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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Till then PR forum survives on fantasies

Of ArMan romance, and pure ecstasies.

SD, Niki, Shankar and commentator

consider this and therefore cater,

thus fueling the fire in our starved minds

Of an ArMan reunion of some kind.

But the creatives believe in drag theory

Beware, coz the audience is getting fiery.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: gaurimisha

Niki..u describe Kool so well.

Rhyming words dont hit me at all...u guys r so talented👏

Arey Gauri, I'm not even thinking, just writing the first thing that is coming to my mind😆
You try it too, its a lot of fun...
come on everyone, join in!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

In continuation with above warning to creatives:

The audience will soon say 'No more'
Quit PR and get back to their chores
what will you do then, tell tell?
for the crap you're creating won't sell
Give us ArMan, thats all we want
A sweet couple, with no one to haunt
The Lokhande trio to suffer in hell
And Savita to be punished as well
Get Shravani out of the way
She doesn't know acting, that's our say
Listen to audience feedback, creative fools
Stop denigrating women as a TRP raising tool
Edited by nikitagmc - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Okay, adding to above warning

Doc steps in to shout
'And stop butchering my Manav about,
He is facing ire from everyone
Look what you people have done'
Am warning you, will not tolerate
if Manav's character deteriorates
Salvage him, its possible
Make him strong, make him able.
Make him totally boycott his Aai
Punish the villains, bid them goodbye
Protect and give love to Archu
And at the same time not forget the Bacchu (baby)
Then we all will clap and clap
Rival shows will get a slap
In the TRP race you'll be ahead
And be able to earn your bread
nikitagmc thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Till then we guys will continue to rock
Enjoy our debates, stories and shocks
Coz PR forum is heaven
more enjoyable than the serial even.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Sindoor's been put, the pooja's been done,
Off they go for the baby son.
It's Manav and Archana all the way,
Goodbye Shravni, don't stay another day.

Manav and Archana will come out to play,
Some are predicting it will be on Holi day.
All these PR ladies are waiting by the door,
to see what is happening on the kitchen floor.

Now Tanya wants Archana and Ajit to commit,
while Kools want Ajit to attempt something illicit.
Fifi wants to beat Ajit with a bat,
don't know what the rest will say about that.

I'm glad that Ajit is back in the mix,
let's see how manav will handle this fix.
He'll grab Archana by the hand,
and say to her no way i'm your man.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Ahhh today we finally saw Ajit the creep
Who is supposed to give an angle cheap
But his grand entry has given an idea rare
that he and Archu wud make a fine pair

For frankly we r fed up
of all the good lallus
A devil is more welcome now
than those who hide behind mom's pallus

Come hither Ajit and deliver
Yon spark , fire and splendour !
Just treat our Archu tenderly
keeping in mind her gender .

You looked good in sherwani pink
although it is a color gay
not many cud have pulled it off
but you did , what say what say !

Ah Ajit , creepy Ajit !
Without u what wud this serial be
We shiver to think or imagine
And mind u its not just me !

For quite a group is forming
and becoming your fans
Never leave us and go to Bangkok
This is your turf our man !

How we gaze when you sit
Your hand twirling a chilled beer
Oh the way your teeth you grit
before we see that famous sneer

We wish you many episodes
in PR till it stays
You lighten it like a dark room
that is lit with the sun's rays !


Edited by koolsadhu1000 - 15 years ago
nikitagmc thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
okay in continuation with kools
But mind you Ajit, listen well
don't make ArMan's life hell
Unite them and just go
that's what we want, you know!
You seem to be the chosen one
By Bappa who will now see the fun
Of how this cheapo will do
what even Damo couldn't undo.
Mark my words, Manav will emerge
As anger and love will together surge
rushing in his veins, to protect his love
As Bappa watches smiling above.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
In continuation with Nicki

But will Manav really deliver
Or will be stuck in that rut
What about all that fever
Of that Insaaniyat ?

I'll give that much to you Doc
In him you have confidence
From where , how I don't know
For I don't have your lens

Sometimes Oh Doc I suspect
On him you have a secret crush
You have fallen for him badly Doc
Now don't blush and don't brush !


😆
Edited by koolsadhu1000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Niki..kools you guys are crazy or should i say pagal 😆

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