SURROGACY AND HEALING RELATIONS (PART-VII pg 15) updated 27/2 - Page 3

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PART-II

.. .. .. .. Raavi cries silently and says not meeting his eyes,

"Shiva agar tu sirf surrogacy ki wajah se yeh krr raha hai toh please mat kar main massi maa ko mana lungi aur tujhe yeh sab karne kii jaroorat nahi padegi.. . .. . Aur papers bhi ban jayenge jaldi"

Shiva holds both her hand and Raavi still looking down and shedding tears and he says,

"Raavi main yeh sab surrogacy ke liye nahi krr raha hoon........... "

Raavi cuts him and faces other side taking her hands away from him and says,

"Shiva please iss baar apni khushi dekhna mujhe pata hai tu mere saath khush nahi hain maine dekha hai tujhe Disha ke saath vo tere liye perfect hai Shiva bilkul tu tension mat le main dhara dii aur unke baby ka khyal rakhungu agar hamara rishta nahi raha toh bhi please mat kar................... Iss baar apni khushi chun lena pichli baar ki tarah kisi aur ke liye mat karna warna result tere samne hai............... "

"Raavi meri baat sun please ikk baar.............. Main yeh"

Shiva tries to speak but is again cutt by Raavi

"Meri wajah se khud ko saza mat dena fir................"

Now Shiva holded her wrist and moved her closer tu him and make her look in his eyes by cupping her face and wiling her tears and says,

"Chup ek dum chup aur kyon roye ja rahi hai meri taraf dekh ab sun main yeh sab apne liye krr raha hoon Raavi sirf apne liye tujhe khud se dur kar raha tha taki tu apni khushi chune compromise na kare tu yeh rishta nibha bhi leti par mujhe nahi chahiye tha tu mujh par taras khaye par abb tujhe yeh sab krta dekh kar na selfish hone ko jee kar raha hai,......... Tujhe apne paas rakhne ka jee krr raha......... Aur vo disha vo mere liye perfect kaise ho sakti hai jab tu meri hain.............. Eh chipkali....... Tujhe na pasand krne lgga tha pehle kabhi teri inn bachkani harkaton par na gussa aata tha par abb vohi harkatan miss krta hoo....... Tujhe dur bhejna tha par tu toh dil main aisi chipaak gayi hai ki koii aur dikhta hi nahi............. Tune hi kaha na apni khushi dekhu toh abb dekh li tujhe chun bhi liya............ Aur yeh sab iss liye nahi kar raha hu kii tu bhabhi ke liye yeh sab kar rahi hai iss liye krr raha hu kyon kii tere bina na yarr zindagi boring ho gayi hai bhut jyada vo disha toh bhut pakati hai yarr......... Mujhe sirf tu hi sambhal sakti hain................aur mujhe yeh saza manjoor hai agar tu mere saath rahegi na toh manzoor hai....."

Raavi looked at him she first got startled and than registered his words and said holding his hand more tightly,

"Shiva........... Agar pasand krta tha toh bola kio nahi gadheda hai tu ikk number ka.......... "

She starts hitting him with her tiny fist and started blabbering,

"Bhootnath, pagal, idiot pata hai main kitna daar gayi thi kii tu usss disha ke saath........... Aur kisne kaha main compromise krr rahi thi aur taras main tujh par taras kyon krungi tu itna bada chattan pandya tujhse taras kon khayega............tune khud ko kya samjh rakha hai tu pagal hai mujhse pucha kyon nahi kyon puch leta ikk baar bol toh deta gadhede........ Ikk baar baata deta toh baat itni agge badhti hi nahi........."

Shiva chuckled as he is on cloud nine on seeing his chipkali back and hold her hands to stop her and said

"Maar kyon rahi hai baas kar hospital main baithe hain"

she retorts

"Pehli baat hum log waiting room main baithe hai aur koii aas pass nahi hain............................"

