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Likh hi rahi hun abhi tho...lol

Saturday maybe....thoda padh lein aur log 😆

Karlenge wait hum.. Aur karbhi kya sakte hai😆

Beautiful. Please update the next part soon please 🙂

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

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Oh my Ritu this is so long even after separating it into 2 parts 🤪 - THIS. LMAO. Ik babe. I know. I have had to write it I know...I'm still writing the last part and believe me Imma crying. 🤡

Behen how do yo write so much descriptive mein toh able janam hi likh paaungi itna 😆- Bas. Mat puchh...But still I feel this kind of description has the ability to get boring vvvvv super soon. Tho pata nhi ab wo hua hai ya nhi. Lol.

Now let’s get to the story

Man I loved this version of Raavi too being a dancer and a nerd to hide her feelings and interaction with Shiva for so many years because I was not at all expecting this nature of Raavi and let me tell you you have given full justice to it like it looks convincing the Raavi’s part of nature and her fear of losing Pandya Parivaar because what you have written is so true though her Maasi loves her and has taken care I knew she couldn’t take even a bit of her mother’s place or mother’s Love and always wanted a family of her own like Pandya Parivaar. I loved Raavi and Rishita’s bond here shows perfect bestie interaction.

So I had read the flirting part which is so smooth but I didn’t knew the back story or either of them's nature or the past they would share it came as complete surprise to me.
Some people may think Shiva has Casanova type of image but it isn’t he seems to be typical teenager to me with lack of maturity and emotion suppression but still he carved for the support, care , love and affection she gave to me like how every teenage girl or for that matter I would say how every single girl craves more but the case here is just he tried to find that in others with a bit of hope she gets jealous.

But I am glad he knows all his mistakes and all tried to mend them and didn’t let his ego come in between.

Waiting for next part, because I know you have gold content stored in , let’s see how both resolve their distance and come together.❤️


You have written amazing Ritu ❤️ even the dialogues are so smooth and relatable that I was like ki yaar main bhi toh Aisa hi bolti hoon 😆
Never thought this type of alternate version of shivi after reading so many fan fictions that’s its so convincing because same unique shivi punch is still there.

Keep writing and cribbing to me ❤️
Love you 😚

Awwww you absolute doll. ILOVEUSOMUCHO.❤️

@Bold : First comment to reply and I am already so overwhelmed because this was EXACTLY what I was going for and I am glad it looked so convincing to you. Raavi and Rishita's bond was a decision I made while creating the plot in full length since I only had an idea that revolved around Shivi when I began...but I knew I'll have to give Raavi someone if she hasn't had Shiva all these years.

Someone to listen to her whole heartedly. I mean its only right...If I don't have one of these IRL at least my character would lol.😆

The teenager bit : THIS. This is all there is to his character. He's this hot shot boy that all the girls have crush on and he has had a couple girlfriends over the years but in my mind this version of Shiva isn't a jerk. He was just scared-insecure-protective of his feelings which is why he distanced...not justifying his ways but still.

" - with a bit of hope she gets jealous."

And YES MA'AM...Exactly// Just That// This has been explained in the next part so I am glad your jasoos brain caught on it already.

Thanks baby girl. For listening. ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Let exams end. Phir aisi comment dungi ki you'll book tickets to one Madurai, Tamil Nadu. 🤪😳

PS Hopefully hug worthy comment. 🤗

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

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Hey Maami ka Bhogilal, 7k words, bro people like me cannot read through such long write-ups in one sitting lmao, and hence I had to break and read it over the days. - LOL this. Imma sorry woman..I tend to ramble a lot while writing these days. Too much detail.

Sowwy if it was bht zadaa.🤡

Finally, tera TS aaa hi gaya, mujhe laga iss janam mein toh nahi aayega. And please, the way your write is so phenomenal, I have already mentioned it, but it is too beautiful and makes you wanna keep re-reading.

