like a stranger
Archu hesitated
Manav: for my sake please
Archu heasitated for a moment then agreed
Archu: Ok for your sake
Manav: thnx
Manav left so did Sachu
Archu: Manav im so happy that you love Purvi alot
At the office
Arjun was working when a man came in it was Prem
Arjun: Oh Mr.Jhoshi please come in please sit
Prem sat down
Prem: Im here for the Deshpandey file
Arjun: Yes of course actually I dont have it right now hold on
Arjun: Purvi please come to my cabin with the Deshpandey file
A few moments later Purvi came in
Purvi: Here sir
Arjun: Mr.Jhoshi this is Purvi Deshmuk
They both shook hands
Arjun: His company will work side by us
Prem: My baba will come later
Arjun: Ok thats great
Prem: Im going to go
Arjun: ok bye
Prem: bye
Prem left and Purvi followed but Arjun told her to stop
Arjun: purvi can you please stay for a moment
Purvi: Ok sir
Ovi came into the office and Prem saw her
Prem: Ovi! hey
Ovi: Oh hey Prem!
Prem: What are you doing here?
Ovi: My dads the boss of this company
Prem: Oh well both our dads will be working side by side
Ovi: cool
Prem: I have to go bye
Ovi: bye
Prem left and Ovi went towards Arjun's cabin and she heard some employees talking about Arjun and Purvi
1st employee: Did you know that Arjun sir and Purvi got engaged?
2nd: Ya Purvi is lucky she gets a rich guy like Arjun sir
Ovi got angry then Punni came to her
Punni: Ovi Purvi is there
Ovi: oh really then
Ovi barged in the cabin. Arjun was close to Purvi and they both were shocked to see her
Arjun: Ovi what are you doing here?
Ovi: Purvi dont you have any shame romancing with your boss
Arjun: Ovi! shes my fiancee so please talk to her with respect
Ovi got angry and left
Purvi was crying and Arjun was consoling her
At the hotel
Punni and Ovi were both at the hotel room thinking of a plan
Punni: we needs an extra helper
Ovi: but who
Punni: Think who supports your and arjun's relationship
Ovi was thinking then smiled
Ovi: I know one
Punni: who?
Ovi: Aaji
Precap: Prem's dad yelling at Purvi then telling Arjun to fire her
I hope you enjoyed this part!!
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ps: thnx for the comments!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it...update soon...thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome post dear...
thnx for pm..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hope you enjoy this part!!
At the hotel
Punni: Aaji?
Ovi: My aaji shes in Canada right now
Punni: I dont think its gonna work shes in Canada
Ovi: Then i'll ask her come
Then Ovi remembers what Manav said
Ovi: wait I cant
Punni: Why?
Ovi: My baba is facing a divorse and has to live with his wife for 6 months and we didn't tell Aaji anything
Punni: Then that doesn't solve our problem
Ovi: Wait I have an idea
Ovi tells Punni her idea
Punni: Perfect but are you sure its gonna work. I mean she might understand that Arjun-
Ovi: Nope my aaji always wanted me and Arjun to get married and if someone is in our way she will not hesitate to get rid of that person
Punni: Ok call her right now
At the office
Arjun and Purvi were in Arjun's cabin when Prem and his baba came in
Arjun: Mr.Joshi please come in
They both sat
Mr.Joshi: I want to discuss about the file
Arjun: Yes of course
Mr.Joshi: This file has less details and the facts are useless
arjun: Well we will fix that
Mr.Joshi: No I want you to fire that person who made this useless file
Arjun and Purvi were shocked
Prem: dad I dont think we have to be hasty
Mr.Joshi: Prem I know what im doing
Mr.Joshi: Who made this useless file!
Purvi: I did sir
Arjun: But we dont have to fire Purvi. Shes a efficent worker
Mr.Joshi: fire her or forget about our partnership
Arjun: sir I dont want to fire Purvi shes a great worker
Mr.Joshi: Why are you so protective of this girl?
Arjun: Actually we just got engaged
Mr.Joshi: What? Then kick her out of this company!
