Shivi Three Shots (Last part updated on pg5) - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such powerful diagloues from Raavi, I absolutely loved it smiley27

I totally loved when she told him that if she expects him to be like Dhara, he should be like Gaumbi and prioritize her above everyone else! Uff too good yaar ❤️

I wish they'd show her this powerful on the show too. Only Rishita has the guts to speak her mind without filters on the show,

Excited for the next part! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Interesting pliz update next part soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Raavi you go girl

They all deserve this. What ever she said was on point.👏

Loved it ❤️

Excited to read more🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Loved the she gave muh todh jawab to everyone specially rishita and dhara 🔥🔥

Eagerly waiting for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Bold Raavi is❤️
Waiting for the next one..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shiva is ashamed of himself and bends on kneel and hugs her such that his face is hugging her stomach

Sh(while crying) - I'm sorry Raavi, I'm sorry mujhe maaf karde please, bahot pyar krta hu tujhse please Raavi bheek mang rha hu tujhse please ek mauka dede mujhe, kbhi dur nhi karunga tujhe khud se

Raavi- Ab yaad aa rha hai ye pyar tb kha tha, jab phenk diya mujhe, are tune to palat ke dekha bhi nhi ki mujhe kahin chot to nhi lgi, or tu.. tu mujhse maafi kyu mang rha hai Shiva.. mujh..mujh jaisi jhuti ladki ke pas kyu rehna chahta h tu haan (loudly)

Shiva wipes his tears like a kid and stands up - Raavi meri taraf dekh na tujhe meri aankho me kuch nhi dikh rha kya bol n

Raavi- tujhe dikha tha jb m chilla chilla ke bol rhi thi meri galti nhi hai bol

Shiva- Raavi please ek bar bs ek bar mauka de de while folding his hand


After too much convincing Raavi decides to stay until she finds a job

Raavi- Thik hai par sirf tb tk jb tk meri job nhi lgti uske bad mai yha ek sec bhi nhi rukne vali.


Raavi is settling in her room when Shiva enters the room and locks it.

Sh- Raavi kya tujhe mere aansuon se, mujhse koi farq nhi padta

R- nhi

Shiva comes to her and she takes her steps backwards until her back touches the wall.

Shiva - Pakka koi farq nhi padta

R - Bola na nhi (sternly)

Sh - (huskily in her ears) pakka mere itne pas aane se tujhe chune se (while touching her hands) tujhe koi farq nhi padta

R- Sh.. Shiva nhi padta koi farq and pushes him

S- Dekha m kitna sahi tha m bhi Gaumbi se yhi keh rha tha ki Raavi ko bilkul farq nhi padta ki agr Mai uske kamre me rahu to

Raavi is startled to see this side of Shiva. He quickly lays down in her side of the bed and pats the place beside him asking her to come there

R- dekh Shiva ye natak bnd kar or nikl yha se or uth meri side se.

While saying this she goes towards Shiva and stands beside the bed. Shiva quickly pulls her and she falls on the top of him, their lips few inches apart

Sh- Maine kha mana kiya h tujhe is side sone se aa soja, vaise bhi raat ko meri nind puri nhi hui

R- agr yhi sb karne ke liye mujhe roka hai na to mai abhi ke abhi ja rhi hu... Chor mujh

Sh- ek bar chorne ki glti kar chuka hu ab to kbhi nhi chorunga and holds her by her waist

But Raavi ko pighalna nhi h she starts tickling him and he leaves her and she laughs her heart out while Shiva is mesmerized seeing her laugh like this after days

R - Aise kya ghur rha hai khayega ky

Sh - Pura ka pura khaunga tujhe to mai😉

R - bus Shiva apni bakwas bnd kr

Raavi goes out of the room

Later in the evening Raavi goes to buy some vegetables from the market when some children come to her and give her flowers and chocolates, Raavi is surprised as why are they giving her all these but kisses the child and says thank you

Kid- Didi ye hamne nhi diya isliye ye thank you vala kiss hame nhi use do jisne ye aapko dene bola and points someone

The kid points at none other Shiva. Raavi's smile turn into frown & anger.