Suddenly her expression changed and she enquired with threat in her voice,

"Ikk minute pasand aane laagi thi ka kya matlab............ Abhi nahi hu ache se bol bhootnath..............mujhe koii confusion nahi chahiye "

Shiva giggled on her antics as he was missing these from last few weeks and said,

"Vese chipakli tu hai par ajj na chipakne ka maan mera kar rha hai"

Shiva took her in embrace and she gave in happily they stayed like that fir few moments but than Shiva felt Raavi's tears he asked her and she replied,

"Shuva agar tu mujhe pasand krta tha toh kio bola sabke samne itna kuch kyu mujhe characterless kaha............ Tujhe mujh par trust nahi hai kyaa........... Maine kabhi bhi kisi aur kii taraf nahi dekha i swear.. "

Shiva knew he had to apologize for his deeds as whatever was the reason his accusation cannot be justified, he stroked her hair and said,

"Maine jo kuch bhi kaha tha na uss sab ka koii matlab nahi yha Raavi sach nein mujhe tujh par bharosa sa bhut jyada hai par gusse mein nikal gya vo sab......... Main janta hu tujhe tune toh shaadi hone ke baad kabhi dev ki taraf bhi nahi dekha toh main kaise tujh par vishwas na karu........ Tujhe pata hain na main gusse main hamesha kuch na kuch galat bol deta hu.......please maaf karde mujhe please"

Raavi looked at him still in hus embrace and said like a little child ,

"Maaf toh kr dungi par fir kabhi aisa mat bolna Shiva mujh na sach nein bhut bura lgga tha................ Aur ikk promise krr dono mil kar tere uss gusse ko tackle krenge...... "

Shiva felt blessed to have her and than he joined his forehead woth her and than Gaura came with the lawyer Shivi heard the doir opening and seperate, three of them smiled at them as they have witnessed their position they came and sat down and lawyer said,

"Ohk toh paper work complete ho chuka hai aur kal apke pass approved copy paunch jayegi"

Meanwhile doctor enters and sign the paper as the coordinator of the operatin and lawyer leaves than doctor speaks,

" yeh process normal cases ke comparisin mein kafi fast hain kio kii dhara ke paas jyada tym nahi hain iss liye legalities complete krea dii hai jaldi aur kal hum log transplant krr denge. Raavi yeh bhut jaldi hai normally ikk week tkk ka tym hota hai taki app apni body ko nourishment de sake par humare paas tym nahi hai jyada maine dhara ko bta diya hai kii apko inn kal tak main kya kya khilana hai kio kii yeh bhut jaroori hai, kal ka din app relax kre aur dhara tum bhi stress mat lena and fir kal sham milte hai app charo aajayega tym se apki appointment 5 vje ki fix ho gayi hai toh all the best"

Now four of them headed towards the home and Shivi was very much happy and at solace after these hectic weeks. But the tension was still there as they all have to inform the family about the surrogacy scenario they reached home.

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AT HOME

Suman was furious on 4 of them as they were out for the whole day without informing the proper reason. They came in and suman lashed on them,

"Kahan the charo sara din bina bataye chale gaye aur phone bhi nahi utha rahe ae gaumbi agar tu aur teri biwi mere shiva aur markundi gay ki sulah krwa rahe the toh main bata du mujhe nahi chahiye yeh ladki apne ghar main , Disha bhut achi hai vo mete Shiva ke saath achi lagegi, ae markundi gay sun le meri baat kan kholkar.. . .. "

Raavi who was cheered up after this long time her face fell again and she stepped back but Shiva held her hand tightly and assured her. Meanwhile gumbi cutted off suman and said,

"Maa meri baat sun ikk bari shanti se"

And gaumbi narrated whole issues in dhara's pregnancy. Suman calls dhara and said,

"Tu ghabra mat hum dekh lenge "

Gaumbi again started and told about the options given by the doctor and suman asks

"Tum dono ne kya kaha"

Gaumbi tells about their decision of accepting surrogacy. Rishita says

"Apne sahi kiya ajj kal surrogacy bhut safe hai aur bhabhi ke liye bhi better hai"

Gaumbi again starts and told about the clause of surrogacy and suman said,

"Phir kya karenge abb"

Gaumbi than called Shivi towards maa and told about Raavi's decidion everyone was stunned on this suman called both of them and they both sat on her level suman teared up and cupped Raavi's face and said,

"Tune yeh sab kiya itna kuch hone ke baad bhi maine tujhe kya kya nahi bola kya kya nahi kaha............ Mujhe maaf krde beta mujhe maaf krde"

Raavi stopped her from saying sorry and than suman added caressing her cheek and bringing shiva towards them and said.,

"Main yeh kehti rahi ki tu mere Shiva je layak nahi hai par main galat thi tu toh mere shiva jaisi hai sab kuch tyaag krne wali apno ke liye. Tu toh sach mein mere Shiva ki Gauri hai"

They both kept their head on her lap and tears of happiness, acceptance and contentment fell from their eyes.

