ShiVi OS: First time's the charm ||18+|| Pg. 2 - Page 2

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Bas raat ke 1 baje hain na tho comment subeh maarungi IF you post right nowww! 🤡

Bass mujhe maarne mat aana. 😆 Baaki comment aaraam se karo!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Bass mujhe maarne mat aana. 😆 Baaki comment aaraam se karo!

Areeeeeee??????!!!!!!

Main kyun maarungaaa??!

Maine tho pehle hi bola hai jo likho sb post maaro 🤣

Main tho kabse hu readyyyyy taiyaarrrrr 🤪

Usi 1st page per post hoga???!

Or here?

Yaha pe karna hai tho update on next page ye PG 2 apan nipta dete hain jaldi se 😆

First time's the charm

Summary: ShiVi's first time 😳

Content warning: 18+ content. Kiddos please stay away!

Also this is entirely dialogue. There's no description whatsoever. So you have to follow along to figure out who's saying what!

This has no connection with Take my breath away, meaning it's not an epilogue or anything. It's just a standalone OS that I've adapted from one of my other stories for a different fandom.

Thanks in advance for reading and please do post your comments!

UNRES

Haaillaaa Lizzuuu Ye kya kiyaaa?! Hawwww ☺️☺️

Main tho gaya-

Yes this was different. Very different. Something that didn't expect and was pleasantly surprised by it. Even though there's little build up and they're shown going straight to the foreplay if I'm being honest it didn't need a prior setup yk.

The THING that they found in the middle?

Imma be honest I didn't understand until the very end where they talk about it. I was blank for some reason. It happens with me sometimes. I am that way. 🤡

Car is a premise chosen by very few writers like actually very very very very few writers so this was a treat to read. Different, but good different.

Sundari and Susheela?!

Holy lord I cracked up SO BAD!!🤣🤣

Likeeee woahhh man, hold it please! Chill.

Okay did she hurt him when she was trying to reach her purse? I think I deciphered it correctly but do correct me if I'm wrong. 😳

The end? Superb. Getting an element of anxiousness with Dev nearing and them trying to get their shit together was some next level end.

A lovely piece. Different? Definitely!

But it was a massive treat as usual.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Res for update

Nahiiiiiii naaaaaaaa

NEW PAGEEEEEEEE😭

YAHANNN DALO NEECHE 😆

Main ludhak na jaunnn kahinnn🤪

Jaldi dal do...mtlb agr dal rhe ho tho 🤣

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Me trying to guess what can be the unconventional thing like -

Isko res me badalna pdega 🤡

Koi hai?? 😆

Ya main bhaag jaoon patli gali se?