Shiva taking mic - Raavi, aaj m tujhse kuch kehna chahta hu. He bends on his knees holds his one ear and says maaf karde mujhe Raavi, Mai naa hi ek achha pati ban paya or na hi ek achha insan. Sahi kiya tune mujhe divorce de ke, bahot pareshan kiya h na maine tujhe hamesha tujhe phoolkumari bola or meri hi wajah se tera chehra murjha gya. Mujhe maaf kar de Raavi tears flowing from his eyes. Everyone is looking at them

R- Shiva kyu kr rha h tu ye sb

S- kyu ab m apni wifey jisse m itna pyar krta hu use ful nhi de skta, maafi nhi mang skta usse and pulls her by waist

R- Shiva sb dekh rhe hai chor

Sh- jb beizzati (insult) sbke samne ki to maafi bhi sbke samne hi mangni chaiye na or kyu choru tujhe Mai.. pyar krta hu tujhse or tu bhi to krti h na

R- kya

Sh- mujhse pyar

R- Sh.. Shiva tu.. tu pagl ho gya h kya m kyu karungi tujhse pyar

Sh- to tu mujhse pyar nhi krti

R- nhi bilkul bhi nh

And she goes from there

Shiva just stands there, he is hurt when he realises he also left her, more precisely threw her. He is crying, his every action comes in front of his eyes and he slaps himself but again convince himself that if he looses hope now, he will loose his Raavi forever. So he goes home with a new determination

At night

Raavi comes to her room humming some song but what she sees leaves her speechles

Shiva is roaming in the room with bare chest and towel with wet hair

R- Shiva ye kya kar rha h tu dhang se kapde phn l

Sh- Tujhe kyu farq pad rha h tujhe kuch feel ho rha kya

Ra- tu kapde phnta h ya m jau

Sh - achha thik h chipkali phenta hu tu nikal ke de de. She heads to the cupboard but slips due to water and closes her eyes in fear when Shiva holds her by waist tightly. Eye lock for 5 secs when Raavi comes in her senses and stands. Shiva knowingly switches off all the lights because he knows it scares her. Raavi gets scared, she want to hold his arms but she is angry on him

Ra- Shiva tune light kyu off ki

Sh- Kyu tujhe dar lg rha h kya

Ra- mujhe koi dar var nhi lgta smjha na

Sh - thik h

Shiva then acts like he is calling someone and starts narrating some horror story

Now Raavi is hell scared and due to fear she holds his biceps. Shiva smirks at her

When Shiva thinks Raavi is asleep, he kisses her forehead and says jo bhi hua uske liye sorry chipkali ab tujhe paane ke liye m kuch bhi kr skta hu

Raavi is listening to all this and slowly her anger is cooling

Next morning Raavi wakes up and finds Shiva's head in the crook of her neck, when she tries to remove it

Sh (in sleep) - Raavi raavi maaf kr de please please bahot pyar karta hu tujhse and kisses her neck

Raavi unknowingly moans on this sudden gesture Shivaaahh.

Shiva wakes up abruptly on Raavi's voice and her cheecks turn red

Shiva making innocent face - kya hua tujhe Raavi

Raavi just gets out of the bed and goes to washroom

Shiva smirks at her

In the afternoon, Kanta kaaki is talking with suman when Raavi arrives at hall.

Kaki- Are Raavi, kya kamal kiya h tune Shiva pe sch sch bta

Raavi looks at her clueless

Kaki- are aise kya dekh rhi... aaj maine jis Shiva ko dekha na vo to alag hi lg rha tha

Are aaj vo Deepa or mohan ladai kr rhe the to us Mohan ko jaise samjhaya na Shiva ne manna padega tune to jalti aag me thandak laa di or to or jb kisine bola ki itne samjhdar pati ko Raavi kaise chor skti h to usne kaha ki

'glti Raavi ki to kbhi thi hi nhi, galat to mai tha Kaka, are Raavi itni masoom h ki koi bhi use fasa deta hai, Mai uska pati hu mera farz tha use is duniya se bacha ke rakhne ka par maine to khud hi usse is aag me dal diya. He chuckles are koi or hota na to itna sehne ke bad hamare parivar ke liye bura sochta par Raavi to aaj bhi hm sbke liye achha hi sochti hai. He then looks at Mohan - Maine apne biwi se phle kisi or ko rakhne ki galti kr di or abhi bhi saza bhugat rha hu tu ye glti mat kar mere bhai' or vha se chla gya

Raavi is just amazed to listen all this

She goes to her room

Raavi- Kyu mushkil kr rha hai mere liye tu itna, jb pyar karne lagi to dur kar diya or aaj jb dur kr rhi to pas la rha. Nhi dekh skti m tujhe rote hue par kaise bhula du jo tune mere sath kiya,agr fir se tune aisa kiya to.... ughhh kuch smjh nhi aa rha mujhe


Raavi goes to kitchen to drink water she finds Shiva is already in the kitchen with Rishita trying to make something. When Raavi enters Rishita quietly leaves the kitchen

