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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkbell

You had said that you'll soon upload a ff so when to upload?


i wont post it till atleast august

its a huge commitment and i havent even begun writing it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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A/N:i have added another emotion; pink=jealousy


drabble-2 shiva's POV


ā€œBhabhiiiiiiiiii……….ā€


ā€œI am very hungry. Is breakfast ready?ā€


ā€œShit shit dammit…..what’s she here for?ā€


ā€œufff….But just look at her….in that black Anarkali and red bandhani dupatta…….gorgeous lil creature….Aa gayi hongi…bramha se varadhan leke….just to torure meā€¦ā€¦ā€


ā€œBandhani dupatta? What in the world? Why do you know this?ā€


ā€œUhoh she saw us…..ā€


ā€œShe’s coming towards usā€¦ā€.


ā€œQuick lets hide…..ā€


ā€œNo its too late…..ā€


ā€œJust walk confidently and with a scowl….nothing will happenā€


ā€œFear, here you take over…..ā€


ā€œMe? I dont know what to do….ā€


ā€œCommon on dude, you are trained for this….basic liar’s instinctā€


ā€œAll i do is cuss and panic and keep us alive…..THAT’S WHAT I AM TRAINED FOR!ā€


ā€œSomebody do something….ā€


ā€œOk……here we goā€¦ā€


ā€œ dont look in her eyes….she will find out……DONT LOOK INTO HER EYESā€¦ā€¦ā€


ā€œUh then..then…?ā€


ā€œyou know what? Gussa here will take overā€¦ā€¦ā€


ā€œ gladlyā€¦ā€¦ā€


ā€œAbe subha subha khana tushne aa agai, chipkali kahiki?"


"Chal nikal pandya niwas se…..if you eat our food all our ration will get over in one week itself….ā€


ā€œGadhede, tu andha hein kya?ā€


ā€œI am here helping dhara di for dev’s birthday party…….if you keep troubling me then, i am going to make the tastiest gulab jamun ever and not even give you oneā€¦ā€¦ā€


ā€œDammit she knows our weak point………..i cant resist gulab jamun.ā€


ā€œWhatever its not like we really want her gone…..ā€


ā€œBut if she’s here, she WILL GET TO KNOWā€¦ā€¦ā€


ā€œWell, we’ll just stay out of her sight….and keep her in our’s….ā€


ā€œWait…..is she really here for dev or for us? She has not once asked for where he is since she entered? What is going on?ā€


ā€œYou know why she is here…….she is here for dev……..not for you but dev, the idiot."


ā€œWho are you?ā€


ā€œWho i am and what i do doesn’t matter all that matter is that she doesn’t want us but dev….ā€


ā€œStupid gentlemanly dev….stupid chipkali with her cute-si bateesiā€


ā€œCute-si?ā€


ā€œShe doesn’t want us…..she wants dev……dev with his fine grades and english speaking diplomatic attitudeā€


ā€œUgh…none of this matters. I dont care if she is here for dev….or bhabhi or the stupid food…..ā€


ā€œI just dont want her here….ā€


ā€œOh but you do….not only do you want her here but you want her to want to be here for you…..ā€


"Abe who’s this guy….chup kar sala….bhejha already fry ho chuka hein don’t add ghee to the fire."


ā€œOyeee let go….bhoothnath let go…… i only came here to wish dev ok? I’ll leave. Just wait till i become a pandya bahu. Thu tab dekhna kaise nachwathi hu tumhe…..ā€


ā€œNo way in hell will you be a pandya bahu in my watch. Now just get the hell out of here……..ā€


ā€œNo dont goā€¦ā€¦ā€


ā€œDo something……anything……just stop her….ā€





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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

more tags...


p.s. sorry if i missed anyone

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Eeeekkkksssss!! I’m loving this so much!! I have a stupid grin on my face at work!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I LOVED THIS OMGGG!! Too good yaar!! I loved all of the dialogues 🤩🤩 it was soooo fun and light! I really needed something to make my mood brighter after today’s episode and this really did it for me ā¤ļøā¤ļø It was such a cute and simple piece! My heart melted at so many points!


some of the places where I became a pighalti ice cream:

1. Him noticing Raavi’s outfit hehe

2. His gussa taking over because he’s a flustered kaddu (loved how fear went like ā€œall I do is cussā€ lol)

3. He doesn’t want her to go 🄺

4. He wants to find a way to keep her in his sight but make sure she doesn’t see the chor in his heart 😌

5. Jealous him 🄺🄺

6. ā€œNo don’t goā€ AWWWWWW 🄰🄰🄰🄰🄰


Lol I ended up dot pointing the entire story šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ I loved this update ā¤ļøā¤ļø


Edited by mandira2 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Aww my Shiva baby boi is jealous of his brother šŸ¤­ā¤ļø

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Aww!! This was fun. Such a cute kaddu-like Shiva! šŸ˜†

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

OWIE!!! I love how cute and light hearted this is! beyond adorable my shiva is jelly of his brother.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

This Shiva is mad. Mad in love, but still mad. 🤣🤣🤣

PS I loved this! Very cute!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Flustered Shiva, nticing every single thing about Raavi, but can’t remember to let her go. HAHA I loved the part where angers says time to take over 🤣

awwwh Pandya Bahu toh banegi l, she doent says whos haha🤪

This was sooo goooodā¤ļø

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