Shivi Three Shots (Last part updated on pg5) - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Can writers please take inspiration from this

I want this kinda redemption in show....

Shiva crying buckets for Raavi, apologising and confessing in front of whole Somnath, making efforts for Raavi you put everything so well.

I so loved itt❤️


(For a moment I thought it's a parallel of what we are watching on show these days)😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Paru95

Amazingggg♥️

Shiva doing everything he can to woo her😍

Loved it🤗

Thank you 💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Can writers please take inspiration from this

I want this kinda redemption in show....

Shiva crying buckets for Raavi, apologising and confessing in front of whole Somnath, making efforts for Raavi you put everything so well.

I so loved itt❤️


(For a moment I thought it's a parallel of what we are watching on show these days)😆

Thank you. Glad you liked it❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you 💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwwwwww.

Such a lovely and sweet story.

I liked Shiva pining for the love of his life and actually DOING something to show that he is sorry instead of some meaningless words.

The whole family scene in the last update was all Raavi. She stole the show with a stance and boldness.

Didn't expect Shiva to stay in the same room.

Was unexpected and I loved it. ♥️♥️

Keep writing bub.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Awwwwwww.

Such a lovely and sweet story.

I liked Shiva pining for the love of his life and actually DOING something to show that he is sorry instead of some meaningless words.

The whole family scene in the last update was all Raavi. She stole the show with a stance and boldness.

Didn't expect Shiva to stay in the same room.

Was unexpected and I loved it. ♥️♥️

Keep writing bub.

Thank you Ritu❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Oh I loved the bold and determined raavi and guilt ridden repenting shiva. Loved gautam shiva convo

Raavi showing mirror to each and every pandya👍🏼

,it was perfect. They all should learn to respect people around them

I absolutely loved raavi telling shiva if he wants someone like dhara then he should too become like gautam.

Shiva's attempt at wooing raavi

You write beautifully🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Oh I loved the bold and determined raavi and guilt ridden repenting shiva. Loved gautam shiva convo

Raavi showing mirror to each and every pandya👍🏼

,it was perfect. They all should learn to respect people around them

I absolutely loved raavi telling shiva he wants someone like dhara and he should too become like gautam.

Shiva's attempt at wooing raavi

You write beautifully🤗

Thank you so much ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

This was such a beautiful TS,love.❤️ I enjoyed reading this very much You did a very good job in making Shiva redeeming himself and giving Raavi her khushiyaan.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Soo good ❤️
Shiva's efforts to win her back!
Raavi's intent to get a job.
Well done!

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