Raavi - kya chl rha ye

Shiva - Naach raha hu aaja tu bhi dance kar

Raavi - ha ha very funny, kya bana rha ha

Sh- Cake bna rha h

Ra- Kis khusi me

Sh - ae chipkali tu kaise bhul skti h kl hamari shadi ki phli salgirah hai

Raavi gets surprised that he remembers thi

Just then Suman enter

Su- kis shadi ki salgirah mana rha hai jiska parso talak ho gya

A tear drop escapes from Raavi's eyes but before it could fall Shiva kisses her eyes in front of Suman and says nahi Raavi ab ek or aansu nhi aane dunga m Teri aankhon me

Suman eyes becomes wide after seeing Shiva

Shiva- Salgirah shadi ki nahi Raavi or mere sath ki h, us dor ki hai jisse mai or raavi us waqt bandhe the, aaj bhi bandhe hai or hamesha bandhe rahenge. He says the last line while looking at Raavi. Raavi keeps looking at him with love, trust, proud when some people shout her name from aangan She goes to aangan to find out who are they while Shiva just comes behind her smiling. She is more than happy to see all her childhood friends and meet them after years. She hugs them all and asks how they have come suddenly. One of her friends replied - Are tu hame thanks mt bol tu na apne pati ko thanks bol usne hi hame bataya ki kal tumhari anniversary ki party hai par ye pari ki bachhi kl hi ja rhi hai isliye Shiva ne hame aaj hi bula liya

Pari - Waise Raavi sch bolu agr Shiva kisi or ka pati hota na tb to mai use pakka pata leti par ab tu meri dost hai isliye chor diya and winks at her

Raavi just glares her at her statement meanwhile Shiva comes with a tray of juice and asks everyone to sit. He gives juice to everyone and bring some snacks for them. Raavi just keeps looking at Shiva.Her friends says ki Shiva jiju kitne achhe hai kitna kuch karte h tere liye Raavi. Raavi simply smiles, Shiva goes to Raavi and puts his arm on her shoulder. and says

Kabhi kabhi jab koi chiz hamare pas hoti hai tb hame uski ahmiyat pta nhi chlti par pr jb vo dur jati h tb hame uski value pta chlti hai, mere sath bhi kuch aisa hua h,bas I hope ki jyada late nhi hua hai, her friends looks at him confusingly but let it go. He asks her slowly kyu meri chipkali kaisa laga tujhe surprise

Ra(slowly)- kyu kr rha h tu ye sb thode din phle to keh rha tha na ki mera koi haq nhi h to ab kya badal gya. Tune hi kha tha na ki phle biwi thi par ab m Teri biwi...

He cuts her in b/w and says hai, tu ab bhi meri biwi h or hamesha rahegi Mrs. Raavi Shiva Pandya or Ab apni biwi ke liye to m itna kar hi skta hu and kisses her on cheeks.

Raavi shivers at this but maintains neutral face but when she notices Shiva getting sad and about to leave she holds his hand pulls him towards her and says thank you Shiva.

Just then a message pops on her phone and a smile appears on her face from ear to ear. In the excitement she hugs her Bhootnath. Shiva is left overwhelmed by her gesture and hugs her back and asks kya hua chipkali kahi lottery lag gyi kya.

Raavi realises their position and breaks the hug

Meri job lag gyi Gombi, Dhara di Pari meri job lag gyi

Everyone- Badhai ho Raavi

Shiva was very happy but suddenly he remembers something and goes to his room.

Raavi doesn't understand his behaviour and frowns just then Gaumbi takes her to side and says Chinta mt kar Raavi teri job lagne se bahot khush h vo bas tune kha tha ki teri job lag jayegi to tu chle jayegi isliye dukhi h

Just then Raavi realises it and she also becomes sad but her friends calls her and they chit chat for sometimes. Dhara brings some Chinese food for them, everyone praises the food and Dhara but Dhara tells them it's not her but Shiva who has made all this. Raavi's mouth opened in shock. All her friends admires Shiva's love for Raavi and she blushes and gets teased by friends in return.

