Khushiyaan- ShiVi Drabble

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello beautiful people

Here is a small piece, I don’t know whether to name it a Drabble or OS but anyways here it is

This is what I would’ve wished would’ve happened during their apparent SR

Just a little something I thought of out of the blue.
Genuinely have no clue how it’s turned out

Feel free to give your comments about it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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--KHUSHIYAAN--



“Ab jo pehle se hi pati patayi ho usse wapas kaise pataun mein?” Shiva asked innocently


“Mujhe nahi pata, tu hi samaj” raavi added while throwing a fake fit


“Jab tak tu apne pyaar ka izhar nahi kar deta, tab tak yeh shaadi aage nahi badhegi” she said softly while turning away from him


“Chipkali” He tried to gather his courage


“Bol bandar” she turned towards him slowly


“Woh main- main tujhse, tujhse mein woh”


“Kya hai shiva, Maine sabke saamne tere liye mera pyaar ka izhaar kiya, yahan tak beech sadak mein tujhe kiss bhi kiya aur tu iss band kamre mein mujhse apne dil ki baat nahi kar pa raha hai” she said dramatically


“Ab kya Karun mujhe nahi aata yeh sab” he said nervously


Taking slow steady towards him, she whispered


“Mein Sikha doon?” She said ever so softly


Slowly raising her hand near his eye and shutting them softly, she said


“Apne ankhoon ko band kar aur apne dil se pooch, ki mein tere liya kya hoon-“


“Sab kuch, tu meri sab kuch hai Raavi. Mein jaanta hun ki Main kabhi teekh se izhar nahi kar paya lekin tu mere liye bachpan se sab kuch thi. Tu hi Woh iklauti ladki thi jo mere saath ghoom thi thi.” He cut her in between while slowly opening his eyes


“Shiva” she said with tears brimming


“Shhh, nahi. Aaj mein bolunga aur tu sunegi” he added while placing his finger on her lips


“Haan Maine bohot baar tere saath galat kiya hai, aur mein uske liye jitni baar bhi maafi mangun woh kam hoga. Lekin mein tujhse yeh vaada karta hoon ki mein tujhe woh har khushi deni ki koshish karunga jiske tu layak hai. Mein tujhse bohot pyaar karta hoon Raavi. Tu mere zindagi ka sabse acha aur kimthi taufa hai” he finally confessed


This was it, this was all she wished to hear. Him expressing his feelings for her. And he did it in the best way possible


“I love you shiva” she said while swinging into his arms


“I love you raavi” he said while holding her closer to him


After what felt like an eternity, they got out of each other’s hold.


Shiva slowly moved his hand from her waist to her cheek, lightly caressing it, her eyes closed on their own accord


Yeh tere gaal, pata hai kitna distracting hai” he murmured while placing a soft kiss on her right cheek followed by the left


Reaching her eyes, he slowly kissed both her eye lids . Apologizing for making them shed tears. “Mein waada karta hoon ki aaj ke baad inn ankhon mein Sirf khushi ke aasoon honge”


Raavi slowly whimpered as fresh set of tears made their way down.


Lightly brushing them away with his thumb he moved back down to her lips


“In hoonton pe toh mera kab se nazar thi.” His tone seducing her further. He swiped his thumb softly over her rosy lips


She titled her head in anticipation and that was the consent he was waiting for. Slowly reaching down till their lips met, it was a soft emotional kiss. Raavis hand made their way to his hair and his grip on her cheek became firmer


Raavi moved slightly behind to look at shiva, she giggled looking at his disappointed face as she moved.


“Raavi kya tu-“ he started only to be shut by her lips


Taking his lower lip in hers, she slowly suckled it, making shiva smile through the kiss while slowly sucking her upper lip. Urgency and the need for each other clearly evident in their kiss. Slyly managing to get his tongue in her mouth, he deepened the kiss catching Raavi by surprise.


After minutes of their urgent makeout they moved away from eachother to catch their breathes.


“Thank you Raavi” he said


She didn’t need him to explain anything further, she knew the reason behind his thank you. Raavi didn’t mind fighting against the world if the result would give her shiva.


They finally found their “khushiyaan” together


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Haven't proofread, so please ignore any grammatical errors <3

Edited by hapakalanoodles - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging the constants 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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awww......

my eyes got a lil misty after reading this😭

it was so wholesome❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful update 😍❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was so beautiful and amazing💖 raavi being the loveguru and shiva being fastlearner 😍☺️

Loved how shiva continued to express his feelings it was so pure ❤️

Loved it 💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That's what a old school yet so elegant and at same time so promosing♥️♥️

I mean raavi atleast deserved this much of assurance ❣️❣️

Portrayed beautifully🥰🥰

Loved it❣️❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwwwwww. ❤️🤗

Noodles is back with a bang!

Such a cute and lovely little thingyyyy.

The way they cut the SR short and deprived us off of all the cutesy stuff I was waiting for someone to go ahead an write something on it.

Loved the words you've made Shiva use.

I want him to use his tongue more in the show as well apart from Bhabhi Maa Jaap.😆

Thanks for writing!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loved this 🥺❤️ This was much needed after the disappointment that we got from today’s episode! I feel like their SR would’ve been something very similar to this if the show makers put more effort 🤪 Thanks for writing this! ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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ohhh God 😭😭😭 this was so beautiful 🤧🤧🤧

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