Shiva-Raavi OS: Fierce - Page 6

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

thankyou vandu mujje na bhulne k liye or yaad se tag karne k liye honestly mereko ab yaad nahi hai ki kis context me ye likha hoga tune (yet to read it though) and i m totally out of touch with the show kuch bhi nahi malum aage piche kya ho raha hai 😅

Pallavi! 🤗

Well, this was #SaabitKarShivaSaysRaavi wala pulao, during remarriage track, remember? Waise, even of you don't, there is a bit of background in the story itself. Baad mein padre bataana kaisa lagaa. 😳

How did your exams go? Are you done with them?

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Oh what an outstanding piece of writing 👏

You made sure they didn't break up entirely, Shiva would slowly but surely win his Raavi back ... but not without his redemption like in the stupid show .. without making amends for every time he's taken Raavi for granted. The way you've portrayed Raavi's hurt and betrayal, Shiva's junooon ... It felt like I was standing there watching it all unravel.

I cannot wait for the next part, if there is one. It will be a crime not to continue with such a fantastic story. Is there anymore fics of yours that I may have missed ? I'd love to read more of your work.

Thank you so much, Barkhaa Di! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ❤️

There are some ideas for a sequel, but it still in the works, so I'll have to see how it plays out. 😊

I've written two other fics -

1. When The Tables Turn

2. Sneak In Through The Roof

I hope you enjoy them. ❤️

Originally posted by: VNuts

Pallavi! 🤗

Well, this was #SaabitKarShivaSaysRaavi wala pulao, during remarriage track, remember? Waise, even of you don't, there is a bit of background in the story itself. Baad mein padre bataana kaisa lagaa. 😳

How did your exams go? Are you done with them?

vandu mere koi exams filhal nahi hai i m preparing for next year syallabus is huge and have to read everysubject joined coaching for it and i really don't know mai last kab itni zyada bsy rehti thi 😓 but i will definetly read your piece soon

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

vandu mere koi exams filhal nahi hai i m preparing for next year syallabus is huge and have to read everysubject joined coaching for it and i really don't know mai last kab itni zyada bsy rehti thi 😓 but i will definetly read your piece soon

Ooh. My bad. I thought you took a break for your exams and and to study. What are you preparing for?

P.s. Looking forward to your review. 😊

Vandu this is best best best shivi fiction abtak ka jo maine pada ho it's a rollercoaster of emotions 😭😭

First comes shiva oh my god the way u portrayed him ye le dil lele mera💖💖 the restlessness he was feeling when his chipkali was ignoring him then the anger which he showed by beating that guy then slight jealousy(becoz nri banda is an idiot😂) then comes his realisation with raavi's outburst the way you portrayed shiva in that particular scene was outstanding it was everything we wanted so much from the show but na raavi ka outburst mila na shiva ka realisation 😪😪 and lastly the apology part along with his determination to win her back it has all my heart ye wale shiva ko dekhne k liye aanke taras gyi thi show me jo raavi ko sabke upar rakhe when raavi was determined to get divorce and how shiva was countering it ufffff i loved that part it looked more like their usual banter on a serious topic like divorce 🤣🤣

Now my favourite baachi Raavi

The way u portrayed raavi was so so apt 💯and so so wanted by all of us in show her feeling of betrayal was so justified indeed she never had choice to show her feeling becoz everybody played with it and more when shiva did the same it jst broke all hell loose there was no wayback to again jst forgive shiva and mend everything and live happily ever after like what he did was nothing and it's so usual and casual that everybody has always taken her forgiveness as granted saddest part is shiva too taken it for granted untill he was made realised the gravity of situation and that no one could made him realise except his raavi❤❤

That line where shiva realised he made his feelings internalised out of choice and and raavi did same out necessity it jst broke my heart 💔💔becoz it is so so so true indeed both has no one to share feelings except eachother but they have to long way in order to show their true emotions untill then both choose to keep it within themselves especially raavi becoz she suffers the most and from both side incliding her husband

Vandu lastly i loved every bit of it 💜💜💜💜💜

P.s agr iska koi sequel aaye toh tag karna mat bhulna 🤗

Aise aise pyaare pyaare os likhte raha kar

P.p.s i guess u outdid ritu this time in terms of word limit 🤣

Originally posted by: VNuts

Ooh. My bad. I thought you took a break for your exams and and to study. What are you preparing for?

P.s. Looking forward to your review. 😊

preparing for upsc cse 2023

Review dia hai jaake padh

Originally posted by: VNuts

Haww!! I tagged you!! You even liked my tagged post!! Posting the link below.

