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ashu

@white.band

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#461

ohh didi..ahem ahem...u updated atlat..happy :)

waitin 4 de next part...

lyk de jealousy part...der is change in u after u went 2 uni...learned a lot from der he?😳

wid all de talks i forgot to wish u

Edited by white.band - 12 years ago

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Hey Kesha,

Thanks a lot for the update, and happy new year!!

Loved this new year surprise, thought you had given up on this FF. Very happy to see an update, please continue :)

Had read most of it while catching up on ArVi stuff in Sep-Oct, and would always wonder about if-and-when of the next update. It was very cute, and Arjun handling a drunk Purvi was amusing ...can so visualize that scene!

Thanks again

Peaches

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aathya

@aathya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

omg u finally updated.. i have been waitng for this since ages... u r back with a bang .. awsome part.. loved the way u described purvi's dressing arjun's desire to talk to purvi and purvi's jealous.. please do update soon😊

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rithika2012

@rithika2012

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

hey thanks for updating... happy new year..
this is a new year gift to all of us...
loved the part totally.. pls do update soon.. pls pm me when u update again...

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@-Awaari-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Awesomeeww 😊
update soon

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Ashlaika

@Ashlaika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Kesha,

Loved it!!! Thank you very much for updating.

It was really nice to the see jealous Purvi and stern Arjun.

Now Im eagerly waiting for the ArVi romance on deserted road.

Great job and looking fwd to the next part!

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kritika_arvi

@kritika_arvi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Awesum new year gift kesha loved it u always surprise me with ur writing as if while reading i can visualize d whole arvi scenes .plz plz do continue u knw na ki arvi is alive in all d arvi ff,os etc in dis forum only .plz update soon.

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Bravo Kesha👏
I read all your previous updates in One shot and I just have to say you are a gifted writer! Seeing this update brought a smile to my face.. it was wonderful!

A jealous Purvi downs a couple glasses in her fury while dear Arjun tries to calm her down.. When it doesn't work he picks her up.. How cute... When she refuses and pleads to walk he agrees as long as she is a good girl and doesn't complain. Loved how you showed Arjun taking control of the situation ensuring Purvi that he would explain later after he got his drunk wifi home.
Update when you get a chance!

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Huma

@Huma-

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Finally finally U updated It was superbbb keshu ❤️ i just love jealousy track as u knw LOL 😆

ROFLS@ talak talak talak 😆

update Next part ASAP plejjj!!