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Posted: 13 years ago
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ARVI FF Ego v/s Ego

The story is basically about Purvi and arjun who cannot stand the sight of each other and are hell bent on insulting each other. they both have the BIG EGO problem, which will eventually play cupid in their only- hate kind of love story.


character sketch

Purvi Archana karanjkar: age 21. Student of mass communication is in her last year. She is very bubbly and chirpy person who adores her mother, her family consists of her aai, aaji and her best friend aalia. She lost her parents when she was 3 yrs. old and was later adopted by archana. In college she is known as Miss Touch-me-Not, as she never allows any boys come near her.


Archana Karanjkar: age 46. She is very kind and sweet, who loves purvi like her own daughter. She sometimes misses her daughters but never lets it out. (Like serial her and manav are separated but here there is a twist which will unfold latter in the story).

Sulochna K: 67 mother of archu who is very kind hearted and adores purvi a lot

Arjun Kirlosdkar- age 21. he is in his final year of mass communication. very sweet boy, but portrays himself as a selfish and spoilt brat infront of others

alia patel-21 purvis best friend, bubbly and fun to be around person

Niel shah-21 Arjun's best friend. a harmless flirt who has a small crush on Alia

DK- arjuns father

Manav Deshmukh- same as in serial

Ovi D-19 sweet but spoilt and pampered chils

Tejaswini D-21 very kind and bubbly person who misses her mother a lot, but doesn't hate her

savita and Damodar D-same as in serial

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Part1

It was a bright Monday morning, the sun rose with great pride, the birds chirped which seemed like music, and the hustling and bustling of vehicles and people added a charm to the already charming morning. As the sun rays fell on her face, she tossed and turned from one side to other, but Mr Sun was in no mood to let her sleep, agitated with the constant light hitting her eyes, she opened her eyes lazily. Her arms stretched to shove off her beauty sleep. A small smile played on her lips as she remembered today's date. With an urge to make the most of this day, she jumped from her bed, into the washroom and got ready in her new salwar suit.

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There was a sudden knock on the door. She jumped on hearing the knock like a small kid gets excited when the last period of the school gets over. She closed her eyes and blindly made her way to open the door. A middle aged woman smiled seeing the childish behaviour of her daughter and out of love just hugged her tightly and whispered in her ears 'happy birthday Purvi'. She opened her eyes on hearing her mother's sweet voice. It was the same every year on this day; she would see only her mother's face first. 'Thanks aai', said Purvi to Archana, whose eyes were already filled with some unshed tears.

"Oho aai, why are you shedding your precious pearls and that too on such a nice day"

"you watch Hindi films and yet you are asking me, I am a filmy maa you see, so this is khushi ke aasoon", Archana dramatically wiped of the tears that were dripping from her eyes a while ago.

"ok aai, by the way I am off to college, first day of my last year in college"

Suddenly they heard a shout "archu, purvi if you are done with your rona dhona, then come and have breakfast, and Purvi your partner in crime is here"

"Aloo, here. And that too sooo soon", with that she rushed out of her room to see the eighth wonder of the world.

"Am I dreaming, please somebody pinch me. Alia on time. Impossible.

Alia faked anger, and pouted which made the three karanjkar ladies chuckle.

"Happy birthday, and now hurry up we have to be on time, else Mrs Signaporia will lecture us on punctuality and I don't want to hear a long lecture on my first day back", saying so she dragged Purvi along with her, into the rickshaw and off to St. Xavier's .

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Next part Arjuns entry

Guyzz i want atleast 5-6 comments in order to continue

it takes hours to write an update and your response is like an energy drink which will give me the power to write more (well a bad example i guess)

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INDEX

part 2 - page=3

part 3A - page=5

part 3B - page=7

part 4- page=10

part 5- page=13

part 6A - page=14

part 6B- page=16

part 6C - page=19

part 7 - page=23

part 8 - page=26

part 9 - page=30

part 10 - page=33

part 11 - page=36

part 12 - page=41

filler - page=44

part 13 - page=47

part 14 - page=51

part 15 - page=56

part 16 - page=59

part 17 - page=63

part 18- page 67

part 19- page 68

part 20- page 70

part 21- page 73

part 22- page 77

part 23- page 80
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear do continue
eagerly waiting for arjun's entry
and a gud start
do pm me the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue 😛 great start!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pliz do continue... itz so nice!!! nw eagerly waitin 4 arjun's entry...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it update the next part soon eagerly waiting for arjun's entry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey!!

Please continue!!! I am loving it!! cant wait for Arjun to enter!! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely!!😊plz continue...Plz pm me...
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plzzz do continue... i m waitin for some arviii
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzzz update soon
am waiting for the entry of my Arjun
u had free's at school as well
n u promised to update on sunday
common sisy me n nauf waiting 4 ur ud

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Posted: 13 years ago
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fist ever ff on arvi..
loved it
the concept seems to be interesting..
do update soon..
waiting for arjun's entry.

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