Everyone their was on cloud nine as after a long period of darkness rays of hopes are brewing in the family but still stress about the transplantation was still their.

They all ate food and Raavi was fed well as instructed by doctor. Everyone retired to their rooms.

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IN SHIVI'S ROOM

Raavi was nervous going into the room as from the day she was back she has not slept in the room except the day she and shiva were caught underneath the bed. Now when they are not getting divorced they are in love which they are disguising as like only they gradually have to sleep in their room. She left the uneasy feeling and went in .As she went in Shiva hold her wrist moved closer to her and as she stepped back Shiva closed the door and caged raavi between him and door. He knew Raavi was uneasy and he wanted her to be back into her skin as she was before.

"Ae chipkali............ Tu kabse itna ghabrane lagi.............. Dareaza se qndar aane mein 10 minute lgga diye........... "

Raavi retorted,

"Main kyon ghabraungi aur kis se ghabraungi vo toh bas ............. "

"Kahi iss bhoothnath se daar toh nahi lag raha"

" Ae bhoothnath tu apne app ko samajhta kya hai main kyo darungi tujhse side ho chal"

Shiva looked direct in her eyes and said

"Acha nahi daarti "

"Nahi...."

"nahi ghabhrati........."

Saying this Shiva leaned closer to her Raavi fumbled

"Naaaa...... Hiiii....... "

Shiva's cheeks touched Raavi's And he whispered

"Pkka"

"Shiva.............. Tu......... "

Raavi closed her eyes and leaned in Shiva sensed her action and thought of mischief filled him so he whispered in

once more not before blowing air on ear making her Shiver and said

"Vaise disha kafi fast thi tujhse .......... Chipkali......"

Raavi who expected him to confess her to kiss her and he just poked her by that disha's name she furiosly pushed him and said,

"Vo fast thi........ "

Pushed him more

"Aur main chipkali........... "

Pushed him more and finally he fell on bed and Raavi crossed her both legs either side of him and speaks in anger

" Chipakti toh vo rehti.............Aur haa main darti hu haan main ghabrati hu........ Haan....... Bakwaas krta................ "

Shiva pulled her on him and she landed on him Raavi was irritated by his antics so she struggled to stand up blabbering,

"Mere paas kya kar raha ja na us ke paas.....fast thi...............uthne de mujhe............beasharm kahinki aur tu tu bhi.....pire mazze le raha tha......"

Shiva switched their positions and pinched her scrunched nose and said,

"Itna gussa...........iss chotti c naak par itna gussa"

"Ha toh tu irritate kyon krta hai"

Raavi spoke and Shiva replied with fake puppy eyes

"Maine kab irritate kiya"

"Tu... . .. . . Na side hatt mujhe. Na jane de.... . .. . "

Shiva than kissed her cheek and said,

"Majak kar raha tha main.............. "

Raavi spoke like a small stubborn child,

"Majak majak yeh majak hain......... Agar ajj ke baad na maine uss ladki ka naam tere muh se suna na toh gauri se kali kab ban jaungi na mujhe bhi nahi pata.... "

Shiva just chuckled and pulled her in a hug and slept in a comfortable position she reciprocated and rested her head on his chest and said,

"Shiva main tujhe na kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti jaise yeh sab mujhse nahi saha jata............"

