Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 99

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

I am here, ma’am. And I’m crying my eyes out internally (coz I’m not sure how my work colleagues would react to me wailing my eyes out because a story made me emotional).

I will be back with my lamba comment but before I forget, yes, I’ve seen magic! The magic that you weave with your words. The way you described them dancing at the reception was pure magic. I will keep coming back to this again and again because it makes my heart swell with so much love and joy to visualize them together in that scene.

I'm crying that this scene made you emotional and your heart swell! I wanted Raavi to have that dance with Shiva (because she missed out on it during the date) and I just had to sneak it into the reception! And I'm so glad this stood out to you more than 'other' things in this chapter! ❤️

I don’t know why you’d go into hiding though. This was beyond amazing!! And I demand an epilogue. I demand to know if Raavi’s skinny dipping wish got fulfilled and if Shiva joined her or not. I demand to know if Shiva’s fantasy of taking her on the sand gets fulfilled or they never even make it out of the water once he sees her rising like a water nymph. I demand to know if she gets those 3 orgasms in a row or she has so many that she loses count!

Please! Please! Please!

Yes yes, I hear you about the epilogue! For number 4 I think Shiva's imagination has more than supplied how it's gonna go! 😆 I haven't left much room for further description! 😆

But I'm not saying no. We'll see!

Thank you, Neet 🤗and eagerly waiting for your 'longer' review!

Originally posted by: Foxii

What a story... what an amazing Ending

Uff.. the truck ride... he let her be in Control

You described everything so well, I could imagine it all

Shiva is possessive... while trying to avoid her he was right there when someone else (tushar) comes close to Raavi❤️❤️

Loved the Angst, when She feels that he is going to leave her...

Them talking it out, getting together is goals ❤️

Thank you for writing this... it was an Amazing Story

Hope to read more on Shivi written by You

Yes, he let her be in control because he wanted to give her that confidence in herself. She'd done such a good job of seduction so far! ☺️

Yeah, Shiva came just in time to dance with her! I wanted to them to have that dance that they missed out on during the Christmas ball.

Thanks for reading and supporting this fic! Will let you know if I write more ShiVi! 😳

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Well I go through the entire story in one go

It's perfectly written and too Hot for me😳 And I am not complaining for it😎

I loved everything about it and really having no proper adjectives to express how splendidly you wrote the entire story🤗

It really seems I was reading a novel: I was excited to know the entire bucket list but now it seems 11th one is going to be one of favourites😆

Raavi initiated the relationship and never ever give up even after several heartbreaks is really appreciable👏 and Shiva it is so sweet of him to go through all of her wishes and trying to fulfill them😊 God you made me fall for this guy so hard I won't be able to adjust for less in real life😉

And finally I am happy that Shiva is going to fulfill his dream that too with Raavi having her diploma🥳 A wonderful concept and amazing story thank you so much for writing this one... This story will always be one of my favourite and in my re read list...

Looking forward for your future stories👍🏼

Wow! You read the whole thing in one go?

Ha ha- am glad you enjoyed number 11! 😆

Raavi took hold of the reins of the relationship once Shiva began to doubt if he was right for her! I'm so glad you fell for this Shiva! 😳 And aww a Shiva irl? Idk if that's what you really want though! 😆

Thank you for reading and in advance for re-reading! 😳

Originally posted by: Clouds7

It's just soo good !

I have no words to describe it !!

I loveeddddddddd it ! Thank you Lizzie !!

Im gonna miss this T_T

Thank youuuuu!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ❤️

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Lizzie🤗 I won't lie but I am very sad like the other readers that this story has come to an end. But all good things should come to an end, right? ❤️ I really enjoyed this story from the starting point to the finishing point, no punctuations left.😆 This story will forever be a good memory to me (And it was hell'a spiceyyyyy!!!☺️). I really hope you will continue to write stories on ShiVi.😆 Thank you for this wonderful book. 🤗❤️ This was an amazing experience.

Thanks Pooh for reading and for supporting me all through this amazing writing journey! 🤗

I am still trying to get the right words out there. Read this chapter few times before I am writing this. First off thanks for giving us a great story👏 Never missed a chapter, never missed any of their interactions. I am sad that it is coming to an end, at the same time I know all good things have to end at some point. But I will still have this thread to read the story again, isn’t that the best part of all of this?😃

Now to the chapter, bucket list# 7, he let be in control and how generous and gentlemanly of him. It was her wish, he let her do it. Then after a long silence on the ride back home and during the reception he came at the right moment to claim her to dance with both their hearts content.

