| ShiVi TS : Taming The Enchanter || Part 2 : Page 18||Completed| - Page 7

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Aa gye hum

To be honest I have opened two tabs... One for page number 1 and other for typing comments. simaltaneoulsy... Kuch miss nahi hona chahiye😆 -That's how I do long comments. 🤪

Rituuu... You have terrific way with which you write your stories, the startings always with a beautiful setting, the dialogues... Everything just looks so real.. Kuddos to you for that❤️.

Raaaviii... She is a princesss through and through.. I understand her defence mechanism. . Her hiding her dilemnas behind her books and dance is just soo perfectly narrated that one cant help but feel for raavi. Her wish for her own family,her fear of loosing pandya family.. Damn... The portrayal👏👏👏

I love this raavi so much. Dignified , poised, determined and serene. ❤️

Shiva...He looks jerk.. But do I blame him.....not exactly....But I do blame the teenage factor here.. Very turbulent phase of life that is... Very rarely we come across teenagers who have absolute clarity of what they want. So yeah... I believe shiva is learning and he will win his inner battles and evolve as a better person.

Shiva's emotion with his mother's pain.. I feel for the boy...but the method he adapted hurt raavi the most.

Lol at... Stop sneaking up at my life like a lead of some daily soap🤣

I am loving rishita here... Best friend goals. Rishita's self talk about raavi had my heart.. That girl indeed has ocean of love within to offer shiva. Rishita playing cupid.. Bring it on girl.

Shiva finally realising he is in deep shit.. Yes you are Mr. Heart throb... Would love to see what he does to sudharo his mistakes of the past and and win over raavi amd prove hself worthy of raavi.

Bonfire ni tha isme😭

Would be waiting for that one... Fastam fasttttt.

I love it Ritu... It was just perfect blend of emotions that you have presented soo beautifully to us. All close to reality.. I could see people behaving in the same manner like you have depicted. The story had a perfect flow... Ekdum makkhan ❤️

Dont ever say again.. Accha nahi likha hai..

This was among the bests I have read.

Thank you so much for reading.

I had to do something with Raavi. The show Raavi has been ruined completely with no spine or anything I just wanted to make her fierce here. Bas.

LMAO...Shiva the jerk has been a common thought process and believe me I have tried SO HARD to go ahead and make y'all feel otherwise. I practically went TOO overboard with his feeling-description. For the same reason...I didn't want him to be read out as a jerk but just a flawed teenager that's it.

Raavi-Rishita love is common in this one I love it too in fact majorly want it IRL. ❤️

LMAO Okay hear me out I feel the Bonfire has been hyped so much and you guys think its gonna be roses but I've practically given all thorns in that scene. There's no romance there...lol. Really...I feel 80% are gonna be disappointed that there was no romance in the bonfire. 🤡

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

OMG!!!! How I love this!!!

Thank you so much for tagging me. I wouldn’t have wanted to miss this one for anything in the world. I’m an absolute sucker for Shiva wooing Raavi and I have a feeling I’ll be getting just that here!

My absolute absolute favorite line is this one:

“The manner in which she evaded his compliment like it was something unbelievable had made him want to hold her close and whisper sweet muttering into her ear, indicating just how magnificent she actually was and the ability she held, to make him forget breathing.”

Beautifully written 👏🏻

Yes, Shiva Pandya! Yes! You are in a deep deep mess. Realizing that is your first step darling. Now do something about it. She’d that Casanova image of yours and show her through your actions, tell her in words that your silly, stubborn, jealous heart has only ever belonged to her. Please don’t disappoint her, me and yourself again!

You know the funny part? I get both Shiva and Raavi. Like what they did what they did. So typical of teenagers. Been in that phase decades ago myself so I won’t be lying when I say I could totally totally relate with both the characters. I’m so looking forward to seeing how this one pans out.