Shiva said careesing her hair

"Maine kuch bhi apne maan se nahi kiya tha maa ke liye......... Ab jo ho gya na vo bhul ja kio kii abhi ki reality yeh hai kii tu meri bahoon mein meri marji se aur hum dono ki khushi se hai..... Toh chod yeh sab..... "

"Dekh Raavi tu kar payengi na yeh surrogacy ikk baar phir soch le kal hum log jayenge aur teri life completely badal jayegi..... Soch le"

Raavi replies honestly,

"Shiva mujhe yeh krna hoga Dhara dii ke liye Gaumbi ke liye vo log bhut tym se iss khushi ka intezaar krr rahe the bhut tym se.......... Unhone bhut taane bhi sune hai....... Hum log unke liye itna bhi nahi krr skte kya......... Aur tu mera support karega iss sab mein"

Raavi looks at him and Shiva kisses her forehead and nods,

"Fir main kr lungi kyunki Main bhi Mrs. Chattan pandya hu"

They both sleep in each other's embrace and after these pathetic days of separation they were with each other right in each other's arms making promises to support each other to love each other.

.. . .. . To BE CONTINUED

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Hey, guys this was from my side today.. . .. . Hope you all like it.. . .. . ..

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It was amazing❤❤

Loved how they sorted out the issue before the surrogacy😍❤

I am excited to read further💕💕

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was amazing❤❤

Loved how they sorted out the issue before the surrogacy😍❤

I am excited to read further💕💕

you always make me cry dear.......😭😭😭

it's lovely just wow💖😘

Beautiful story although I will never like the surrogacy track in show

The story and dialogues somewhere justifies the scenario still hope never even Chaubey's move to this direction🤔

Love Shivi finally they confess and together now😳

Originally posted by: virangna2005

you always make me cry dear.......😭😭😭

it's lovely just wow💖😘

Fabulous 👏

So glad they resolved their issues before the surrogacy

PART-III

Next morning Raavi wokes up first and sees one of the adorable sight she has ever witness Shiva was sleeping like a little baby hairs ruffled a little pout and his arms around Raavi not letting her go. Raavi just can't stop to adore him and than she ruffled his hair and placed a kiss on his cheek and leaves. She went to aangan where everyone was having chattering. She goes their and sit with the family. Than Shiva enters after a while when he enters krish says,

"Kal raat toh neend bhut achi aayi lagti hai, kio Shiva"

"Tu kyon puch raha hai... "

shiva says grumpily and krish retorts eith full mischief.

"Bas aise hi.... "

"Vese lag toh kuch aisa hi raha"

Rishita says joining Krish and they both hi fied. Shiva got confused and says,

"Kya bol rahe ho bhabhi app.... "

Than Rishita turns to Raavi and says nonchalantly

"Mera matlab Raavi tumhari lipstick ka color bhut hai.............. "

Raavi replies

"Thank you par maine toh lipstick nahi lagai abhi takk"

Rishit brings Raavi near Shiva and turns Shiva's cheek towards tge family and says,

"Lagai hai na shiva ki cheeks par"

Everyone giggled Shiva gets amused as well as shocked and embarrassed as he didn't know when did that happen and Raavi blushed hardly because she knew Shiva doesn't know about it and she runs towards the kitchen saying,

"Main chai lekar aati ho"

Shiva looked at her as he joined pieces that she must have kissed him in the morning when he was asleep before he could react Rishita says,

"Ja shiva chai ke saath nashta bhi le aana vi akeli kaise layegi......... Aur hum logon ko chai peene ki bilkul bhi jaldi nahi hai"

Shiva ruffles hhis hair and said while feeling blush creeping on his cheeks

"Kya bhabhi........ "

Rishita whispers in his ear and pushes him towards kitchen

"Abb jaa na varna tujhe yehi rok lungi aur phir nikalte rehna tym"

Shiva goes to kitchen and looks one of cutest thing which he have now come adore Raavi continosly murmuring something with nervousness, blush and embarrassed look altogether at one time on her face. Shiva goes near her and hugs her from behind. Raavi feels his warmth and sucks breathe than shiva comes near her ear and says,

"Mere soye hua hone ka fayda uthaya ja raha hai......... "

"Vo....... "

Raavi stammers and Shiva spokes huskily and than changes his tone to teasy manner

"Main toh tujhe vaise hi bolta hu tu toh sach mein hi......chipkali nikli..."

