Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000
Arre all rounder vibrant Doc
you tongue tied me , an old crock
such spirit to do a hundred things
it seems as if u have magic wings
but are u watching PR or no
hope u did not it outgrow
coz ur detailed comments I solid miss
never mind here is a flying kiss
muvaaaaaaaaaaa ! For giving Darshan after so many days niks !
Your poem reminds me of a thread
Where we all sat scratching our heads
to think of some poetry or rhyming lines
silly or meaningful, they were just fine.
Day and night we spouted poems
some of them were such classic gemsđ
but whatever it was, it was fun
all credit to Fifi, who has now run
far away from the forum and PR
kya karein, tolerating crap is difficult yaar
cos exactly a year after that thread
PR's story has moved ahead
in such a disasterous way
that my interest is now waning away
stupid plots and silly leads
grow fields of sorrow by themselves planting seeds
Who would sympathize with them and why
the CV's only want to make our bheja fry
by spinning out more of such crappy tracks
which are disappointing and deserve whacks
Manav has become a sidey
Archana is a disinterested wifey
Sisters are plain bad
Savita is better, I'm glad
Cos I really want her to fight
For her son whom nobody thought right
I want Dharmesh to get a similar slap
from Slapochana as easily as a clap
That's all I'm waiting to see
Rest all is boring for me.
Will be around for your commentary though
Its the best thing here- everyone knows.