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bonibright

@bonibright

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Wowww!!!Kesha...This is just brilliant..👏

First of all,plz dont say that u suck in writing romantic scenes,because we know ur capabilities very well,U have given us such romantic scenes earlier and even today which literally give us goose-bumps..😳

This update was just amazing..

The way Arjun was worried when he couldn't find Purvi and Purvi felt secured in his arms finally show the depth of their relationship..

Loved it,Kesha..

Thanks for the PM..

And plz do update soon..

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Ashlaika

@Ashlaika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Ohhh IM SOOO HAPPY with this update!!!!

Thank you Kesha!!! Cannot wait for the next update! Pls make it soon. I hope the scene today (the hut scene) has given u some ideas and inspiration. We all know in ur story ArVi are already married... cannot wait for them to admit their love for each other.

I also wanna know why Arjun cannot sleep and what pills he uses and when Purvi will not only find our but talk to him about it.

Im very excited that ur story is moving fwd. and very happy that u updated.

Thank you very much!!!

Ash.

p.s. NEVER call ur writing sucky again. We are very grateful and impressed with all the scenes and updates u give us and as of right now - you write much better than any PR writer :D :)

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Hey, Thanks for this update :)

And no, you do not suck at romantic writing, so please don't underestimate yourself there. Agree with Ash, you're much better than any of the juvenile PR CVs can ever hope to be.

Love the romantic and protective Arjun, Purvi it seems got back to her senses quickly after the goon chase. Good, she saw that Arjun is always there for her.

The give-and-take about wild animals was cute and comical.

Thanks again and hope to see the next one soon :)

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yushna

@yushna

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

It was so awsom kesha:-):-) u just write so well:-) thankyew for the pm nd plzzz update soon

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jkhusi

@jkhusi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Is awesome,love it plz update very soon

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J12L85

@J12L85

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Wow I just checked in and read ur new update. Fantastic work dear! Totally love Purvi for getting mad coz its drawn them closer. Arjuns reaction when he could'nt find her was superb and I could feel his panic and anxiety. Their reaction when Arjun found her was wow and loved how they expressed their feelings freely:) Eagerly await to see how things proceed. I have just one request and that is for u to please add me to ur PM list. Fantastic writing and plzzz update soon, thanx:)

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shreya2094

@shreya2094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

brilliant update kesha👏i just loved this part😳 u continued the humour element in this part too😆it was really funny... dramebaaz-purvi😆...it was tipical filmy...the part where arjun finds purvi is missing and is tensed fr her was really nice...it clearly showed his concern fr her!!😳and i just loved the way u described their bond...it was really cute😳

thanks fr this beautiful update and i wud like to mention here tht u dnt 'suck' at romantic scenes...infact u do them vry beautifully!!i love ur writing a lot!!

⭐️plz update soon😃