Raavi turns around still in his embrace

"Aisa kuch nahi hai vo toh tu bhut cute lag raha tha iss.......... Liye.. Kiss........ "

Raavi stopped in between as she relised what she said and her cheeks heated up Shiva gave her a smirk and said,

"Kya bola tune............... "

Raavi pushed him outside tge kitchen,

"Kuch nahi tu na jaa yaha se mujhe na bhut kaam chal nikal..... "

Shiva went out murmurring,

"Vese toh sote hua chipakti rehti hai abb dhakel rahi hai, tujhe toh main baad mein batata hoon"

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DURING BREAKFAST,

Everyone fed Raavi and Dhara propely as it was good for them. Suman said,

"Ajj kab ja rahe ho tum log fir.... "

"5 vje.....Maa " Gaumbi said

Shiva looked at Raavi he knew she was nervous and a bit scared to but her love for the family is making her do that he was constantly asking her about her surety but her reason always make him emotional he knew that from the evening everything would change the few hours which they spent are were very peaceful but now she would become a surrogate and they won't be able to get alone time as family will keep wandering around Raavi but the thing which scares him was how would she cope up.

Meanwhile Raavi looked at shiva and gave him assirance by blinking his eyes but she knew that deep wothin he is stressed for her, even she can't also lie that she wasn't stressed as she was also worried about it but can't show anyone as it's her own decision and she doesn't want to back out at any cost.

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IN HOSPITAL,

dhara was in the OT as the embryo has to be removed from her body first all three out were pacing here and there. Than the doctor came out after an hour,

" surgery successful hai abhi humne Dhara ko room mein shift kiya hai weakness hogi kafi but theek ho jayegi thoda rest krne ke baad aur abhi humne embryo ko safely rakha hai Aur raavi app ready ho jaiye kio kii hum jaldi hi transplant shuru krr denge app se koii ikk Raavi ke saath OT mein aa sakta hai aur Dhara ka room no. 270 app log unke pass ja sakte hai.Raavi tum bui ja sakti ho main bhi kuch tym mein tumhe bula lungi. "

They all went to Dhara and looked at her she looked so exhausted and pale gaumbi went near her and said,

"Dhara...... Tu thik hai na doctor ne kaha hai weakness ho gi par therk ho jayegi"

Dhara nods and calls Raavi to her and cries,

"Raavi hum log kabhi tujhe utna maan nahi de paye jitna tujhe milna chahiye tha tu jo bhi krti ja rahi hai sab kuch bina kuch swarth ke krr rahi hai agar koii bhi teri jagah hota toh kabhi na krta..........humein maaf karde..........humare liye tu kuch bhi kar sakti hain.......tujhe toh sirf pyaar chahiye tha aur hum toh tujhe vo bhi nahi de sake ho sake toh maaf krr dena..........tera apmaan kiya tujhe taane diye aur tu sunti rahi........mere liye apne aatm saman ko chod krr aa gayi vapas aur mere hi liye itna bada kadam uthane ja rahi hai..........main janti hu mujhe bhut der ho gayi hai par i am sorry.............."

Raavi wipes her tears and said proudly,

"App kya keh rahe ho dhara dii apne mujhe kuch nahi diya apne ,meri jindagi main shiva ko likh diya iss se jyada mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye........... "

Raavi was about to say something but doctor came in and calls her,

"Raavi mere saath aa jao.... "

Raavi nods and Shiva follows her as he have to be in the OT with her.

After and an hour or so the surgery was completed Raavi was also tired due to the process she was shifted to the room medicines and prescription for her were given. The doctor called 3 of them to her cabin and they went Raavi was resting due to sedatives given to her so she was on the bed first given to Dhara, now dhara was fine, the doctor continued,

"Congrats the transplant is successful, Dhara app ko weakness feel ho rahi ho gi but don't panic apko 1 week tkk ki medicine di hai app theek ho jayengi..............