Just like Raavi, I did not expect the twist at the end that he had plans to go to college and resume his studies. And the way he made it upto her after she left the reception all disappointed is something a person who is passionately in love can do it. Both are lucky to have each other and are only made for each other,

The nok-jhok on their ship name was cute! I agree with Shiva, it should be ShiVi and not ShAvi as Dhara and Raavi ship is called DhaVi in the show, don’t want ShAvi to rhyme with it😆 ShiVi it is for all practical purposes and for cuteness and passion overloaded love story of two amazing characters.

I have said this before and saying it again, just love this Shiva and Raavi so much❤️

Looks like few have asked for an epilogue, if you can give us, it’ll be great, but if you can’t I can imagine things myself because your story is such😍

I know you want yo take a break from ShiVi but am going to patiently wait for another story from you on them❤️

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Thanks Prema! 🤗

OMG! Nee tamizha? idha naa edhirparkala❤️ tamizhla solraen, nee indha story ezhudhi kalakitta po👏

The reason I started watching this version is I watch the original Pandian Stores, moonu varushama paakaren, aana wedding track thavira indha versionkuum originalukkum oru sammandham illai😆

Naama pesuvom🤗

Originally posted by: mpks1

OMG! Nee tamizha? idha naa edhirparkala❤️ tamizhla solraen, nee indha story ezhudhi kalakitta po👏

The reason I started watching this version is I watch the original Pandian Stores, moonu varushama paakaren, aana wedding track thavira indha versionkuum originalukkum oru sammandham illai😆

Naama pesuvom🤗

Ha ha - idhu naan edhirpartein! 😆yaarum sheegram naan Tamizhnnu nambardillai! Yenna face-to-face parthalum idhe kadai daan! Bombay lai irundu valandidhu adhinalai yen Tamizh konjam corrupt Tamizh !😆

Naan originallum parthadillai, indha versionum parthadillai! Aanal story izhudiyachu! Yenna adhischiyam! 😆

Pesuvom pesuvom.. aanal yennai adikaai varadeenga yen Tamizhai kettu! 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ha ha - idhu naan edhirpartein! 😆yaarum sheegram naan Tamizhnnu nambardillai! Yenna face-to-face parthalum idhe kadai daan! Bombay lai irundu valandidhu adhinalai yen Tamizh konjam corrupt Tamizh !😆

Naan originallum parthadillai, indha versionum parthadillai! Aanal story izhudiyachu! Yenna adhischiyam! 😆

Pesuvom pesuvom.. aanal yennai adikaai varadeenga yen Tamizhai kettu! 😆

Kavalaye padatha, naanadhikkave maaten. Nee Bombay na, naa Chennai, aana 20varushama US la irrukkaen.

Series paarkalana enna ippo? Kathai ennaama ezhudhara❤️ Shiva va pathi yedhuvum theriyadhu, Raavi ya pathi yedhuvum theriyaadhu aana fans enna venumo, enna pidikkumo adhai correct purinju, ezhudhi irukka parthiya, adha sollanum.

Anyway Pottermeow, Sathya is also a tamizh.

We used to have lot of namma makkal but they all either moved to TT or IG or some have quit the show when Disha's track- 3rd angle track for Shiva started. Now that they are back together, not sure if they are watching it anymore but they don't visit the forum anymore.

Hellooo, I'm here! And I've finally read all the chapters!

Before I comment any further, just know that I saw all your tags and I wasn't ignoring them. I love this story too much. I was actually searching for a time when I could just sit down and read this slowly and soak in every little detail, and that happened just before I slept last night. And once I started reading, I couldn't put my phone down until I finished the entire thing.

I really really wish I could comment on every chapter since there was so much to unpack in all of them, but I feel like my words will never do justice to the masterpiece you've written!

This SS is going down as an absolute favorite of mine!❤️ What a ride that was. An absolutely exhilarating journey with my favorite characters. There was a perfect amount of everything in this story. As a reader, there are times when I have this inner desire to read about something which sometimes seems impossible, and I feel like this SS gave me that exactly! It had the perfect amount of emotional connect, and the most luxurious amount of sexual tension. Their internal conflicts, their struggles, their developing feelings were all portrayed beautifully. Your words made the story flow so gradually and naturally. It felt like no less than poetry. More than anything, it gave me moments that ShiVi may not ever experience in canon, but these moments were some which I've always desired, and I can at least visualize them now.

I can't put into words how much I adore this SS. Words won't suffice but thank you for writing this. It was thrilling to read, and you best believe that I'll be back to read it all over again!🤗