| ShiVi TS : Taming The Enchanter || Part 2 : Page 18||Completed| - Page 9

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Love the concept Ritu! I don't think my brain processed it properly because I've had 20 things running on my mind due to college. But I can tell this will be good for sure!

Can't wait for more ❤️

Aww no problem at all!

I know it was unusually long. I tend to ramble a lot that's why Imma a fan of you. You're so on point Imma need tips so bad man. 🤡😔

Will update soon. ❤️

Originally posted by: Palak2812

Loved it ❤

Thanks for the tag

Would be waiting for the next update

Thank you so much ❤️

Will try updating soon

Originally posted by: Iktara22

Undoubtedly a beautiful concept and you oh god with your words make it more enticing and alluring, do you add a potion while you write to enhance it or what? It's so processed and refined.

Also, update soon it's beautiful and i want to read it more.

P.s.- i usually do fall asleep while reading ffs but today I didn't,hehe.

Damn this makes me feel like a witch!

Which is practically like an honour...Imma Hermione peepsss gettawayyyy y'all! 😈😎

Thank you so much for reading.

So glad because I actually did while editing 😆

Originally posted by: ClumsyMe

Resssss my highness!!!!!

And yayyyyyyyy tooo.

Will stuff a stack of oceanic words when I disentangle from my busy schedule. ❤️

Finally got time to read this long wala update and oh my god the wait was worth enough 😍😍

This version of raavi is actually me i too kind of always fear to share my feelings and try to keep at backend and findways to distract myself like she did being behind books or through her dance ❤️

Raavi's fear to lose all people jst for sake of one was so legit and heartbreaking💔

Now coming to shiva so this version of shiva is also a bailbuddhi and reaching conclusion based on assumption 👏kyaa karu mai iss ladke kaa

I m not giving him any leverage of being teenager no never all he makes assumption when it comes to raavi but thankyou for giving me that panicstricken shiva for 2mins when she said she is unavailable that miniheartatrack moment was trt to readers😆

Now as shiva is all buckled up to sametoing his phailaya hua raita i m excited how he is gonna do that

Specialmention raavi-rishita bonding was so heartwarming 💖💖

Loved loved loved the first part ritu 💜💜💜

Jaldi jaldi second part nipta k hume serve kar biriyani 😎

P.s really sorry for being so late to comment 😒

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Finally got time to read this long wala update and oh my god the wait was worth enough 😍😍

This version of raavi is actually me i too kind of always fear to share my feelings and try to keep at backend and findways to distract myself like she did being behind books or through her dance ❤️

Raavi's fear to lose all people jst for sake of one was so legit and heartbreaking💔

Now coming to shiva so this version of shiva is also a bailbuddhi and reaching conclusion based on assumption 👏kyaa karu mai iss ladke kaa

I m not giving him any leverage of being teenager no never all he makes assumption when it comes to raavi but thankyou for giving me that panicstricken shiva for 2mins when she said she is unavailable that miniheartatrack moment was trt to readers😆

Now as shiva is all buckled up to sametoing his phailaya hua raita i m excited how he is gonna do that

Specialmention raavi-rishita bonding was so heartwarming 💖💖

Loved loved loved the first part ritu 💜💜💜

Jaldi jaldi second part nipta k hume serve kar biriyani 😎

P.s really sorry for being so late to comment 😒

Awww Thank you so much Pallavi! 😳

I am so proud of myself for writing a version if Raavi that y'all relate to. Trust me its overwhelming really. She is what all makers refuse to give us...the possible abandonment issues, fear of loss, pride and strength to pick yourself up. Everything that they do not give me.

Damn right he a Bael-Budhhi but not a jerk. He's just stupid. That's it. 😆

Raavi-Rishita is something everyone loved I have a plan for another one of their bondings in one of the prompts I am having in my mind.

Writing. Will do soon. 🤗

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

LOL

Similar?

Ghosts of the past?

I feel you man. But...errr...maybe not entirely I was just supremely dumb back in the day.

Raavi is me. Me is Raavi. Through and through.

I've given her two of my attributes in this one...books & dance. Her intro scene might have been the easiest descriptions in all of the lengthy words I wrote in this story. Truly. Because it was easy. Bas.

A big thanks for cutting my Shiva a slack here because he hasn't gotten that much lol.

In my head? He's just mind-numbingly stupid because he's a teen. Bas...no malice beyond that. He would have made a show if he was angry on anyone with passion and created a scene but no. He had made a distance instead.

"Unavailable" is Sathya's magic man through and through I am such a DABBA in flirting because obviously I have never gotten my head outta books lol// 😆

I just decided to give him this leeway for myself, I dont want to get pissed off at him at least in IF stories world. Already doing that in PS world. 😆

Hence, this theory.

But as I said he deserve the attacks Raavi going to do on him for creating this mess. He deserves it 🤪

When are you gracing us with next part

You told me today would be the day. I’m here. 😎

Originally posted by: VNuts

You told me today would be the day. I’m here. 😎

I haven't written Imma stuck at "Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?" again for the 826398th time 🤡

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Bold 😆

I just decided to give him this leeway for myself, I dont want to get pissed off at him at least in IF stories world. Already doing that in PS world. 😆

Hence, this theory.

But as I said he deserve the attacks Raavi going to do on him for creating this mess. He deserves it 🤪

When are you gracing us with next part

RAAVI IS GONNA EAT HIM UP IN THE NEXT ONE!!!

IN front of everyone!!! 😈