Later at night everyone comes for dinner, Raavi searches for a chance to talk to Shiva after dinner but Shiva quickly rushes to the room. After sometime, Raavi comes to room but the gate is closed. She opens the doors and it is all black. Suddenly all the light goes on, the room is decorated with fairy lights, roses, scented candles. Shiva hugs Raavi from the back and places his head on her shoulder and say

"Raavi mujhe maaf karde, please mujhse nhi ho rha ab, bahot try kr liya tere samne hamesha khush rahne ka, Mai janta hu ki meri galati ki koi maafi nhi h fir bhi tujhse kuch mangna chahta hu, please mujhe meri Raavi dede, nhi reh paunga Mai uske bina. Bahot pyar karta hu m tujhse Raavi, tere bina rehne ke khyal se hi dar jata hu. Aajtak kbhi shyd Teri respect nhi ki hamesha tujhe dur bhagta rha shyd isliye kyuki mujhe hamesha pta tha tu mere pass aayegi par aaj jb nhi aa rhi to bahot dar lg rha Raavi, nhi khona chahta mai tujhe. Tune mujhe vaisa hi apna liya jaisa m tha par m to tujhe smjh hi nhi paaya. Tears flowing from both their eyes. Bahot rulaya hai na maine tujhe, bahot gnda hu na Mai, par tera Bhootnath hu na mar le jhagad le par mere pas reh ke or tu.. to chip.. chipkali h na to chipak na jaise bachpan se chipak rhi hai aadat h mujhe tere chipakne ki smjhi na (he says like a kid). Or tu tu mujhe chattan pandya bolti h na to dekh ye chattan pighl gya tere samne. Kabhi nhi sochta tha ki meri dil dhadkega or vo bhi paglo ki tarah. Tujhe dekh ke aisa lgta h jaise abhi dil bahar aa jayega. ( He chuckles) Tu hamesha kehti thi na ki tu somnath ki sundar ladki h galat bolti thi tu duniya ki sbse sundar ladki h Raavi. He turns her and kisses her eyes Teri aankhein itni pyari ki inme khone ka man krta hai. He then kisses her cheeks and says tere gaal jb m tere pas aata hu or tere gaal lal ho jate hai na aisa lgta h inhe bs kiss karta rahu. He then kisses her nose and says Teri naak gusse me lal hoti h na tb tu or cute lgti hai. He then moves to his neck and kisses it and says jb inme tu mere nam ka managlsutra phenti hai na to mere chehre me muskan aa jati hai. "

He looks at her lips.

But she comes out of his hold and goes towards the door, he thinks she is still angry and gets sad just then she locks the door and comes and hug Shiva so sudden that he almost falls.

Raavi- I love you Shiva, I love you so so much. Nhi reh skti Mai bhi tere bina kbhi nhi bahot try kiya par chattan pandya tu h mai nhi, aakhir me pighal hi gyi Mai tere liye

Shiva- Gadhedi, dara diya tha tune mujhe

Vaise to m ye phle bhi sun chuka tha par aaj jb tune bola na to dil ko ek alag sukoon mila

Raavi - haww Shiva tune kab suna ye sb

Shiva - jab tu puppies ko apni kahani suna rhi thi

Raavi starts hitting his chest with her hands

Jb dekho mujhe tang krta rhta hai gadheda or tune to nikal diya na mujhe to kisse bat krti🥺

Shiva holds her hand and takes them to her back and pulls her towards him and says bahot dukh diya h na maine tujhe bahot pareshan kiya hai. Raavi nods in yes

Shiva then kisses her one cheek and says I'm sorry. Raavi nods in no. Shiva then kisses another cheek and says I'm sorry. Raavi again nods in no. Shiva understands her antics and starts tickling her. Both of them falls on the bed with Raavi on the top both hugs each other laughs for a few seconds and then Shiva looks deeply in her eyes and their lips met. Both of them fight for dominance and Shiva let Raavi win. She bites lower lips of Shiva and breaks the kiss. Shiva smirks looking at the wild side of his wife and hugs her tightly

A week later they get remarried with all the rituals but this time with utmost love ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is the last part, I know it's very long but I couldn't help. I hope I did justice to the story and Shiva's redemption came good and convincing ❤️. Please share your reviews ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ahhhhsjhvkkakkvjesv this is so so good😍😍😍💖💖 ye bedroom wala shiva mereko show me chahiye chahiye matlab chahiye 😭😭😭

And jo shiva road me sabke saamne kia woh toh role reversal laga pura quki yesab bilkul raavi hi kar sakti hai shiva toh sharma k khatam ho jayega🤣🤣

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Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Ahhhhsjhvkkakkvjesv this is so so good😍😍😍💖💖 ye bedroom wala shiva mereko show me chahiye chahiye matlab chahiye 😭😭😭

And jo shiva road me sabke saamne kia woh toh role reversal laga pura quki yesab bilkul raavi hi kar sakti hai shiva toh sharma k khatam ho jayega🤣🤣

😂😂😂 I want Shiva to proclaim his love like Raavi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazingggg♥️

Shiva doing everything he can to woo her😍

Loved it🤗

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