Shivi Three Shots (Last part updated on pg5)

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Shiva locks the door after throwing Raavi. Raavi realises the everyone is looking at her and stands up and starts walking aimlessly. She realises she has no one in her life and goes to a near temple.

At night- Shiva is not able to sleep and tears are continuously falling from his his eyes. He is thinking about all the things happened today. He is getting flashbacks of his and Raavi

Raavi - Bhootnath chipkali chipkali please bacha mujhe

Shiva - m kyu hatau abhi to keh rhi thi mujhe teri jarurat nhi h (mimicking her

Raavi- dekh Bhootnath mujhe chidane ke liye to puri zindagi h, Mai to isi room me rahungi na zindagi bhar, bad me chida lena abhi please chipakli hata

Flashback end

Suddenly he hears a voice - ab kyu ro rha hai Shiva tu bhi to yhi chahta tha na ki Raavi is ghar se chali jaye tabhi to nikal rha tha na use to ab to vo khud sb kuch khtm krke chle gyi vo bhi legally to tujhe to khush hona chahiye na.

Shiva- Gombi aap, Mai ro nhi rha Gombi Mai to bas bhabhi ke liye dukhi hu

G- kbtk or kitna jhut bolega Shiva, khud se bhi or ham sbse bhi, saaf dikh rha tha Teri aankhon me kitna dukhi tha tu talak se, aisa lg rha tha jaise tune kbhi socha hi nhi tha alag hone ke bare me jbki ye divorce ka khel tune hi shuru kiya tha n

S started crying while hugging Gombi

S- kya karu Gombi, life me phli bar aisa laga jaise koi mera apna hai, jo sirf mera hai or usne mujhe dhoka de diya

G- Shiva bachpan se lekar aajtk Teri zindagi Raavi ke kisson se bhari hui h ek bar vo panne phir se padh ke dekh kya tujhe lgta h vo kbhi aisa karegi are karna to dur vo aisa soch bhi nhi skti

Yaad h paghphera ke waqt tere liye jisne use apne ghr le jane se mana kar diya tha uske liye chhat se kudne ko taiyar thi vo

Dev jisne use mandap pe chor diya, Rishita jisne use kitna kuch sunaya unke liye bhi kuch nhi h us bachhi ke man me. Mai chlta pr tu jara sochna is bare m

S started collecting all the memories how she was always a selfless person, who she used to hug him whenever she saw a chipkali, he tries to put the pieces together and thinks she might have been trapped.

S- aise to din bhar mujhse ladti rhti hai, or aaj jab lad ke ghr me rukna chaiye to chli gyi , do thappad laga chuki mujhe aaj ek or lga deti or kehti Mai to yhi rahungi apne Bhootnath ke pas to kya ho jata,

Just then Maami arrives - 'Ae Raavi, meri phool si bachhi chl m tujhe lene aayi hu mujhe abhi pta chla ki tera divorce ho gya bahar aa chl'

Everyone arrives at hall

Suman- Ae kagdi Teri beti hamare ghr me nhi h mere Shiva me use subah hi nikal ke phenk diya h

Shiva's heart pierced listening to those words more because it was him to did it

D- Maami Raavi ghr me hi hogi

Pra- ae m kya tujhe pagal dikhti hu meri beto ghr me nhi h tum logo me kya kiya meri beti ke sath

Sh- Ae maami raat ke 12 bje tu hamari nind mt kharab kr chl nikl yha se

Maami leave

Gaumbi starts going to find Raavi

Suman- khabardar agar koi usko dhundhne gya to mera mara muh dekhoge

Everyone tries to convince Suman but when she reject all slowly goes to their room.

While Shiva is now very anxious for Raavi. He goes to terrace and cries his heart out regretting as he was the one who threw her out, he regrets for each moment when she said trust me and he did not trust her. He felt like slapping himself for what he did to his Raavi, the love of his life

But then he sees a girl on the road and rushes to see if she is Raavi. While going out of the home he remembers Suman's kasam but he thinks no one is more important than Raavi now he will handle Suman later. He sees that girl's back and starts shouting at her- pagal, gadhedi dimag nhi h kya itni rat ko koi aise ghumta hai akele, kuch ho jata to mera kya hota.

The girl turns and She is not Raavi. Shiva excuses himself and sits on the side, hell worried about Raavi whereabouts all those moments when he threw her out, asked her to never come back, the moment she was a minute away from being trafficked. He starts his bike and searches Raavi everywhere tears of regret continuously flowing. He looses all the hope and sees a mandir and decides to stop by it and what he sees leaves him in tears.

Next update tomorrow. This is my first ever writing so please phle se hi maaf kar dena of I couldn't do justice to it.

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