HUMARI SHAADI MEIN - SHIVI OS PART7- PG8 UPDATED - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Want to know what is the reason....... Update it soon🥰😍

don't worry It's gonna be heart touching.......you surely like it😘😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: virangna2005

hey guys......here is the 5th part.......read and review...........it is very light hearted.....gonna help you to over come the crap shown by makers........🤗🤗

PART 5

Raavi sat on a bench. The park was not empty. There stood two boys who staring at raavi. She observed this and felt uncomfortable. Shiva was also somewhat far. The two guys started coming near to her which made raavi more uncomfortable. She got up and rushed to the entrance of the park when one of the boys held her dupatta and said inteasing voice, “laal dupatta wali tera naam toh bata……” and laughed as they tightly pulled her dupatta. Her eyes ran towards the ice parlour. Her heart sank as she didn’t found shiva there.She got more afraid. She was trembling, when she felt the hold on her dupatta was losing. She turned around to find shiva holding the hand of that guy and giving death glares. Shiva freed raavi’s dupatta from hands of that guy. He signed raavi to take steps back. After what happened was familiar to raavi.Shiva started beating the boys in the way that he would kill them today.Raavi tried stop him but he is not in mood to hear anything. Raavi still tries to stop him and this process shiva unintentionally pushed her. As soon as shiva sensed that what he has done, he rushed to raavi leaving the boys who ran away very next second. Shiva reached raavi and lifted her up.

Sh: (checking her) sorry raavi……maine galti se………jaan buch ke nhi kiya…..sach me….so-

Ra: (keeping her finger on his lips) shhhh……..tujhe mujhe safai deni ki koi jaroorat nhi hai……..main jaanti hu ki tu mujhe galti se bhi hurt nhi kar sakta………I trust you……..and I love you

They shared a warm hug after this.

Sh: (angrily) aaj main unn dono ki jaan le leta……….

Ra: (tightening her grip)shaant ho ja mere bhaalu…………

Shiva smiles thinking that she is the only one who can calm the rage inside him. She is the one and she will be the one.

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kaatun kaise raatan oh saware? Jiya nhi jaata sun baawre……” krish kept repeating these lines in front of shiva since morning when shiva by mistake blurt out that he went to meet raavi last night. Shiva was cursing himself for doing so. And whole family was not confused at krish’s behaviour as they knew that he was little crack.

Shiva was eating his breakfast when he heard “dhara diiiiii…….”. he knew it’s raavi but the way she said this took him 7 months back, before their marriage. This was the same charm, same intensity, same feel. He loved that that he got his chubuli maami ki behn ki beti back.

As soon as raavi entered the hall she ran up to dhara, took the tray of tea, which she was holding, and ordered her to sit down. Dhara being an obedient sister-in-law sat. shiva chuckled at this. raavi was serving the tea to everyone when rishita came with the breakfast. Rishita complained raavi that dhara is not listening to her and doing the chores. Raavi rightly scolds dhara for her carelessness. Rishita too join her. Shiva, gaumbi and dev, who were observing this quietly, were very happy to see the friendly, sisterhood bond b/w them.

after sometime, shiva got opportunity and dragged raavi to a silent corner.

Ra: (nervously) shiva….kya kar raha hai?..........koi dekh lega……

Sh: (stepping closer)toh……dekh lene de…….kisi aur ke saath nhi hu kya…….apni hone wali biwi ya kaho ho chuki biwi ke saath hu……….

Ra: (shyly) shiva….tu bhi na…

As shiva came closer to her, she closed her eyes and turned her face. Shiva looked around, took her hand in his and kissed. Raavi eyes widen at this. Shiva ‘chattan’ pandya was being romantic. Oh my god. Raavi was registering his hand kiss when shiva suddenly placed a kiss on her cheeks. She was happily shocked. She was giving him wide smile when he said “shaam ko saat baje……ready rehna…..hum dinner pe ja rahe hai……..” . as he said this he left for store leaving her smiling at him.

Clock showed 7 pm. Raavi was waiting for shiva. today, they were going on dinner. He said that he would pick her up sharp at 7 but he was not there. It was 7:15 now. Shiva never got late. Raavi picks her phone to call him to find a message from shiva which read‘sorry raavi…….aaj dinner pe nhi ja paunga….kaam me phas gya hu…….sorry’. raavi got worried. Not because he cancelled the lunch but because of the way he told her. He neither used chipkali,nor his usual words. Don’t know why, but she was feeling restless.

Raavi quietly sneaked out of the house with anita’s help. It was the closing time of pandya store. She rushed there. She found half shutter down and lights opened. She went inside the store without making any noise. She saw shiva arranging things at the self.She quietly went near him and hugged him from back. He sensed that it was her but he didn’t utter a word.

