| ShiVi TS : Taming The Enchanter || Part 2 : Page 18||Completed| - Page 8

Originally posted by: Kristmas

so your Shiva is an ass and Raavi is a sweetheart.

but but both have been written way more mature and complicated than the PS writers could ever write them ❤️

I love this Raavi, kinda dont like this Cassanova Shiva but I guess the make-up part will be amazonggg, cant wait to read the next parttt ❤️

Also, thankyyou for tagging ❤️❤️

LOL....Shiva being Jerk / Ass is a common thought process.😆

Believe me I have tried so hard to not make him look that way hehe...he's just confused and was protecting himself.

I'm really hoping it is readable the confrontation lol.

Thanks for reading ❤️

Originally posted by: Sparklesparkle

Absolutely fabuloussss. Can not wait for the next part.❤🤩☺️

Thank you so much!

Will update soon ❤️

Originally posted by: Foxii

Aaaamazing!

I didn’t want it to finish… loved the flow of the part.

Shivi are both pinning gor eachother but are unaware

Greatly described all the feelings… loved the shock that Shiva felt the moment he thought he had öost Raavi to someone 👏

Excited for the Next Part❤️

Aww Thank you so much ❤️

Will update soon

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

Ritu!!!!

Worth the wait likha hai tune, itna kuch likhna hai mujhe ispe

To sbse phle mujhe meri fav lines likhne de

"Raavi had been the only one with whom he felt comfortable talking about things he'd never imagine voicing out to the world."

Raavi & Shiva having an inseparable bond from the childhood is so so heartwarming ❤️ Shiva letting go Raavi because he thinks she is dating Dev is so like the real Shiva.

"Jab itni sundar ladki mere bagal m already baithi hai to m kyu manage karunga kisi theek thaak wali ke sath?"

Shiva flirting with Raavi without any hestitation, stammering and in his own swag vala style is something to die for Ritu.

"His head had started to hurt with that damn unavailable in the last 3 mins & when she went ahead & clarified what she meant by it he felt relief wash over his senses."

Mera pyara Shiva, mera 3/4th pyar jealous Shiva ke liye res hai, Kaise pareshan ho gaya mera cutiee patotieeee

"tu chahe jitni bhi badi Gadhedi ho par mujhe meri wali Chipkali hi theek hai.."

Meri wali chipkali Not me blushing over this and reading it for nth time now

you've portrayed the emotion so beautifully be it Shiva getting jealous from Sid to Raavi being incapable of confessing her love. From raavi removing her ghunghroo to Shiva feeling the fear of her getting away from him, sab kuch kitna sundar h

Awww quoting stuff from my writing?

Hearttttttttttt ❤️

Flirting bit was my fav too...really really new and different from usual Shiva 😆

Shiva being found as cutie is my heart too. My efforts have had a validation. Phew.

I blushed too man I did too.

Might have had to stop while reading lol.

Thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: Prizi

Love love love.

Shiva is a gadheda

Loving raavi through out. Now let's see what will happen to the trip

Thank you so much for reading ❤️

Hoping to deliver what you're expecting

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Finally read this😅😅

It was indeed a long one but on the same side it was so good to read❣️❣️

The concept was so so fresh ♥️♥️

I knowww...I've been scared of people sleeping in between reading this 🤣

Thank you though. ❤️

Will update soonish

Originally posted by: mpks1

Ritu 🤗

No words to explain my emotions with respect to this TS except this - bestest TS I have ever read. I wish you had posted this before the Readers Choice Awards. This would be in the best ficlet nomination from me. This Shiva and Raavi are ❤️ And Rishita, what a babe! 😆
Raavi, here is my kind of girl! Best version of her I have seen. And Shiva, thinks he is a stud but his heart craves for the nerd whom he can’t seem to take his mind off 😆

Like always Dev doesn’t have much to do except for being a good friend to Raavi and best BF to Rishita😆

And what made you post this so late? With all the time you spend on the forum chatting and spamming , you are equally capable of writing 10 such stories. Your writing is impeccable👏

Sathya and Vaishu my bacchis, how awesome are these 2, helping you to write the best story possible❤️

Where is my part 2? I want it right now. Mujhe chahiye matlab chahiye, abhi chahiye😆

Prema Deeeee 😭❤️🤗

Believe me I have wanted to post this as an OS back then LOL...But it just seemed never ending. Khatam hi nahi ho raha tha...then it turned into a TS I've written this 2 paragraphs at a time. Literally.

