Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 97

I am here, ma’am. And I’m crying my eyes out internally (coz I’m not sure how my work colleagues would react to me wailing my eyes out because a story made me emotional).

I will be back with my lamba comment but before I forget, yes, I’ve seen magic! The magic that you weave with your words. The way you described them dancing at the reception was pure magic. I will keep coming back to this again and again because it makes my heart swell with so much love and joy to visualize them together in that scene.


I don’t know why you’d go into hiding though. This was beyond amazing!! And I demand an epilogue. I demand to know if Raavi’s skinny dipping wish got fulfilled and if Shiva joined her or not. I demand to know if Shiva’s fantasy of taking her on the sand gets fulfilled or they never even make it out of the water once he sees her rising like a water nymph. I demand to know if she gets those 3 orgasms in a row or she has so many that she loses count!

Please! Please! Please!

What a story... what an amazing Ending

Uff.. the truck ride... he let her be in Control

You described everything so well, I could imagine it all

Shiva is possessive... while trying to avoid her he was right there when someone else (tushar) comes close to Raavi❤️❤️

Loved the Angst, when She feels that he is going to leave her...

Them talking it out, getting together is goals ❤️

Thank you for writing this... it was an Amazing Story

Hope to read more on Shivi written by You

And the last one is done!

Thanks for reading folks!🤗

Neet, will reply to you soon once I have your lamba comment!

I hear you about the epilogue but I need a break from ShiVi for now. I’m not saying no though! So please don’t be upset!

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Riya!! I cant believe it is almost the end of the week and I am just getting round to commenting!! FORGIVE!

No worries, Min! ❤️

Starting off with Chapter 8 Part 1

Before you posted this, I was imagining all the different scenarios that could potentially happen and I was so happy to see that you had gone down the sensible path of the family having a discussion (A long one) but at least they talked it out. Communication is so important and you've shown that it is the most important when it comes to solving problems (Yes ITV needs the drama of miscommunication and keeping things to themselves so fics satisfy my very sensible needs!)

Yes, I realize TV dramas need that miscommunication to happen to stretch tracks/ for TRPs etc but imo it just seems like lazy writing to me. There are so many more effective scenarios that can come up without sacrificing the characters you've come to love. They almost start to seem like someone else after a point!

Shiva's feeling for Disha (throwing her out like a sack of potatoes 😆) is also a pleasant surprise!! But Suman's stuck on her and Shiva still. At least she thought about Raavi's feelings and briefly entertained the idea of Shiva and Raavi together. There is some hope that she will be accepting of the relationship!

The Suman in this fic is not against Raavi at all as you'll see later on. She's somehow fixated with Raavi and Dev and perhaps doesn't think of Shiva for her because Dev being the older one (I guess this is how it is in canon) needs to get married first so its natural she'd think of him first. And Dev doesn't help matters either by mutely going along and saying nothing about Rishita. Which is why, and rightly so, Suman is so mad at him because she's gone ahead and made promises to Prafulla and Raavi based on what Dev said and possibly to Disha as well (which is wrong on her part because clearly Shiva isn't ready for it). So her concern for the two girls - Disha and Raavi is totally justified.

Shiva's worry that Suman is going to get Raavi married off to someone else is so palpable (Obviously since Krish can see & feel it) and then you took my whole heart with Shiva's explanation to Suman about marrying her off without asking. That whole conversation was so sweet to read, how he explains his opinions to his mother, her stubbornness and iron will moving towards understanding and then the family jumping in to help Shiva make her realise that she is important in their lives!

Thank you! I often find that older people feel the need to be recognized and acknowledged for what they bring into the family dynamic. If you look at it from Suman's perspective she must feel helpless because of being wheelchair-bound and the family acknowledging what she does/ her contribution I think was a nice way to make her feel important. And it worked too as a distraction!

And oh the awkwardness of Shiva trying to cover up his want to tell Raavi about the relationship...I laughed out at the time and got strange looks from the Mr.

