Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 98

Well I go through the entire story in one go

It's perfectly written and too Hot for me😳 And I am not complaining for it😎

I loved everything about it and really having no proper adjectives to express how splendidly you wrote the entire story🤗

It really seems I was reading a novel: I was excited to know the entire bucket list but now it seems 11th one is going to be one of favourites😆

Raavi initiated the relationship and never ever give up even after several heartbreaks is really appreciable👏 and Shiva it is so sweet of him to go through all of her wishes and trying to fulfill them😊 God you made me fall for this guy so hard I won't be able to adjust for less in real life😉

And finally I am happy that Shiva is going to fulfill his dream that too with Raavi having her diploma🥳 A wonderful concept and amazing story thank you so much for writing this one... This story will always be one of my favourite and in my re read list...

Looking forward for your future stories👍🏼

It's just soo good !

I have no words to describe it !!

I loveeddddddddd it ! Thank you Lizzie !!

Im gonna miss this T_T

Lizzie🤗 I won't lie but I am very sad like the other readers that this story has come to an end. But all good things should come to an end, right? ❤️ I really enjoyed this story from the starting point to the finishing point, no punctuations left.😆 This story will forever be a good memory to me (And it was hell'a spiceyyyyy!!!☺️). I really hope you will continue to write stories on ShiVi.😆 Thank you for this wonderful book. 🤗❤️ This was an amazing experience.

Originally posted by: Kfof

Short summary of this story -

Shiva and Raavi - They were magic ❤❤❤

Because you created them like that ❤💚🤍

Thank you, Kshama! And thanks for reading and supporting this fic and my writing! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

This is freaking gold. The entire series !

Sadly, but as they say all good things must come to an end someday🥺

Would love to see you come up with more whenever you can

Thank you so much for sharing this gem with us❤️

Thanks so much, Anuradha! I'm so glad you enjoyed this! ❤️

Would you like to be tagged if I do write more ShiVi?

Originally posted by: prernapewdie

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww 🤗

Shiva's entry to raavi's room asking were you crying?

Some guys are really a material🤣

I cannot believe this story ended. It was too adorable.

I really thought you will write their love making?

Thank you, Prerna! And Shiva's reaction was justified I think because at that point he may or may not have noticed Raavi crying because she wiped off her tears angrily before she let him into her room. But he may have guessed she was by the redness of her eyes etc.

Ahh, no. I had no plans to go that far. ☺️ to write about them making love.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

Originally posted by: sangy

This was so very very super duper shiviliciously awesome❤️

You are going to give an 18+ epilogue with number 4 and 8, together preferably, aren't you, you are right?????

I mean, please please, pretty please!!!🤗

Hello! I haven't seen you comment here before! Thanks for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed this little fic!

18+ epilogue- ha ha! Let's see. Not promising anything though!

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Lizzie thee whole story was great😘🥰😍loved it....... Just loved it......

Thanks so much.. happy you loved it!

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Offff Lizzie!! I loved the last update! It was all so beautifully concluded. All events all major issues the bucket list! Everything was so gorgeously done! I loved the understanding you showed specially during the truck ride! If we could pretty pleaseee get an epilogue with number 4 and 8 on the list.. that would be everything! Take a bow! Keep writing!

Thank you so much Suparna for the comment! I'm happy you think all loose ends were tied up well.

The understanding I showed during the truck ride? Did you mean how understanding Shiva was about Raavi's 'needs'? ☺️

Epilogue! 😆

Hasn't Shiva already dreamed up that particular fantasy? Of how exactly Raavi will do Number 4? 😆

I haven't left much room for the actual description 😆!

Thanks again for your encouragement! 🤗

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

UNRESSED PG 1. 🤗

Phewwww....

Can't feel the fingers 🤣

Replied! Thanks, Ritu for the super-duper long review! 🤗

Have responded to it!