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Hey everyone long time since ive been on the froum but been busy😳 anyways heres part of the 21st Sept update. Me and Shali are both writing it but shes doing the most of it. I have done the first part and she has done the last😊

21st Sept Update

Key

R – Radha

S – Shaurya

Mall – Mallishka

Sa – Sangam

A - Addy

First part by me😳

Shergill House

Episode starts with R packing her clothes and S watching her from the doorway. S then calls R and asks her where she is going. R looks down and doesn't know what to say. S goes towards her (looking very dashing must I say😳 lol) and says to her he understands why she is doing this. He says she wants to leave the house without informing anyone so that she can be saved/avoid the anger and hatred his family would give her. R looks on, wipes her tears and leaves with her suitcase without saying anything until S holds her wrist😳, stopping her from going. R carries on looking down and S is watching her😳. He then goes in front of her and tells her she doesn't need to leave the house, she hasn't done anything wrong and has done everything for the welfare of his family. He continues saying she was put in this position, trapped by him. S then looks down and R looks up lol. R looks a little surprised and both then look at each other. R then looks away once again (seriously whats up with these looks!😆) when S tells R she is not one of those girls who leaves with any accusations on her head but infact is one of those who faces situations and proves themselves innocent. All this time he's holding her arm😳😳. S tells R to stay and both look at each other😳. S promises R that he was the one who got her into this problem and he will get her out and that this is not jus her problem - its theirs 😳 (cho chweet!) He continues saying they both will sort out the solution together. Both then hear Naiya calling them and they rush to A's room.

All are in A's room looking at him waiting for him to get up. His fingers move and S and Sa tell him to wake up. Mall looks worried. Sa tells R she should go forward instead of standing back – S looks on and R does a fake smile. S then notices A opening his eyes slowly – everyone is happy apart from Mall. Once A's eyes are open Sa tells him she brought Mall home – SR have some worried expressions. Sa asks A if he is happy seeing his fiance to which A jus looks round at everyone. A then breaks his silence asking who is she (R). Everyone is shocked and Mall is still worried. S then speaks to A telling him to listen to him carefully. . . after A's accident everything has changed . . . when they were talking he had an accident and when S came down he had no option – A jus listening and looking at him (Rahil is 2 hot!!!😳😉). He knows that it was his fault, he then corrects himself and says all of our mistakes. He continues saying I also know it feels new being in this house but at the time u weren't in a condition where u cud be taken out of town – we all are with u and will make u feel comfortable. A asks S who he is 2 which everyone is shocked but Mall is happy and smiles. A asks every1 what is he saying he doesn't understand anything . . . who is S and then he looks at every1 asking who they all are. Every1 in a state of shock except Mall who is very happy she wasn't recognised. Sa then talks 2 A and says doesn't he recognise S – his older bro and her . . . Sa di. S then stops Sa and says something is wrong to which Mall thinks that sumthin is def wrong and I know very well whats wrong – she thanks god. S says they need 2 speak to the doctor and he phones him.

Last part by Shali😃


Shourya is standing by the window looking out side.... radha come near him...he is lost in thought and upset...radha calls his name and he looks up ... he tells her that he is concern about addy but radha assures him that everything will be alright.....shourya has the same hopes....

radha tells him that now addy has remained consciousness they should tell sangam the truth and she should leave his house now... shourya is shocked and tells her that he wont let her go😳.... ( love is in the air....)

eye looking session.....

radha says: that before addy start recognizing everybody and her truth comes out they should tell .... shourya cuts her off ...that sangam has already lost her smile and she wont be able to handle the situation yet....radha tells him that at some point the will have to stop this charade... shourya agrees....

shourya turns around and look outside again..after that radha walks away but at a point she trips due a rug....shourya see it happening and saves her form falling... and holding her we get a lovely lovely eye looking session....after that he helps her up and ask if everything is fine.....

shourya tells her that she has done a lot for him and he has put her a a dilemma... radha tells him that he shouldn't feel guilty about that cause he and his fly ware going trough a difficult time....and he needed someone off his own...shourya replies and what about you and your fly...what you have been through... you also need someone off your own....

radha lowers her gaze and smiles😳... seeing this shourya replies ... he got his answer....radha smiles very shy and walks out off the room😳 .... shourya watch her leaving.....

mandira's place....

ankita opens the door and avi and mandira walk in ... the fly is glad to see them and they all are happy... avi hand out some gifts when megs walks in and serves him water but avoids to serve mandira...

she then comments about them bringing gifts for everyone except her... mandira corrects her and her a binoculars... and taunts her that they will be handy for her😆.....avi tells her that mandira meant that those things are very handy when she will go out.... and talks about the site seeing...he tells mgs that she should visit Goa... mandira taunt megs again by asking if megs never been to Goa..( acting all surprised).... or their hotel... every body is surprised hearing this and megs is shocked and scared... but mandira corrects her self by saying not seen in the brochure....

shergills place...

a doctor is doing the addy check up with sangam sitting there.. the doctor ask addy his name and where he lives.....but addy doesn't recall any thing.... he doesn't remember anyone nor their faces ....sangam is upset hearing this... the doctor wants to talk with sangam in private and they start leaving the room when addy tells them to wait a minute... sangam is happy and ask him if he wants to talk to her, he maybe need to tell her something... and then addy ask her ... who she is ...sangam is hurt hearing this....

end......

comment... watch watch... hero in action😃 ... saving radha.😉.. eye looking blushing😳... so cute😳.... addy is awake and talking ... he looks gooooddddd😃.... so how do I call him now???

mandy and megs are preparing a war... will be funny to watch.....and

avi is the price.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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roshni....
rahil is hot 😉 😆 ....
he looks gooooddd to my....
but shourya will be the hotter one 😃 .....

thanks hun... for this combined update 👏 ... we saved each other a lot off time 😆 ......
till the next time 😃 .....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shali

roshni....
rahil is hot 😉 😆 ....
he looks gooooddd to my....
but shourya will be the hotter one 😃 .....

thanks hun... for this combined update 👏 ... we saved each other a lot off time 😆 ......
till the next time 😃 .....

lmao😆 true rahil is hot and shaurya is hot 2 - both in diff ways😳

thnx 2 u 2 and we shud do it more often😆 it will save loads of time😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey both girls

thank u for the combined update effort 😆

havent watched the eppy, will watch it over the weekend...

@Roshni: Kyaa bachchu, bach gayi naa SOTW se 😆

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I THINK THAT IS THE BEST UPDATE EVER DONE
VERY GOOD JOB TO BOTH OF YOU !!!!!!!!!!! 👏 😉

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Edited by priya.nair - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks a lot rosh and shaila
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Posted: 18 years ago
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things are steaming up...gr8...|
thanks for the update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx 4 ur comments every1 and krishi I wasnt unactive on purpose 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx so much for the update both u guys 😊 ...man we still get those stupid 3 in 1 episodes miss all the good stuff..they shud stop now.. 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heey,
This was the best update!
I liked very much! (Who not... 😆 )
Tnx for the great update

Greetzz!!

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