Are you referring to Shiva telling Raavi that Dev isn't marrying her but Rishita?

Krish in any fic is always a pleasure to read and you have maintained his essence so well in this too!

Ahh thank you! I'm glad I've managed to maintain the essence of even the side characters! 😆

I'm so glad that Dev and Rishita will have a proper wedding, with approval from both families ... It gives them a cute love story vibe. And, amidst all that, Shiva is thinking of Raavi and her bucket list ( I low key got a dreadful feeling that this might not turn out well, taking her list without asking her).

He takes her to the theatre at midnight to watch a tacky movie without a ticket is 🤣. He so casually slipped Dev and Rishita's wedding announcement in the conversation. Her doubting and not giving it much thought gives us a glimpse of the bimbo from the start on the bike ride before she catches on...

Her doubting the theatre outing you mean? Yeah it should have raised her suspicions but perhaps she was feeling too relieved about not having to marry Dev to think too deeply about it at that point!

The conversation with him pretending to be Mami is hilarious!! And she wants to do the same things that he does!! Maybe they can do it together (another fic from you then?? YES PLEASE!)

Ha ha! So many prompts hidden within this story- didn't realize!

The best is seeing Raavi's feeling growing just as much as Shiva's are. Now if only they would talk it out!! Oh well onto the next part!!

Thanks for the detailed comment, Min! 🤗

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Okay so coming to part 2 of the update

The description of the Christmas party made me feel like I was watching over them in winter wonderland!! Shiva the ever popular Casanova , in demand with both the peers and Aunties 😆. I love how he tries to avoid them, but just misses. I found it hilarious reading how uncomfortable he was that I read it twice before I moved on.

Ahh! I'm glad you found this hilarious and mentioned it! I like these little extra filler scenes which don't really do much for the main story progression but are still fun and can tell the reader important things about the characters in question! And yes, Shiva thinks Disha is a pain! 😆

The description of Raavi through Shiva's eyes was stunning as was Shiva's look to Raavi! And Raavi feeling self conscious was so cute, I wanted to give her a hug. I wait till the confidence is back!

Yeah, her low self-esteem is probably why she felt like that and is probably also the reason why she looks for validation (being considered the most beautiful)

He makes her sing!! Another one of her bucket list items!! Omg and the song choice is so apt...Chura liya!! haaye!! he sings with her too, supporting her, but making her shine in the limelight is adorable! He knew how to get her to sing too...not giving her a choice and telling her to focus only on him! Her exhilaration on the performance was contagious and I felt so proud of her.

Yeah we were all proud of Raavi for letting go of her fear and finally doing this, but my fav part here is how her singing affects Shiva. He is proud of her too and that feeling of pride for someone comes only when you think of them so much as your own that their every little achievement feels like yours. This is what I wanted to bring across here with Shiva doing this for Raavi.

Then the mood shifts all of a sudden and we have the undercurrent of desire back in full force. No matter how much they try, it will be there, playing with them, their wants and needs. Even between the joking, her insecurity takes a peek too with him rejecting the kiss under the misletoe, until he explains why (Hello...Cold shower I'm coming for you!!), the lust peaks and HOW! But Shiva's control deserves applause, he gives her a gentle kiss, one he thinks she deserves, not the madness that he has within him until she mocks him. And then you lit my screen on fire Riya darling!! (I have no words to express how good that piece was!)

Thank you! I always want people to review the 'hot' parts because I'm new to writing these and I still feel a bit shaky at it. I don't want them to seem tacky and vulgar and there's such a thin line (I think) between tastefully written sex scenes and tacky ones that I'm constantly second guessing myself. Which is why I still feel nervous when I write such scenes.

Again ever the gentleman Shiva asking her to tell him to stop and she doesnt so he does the most awful thing I've read on here till now..

