ShiVi OS: First time's the charm ||18+|| Pg. 2 - Page 3

Riya what the hell have you written .😲

I meany oh my god so good it is ☺️☺️

Shivi in the car doing their deed for the first , I wanted it☺️woh bhi Dev ke second hand car mein 🤣🤣

This is so realistic 😆 I mean there confusion as its their first time ☺️

Sundari & Susheela 🤣🤣🤣

Simi & Mimi 🤣🤣

Raavi not able to find her inners☺️🤣

Dev babu ka timing

Dev has a sex toy in his car☺️🤣

Love you for this ❤️🤗

No one is gonna throw chappals at you for this master piece .👏

Uhh Thank God! Mujhe laga zyaada ho gaya!

I was getting nervous at the lack of comments for this one!

Thanks Vaishu! 😳😆

Glad you enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: Foxii

Superb 🤣

Thanks so much! ❤️

I'm going out on a limb here and tagging a few people in case they missed this.

Oh wow! This was such an interesting way to describe their first time! I loved the setting! I also loved the way you’ve written the dialogues! Everything was hot and perfect!

Thank you, Riya for tagging me ❤️

It was such a nice read… I enjoyed it 🤗

Though 18+, still it was written with grace (sorry, unable to find a better word, hope you got what I am trying to say) 😊

THANK YOU FOR THE TAG!!! Or I definitely would’ve missed this and I definitely wouldn’t have wanted to miss then and then I’d be definitely upset.

The names they gave.. good lord! Had me cackling like a mad woman. And I think the best part is the spontaneity with which it happened. And realistically speaking, that’s how it probably happens, right? It’s not silken sheets and flowers and candles. You brought out their need so wonderfully. Also, is it sadistic of me that I was secretly glad that Dev had to resort to sex toys while ShiVi needed literally nothing else other than each other and a condom 🤣

Also, demanding Raavi Narayan is 🔥🔥🔥. Though I like Shiva aiming to please, I want a little bit more of a in-charge Shiva too.. you know.. if you are taking requests for the future 😉

I love this way of writing but I’m kinda left hanging too with all the imagining and fill in the blanks I’m having to do. I have something cooking along the same lines. Not like this, because there is no fill in the blanks but the writing style might be along similar lines.

Please keep writing and posting and tagging me!

Sincerely,

your no.1 fan!


P.S. I know my lamba comment on the last chapter of your previous one is pending. I promise I’ll get to it super soon!

Riya, ok that wasn’t explicit as I thought because I don’t read mature content unless it is part of the SS or FF😆

It is their first time that too in Dev’s car😆

Dev has a sex toy in his car?😆

Raavi lost her under garment😆

I am not worried about Dev finding but worried about Rishita finding it. Anyway that’s Dev’s problem😆

Also names - Sundari and Susheela changed to Mimi and Simi- who comes up with these, I guess only Shiva Pandya.

I am glad they got it done before Dev showed up😆

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Oh wow! This was such an interesting way to describe their first time! I loved the setting! I also loved the way you’ve written the dialogues! Everything was hot and perfect!

Thank you, Suparna! Glad you thought my little self-indulgence was fun! 😆😳

Originally posted by: Scribble19

Thank you, Riya for tagging me ❤️

It was such a nice read… I enjoyed it 🤗

Though 18+, still it was written with grace (sorry, unable to find a better word, hope you got what I am trying to say) 😊

You're welcome, Sanchi! And I know what you're trying to say. When I write smut I try very, very hard not to cross that line between tacky and tasteful so I'm glad you thought this one wasn't vulgar.

And if you're uncomfortable reading 18+ stuff please say so and I'll make sure not to tag you in future!

Thanks for reading! ❤️