PR reloaded-FF-Pt 66 Pg 148, 27/4/11 - Page 103

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Posted: 14 years ago
whoa thats a long part niki!! i will read it in a while before going to sleep😃 i shud go to sleep🥱😆


i wish i had kurkure😍😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
SB, you and your kurkure duh. Dekho naa, jb aapko chahye hota hai us waqt main kurkure kha raha hota hun

niki, after completing 150 pages you should post this to balaji to decide who is better. I am sure they will find your skills better than their creatives
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -ALI-

SB, you and your kurkure duh. Dekho naa, jb aapko chahye hota hai us waqt main kurkure kha raha hota hun

niki, after completing 150 pages you should post this to balaji to decide who is better. I am sure they will find your skills better than their creatives



🤬 🤬 🤬

aur jab mere paas kurkure hotay hain tab niki update nahi kerti😭 aur jab khanay ka mann karay to store par masala flavour nahi hota😡🤬

waise, ziada khaogay to motay ho jaogay😛

Niki, I agree with Ali. Send this to them, specially Shibu. But I dont agree with one thing - they dont need to decide who is better. You are certainly better than them⭐️


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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye siddu, such a bad luck lol. Uhu, i dont eat kurkure that much. I eat only when you want it rofl.
Sid, mera matlb to wohi tha. Niki is better.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Sid and Ali.... uff us Ekta ko kaun bhejega story? Woh pehli baar padhke hi reject kar degi.

Special thanks to Omana (shooting star) for this part.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nikitagmc



Special thanks to Omana (shooting star) for this part.


You're most welcome 🤗 Can't wait to read it 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow...the long wait for this part was certainly worth it.Yet another extremely well written chapter👍🏼 Absolutely loved the flashback😍 Can't wait for the next part now😆

You did a fab job in explaining how the loan and insurance works too👍🏼. It doesn't sound complicated unlike my explanations 🤪

Edited by shootingstar27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Niki loved this part.. Flash back was more lovely ... reading it again.
I liked the introspection from Manav side the most .
More interested in the coming part ..... so write soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
aa gayi mai ..... I am so avoiding updating my story sorry guys ... i am so cramped with exams and preps that...... grrr I will update whenever possible

nikki Awesomest chapter.....

Your ff is 1000000000000 to the power infinity better
ekta jii tortures us no end😡
wht i liked here is ur portrayal of angst & anger....

lovely


love always as ever

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Niki,

Awesome update. Love the fact that you are giving due consideration to all the characters in the story. We get to see and understand everyone's viewpoint too. Where would Sachin go now, how does that have an effect on the Damodar family, I am quite curious to know.

Also, how do the couple get together against all odds now? It is getting more n more difficult for them, with all family members going against them being together. Also, I thought Archana was going to return the money to Manav, as per the last post. I so want these misunderstandings to clear away and we get some brightness and happiness amidst all gloom n doom.

I really loved the bit about the banking rules, it was so clearly explained, so much easier for me to understand. So, I guess it will be the lowest point in the story just before the beautiful light of dawn.

Already waiting for the next part, and thanks for the pm.
Edited by teacher25 - 14 years ago

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