😒 Damn! You know when I write I try and put myself in the shoes of the characters and imagine what they might be thinking/feeling and when I wrote this scene what Shiva did was somewhat understandable (in my head) because it was then that he realized he has feelings for her and then is overcome by self-loathing and the feeling that he's not good enough etc etc which is why he reacts the way he does. But he got so vilified in this fic because of this one act more so because this scene was written in Raavi's PoV which makes me wonder how it would have turned out if I'd written it from Shiva's. Anyways, the damage is done I guess and Ic an only hope Shiva was redeemed in your eyes by the next update!

Thank you, Min!

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Repentance. Okay this is good. He is thinking of her and getting worked up with his actions! As you should Mr. Pandya!! How dare you do that to the poor girl!! And FINALLY!!

Yes, there is repentance but it come with an unhealthy dose of self-flagellation which leads to him feeling (even more than usual) that he's not good enough for her. He beats himself up so much for doing this to her that he thinks getting out of her life is the only way he can repent.

There is acceptance that he had fallen in love with her.

I think at this point Shiva realized he has deep feelings for her but he hasn't yet named those feelings whereas Raavi is steps ahead of him in this. You'll get it when you read the last update!

I'm so so glad that it was when he was kissing her that he realised that the feelings he had for her ran deep. Also I feel like the essence of Shiva feeling as though he is not worth Raavi is so like what has been shown on the show that it isn't hard to picture!

Yes. I did gather that canon Shiva was like this so it wasn't a stretch for the Shiva in my fic to behave the way he did either.

Also I dont know what 7 & 8 is but how is he going to let any other person complete that on her list is beyond me (please dont take this as a challenge and change anything you've written!) yet he will help her complete the whole list. Just with how angry I was at him breaking her heart in the previous episode, I feel bad for him in this one! Oh how difficult it is to swing between the two dum dums!

Yaay I'm glad you were feeling sorry for him, because I think Shiva deserves some love too. I understand the show has somewhat destroyed his character by making him something of a wimp but I've tried to make the Shiva in my fic likeable. Flawed, yes, but still likeable!

The bit where he compares himself to darkness and her to light was very touching.

Ahh! I love you for bringing this up because it was a personal fav of mine from this chapter!

He treats her like a fragile doll who deserves the best in the world and even though it will break his heart (and mine a little because...chemistry and shivi is end game) he will do it. I hope Raavi shoots down this notion of his. His apology is sweet. Making one of her bucket list wish come true and apologising at the same time..kill two birds with one stone. Also email..Is he going to do something stupid like go away? Please tell me not..since you are finishing off with the last chapter!

Ahh, I'm not giving away spoilers. Read till the last part. You'll know! 😳

Raavi's thoughts on having fallen in love with Shiva is chaos, confusion, panic and the defeated acceptance that there is nothing she can do about falling in love with an idiot who refused to accept her feelings (and his own), replaying every second that they spent together analysing what exactly had happened. (Can I please shake her!!!) And just as quick as she had gotten angry, she melts when he sings for her and the note he sends! (Why do I get a sinking feeling this is going to be a disaster?) She's so excited to go to a ball with him (Her wishes are so simple that it is impossible for shiva to not fulfill them!! I have stars in my eyes...awww cute running through my head as I was reading that).

She does get starry-eyed because of the song he's singing to her, and she melts because she's never had anyone do anything like this for her before. And even though she'd mad at him for what he said and ruining her first kiss, in that moment the song simply overwhelms and she forgets to be mad. And then she reads the apology note and gets all excited again only to get her heart broken in quite a different way this time. Because however much he keeps hurting her, he's still the one she wants. And this is not to say she has a penchant for masochism or anything..it's just that I think Raavi knows deep down who Shiva is (she realizes this later in the chapter as they're talking about him giving up his studies to help Gaumbi) and knows that he's a good man. She also recognizes they're kindred spirits except that his self-doubt mainfests in a different way from hers.

