Zindegi ke Safar mein-(tera mera sath rahe)Pg 20 - Page 15

ArMan as parents

Year 2016. Arman have a 5 year old kid namely bablu, very naughty (like his father). Just go though the conversation the trio is having. Its 10:30 pm. Babloo is still not asleep.

Manav- (comes to the bed room) Are bablu beta abhi tak soya nahin?

Archana- main to preshan ho gayi isse sulate sulate. Jitni loriyan pata thi wo sari gaa li. Tumahre bete ko neend hi nahin aati

Manav- achha ab main lori sonata hun

Archana- ji nahin pure chawl ke bachhe jag jayenge aap ka gaana sun ke

Babloo- are nahin! baba to kaafi achha gate hain ..pata hai kal kya hua ..kal back ground se kisi ne gaana gaya..ekdum besuri awaz…

Manav- wo kaise? Background wale gaane to hamesha achhe aate hain..wo to CD se bajate hain Ekta madam ji ke log

Archana- are kal aisa hua ki BT ka CD bajane wala aadmi bimaar tha to Ekta ji khud gaane lagi…bablu usi ki baat kar raha hai. Bablu kya saare chawl ke bachhe itna chillaye ki kal se back ground music nahin baj raha hai

Manav- achha aisi baat hai kya? Tabhi main kahun..roz nahate time "thande thande paani se nahana chahiye" gaana bajta tha aaj kyun nahin baja?

Babloo- haan aur jab main khelta tha tab "lakdi ki kathi " gaana bajta tha aaj se wo bhi band hai

Archana- Ekta aunty ko phone karke sorry bol dena beta..bolna aunty gaane fir se bajaiye lekin CD se

Manav- par beta tu soyega kab?

Babloo- aap log mere sone ke pichhe kyun pade ho ? hamen neend aayegi to hum so jayenge.

Archana- TV serial dekh dekh ke dekho kaise keh raha hai "hum so jayenge"

Manav- beta tu ab so jaa..

Babloo- hum ne kaha na humen neend nahin aayi hai abhi

Manav- oh bhagwan aaj ki raat bhi khali sona padega

Babloo- khali bole to?

Manav- (ghabrake) khali pet beta

Babloo- hamari aankhon ke saamne 10 rotiyan todi aapne, ab khali pet ki baat keh rahe hain?

Archana- tu sota kyun nahin? Lambi chowdi baatein kyun karta hai raat ke 11 baje. Tujhe to main naani ke paas bhej dungi

Babloo- nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ….aai tum jo kaho wo hum karenge par sunochana naani ke paas mat bhejo

Archana- kyun beta?

Babloo- are kuch bolne hi nahin deti..kehti hai khana kha le..main kehta hun abhi bhuk nahin hai..fir wo kahegi..aaj main khilaungi tu khayega..aise kar ke jabardasti khana khila deti hai

Manav- to beta nana ji ke paas chala jata

Babloo- are apne chashmon ko saaf karne se unhe time mile tab to meri baat sunenge…pata hai hum ne kya kiya..jaan bujh ke unke chshmane tod diye..ha ha ha

Archana- tu bada shararati ho gaya..tujhe to hum hostel mein chhod denge

Babloo- hostel mat bhejna hamen…yahan chawl ki ladkiyan hamare bina zinda nahin reh payengi

Archana- kaun si ladkiyan?

Babloo- 5 se kam umer ki saari ladkiyan aur ek aadh 7- 8 saal ki ladki bhi hum pe marti hain

Manav- tu to kaafi badmash ho gaya…Archana aur dikhao TV is ko..ta ki aur bigad jaye

Babloo- aai jyada TV kahan dekh pati hai baba..bas 17 serials hi to dekhti hai..jaise ki…"aaj ki bahu kal ki saas', "hawa ke sath sath ghata ke sang sang"..

Manav- band kar beta serial ki baat..padhai kaise chal rahi hai teri?

Babloo- achhi chal rahi hai hamari padhai. Bas aane wale dino mein imitihaan ke results khud bayan karenge hamari kamyabi ki kahani

Archana- ab so ja beta

Babloo- tum bhi bhuki ho kya..4 rotiyan to tum ne bhi khayi thi

Archana- ab tu pitega babloo

Babloo- bachhe pe zulam karoge ?

Manav- kitni badi badi baaten kar raha hai. Ab tere liye alag kamra hoga. Tu alag soyega

Babloo- ta ki aap dono jab marji tab rotiyan kha sako (LOL)

( ArMan Sharma jate hain aur gussa karte hain)

Manav- beta ab bahut ho gaya..ab so jaa

Babloo- chaliye aap bhi kya yaad karenge..hum bahar hall mein so jate hain…dadi maa ke kharrate wahan tak sunyi deti hain usse sun sun ke hum lori samajh ke so jayenge ( babloo hall mein chala jata hain)

( ArMan buddhu ki tarah dekhte rehte hain)

Originally posted by: commentator

@ SD: Nice work again; yes, the language issue is evident, as also that of the music ! It's really a sorry state of affairs that composers for serials can't come up with their own songs and background music and that even here television must constantly both cannibalise and therefore also propagate Bollywood's stranglehold on popular musical taste.

