AUTHOR'S NOTE:
ok so this drabble is a lil hatke(if you will)
its about a 16 year old raavi and her emotions....
inspired from the very famous movie "inside out"
also i experimented with a new way of writing where there are only dialogues....
took inspiration one of our very own ff writer @lizziebennet ❤️ from their work "first time's the charm"
p.s cant tag them
very interesting piece of work....do check it out if you haven't
title credit: megs(@sillysatchel)
SO--
just in case its difficult to follow..
yellow=joy
green=disgust
blue=sadness
red=anger
purple=fear
orange=horny
italics=thoughts/dreams
♪♪=thinking in the tune
normal text= dialogues
p.s. i hope you enjoy it....if its crap, do tell how i can do better😆
p.p.s. title? anyone?
*****************************PART ONE*****************************
“Raavi, the most beautiful girl in the world, will you be my bride? when we get married I will buy you all the chocolates in the world and together we can take revenge on Shiva for the rest of our lives. What do you say, darling?”
“Yes…Dev…., a thousand times yessss…….”
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*beep….beep….beep…*
“Ughh… stupid alarm ruining our beauty sleep and pyaare pyaare sapne……..”
“Wake up…. Everybody wake up………”
“Give us five more mins…”
“pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaasee…”
“♪♪morning is here…………..the morning is here…….the sunshine is here………the sky—ouch”
“Dude uncool………”
“You sang that crap this early in the morning….do it again and idk where you’ll land”
“Yeah joy, you kinda had it coming…..”
“Woah and sadness agrees with me so i am definitely right”
“Are woh sab chodo guys lets wake up……Aaj dev ki 18th birthday hein…… we have to do something special. He is officially an adult now.”
“Get up…..get up…..”
“I am sooooo excited”
“Haan haan”
“ok ok”
“We are waking up……”
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♪♪Mere khwabon mein jo aaye……..
Aa ke mujhe chhed jaaye……..
Mujhse…. koi ladki…. pyaari kahan milegi…..
Mere khwabon mein jo aaye……..
Laala…… laaalala….. laaaaaala…...♪♪
“Raaaavii………..”
“If you don't know the damn lyrics stop singing it.”
♪♪Laala…… laaalala….. laaaaaala…...♪♪
“For god sake! Please stop singing meri Behen…. My ears are bleeding….”
“And come out fast I need to get to work and I need to grab my laptop. It's on your desk”
“Are we that bad at singing?”
“Ha, no chance. She’s just jealous of our lovely voice.”
“Gimme a few more mins Anitha diiiiii….. I'll be there…..”
“Ok ok jaldi aana…”
“What should we wear—-white or black??”
“White” “black” “nothing”
“Huh?”
“Who are you?”
“Oh hi…. So nice to finally meet y’all…”
“I am tharki…I am in the new upgrade.”
“Didn't you guys read the manual??”
“Whatever….”
“Make yourself at home….”
“Welcome to the elite club….”
“Ok so….. coming back to my question—”
“Ooh, who’s this hottie?”
“That's our bhoothnath….now just let us decide upon an outfit…..”
“Our? Our? Our? Our?”
“ughhh”
“Offo I know that’s shiva……..silly!”
“I meant when did he get so hot….”
“Waise baat tho sahi hein……look at those abs…..”
“And those biceps….he looks like somnath ka sastha ranveer singh…”
“Haaa but ranveer singh got married….”
“Yummy”
“More like yucky”
“Hot? ranveer Singh? What?” “What kind of sick thought are we having?”
"WE LIKE DEV!!"
“Ha, Yeah you keep telling yourself that….”
“Guysss “
“Focus…..it’s dev’s birthday….”
“Yeah stop thinking about that gadheda”
“white or black…..”
“Black” “black” “black” “black”
“Black, it is then….”
“Sorry gussa majority wins”
“Kuch bhi”
“Raaaviiiiiiiii…………”
“Haaaaaaaaan bas do minute aayiii”
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“Dev… bhoothnath….”
“Aa gayi raavi? I was just wondering where you were……. on a normal day, you would have already been fighting with shiva by now, and today it being dev’s birthday, mei yahi soch rahi thi ki thu abhi thak kyu nahi aayi…..abh aayi ho tho help me in the kitchen no…i have so much work pending for dev’s party…”
“What?! how are we gonna take our revenge on shiva for his stupid prank on us last week?”
“Ugh dhara di is always in favor of her pyaare devar”
“Ha…ha….ha… gussa you look so funny doing that action…do it again no….”
“Abe phattu……. if you hadn’t gotten scared of that stupid plastic chipkali you would have saved us so much trouble…..”
“Arre what can I do? We HATE CHIPKALI. Period. How am I to know if it's plastic or not?”
“What say disgust?”
“Yesssss chipkali is the most repulsive creature in existence”
“Waise kahan margaya mera bhoothnath?”
“Mera?” “Mera?” “Mera?” “Mera?”
“Aur Karo ‘WE LIKE DEV’”
“I….i….meant shiva. Where is he??”
♪♪Laala…… laaalala….. Laaaaaala…… dhoonde akhiyaan♪♪
“We really need to learn lyrics of songs.”
“Ikr!!”
“Bhabhi…….."“I am very hungry.Is breakfast ready?”
“Finally” “Finally.” “finally.” “finally.” “finally”. “finally.”
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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