Okay WHAT??? Tushar?? Is this the same Tushar who owns the gym where Shiva and Raavi have had not one but two almost make out sessions?? Why???Shiva..She was ogling at YOU!!! and you were obviously checking her out!! (Omg why are they so dumb!) oh no!! Raavi feels humiliated and its completely justified and good for him for feeling like a little SH**.

Yes, he went full-on sacrificial mode in this and made decisions for her which was again presumptive on his part. Thankfully, Raavi is having none of it!

Your description of the ball is making me jealous, since I have never been to such a formal event myself and I want to go to one now. Raavi is popular and I love how Shiva has contrasting feelings for her being in demand for a dance. (He obviously doesn't realise that he's acting like a typical partner!) And the burn from Dev was too good!!! "I have the love of my life dancing in my arms, not in someone else's!" The kind hearted Shiva who danced with the lonely girl (I wonder what Raavi thought of that?) and making sure she had a partner for all her dances was so sweet.

Yes! I wanted to show how Shiva is a good guy deep down and recognizes these problematic societal elements that end up leaving people like Jessica in the fringes and not really being able to participate.

And of course it helps that he sees parallels to Raavi in the girl!

And just like that Shiva helps fulfill two of her bucket list items!! She is the most beautiful in the room. I love how you've shown that in his eyes she is the most beautiful, yet he is glad that she got the validation from a room full of people that were mostly strangers and then at the other end you have Raavi realising that she never needed the acceptance of beauty from strangers because of her insecurities, instead she had always felt that way with Shiva, the one person who has probably never verbally told her, yet his looks betray his thoughts every single time! (Also now I want to go read the whole thing from the first part!)

She's been wanting this validation all her life, yet when she gets it, it feels hollow. Because she realizes then that none of the people in the room really matter to her. What matters is what Shiva thinks and his words about her beauty end up affecting her much more than being Queen of the ball!

The implication of their conversation after is so meaningful. They are sharing all these intimate details of themselves with the other, which is more than they probably have done in their whole lives. Her push for an answer about the kiss and Shiva finally.. FINALLY.. telling her in not so many words why he did and she falls for him even more( I have stars in my eyes!! Wow!!) and so emotionally overwhelmed that she cries (my poor baby). Till she realises that she is going to have to be the one that is chasing him and making him lose control but he doesn't want to even dance with her? (she has her work cut out for her)

Yes, Raavi's gonna be the one to do the chasing now, and yeah Shiva doesn't want to dance with her because he cannot handle all the physical proximity that it will entail!

OMG who is this new character entry???

Not really a new character! Read the next update to find out!

Thanks Min. Can't wait for you to read the remaining chapters and give me your thoughts!

Omg it's completed ?? Now lemme read all the last 4 chapters together:(( I have a feeling that I'll cry a lot and I will definitely miss this ;(

No One:

Literally No One:

Liz Right Now :🤡

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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Okay, Grumpy cat! Don't fret! You're still number one in my heart if that helps! 😆

Okay what just happened? How did I go from blushing uncontrollably to getting teary to laughing and finally crying my eyeballs out while reading this last one?!

Just how is that possible. I oscillated. Truly oscillated. Such a range, so beautifully executed. Ah the brilliance is upon us!

Wow! This floored me. I'm speechless and also glad this update could make you feel so much!

“Do you want this, Raavi?”

No. She sitting on your lap for inspecting the vision of your eyes.
Men can be seriously daft and enthralling at the same time can't they? What a quality truly.

I think here it's more about consent. He's constantly checking with her (he asks this again) because he knows she's an innocent and doesn't want to take advantage of her inexperience to lead her into something she truly doesn't understand. Which is why I think him asking her this really validates his respect for her agency (which is an ongoing theme tbh, he also asks her about going to college with him). Raavi gets this too and feels empowered because of it, and that's huge for her- someone who's had very little control in her life (starting right from her parents dying and her being raised by her aunt) So yeah.