Dekho dekho. Like I would forget you! Ek to apne miss kar diya, aur phir aap humein daant rahe ho. 🥺

Ooo so you tagged me on the EDT😆

Tab hi main sochu ye piece bina tag ke aur itna visit krne pe bhi hmne apni watchlist me kaise daal ke rkha hua hai🙈🙈🙈🙈

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Vandu this is best best best shivi fiction abtak ka jo maine pada ho it's a rollercoaster of emotions 😭😭

First comes shiva oh my god the way u portrayed him ye le dil lele mera💖💖 the restlessness he was feeling when his chipkali was ignoring him then the anger which he showed by beating that guy then slight jealousy(becoz nri banda is an idiot😂) then comes his realisation with raavi's outburst the way you portrayed shiva in that particular scene was outstanding it was everything we wanted so much from the show but na raavi ka outburst mila na shiva ka realisation 😪😪 and lastly the apology part along with his determination to win her back it has all my heart ye wale shiva ko dekhne k liye aanke taras gyi thi show me jo raavi ko sabke upar rakhe when raavi was determined to get divorce and how shiva was countering it ufffff i loved that part it looked more like their usual banter on a serious topic like divorce 🤣🤣

Now my favourite baachi Raavi

The way u portrayed raavi was so so apt 💯and so so wanted by all of us in show her feeling of betrayal was so justified indeed she never had choice to show her feeling becoz everybody played with it and more when shiva did the same it jst broke all hell loose there was no wayback to again jst forgive shiva and mend everything and live happily ever after like what he did was nothing and it's so usual and casual that everybody has always taken her forgiveness as granted saddest part is shiva too taken it for granted untill he was made realised the gravity of situation and that no one could made him realise except his raavi❤❤

That line where shiva realised he made his feelings internalised out of choice and and raavi did same out necessity it jst broke my heart 💔💔becoz it is so so so true indeed both has no one to share feelings except eachother but they have to long way in order to show their true emotions untill then both choose to keep it within themselves especially raavi becoz she suffers the most and from both side incliding her husband

Vandu lastly i loved every bit of it 💜💜💜💜💜

P.s agr iska koi sequel aaye toh tag karna mat bhulna 🤗

Aise aise pyaare pyaare os likhte raha kar

P.p.s i guess u outdid ritu this time in terms of word limit 🤣

Thank you so much, Pallavi. 🤗

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to make sure their confrontation was intense, at the same time, keep that ShiVi essence intact.

P.s. Aage likhoongi, to pakka tag karoongi. ❤️

P.p.s. Nope. Ritu ka mujhse bhi lambaa tha. Itna lambaa humse na ho paayega. 😆

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Ooo so you tagged me on the EDT😆

Tab hi main sochu ye piece bina tag ke aur itna visit krne pe bhi hmne apni watchlist me kaise daal ke rkha hua hai🙈🙈🙈🙈

Hmph. Matlab aap humaara tag kiya hua post padhke bhool gaye. 😭

Ab humein ek dum lambaa wala review chaahiye. Warna hum to nahi maanenge. 😈

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Res

Okay!!! So the first thing I want to say is....This one is freaking amazinggg....

I loved this Raavi and I loved this Shiva too even more❤️

Starting with Raavi girl is pure love...She has been through so much and this truth that the guy he loved has kidnapped her so she could married off to someone else is like a laat blow to her patience and self respect.
The moment she thought happiness is knocking her door Shiva's impulsive action just crumbled down everything for her.

She had flinched

These 3 words are clear indicator of what Shiva's betrayal did. And why her anger, her actions, her complaints and her outburst (or confrontation what ever u call it) is justified and apt.

Coming to Shiva he has again proved to be a bail buddhi , kidnapped Raavi to treat her a lesson is nothing but a plain stupid thing one can only expect Shiva to do.

Once again he took Raavi for granted and thought he will get away with his actions but all he got in return is a fierce, bold and ignorant Raavi. Who literally reminded him that it was she who has been wronged by him time and again. 💔

She was harsh, truthful and so on point with her words, accusations and complaints and Shiva deserved every bit of what she said.

I like the part that he let her out everything it was needed for both of them but what I am surprised about is the determination and zidd of Shiva to win Raavi's trust and love and fight for their relationship. He is being real Kamina this time I guess ..As u asked once if I find him one.😆

That proposal was everything ❤️ And family's reaction to that was so apt.

They all know yet not prepared to see what these two fire balls are gonna do and what madness they are going to witness.
This is going to be hell of a ride for all I guess.

This one simply love, Vannu❤️

P.S- I was unable to edit my reserved post. So isliye commented alag se.