ArMan after few days!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Archana is talking with Shravani.. Both of them are feeling awkward.. Savita enters..

Savita- Tu shravani k paas kya kar rahi hai manhoos??
Archana- Kuch nahin aai, bas....
Savita- Ab samjhi,mere bete ko kha gayi, ab uske bachhe ko bhi khana chahti hai..
Archana- Nahin aai, main to bas aise hi.
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Savita holds her handand drags her from there.. Archana is crying.. Manav enters the house..

Savita- Chal, batati hoon tujhe..
Manav- Ye kya kar rahi hai aai?? Chhor usse..
Savita- Tujhe nahin pata ki ye manhoos shravani ko nuksaan pahunchana chahti hai..
Manav- Ye kya kuch bhi bol rahi hai aai,maine kaha chhor usse..

Savita leaves her and walk away in disgust.. Shravani notices both manav and Archana..

Manav is in his room.. Archana enters with food and tells him to eat..

Manav- Tumhein khana laane ki koi zaroorat nahin thi..Main khud khana le leta.. Waise aai ne jo kiya uske liye main sharminda hoon..
Archana cuts him off
Archana- Aapko sharmindaa hone ki zaroorat nahin hai, main samjhti hoon ki aai aisa kyun kar rahi hain..Mujhe unse koi shikaayat nahin hai..Meri wajah se aap logon ko bahut kuch sahna pada hai,magar ab main aap logon ko koi pareshaani nahin pahunchaungi..

Manav is stunned to listen this.. Both of them see into each others eyes..Savita calls "manav, kahan hai tu?"

Both of them come back to their senses and Manav leaves..

Archana- Main Bappa sekahungi ki aap hamesha khush rahein..
Manav(to himself)- Mujhe maaf kar dena, main tumhein bahut pyaarkarta hoon,magar hamara safar shaayad kuch hi dino tak ka tha..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#2

ahh Guptill,,

Now i started to wonder r u the part of creative writer of PR.....

if not mann u need to be on that creative team for sure.....👍🏼👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks aakash..I tried my bit, not sure whether it was that good. Thanks.😉
I will keep trying..


Edited by guptill - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4

Well done yaar.Great job.

Savita is such a wicked woman she is disgusting!

i want to dedicate a Song for Armaan At this moment of time

Pyar tum ko be hai pyaar hum ko be hai
phir kyon itne gile ho gaye!
Bewaafa tum nahi bewafa hum nahi
phir kyon ya faslai ho gaye!
Chalte Chalte kaise ya faisla ho gaye ye aae!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5
awwwww...keep posting ArMan's part dear:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6
Its really nice!!! ;) :) :)
Plz keep writing guptill... :) :)

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