I didn't expect him to keep control throughout yk? At some point I speculated he'd give into his own frustration caused by her inexperienced-hesitant touches and thoroughly ravage her like last time. The fact that he didn't was something so unusually beautiful that I smiled throughout the scene. Was it an unusual reaction? I mean maybe but I found it endearing.

Of course not! No reaction is unusual and every reaction is valid simply because we all have a different lens while viewing something and it's usually influenced by our life experiences. So you smiling and finding it endearing that he held back is totally valid, as is someone else's reaction of frustration because Shiva did not take over and ravage her. Personally, it made me respect Shiva more because he was respecting Raavi during this entire interlude.

The way he encouraged her to go for it and take the lead because he knew she wanted it badly and the way he sensed her confidence waning and assured her was unique. Its something you don't come across easily anywhere in stories.

Aww, thank you for saying this. But if more leading men aren't doing this, they totally should be, imo!

And that is why I gave my heart to it. It was unexpected, brutally unique and utterly precious.

Acceptance between the deed?

Are you talking here about Shiva's acceptance of his feelings for Raavi?

AGAIN...unusual but intensely overwhelming to read. The scene was hawt. I don't know why you were worried about it? Honestly stop worrying man. You past the worry stage. You already perfect. Why the worry?

You're being so kind and lavish in your compliments. 🤗 See, like I just wrote in my reply to Min, I haven't written too many such scenes (not detailed ones anyway because of IF rules) and when I do, I always wonder if I've crossed that thin line between tacky and tasteful. I just don't want them to seem vulgar, which is why I keep feeling nervous when I write such scenes because I don't wanna go there.

“Don’t say anything just now, Raavi. Just straighten yourself. We’re almost there”

THIS. Oh My Lord this. I have read a LOT of stories in my 8 years on the forum, like really A LOT. I wasn't in on any DTs or EDTs before PS so considering the number of my posts yk I'm not lying. But never before do I remember this being done after an intimate scene. Stopping someone from confessing in the high of climax or post coital haze, is something I don't remember coming across any of the forums I've been through and I can't even begin to describe how excellent this felt. This was the first time probably in the whole series where I sided with Shiva and did not get frustrated over him doing anything his way. I don't remember doing this before either but here, in this portion I actually forgot about how Raavi must have felt atm. Considering how much of a Raavi stan I am this is big. 😆

I'm SO SO glad you felt this way and I was able to make you side with Shiva and forget about Raavi at least for the moment in this scene! 😆 I felt what Shiva felt because in the aftermath of that glow you're experiencing it's very easy to get your feelings all muddled up. You can end up feeling extremely vulnerable to the person who got you there and these feelings are mired in gratitude, fondness, friendship, loyalty, and so many other things that it's easily mistaken as love. So Shiva imo was absolutely right to stop her saying those words right then, because he did not want the confession to be clouded in doubt about the authenticity of her feelings.

Right, yeah. Earth to Shiva. End of fantasy.

I never thought she'd continue talking in the returning period. Glances? Yes of course Duh! But her coming forward and stating downright about the number #4 and #8 was something very bold and completely in contrast to the Chapter 1 Raavi and holy cow I loved it. Talk about character development throughout the series. THIS IS WHAT DEFINES IT.

Aha! I have to admit I did not exactly plan for Raavi's character development to happen in quite this manner 😆 but taking up the reins of the relationship and going all out to seduce and convince Shiva has brought in a great deal of confidence in Raavi. It's clear she's going to be the more mature partner in this relationship, though Shiva does offset some of Raavi's childish traits as well. So they're well-balanced as a couple, I think!