Dang I missed a nomination 🥺

I knew I wanted Raavi to have someone if she lost a friend it doesn't make any sense for her to not have ANY one close to the warmth she had back in the childhood from Shiva. I wanted her to have someone and have a good relationship with everyone apart from the guy she loves lol. Weird but it was different. 😆

EXACTLY. This is the Shiva I have in mind. Someone who has been hiding just like her but denying to admit it. Flawed, but also knowing to some extent.

I had in mind to make Dev do something but then Sathya said "Bhai I don't think he is that smart" and I was like right...even in my imagination I can't make him have a brain 🤣

@Bold : The main reason? I have been SO CONFUSED with this one...I've created a confused Shiva and he had been the toughest to write down. Literally. With this one I've daydreamt so much...I remember it was a weekend and I literally spent 3 hours deciding what clothes Imma going to give Raavi in the flight. LMAO...ask these two. Oh the things they've endured....from pinterest pictures to what not- 🤪🤣

Bas aarha part two...still writing anytime between tomorrow or day after 😳

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

Reading this makes me realize, we needed something like this so desperately on the forum !

Thank you for bringing it on🌺

Would love to see more, ❤️

OMG Thank you so muchhhh ❤️

Will try updating soon.

Originally posted by: Amu2908

Wow this is so interesting...a plot where Raavi and Shiva love each other😛

The loneliness both of them felt in the other one's absence had me🤔

Raavi's desire to be felt at home,Shiva's insecurity making him go behind other girls to find a better one than Raavi-which is impossible😆...This is really really amazing...👏

They truely belong to each other.

Also Rishita being that best friend who wishes nothing but lots of happiness for her bestie,giving her much needed courage and trying to help Raavi open up to Shiva is soo beautiful😃

You have actually introduced two major problems of shivi in this one and I am loving it already🤗

Ab jaldi jaldi updates dene ki koshish karna okay !

I am so excited to know what happens in this trip😳

Thank you so much for reading! ❤️

I am glad everyone loves Raavi-Rishita so much. It is absolute want.

Technically they're BOTH pining for each other not just her. He's just unaware at this point while she had been clear from a long time.

Hoping to update soon😳

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Yaar Ritu, What a really wonderful and looong update.❤️😆 Honestly, This is such a feel good story because this is so relatable.😆❤️ I really like the way you write. It's top notch👍🏼

This story is very much different than the usual ShiVi story and I love every single bit of it. Raavi as as anerd and Shiva as a heartthrobWhat a combo😆And they both like each other. And Rishita,the BFF trying to set them up. I really can't wait to know what is gonna happen next,or more specifically, what is Shiva gonna do.☺️😆

Thank you to my lovelies Sathya and Vaish for helping dear Ritu in writing this masterpiece.❤️ Aise hi accha kaam karthe rahna🤣😆You guys did a great job.❤️

Thank you for tagging me, yaar. 😳 Waiting for the next update👍🏼

I know man I know...the length has been exhausting...I cannot explain the amount of BS IF has given me during the posting. 🤡

That's exactly what I wanted a different take on them...We've all become so sick of the usual stuff that I thought I needed some inspo from KDice lol.

Shiva gonna get more jealous...more intense and more...let's just say he gonna get more intense and leave it here.

Haan pls aise hi acha kaam krte krte last scene bhi likhwa do kyunki atak gaye hain hm as usual 🤡🤣

Will update soon.