The Longest Poem! - Page 2

kool and Akash ...

Originally posted by: Akashspartan

I live in a place filled with beauty that's rare,
That the trees and the animals all get to share.
It has mountains and valleys and birds in the air;
The place where I live, you might want to live there.

The chauvinist is here,😉🤡😍

hey akash you are describing where i live...

wow Fifi that is simply amazing annd cool !!
hats off to all the poets here !
frankly speaking, I don't even know writing so I can't write poems 😆
Fifi if you want, I can put all the bits and pieces together at the end .. you can tell me when you are done with it, .. and if you want me to do it now, I can also do it 😊
lemme know !

Then we have the males
SD , Akash and Ali
They make the forum interesting
On purpose or willy nilly

SD loves to write comedy
And Ali so young and frank
But Akash is the chauvinist
with jibes that our ego spank

We think he lives in Sparta
but no one knows the truth
And behind all that chauvinst veneer
He really is rather a dear

That was beautiful Kool , you are so talented

Originally posted by: tasnime

wow Fifi that is simply amazing annd cool !!
hats off to all the poets here !
frankly speaking, I don't even know writing so I can't write poems 😆
Fifi if you want, I can put all the bits and pieces together at the end .. you can tell me when you are done with it, .. and if you want me to do it now, I can also do it 😊
lemme know !

go for it dudette..

Great yaar.. I'm adding one..

In continuation with kool's dedication above

However, I believe Manav will deliver

his love for Archu will make you quiver

Just you wait, the lover will spit fire

Ajit the creep will have to face his ire

Niki..u describe Kool so well.