You wouldn't believe it but just before I read the line above I whispered the exact same thing 'Earth to Shiva'. He drifted in his own dream fantasy land in the middle of the road and yeah I don't blame him but yikes the fantasy was- ughh- yeah- umm- insane sweltering. I blacked out because that's a sequel OS prompt right there in the middle of the chapter and I couldn't help manifesting it. I'm sorry. You called your funeral here, giving us prompts when we already have 92625 of them. 🤪

I laughed at this! Min also brought up a possible prompt in another update and I think i should probably open up a prompt thread now so you guys can give me ideas! 😆

Dil ki girah khol do was playing as Shiva spun her around in a waltz and Raavi thought, how appropriate the song was.

Okay so you went on and added a Cinderella-Waltz moment apart from the list and I absolutely loved it. It wasn't unusual it didn't feel out of context, it just was. In the moment, precious as ever.

Ahhhh thank you!

Not to mention another one of the beautiful songs from your playlist. Shankar-Jaykishan's music is pathbreaking but what magic have Lata Jee and Manna Dey saab threaded into it here? Holy lord you cannot differentiate between Lata and a Koyal singing in the Sunrise. She was and will be the irreplaceable one in the industry.

SJ tended to make Lata trill like a bird. She would always complain that they (and Salilda) made her sing in the highest of pitches and make her stretch her voice to the uppermost limit. Think Panchhi banoon, Rasik Balma and so many others. But Lata in the 50s and early 60s was untouchable. No one even came close.

I flipped here. I flipped from the giddy happy grinning fool to agonized bunny within seconds. I knew something was coming up and yeahhh-I felt the agony. Its not easy trusting someone when you've been hurt so many times. Its hard to believe someone can go above and beyond for you (even when he does) simply because you're not used to it or I'd like to say never cared for in the way you wanted to be cared for, or never had someone look at you twice leave going to lengths for you. I understand and I connect to her reaction. Leaving the venue like a mess, crumbling but still standing her ground of not letting anyone know the fragility that resides within her. Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Relatable.

Glad you felt it was relatable. I think in the moment when you're hurting from such a huge betrayal like Raavi was it's easy to go down a negative path and doubt everything about that person. We all do it. One mis-step and the person becomes the biggest villain ever. Here, Raavi's rather cloistered existence thus far and the feeling that she's never been that important to anyone quickly gets her there. It's easy for her to believe she's being laughed at again because that's how little her feelings have mattered to anyone so far.

“Were you crying, Chipkali?”

Ummm Okayyyyyy. I expected a tear wiping with the thumb but okay this works just fine too. 😆

He wiped her tears in the aftermath of her climax, 😆 so this time Raavi not wanting him to see her tears I think was more in character. Because she totally does not want his pity. She does not want him to see she's crying over his betrayal! That's her pride and we're all like this no? We do not want the person who hurt us to lord over us even more knowing they've had the power to evoke tears. Somehow pretending to be stoic makes us feel braver and more in control.

I expected Raavi's outburst. It was long overdue. Felt a bit more intensity could have elevated it but then again there was comfort in what followed after so it all panned out perfect.

Intensity of her outburst on Shiva? Or her crying after finding out that he's leaving and didn't tell her?

I went all showing my teeth as if someone placed a anger in my mouth over the 'Kahan Hai Meri Chipkali?'. Comfort. Was the expected reaction heart jump? Sorry Imma weird I do opposite things always. I just kept smiling throughout yk?

Again, there's no expected reaction. You feel what you feel. I wrote it because I feel like it came full circle. He made up that story to Mrs. S about how they would declare their love for each other by speaking those phrases and given their heartbreak and angst I think they both felt safer hiding behind the coded language than actually speaking those words out loud. At least to begin with. I think they're both afraid of rejection, so they're treading carefully here.

Them Bantering and trying to win in a senseless argument from one another is SO SHIVI I can't even-

It is Shivi through and through, the ultimate essence. The slight Enemies to Lovers Trope mixed with Childhood frenemies is what makes them unique and I cannot find any better way to portray them that the conversation that followed after. It was natural. It was what they truly are.

