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--Hope--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1041

this part was perfect. much better than even their trip to find Tarun.

It reminds me of a BBC drama I saw - written by Elizabeth Gaskell.

It is called North and South and I highly recommend it.

it is similar in that it reflects the same withdrawl of the rejected man, the remorse of the misguided girl, her passionate defence of him to family and her longing for him when she feels he no longer cares and his internal struggle to appear detached while being ripped to shreds emotionally at the sight and presence of her.

you have captured it so well for archana and manav beautiful.

can you put in a few paras that show his internal struggle. I find reading a story through the mind of the man more enjoyable.

thanks. I needed this.

Hope😃

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1042

@Minks: I guess a lot of people are bogged by PR nowadays. Waiting for your comments!

@Akka: thanks!!!

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Claire0206

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1043

Beautifully written Niki👍🏼 , just loved this part.

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1044

Originally posted by: --Hope--
this part was perfect. much better than even their trip to find Tarun.

It reminds me of a BBC drama I saw - written by Elizabeth Gaskell.

It is called North and South and I highly recommend it.

it is similar in that it reflects the same withdrawl of the rejected man, the remorse of the misguided girl, her passionate defence of him to family and her longing for him when she feels he no longer cares and his internal struggle to appear detached while being ripped to shreds emotionally at the sight and presence of her.

you have captured it so well for archana and manav beautiful.

can you put in a few paras that show his internal struggle. I find reading a story through the mind of the man more enjoyable.

thanks. I needed this.

Hope😃

You liked this part more than the one when they went to find Tarun? Seriously? Or did you, like Archu, fall for Manav in a black vest?😉

Never seen the drama you are talking about. But it does sound interesting.

I guess it is a general tendency that we always value things or people more when we lose them, like the forest values the chirping birds when they go away and the forest becomes silent.

Manav's internal struggle will start in detail from next part. I'm glad you liked the part Hope!

@Claire: Thanks a lot, sweety!

Edited by nikitagmc - 14 years ago

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Shikha

@lunza

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1045

aahhhh😍 .. thanx for including a shirtless manav !!! we are never going to see such scenes in the show .. so thanx for including it here ....

Ah!! So finally we going to see whats varsha's been upto .. i was beginning to think you are leaving it a bit late ..

The last part made me go awww .. the two dumbos .. a bit like ArMan in the show .. lukka chupi eye locks ....

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Swati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1046

Manav in vest😍Nikki it was a wonderful part.. Loved d garage scene most..I want to see d serial wala Manav like this...Loved d way Manav is trying to handle his life.. Loved Archu and Vaishu's nok jhok.. LOVED THE PART

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julie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1047

Amazimg again, now i am craving for mote. Please update soon. Thanks a lot

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--Minks--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1048

Thanks Niki for this lovely part ... I read it, and re-read it and then went to day-dream.... the "bare glossy chest" bit was sooo true Sushant... I couldnt help imagining ....😉

I loved this bit, and it was one of my favourite parts in this FF. Loved the whole sisterly teasing bits b/w Archu - Vaishali, the love n trust between Vandita and Manav.... also, glad to see more presence of Tarun (he is such a cutie pie) in the FF compared to the Zee PR.

For me surprisingly, I was very touched with the old watchman's conversation with Archana.... the way she was pouring her heart out to a complete stranger... but, that's how it is, you tend to do that in your vulnerable moments.... and it was very sweet of him to drop her to the station...

The best bit was the adorable peek-a-boo moments b/w Archana and her dearest husband, and her internal tug-of-war between what she knows is right and what she feels for her hubby. I so wish the two dim-wits would forget everything and just get back together (not logical / possible I know)......... how I wish they were a bit more selfish, and not so thoughtful of everyone else in the family..... but, then they wouldn't be who they are !!!!

I liked the bit where you so clearly say that he did what he had to try and save his marriage, and it was the need of the hour.... it didnt mean that he was neglecting his other relations.... 👍🏼

Add: changed my id... frm teacher25

Edited by scarletthara - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1049

i love your version of PR.so much emotion, so much thought, it was a treat reading. its more heart-warming, as the real PR is so disappointing these days.

i loved the scene, where archu is aware of manav physically. manav's gloosy chest. yummy. how many pics of a certain someone did you drool over for inspiration?

in the real PR, the Cvs dont show archu to be aware of manav's physique. i mean, if manav can be aware of her beauty, then why cant archu notice the glossy chest?

anyways, i loved this part, want to read the re-union soon.do continue soon

Edited by tiya229 - 14 years ago

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Jasmine10

@Jasmine10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1050

read the last two parts back to back .loved both of the parts

the bond between a husband and wife never snaps, and the way you portray the human emotions are amazing.

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