And I’m so glad they are going on this trip together. Dev aur Rishita tho apne mein hi busy rahenge, bas yeh Siddharth ka kuch intezaam karna padega so these two are constantly thrown into each other’s company. I am a devout believer that Shiva and Raavi’s problems (both the onscreen ones and the ones in your story) could only be solved by locking these two up together in a room so they are left with no choice but to confront and confess these icky mucky emotions they have for each other. And of course, my tharki brain always demands for a lot more to happen, if you know what I mean 😉

I love love love long updates so as long as you promise me long updates on this one, I am willing to write an entire review in your comments section.

You lovely woman! You gonna overwhelm me.

You picked up a line and quoted me in your comment? BABE I LOVE YOU 😭❤️

Actually you've just got to pray that I DON'T disappoint y'all LMAO. I have been very confused with this Shiva throughout the story yk? Because he has been a complex character. I've always had to find reasons of his actions in my head and believe me I've pestered a LOT of people lol.

Teenage phase?

Pls don't discuss Imma get FBs of my mind-numbingly dumb self from 2015. I can't- 🤡

Well Dev's gonna be busy lol...as usual...not Rishita she's having her eyes open! 😈

Okay this is such a common belief I've had two comments with 'Lock them in the room and let them DO stuff their way' as a solution which I feel is excellent lol. But I haven't planned locking them here they gonna have a very- intense- conversation which believe is such a task because it is supposed to have angst-mush-jealousy all in one go and since I have never not once been in that scenario Imma pestering my friends for options like the flirting scene. Hopefully I ain't disappointing y'all. 🤡

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

LOL

Similar?

Ghosts of the past?

I feel you man. But...errr...maybe not entirely I was just supremely dumb back in the day.

Raavi is me. Me is Raavi. Through and through.

I've given her two of my attributes in this one...books & dance. Her intro scene might have been the easiest descriptions in all of the lengthy words I wrote in this story. Truly. Because it was easy. Bas.

A big thanks for cutting my Shiva a slack here because he hasn't gotten that much lol.

In my head? He's just mind-numbingly stupid because he's a teen. Bas...no malice beyond that. He would have made a show if he was angry on anyone with passion and created a scene but no. He had made a distance instead.

"Unavailable" is Sathya's magic man through and through I am such a DABBA in flirting because obviously I have never gotten my head outta books lol// 😆

So self deprecating!!!! Bas bhi karo!!! The rest of the magic is all yours!!!! 😆

Trust me, girl. You won’t be disappointing no one! Ab jaldi update de!

Originally posted by: nolee3097

I loved this, Ritu ❤️
Such a sweet endearing ShiVi take!

Rishita giving good advice to Raavi 👍🏼

I loved Shiva's mini heart attack when she said she's "Unavailable" 😆
Kaash show mein bhi Shiva ke thode emotions dikha dete, other than gussa!

Him placing his palm over his heart in the end to calm down! Awww!❤️

Lattu Shiva incoming! 😆

Excited for the next part! 🤗

"Unavailable" is thriving and I understand I lost a breath while reading the dialogues too.

Might have gone crazy for 5 secs.

Lattu and sad and a jelly Shiva is upcoming 😉

Thanks for reading! ❤️

I am up for any kinda bonfire...

Aag zeher gussa naraazgi tashan ignorance....sab chlega...I wont be disappointed.🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

I am up for any kinda bonfire...

Aag zeher gussa naraazgi tashan ignorance....sab chlega...I wont be disappointed.🤣🤣

You literally described the scene LMAO 🤣

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Trust me, girl. You won’t be disappointing no one! Ab jaldi update de!

Still writing but hopefully weekend me I'll be done 😳

Originally posted by: Yahvi

This is sooo good.. So much emotions, so much unsaid feelings, angst, confusion and I'm loving every bit of it.. I'm in love with your Raavi already.. Having the same kind of studious, loner personality, I instinctly got connected to her.. Your Shiva is intriguing.. I like Raavi Rishita bond.. You are such a great writer 💕

Thank you so much for reading!

Raavi's two attributes are mine I relate with her on another level. 😳

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

You literally described the scene LMAO 🤣

I am proud of myself🤣🤣