Shivi Three Shots (Last part updated on pg5) - Page 2

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Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

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Interesting read! Looking forward to reading the next part. Hope you are planning to include Shiva’s apology and repentance as well.

Ideally Raavi should infact go far far away and never be found by anyone. Alas, that will not happen in the actual show.

Originally posted by: mpks1

Interesting read! Looking forward to reading the next part. Hope you are planning to include Shiva’s apology and repentance as well.

Ideally Raavi should infact go far far away and never be found by anyone. Alas, that will not happen in the actual show.

I'm writing this story only because I want to see Shiva crying and regretting his actions 😂 that's my motivation to write the story you'll surely get it in the next part ❤️

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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Intriguing, can’t wait for your next update 💕💕

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Shiva sees Raavi sitting at the temple talking with the puppies and crying continuously

Raavi - mere Saath hi aisa kyu hota hai itni buri hun kya main, aapko pata hai puppy meri shaadi ek bhootnath se ho gyi pahle to main bahut dar gai thi fir dhire dhire mujhe pata nahin kab lekin usse pyar Ho Gaya mujhe laga ki usse bhi mujhse pyar hua h pr tumhen pata hai aaj usne mujhe Apne Ghar se Nikal Diya agar pyar Karta to aisa nahin karta mere sath. Ab m kbhi uske pas nhi jaungi, nhi jana mujhe uske pas.

Shiva was shocked beyond words after listening her confession. He feels like a person who couldn't value the treasure he got. He remembers all the moments when he treated her badly.

When he pushed her during Dhara's godbharai, when he pushed her in the hospital, throwing her out of the house. He feels like a jerk who misbehaved with the girl who deserved all the love

He runs to Raavi and hugs her from back.

S - Raavi pagal gadhedi bilkul bhi samajh nahi h na Tere pass itni raat ko Mandir mein ghum rahi hai, ek bar socha bhi nhi ki kya hal hoga tere Bhootnath ka.

He is hugging very tightly but she wants to get out of the hold.

R(sternly) - kyu kyon fikar hogi tujhe meri tune hi to mujhe Ghar se nikala tha bhul gaya kya itni jaldi

S- Raavi mein bahut gusse mein tha Apne gusse mein pagal Ho Gaya tha. Pagalo ki tarah pyar karta hu tujhse or isliye talak ke papers dekh ke pagl ho gya tha.

Raavi is shocked to hear him say all this.

But pighalna nhi h

R- Jo bhi hona tha hogya ab ye mt sochna ki m tujhe maaf kar dungi

(Raavi is unaware that Shiva knows about her love for him)

S- Raavi dekh main tujhse maafi mang bhi nahin Raha mujhe pata hai ki itni badi galti ke liye to tu mujhe kbhi maaf kar bhi nahin sakti par please mere sath ghr chal Raavi please.

R - kaun sa Ghar Shiva vahi Ghar na Jisse tune mujhe fenk ke Nikal diya tha

S- man rha hu galti Ho gai meri maa (while crying) ab please jaldi ghr chl nahin to na main sab kuchh chhod kar hi baith jaunga

R- ha to baith ja mujhe koi fark nhi padta

Shiva takes Raavi in bridal position and takes her to home and locks the door.

S- Dekh Raavi abhi chup chap yhi soja kl m khud tujhe hostel chor ke aa jaunga (just to pacify her)

Raavi thinks Shiva has already locked the door so it's no use to bicker.

Moreover, she is frustrated and tired of these fight so she finds it better to ignore Shiva. she just lies in the cot and gradually drifts to sleep.

While Shiva goes to terrace and screams

Kyu bhagwan kyuu, kyu banaya mujhe aisa kyu Mai inta gussa krta hu ki meri aag me maine Raavi ko jala diya. Kaise mujhe Raavi ki aankho me vo dard nhi dikha, itna andha kaise ho gya Mai. Par ab nhi, he wipes his tears, and stands up ab nhi hoga aisa jitna dukh jitne ansu sehna tha sab seh liya meri Raavi ne ab or nhi. He goes back to aangan.

When Shiva realises she has slept he comes to her kiss her forhead and vows to win her back.

He unknowingly drifts to sleep beside her.