@ Ali: the serial can't show this scene because pehle to kucch rotiyan todke ek bablu ho jaaye, tab na wo bablu apne ma-baap ko bahar jaake phir se roti khane ka mauka de !!??

tera mera sath rahe

This story is about ArMan and their 4 yr old child Babloo. Situation is Girish and Shravani have deprived all happiness of manav's life, because manav said a NO to marriage with Shravani. Manav is working again as a mechanic in some garage and earning very little. Archana is not able to work and earn as savita is not well and she has to take care of the family and the child all on her own. Damodar's earnings from the theatres are not good as well. So they are now a very poor family.

Scene:

Babloo zid kar raha hai, usse badi wali ice cream chahiye. Archana could only manage a baraf ka gola, because manav hasn't got his salary for last 2 months. Its evening time and manav has just come back from his work.

Babloo- nahin aai..mujhe yeh nahin lena..mujhe woh badi wali ice cream hi chahiye

Archana- beta tere baba kal la denge

Babloo- roz tu kal kal kehti hai. Baba kabhi kuch nahin late. Raju ke papa uskeliye roz kitna kuch late hain.

Manav- (khamosh hai)

Archana- aisa nahin kehte beta. Baba tere liye nahi laye the yeh ball..

Babloo- mujhe nahin khelna us ball se. muhe ice cream chahiye.

Manav- ruk beta main leke aata hun

Archana- aap bhi na..aai ki dawai nahin laani hai kya…

Babloo- (starts crying)

Manav- babloo ro mat beta..mujhe na paise milte hi tujhe jo chahiye wo la dunga

Babloo- kab milenge paise

Manav- yehi 4-5 dino mein

Archana- thik ab tu khana kha le aur so jaa….

Babloo- nahin mujhe icre cream chahiye..

Archana- ( ek thappad lagati hai babloo ko) chup kar. Bahut ziddi ho gaya hai tu. Baba ne kaha na tere liye la denge. Phir bhi sun nahin raha

Babloo- ( ro ro ke) tu achhi aai nahin hai..hamesha marti rehti hai…( wahan se bhag jata hai)

Manav- us pe haath kyon uthaya

Archana- usse yeh samajh aana chahiye ki har cheez jo usse chahiye usse nahin mil sakti

Manav- yeh thappad tum ne usko nahin mujhe mara..meri nakamyaabi aur meri garaibi ko mara

Archana- aisa kyun kehte ho…wo zid kar raha tha aur usse rokna zaroori tha..aur hamesha aap apne pe kyun har baat ko le lete ho

Manav- main thak chuka hun Archana. Mujh mein aur takat nahin hai. Mere bete ki chhoti se chhoti khwahish main puri nahin kar sakta. Aai keliye dawai lane keliye mujhe paise udhar lene padte hain. Tumahre liye pata nahin kab se main kuch bhi nahin laya. Aisa lagta hai main haar gaya hun zindegi se

Archana- aisa nahin kehte…aap ne mujhe kya nahin diya bolo..babloo jaisa beta diya mujhe..kitna hoshiyar hai dekho padhai likhai main. Aur aap ne mujhe itna sara pyar jo diya…mere liye duniya se panga le liya..ek ladki ko apne pati se aur kya chahiye

Manav- sirf pyar se pet nahin bharta..main is garibi se tang aa chuka hun..mujhe maaf kar dena agar maine koi galat kadam le liya to

Archana- bakwaas band karo. Kabhi socha hai aap hum sab keliye kya ho. galati se bhi yeh khayal mann mein nahin lana.

Manav- main kya karun bolo. Din raat mennat karne ke bawajood jo paise milte hain usse ghar ka kharcha tak thik se nahin ho pata. Aur babloo bachha hai. Uska to mann karega na khilone keliye ya ice cream keliye. Koi badi cheez to nahin mang raha hai na wo. Main ek nakamyab aadmi hun

(babloo andar aata hai. Kuch batein usne bhi sun li hai. Manav ke aansoo pochhta hai)

Babloo- aap duniya ke sab se achhe baba ho..aur meri aai duniya ki sab se achhi aai

Manav- babloo

Archana- dekha mera beta kitna samajhdaar hai…ab babloo khana khayega aur baba ko bhi khila dega..hai na beta?

Babloo- baba mujhe icre cream nahin chahiye … mujhe bas mere aai baba chahiye

(dono babloo ko gale laga lete hain. Lekin aansoo rukte nahin)

Babloo- aap dono rote kyun ho..chalo na khana khate hain

( Archana khana lagati hai. Babloo baari baari se aai baba ko khana khila deta hai)