Yeah, I gathered this bantering was who they are at their core. Ngl, this entire sequence with dialogues just appeared in my head one day during my after lunch walk and I actually planned the rest of the chapter around this. I always knew how it was gonna end. It was getting there that was tricky!

“You have taken over my life, Raavi. You’ve become my world. I cannot even imagine life without you by my side. I need you to breathe!”

BAM! More tears. Instantly. I wasn't lying to you about the oscillation okayyyy? Its real that stuff was real.

How are you doing this? Turning me into a maniacal reader. Lord!

Teach me Master!! Imma your

☺️Omg! Thank you so much! 🙏🏼

Shavi got no pizzazzzzz. Seconded. Name your kid Shivi. 😆

“What did you think of when you touched yourself, Raavi?”

You just had to teleport me back to Bridgerton-JQ land didn't you? Just had to. I would be lying if I didn't go into the FB of the Daphne scene then came back to the Daphne-Simon scene at her admission. All Bridgerton fans WOULD definitely get a TB I'm more than sure of it. It was a beautifully portrayed scene, Phoebe did a good job with the scene, but for some reason I've always wanted them to have this as an actual conversation and not in between their 'spirited activities' if you know what I mean. Lol.

Raavi's confession, though subtle completed my wishes for sure. It was precise and apt.

Oh yeah, I did think of Bridgerton when I wrote this but only slightly. I had a whole different scene/ dialogue planned out for them around this with Shiva finding out etc but then it didn't fit in with the rest of this scene so I had to scrap it. Perhaps it will find its way into another ShiVi fic if I write one!

#11. Kill Disha, or torture her slowly (Ideas? Roasting over an open fire? Knife-throwing while pinned to a spinning wheel? Tickling feet while tied up? Cage her in a closed room and play Himesh Reshammiya songs all night?)

This was the LAST THING I expected #11 to be. Trust me, never in my wildest dreams did I imagine her going all Ninja over Disha after having an argument with Shiva. I thought it would be related to him and I laughed very sincerely at this. Trust me.

There were many in my first draft that I scrapped. Visiting a strip club was one but then I thought it would be too risque and also a bit meaningless for Raavi to feel curiosity about going there. Then I wanted to put in a dream proposal (to rival Mondler) but then I felt it would be too premature for a proposal given that they're both not ready to be married just yet. Then some others that you know about and I didn't use. This Disha one just occurred to me as a lark and I wasn't sure I'd use it, and I thought of changing it to something romantic till the last moment I published this. Then I thought of keeping it because it was funny and it totally showed Raavi as such a goofball (that she would flaunt this one in his face in the aftermath of that kiss just to show off and salvage her pride when she was not expecting to ever do anything like this!). I thought it brought a nice anti-climactic humorous moment to the end of the fic.

You think we'd be satisfied with bas itna sa action? You so wrong beyond belief.

We're ABSOLUTELY incorrigible. We need the rest of the action in an epilogue. Marriage / Water-Emerging / Three-In-A-Row, I don't care what or how you get the epilogue...

WE NEED ONE. WITH FULL ACTION.

Who's we? 😆

Tell me you're coming up with a new story please?

Not promising anything as of now. Might work on that adaptation I was planning but not sure when.

We can't loose you.

You too precious to let go.

Aww! Thank you! I loved being here too! And writing this fic!

PS can't loose your brilliant stuff. We need you to give us back to back content bruh.

EVERYONE WILL SECOND ME HERE.

I'm not letting you leave. NEVER. Not letting you out of my freaking sight at all. Come What May.

It has been an experience reading this and truly truly truly amazing discovering you.

I'm so so humbled and may I say it's been amazing discovering all of you too? 🤗

I am Not Letting You go until I'm here. TRUST ME.

Keep writing.

Keep Thriving.

Keep coming up with legendary stuff.

Always will be here to read your stories. Forever and beyond. ❤️

Thank youuuu!! I'm crying. This is so precious! 😭

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