| ShiVi DRABBLE : Mera Kuch Samaan | | Her POV | - Page 7

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Loved it ritu💜

The way u changed whole scene is commendable 👏

It's was both raavi standing up for her own respect as well as realising that both of them need their space and zabardasti ki shadi was not the solution only thing they needed was confrontation or confession but in alone and when she actually got that she had no memory of that night and saddest it was her last moment with shiva that broke my heart💔

I liked how it was not at all like she stopped loving him after she left somnath or stopped thinking about him becoz u can't forget someone so easily whom u claim to love so passionately rather it was she can't stop loving him but for his happiness she can leave him and there is no need to forget the love she holds forhim she can continue loving him that's why took mangalsutra(i hope i interpreted atleast 10%correctly what u tried to convey)

lastly I m always sucker of stories where raavi leave this mad family and shiva comes along with her sooner or later and you gave me that 🤗

It's a wonderful drabble💜💜

Pallaviiiiii ❤️😭

Thank you so much for these wonderful words.

I don't think Raavi could have ever stopped loving him. The way she was going, getting disrespected and gathering agony from everywhere just to be with the man she loved in hopes that someday he'll crack...nahhh this girl was gone far beyond.

In my mind making her go back for the ornament was her refusing to leave the piece that was a part of her now. Shiva wasn't hers, at that point but the MS would always remain a remembrance of her marriage and belongingness to the man she loved. 😳

Glad you liked it!!!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Ritu!!!! A lovely drabble overall! I actually had this one confused with another angsty AU plot that you'd mentioned to me, though... Something you said you might or might not do.

Coming to the actual drabble, you know already that I haven't watched these episodes. Only 1-2 VMs, that too on your own suggestion. And yet Raavi's pain hit me acutely right from the start!

Loved how you described Raavi's loneliness as a hidden thing of years and not the months it had been since her wedding to Shiva. She's been alone against this world for much longer, hasn't she?

I've already told you how much I love the part where she packs up to leave, and her going back for the Mangalsutra just adds to everything. It's such an innate part of her now that she can't leave it behind even if she WANTS to!

And then post time skip, it takes barely two sentences to see that Raavi isn't over Shiva, and probably will never be! She's taken time away to heal, unintentionally so perhaps, but she isn't any closer to forgetting him, or even lose her longing for him! So it's a little expected when she's not too shocked by the sight of him on her doorstep.

I think I'll wait and read Shiva's POV before saying anything about his actions though....

Sathuuuuuuuu ❤️😭

Okayyy yeah this was INSPIRED from that angsty plot yk? 😆
But now I feel that's more of an OS plot so I've kept that idea wrapped for OS. 😉

She had always been one against million vultures. Since the beginning.

The Mangalsutra Part is loved by everyone and I am glad I made the decision to let her go back for it. It wasn't planned yk? Bas likhte likhte I went for it. Thought it would add a good poetic agony to it.

LOL Shiva has a lot of pressure for his POV doesn't he? I hope I am able to stop you from going ballistic on him. 😆

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

The sheer beauty oozing out of every word that you write ❤️

This is truly beautiful dear !

Awww Thank you so so so much 🥺❤️😭

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Finally, you came with a bang!!!🥳

RES

Awww you were waiting? ❤️😭

Imma be waiting

Originally posted by: Palak2812

I really loved how u made Raavi stand up for herself and left Kaandyas ka faltu plan and also made Shiva to put in efforts.

I hope u would be continuing it

Loved it ❤️

Thank you so much Palak ❤️

I have a Shiva's POV planned let's see when I finish it 😆

Originally posted by: Prizi

Always wanted to see raavi to flee down from that forced marriage. This is the raavi i wanted from long. My strong girl❤️

Beautifully written ritu

Waiting for shiva's side of story

Update soon

Thank you so so so much for reading! ❤️

Will start working on Shiva's POV soon 😳

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Res

Iss baar jaldi unres hoga pakka! 😆

Koi Nahi...Imma wait ❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Thank you so much Palak ❤️

I have a Shiva's POV planned let's see when I finish it 😆

so there is part 2 of it also

do tag me ☺️

Will give u lamba comment after i comeback 😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Hailllssss 🤗

Thank you so much for reading 🥺❤️

Will start working on Shiva's POV veryyy soon 🤗

Well let's see if after Shiva's POV if I can conjure up an OS or something. Dekho ab. 😉

I have full confidence in you hat you will be able to do it😉

Raavi wala confidence on Shiva 🤗

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Sathuuuuuuuu ❤️😭

Okayyy yeah this was INSPIRED from that angsty plot yk? 😆
But now I feel that's more of an OS plot so I've kept that idea wrapped for OS. 😉

She had always been one against million vultures. Since the beginning.

The Mangalsutra Part is loved by everyone and I am glad I made the decision to let her go back for it. It wasn't planned yk? Bas likhte likhte I went for it. Thought it would add a good poetic agony to it.

LOL Shiva has a lot of pressure for his POV doesn't he? I hope I am able to stop you from going ballistic on him. 😆

I'm a very restrained person. Until I'm not. But yeah, I'm not going ballistic on him anytime soon... 😆