Raavi abhi rest kar rahi hai but main apko bhut important batein kehne ja rahi hu, Raavi ki body ko jyada tym nahi mila hai i mean 2 din mein sara process ho gya iss liye uski body ko adapt hone mein lagega aur extra measures lene padege, maine medicine likhi hai unhe uss according without fail dijiye aur mera paas 2 hafte baad ayega.. . .. . .. Aur haa Raavi ko sweating, anxiety ho sakti hai iss liye appko uski care krni hogi.. . .. . .. . .. . .. .Okay than best of luck and if you find anything wrong mujhe immediately inform kar dijiyega "

They all went to Raavi resting they went and she opened her eyes, Gaumbi and Dhara thnaked her and promised to keep her safe and healthy Raavi gestured Shiva to come near he does the same seeing them both Gaura left for home telling them to take cab and come and than Raavi spoke,

"Shiva... . . "

Shiva hold her hand and made her sit and said,

"Daar lag raha hai.. . .. . .. . . "

"Shiva main kr lungi na.. . .. . .. . .main Dhara dii aur gaumbi je samne nahi bol sakti par mujhe sach mein nervousness ho rahi hai "

"Raavi main hoon tere saath............. puri koshish krenge tu akeli nahi hai"

Raavi hugs him and he pats her head gently. Than they leave for their home.

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AFTER TWO WEEKS,

Everything was going on normally Doctor have assired that health of child is really good and now was the time to tell Maami and Maama everyone was afraid about how would they react. One day suman called everyone and told them to indorm maami about the sureogacy and the divorce cancellation. Dhara called maami and she arrived in no time maami entered and said,

"Kya hua Dhara Raavi kahan gai vo theek toh hai tune mujhe aise bulaya"

"Maami app baitheya na app se baat karni thi.. . .. . .. . .. . "

"Ha bol na.. . .. Bhai"

Than Dhara told maami everything maami was hell angry and she saidto suman,

"Ae suman ben apne meri bachi ko ikk mauka nahi choda taane marne ka aree uski jindagi app logon ne kharab kardi aur phir bhi usne apple liye itna bada faisla liya.. . .. . .. . .. . .. Aree vo toh dobi hai jisse pyaar karti hai sab kuch de deti hai par.. . Aur logon ne bhi uska fayda utha liya........Dhara tu bhi tujhe toh vo apni saggi bhen maanti thi tune bhi uska fayda uthaya.. . . Mujhe Raavi se baat karni hai.. . .. Kahan hai vo.. . . "

She moved towards Raavi's room to scold her to tell her to choose her happiness and move away from the family who is making her sorrowful but she saw a sight which just made her adore that and that was Raavi was sleeping while keeping her head on shiva's lap and shiva was caressing her hair and talking to her.

Prafulla stood their and tears flowed from her eyes as after a long tume she has seen Raavi this peaceful though the reason of her happiness was her soul enemy Shiva but her daughter was happy, dhara cane near her and took her, dhara was so suprised to see maami crying so was suman, suman asked her,

"Ae kagdi tu kyon ro rahi hai abhi toh aise gayi thi kii Raavi ko daant kar hi aayegi"

Prafulla's tears flowing continuously and than Dhara asked,

"Kya hua maami maine dekha app Raavi aur shiva ko dekhkar aise rone kyon lggi"

"Jab Raavi iss duniya mein aane wali thi na tab uske pita bhi meri bhen ko aise hi apni god mein sula lete the..... Aise hi baal sahelate the............... Ajj inn dono ko dekhkar mujhe unn dono ki yaad aa gayi......... Agar vo dono Raavi ko aise dekhte na bhut khush hote... "

Suman and dhara also got teary eyed as the maami who just know how to spew venom is now crying cause of Raavi got her happiness no doubt she is really a good mother. Shivi arrived hearing the Commotion and saw prafulla, Dhara and suman crying. They both panicked and asked them about what happened when prafulla gestured Shiva to come near her. Raavi looked at Shiva and shiva went near prafulla, and she spoke

"Meri beti ki jindagi mein bhut der baad khushiyaan aayi hai uska khayal rakhna.... "

Shiva noded and prafulla hold Raavi's hand and put it in his and gave them blessings and said,

"Pehle mujhe acha nahi lgga tha ki tune itna bada faisla liya aur mujhe nahi bataya par abb lagta hai shayad tune jo bhi kiya hai vo sahi hi kiya hoga........ Khush raho"

Everyone got tears and Raavi hugged prafulla and than she said in her usual tone,

"Ae shiva, iska matlab yeh nahi hai kii tu mujhe pasand hai tu abhi bhi vohi shiva hai.... "

Everyone laughed.

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