- Mujhe bhi nhi laga tha iss janam me niptega LMAO. Abhi agla wala likh hi rahi hu main end scene. 🤪

Coming to the story,

WOW

Raavi a classical dancer and the love she has for dance, the way Dev and she are actual best friends and Rishita is an added bonus here plus the bond she has with everyone at the Pandya Niwas, haayee pure gold man, Love wholesome content and this is wholesome raised to the power of 2.

And Shiva, the ladies' man, uh-huh, pretty sure Shiva if he had his way with words he would be the Shiva you have in your story and the tension between the duo is what I am here for ☺️

Waiting for them to just jump on each other and remove all of their tension and get a room too 🤣

Thank you for penning this beautiful story down, which by the way, is not less than a deeply woven poetry and keep writing.

Your stories are like contents which are blockbuster but comes out rarely and that keeps it more magical.

Thanks for the tag and waiting for the next one (which my attention deficit mind will have to once again break and read lol)

🥳

Bold : I just had it in mind already...Raavi ki sbse bann rahi hai Shiva ko chhod ke. Bas that's it. That works just fine. Lol.

I know right? If they hadn't made him such a jerk and Bhabhi Bhakt he would have been such a catch because he did have emotional quotient back in the day and attractiveness ke putle tho hum hain hi.

Sowwy girl...there's mush in last scene bas...LMAO with one tiny moment in the next one. No sexy stuff in this one maybe in my other one...I have a concept planned. But shhhhh...😳

Tensionnnnnnn tho badhega ab..aur...trip pe hain naa

Blockbuster? Behennnn bas karo tareef...main so gayi thi while editing this baithe baithe it was so long I don't know how you guys read. 😆

Writing still but let's see.

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Let exams end. Phir aisi comment dungi ki you'll book tickets to one Madurai, Tamil Nadu. 🤪😳

PS Hopefully hug worthy comment. 🤗

Areee agyi tu...lol...mommy still needs help though did you check IG?

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Rituuuu!!!❤️

Thanks for the tag girl🤗

This was such a good read....It took me back to a memory lane of something similar...Okay wrong track...😆

Let's talk about this beautiful, fantastic piece.

This Raavi is somewhat similar to me.
A nerd hiding her feelings behind books and finding peace in dance.
Damn I can relate with her on so many levels. She is doing what is best for her. The fear of losing all because of one person is real and I legit felt it. ❤️

Coming to Shiva , well he comes out as an idiot and immature jerk. Okay! I can understand his pain, he lost his father and witnessed his mother's pain. But messing up things because of assumptions is an outright stupid thing to do. But again let's give him a benefit of doubt "of being a teenager, where you are anything but clear about your thoughts and wants" (most of the guys are like this).

But I appreciate him for the efforts he is willing to put in getting Raavi back into his life after realising he created a mess and he is solely responsible for all this.👏

That mini heart attack he got at "unavailable" serves u right dude....U deserve such attacks.😆

Rishita is a kind of friend every Raavi need. Loved the besties bond.❤️

I am so in love with this one girl..Thanks for this amazing piece. Waiting for the next one *palke bicha kar*❤️

LOL

Similar?

Ghosts of the past?

I feel you man. But...errr...maybe not entirely I was just supremely dumb back in the day.

Raavi is me. Me is Raavi. Through and through.

I've given her two of my attributes in this one...books & dance. Her intro scene might have been the easiest descriptions in all of the lengthy words I wrote in this story. Truly. Because it was easy. Bas.

A big thanks for cutting my Shiva a slack here because he hasn't gotten that much lol.

In my head? He's just mind-numbingly stupid because he's a teen. Bas...no malice beyond that. He would have made a show if he was angry on anyone with passion and created a scene but no. He had made a distance instead.

"Unavailable" is Sathya's magic man through and through I am such a DABBA in flirting because obviously I have never gotten my head outta books lol// 😆

Originally posted by: Kfof

I loved the story.❤️

The way you have described Raavi and Shiva's feeling, it has touched me right at the center specially Raavi's feeling.❤

I dont know how to say but first part was fab 😍😍

Thank you so much babe!

Glad you liked it ❤️