Arjun: Mr.Joshi please
Prem: dad dont make her get fired over a file
Mr.Joshi: She has to get fired or else both of our companies will not be partners
Arjun: sir-
Purvi: I will leave
Arjun: Purvi please dont leave
Purvi: Its ok I will give my resignition paper tomorrow
Purvi left
Arjun looked at her leaving sadly
At the Karangars
Purvi walked in Priya was talking to Adi in the living room
Priya: Oh hey Purvi you came early
Purvi just went in her room
Adi: What happened to her?
Priya: I dont know ill ask
Priya went in Purvi's room
Purvi was taking off her bangles
Priya: Purvi are you ok?
Purvi: ya im fine
Priya: You are lying. Purvi you are my younger sister and I know that you are a bad liar
Purvi sat on her bed Priya sat next to her
Priya put her hand on Purvi's shoulder
Priya: What happened?
Purvi: I resigned my job
Priya: What? Why?
Purvi: I dont think I should work with Arjun
Priya: Stop lying and tell me the truth.
Adi came to the front door and watched
Purvi told Priya everything
Priya: Then why are you upset
Purvi: I felt like a burden to Arjun
Adi: You? A burden to Arjun? Never
Purvi: Well if I stay and work with him he will choose me always and he will upset others thats why I resigned
Priya: well I think that you should't be working with your fiancee and he is your boss
Purvi: I will have to find another job
Priya: No you are not because you are getting married in 2 weeks
and you leave this house
Priya was frowning and sad but she continued
Priya: You will go to your in laws
Adi sat beside Priya
Adi: I know you are sad that Purvi is leaving
Priya wiped her tears
Purvi: I will miss you to. I will always remember the times we spent together
Priya: You are acting as if you are leaving forever
Purvi: but it will seem like forever since you are going to America
Priya started crying so did Purvi
Priya: I will never forget you Purvi I love you so much my sweet sister
Purvi: I love you to
They both hugged
At the Kirlosakers
Arjun was at the terrance. Adi came with some coffee and gave one to Arjun.
Arjun: Adi when did you come
Adi: Just now. What happened?
Arjun: Nothing
Adi: Liar Purvi told me everything. I was at her house
Arjun: Oh if she mad at me
Adi: you didn't do anything so why should she be mad at you. Actually shes mad at herself
Arjun: Why?
Adi: She thinks shes a burden to you
Arjun: No shes not
Adi: She thinks that if she stays at that job then you will upset others
Arjun: If she resigning permanetly
Adi: Well she has to eventually shes going to be in her in laws
Arjun: ya but she can work after marriage
Adi: Well she doesn't want to. I think you should take her out somewhere.
Arjun: you are right. Adi you are so good with girls. You should get married to Priya
Adi: No im fine
Arjun: suit yourself
Arjun smiled so did Adi they both drank their coffees
At the Karangars
Purvi was getting ready to go out with Arjun. Arjun told Purvi on the phone that he was taking her out for dinner
Priya: Purvi i'm going back to work tomorrow
Purvi: ok
Priya: I have a case tomorrow
Purvi: On what
Priya: Someone was accused of murder so i'm going to prove him innocent
Purvi: ok do you have proof
Priya: yep
Purvi: good luck
Priya: no good luck to you. You have a dinner date with your prince today
Purvi smiled then there was a knock on the door
Purvi: It must be him. Aaji is asleep and i told her everything and Tej is out looking for a job
Priya: ok bye and enjoy
Purvi left
Priya: I wish I could find a guy like Arjun. Purvi is so lucky. Bappa please help me find a nice guy oh and please make sure that Purvi and Arjun are together forever and no one could seperate them.
At the Deshmuks
Archana and Manav were planning the henna ceremony when Manav got a call.
Manav: its aai
Manav left to answer it
Manav: hello aai how r u?
Savita: Im fine beta but I called you to ask you for something
Manav: and whats that?
Savita: I want you to get Arjun and Ovi married
Manav was shocked
Manav: aai i-
Savita: beta you know that they known echother since childhood please say yes
Manav: aai i can't
Savita: Why?
Manav: because Arjun is getting married to someone else
Savita: Who?
Manav: a girl
Savita: Manav im mad at you why didnt you stop it
Manav: I cant they love eachother
Savita just hung up
Precap: henna ceremony
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice post...do update soon...thmx for pm..

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