In the morning the whole family is shocked to see Shiva & Raavi sleeping together in one cot, with legs tangled, Raavi's head on his chest and his hand on her waist. Suddenly Raavi wakes up and gets shocked to see her and Shiva sleeping like that, she wakes up Shiva who puts his head into the crook of her neck but wakes up with a jerk listening to Suman's word.

Suman asks Raavi why is she here when Shiva threw her out of the house. Raavi lookes upto Shiva who was in tears.

It peirces in Shiva's heart about what he has done with her wife

S- Vo khud nhi aayi hai maa Mai use leke aaya hu vo bhi jabardsti

Suman- iska mtlb.. tu.. tune meri Kasam tod di

S- Maa dekh maine kasam thodi par fir bhi tu sahi salamat h lekin agar mai kasam nhi todta to meri Raavi thik nhi hota.

Everyone gets shocked to listen meri Raavi from Shiva.

Haa maa meri Raavi, bahot pyar krta hu m isse bahot jyada nahi khona chahta mai ise.

Suman- tu bhul gya isne tujhe talaq diya hai

Sh- to kya galat kiya maa, bta tu.. nhi krta kya m ise pareshan, naamo se bulata hu, izzat nhi deta, jab man krta h niklne ko bol deta hu, glt hu mai maa bahot galat.

Raavi who is very angry and has enough of this family drama- Mai ab chlti hu mujhe or ab is drame ka part nhi banna

Gombi- Raavi please mere liye ruk ja

R- Wah Gaumbi aaj aap bol uthe par kl jab Shiva ne mujhe bahr fenka tb aap kuch nhi bol paaye. Just wow

Everyone is left speechless

Dhara tries to convince her but

Raavi says- Dhara di aapko to pta bhi nhi kaisa lgta h jb apne hi ghr me aap paraye lagne lagte ho, pta nhi kaise Maine is pariwar ko perfect pariwar man liya tha. Aaj bhi apne aap ko kosti (blame) hu ki kyu maine is pariwar ki bahu banne ka sapna dekha. Jb aap is ghr me aayi to bhale hi kaki ne aapko nhi apnaya par aapke pas 3 bachhe the jo din raat Dhara bhabhi krte krte aapke piche ghumte the, Gaumbi the jinhone aapke liye apni maa ke samne awaz uthayi or mere pas kon h? Aisa pati jo mere sath bura krne me, meri insult krne me sbse aage rhta hai.

Shiva tu agr apni biwi me Dhara di ki parchhayi dekhna chahta hai to phle khud me Gombi jaisa pati dhundh, jinke liye apni biwi se badh kar kuch nhi.

Or rahi bat sacrifice ki to aisa nhi h ki maine kuch nhi kiya is pariwar ke liye jab jarurat padi to apne gehne bechne ko taiyar thi m par tb bhi Shiva ne usme bhi meri glti nikal di, pta chla Dhara di pregnant h to sb kuch chodkar fir isi ghr me taane sunne chle aayi. Aapko to sacrifice ke badle bhagwan ka darza mil gya par mujhe to is ghr me ek insan ka bhi darza nhi mil paya.

Or Shiva tu... kya tha tune ki agr m saabit kar payi ki m sachhi hu tbhi tu mujhe is ghr me rhne dega, to sun ab mujhe kuch bhi saabit nhi krna... nhi krni mujhe apni sachhai sabit to kyu rok rha h mujhe nikal na jaise phle nikal diya tha.

Rishita tries to intervene

Ris- Par Raavi tumne bhi to Shiva pe jhute ilzam lagaye the na

Ra - Really Rishita?? Tum mujhse question kar rhi ho?? Are girgit bhi na tumse jldi rang nhi badal skta. Phli bat ki maine vo complaint nhi ki h or dusri bat tum batao kya Shiva jo mere sath krta h, kaaki jo mere sath krti h vo mental abuse nhi h?? Are Dev tumpe chilla deta h to tum usse bat nhi krti or tum Shiva ko defend kar rhi ho

Shiva who is know ashamed of himself and his whole family wants only one chance from Raavi to make things right. He begs for one chance to Raavi...

Will Raavi give him the chance???

TBC ❤️

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Just amazinggg👏

On point Pakka jawab diya Raavi ne👍🏼

Kaash show mein bhi aise hothe

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