Ra: (without breaking the hug) tune kaha bahut kaam hai toh maine socha ki teri help kar du aake……….par lagata hai ki saara kaam khatam ho gya………(making him turn towards her) koi baat nhi tho-

Raavi stopped as soon as she saw him. his eyes were red and wet. Raavi’s heartbeat stopped for a second.Her eyes by default fell on his palm which was fully covered with blood. She checked his hand and found glass piece stuck there. she got terrified. what on the earth happened to him?

Ra: (worriedly) shiva…….ye kya kar liya?......kitna khoon beh raha hai?.......tu ne ye-

Before she could complete,he hugged her tightly.


so here I end this part.....hope you guys liked.......do give suggestions for upcoming🤗🤗

Totally enjoying your story..Thanks for such beautiful stories.💓💓💓💓💓 After the show ..I am getting peace reading these.. please please update soon
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Megha474

Totally enjoying your story..Thanks for such beautiful stories.💓💓💓💓💓 After the show ..I am getting peace reading these.. please please update soon


thank you so much dear....😘😘

surelly will update soon🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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hey guys........here is the next part..........ignore the typos..........do review and suggest ............do point out the minus point too🤗🤗

PART 6

Ra: (worriedly) shiva…….ye kya kar liya?......kitna khoon beh raha hai?.......tu ne ye-

Before she could complete, he hugged her tightly. Raavi heart was sinking more and more every second. She felt shiva’s tears on her shoulders.

Ra: (caressing his back)shiva kya hua?.........tu aise ro raha hai?..........aur ye haath me chot…………..kya hua hai shiva?.....sab thik toh hai?…

Sh: (sobbing) raavi main tujhse bahut pyaar karta hu………aur tere khilaaf ek sabd bhi bardaas nhi hota………pann mere hi wajha se…….I am sorry raavi…I am sorry

Ra: (confused)………shiva(broke the hug and wiped his tears) shaant ho ja……..ab, sahi se bata kya hua?...........

FLASHBACK

Shiva was walking down tothe street of market when he heard two ladies talking.

Lady 1: aree bhen, tumne sunna shiva raavi ki dobara shaadi ho rahi hai……..

Lady2: hn……suna hai ek dusre se pyaar karte hai…………ajeeb hai inka bhi……kal tak kutte billi ke tarha ladte the, talaq le rahe the…… aur aaj pyaar ho gya…..wah

Lady1: bechara shiva toh bhola hai……..raavi hi ladko pe dore daalti hogi…..kaha toh tha shiva ne……. parr phir bhi raavi ne use phasa liya…

Lady2: chant hoti hai aise ladkiya……….kya pata ki kuch dino me shiva ko chodke chalti bane………..

FLASHBACK ENDS

Shiva hit his injured hand on the counter again. Raavi tried to stop by holding his hand.

Sh: (freeing his hand) nhi raavi……dene de mujhe khud ko saza…….(choking)main hu nhi tere pyaar, teri fikr ke laayak……..gusse me aake kya kya nhi bola tujhe………meri ek bebkoofi ne-

Shiva stopped mid sentence when raavi hugged her from behind.

Ra: (consoling him)shhhh……shant shiva……..(turning him) shiva mujhe fark nhi padta ki koi mere baare me kya sochta hai…..mujhe bas iss baata se fark padta haiki tere dil me mere kya……aur main jaanti hu ki issme mere liye sirf aur sirf pyaar hai, koi shakk nhi hai……..toh phir koi kuch bhi bole hume kya lena dena……..

Sh: pann raavi-

Ra: (cutting him) par var kuch nhi………..main jaanti hu shiva jo bhi tune kiya ya kaha kyun tha………. tujhe iske liye koi safai dene ki ya maafi mangne ki koi jaroorat nhi hai……….tune bahut baar sorry bol liya………ab nhi…………….aur khabardaar agr aaj ke baad ye kaha ki tu mere pyaar ke laayak nhi hai……agr tu mere pyaar ke layak nhi hai toh koi bhi nhi hai……kabhi khud mere nazar se dekh shiva, tab tujhe samjh aayega tu kya hai…………

Shiva smiled at his big-hearted wife. If any other girl was there, she would never forgive him for his deeds. He felt blessed he was getting this innocent girl in his life.

Raavi brought the first aid box and dressed his wound. Raavi scolded him for this. She says the he hurts her when he hurts himself. Shiva promised her that he won’t repeat it. They both hugged each other and thanked god for this precious gift.

Shiva’s next morning started with video call of raavi and talking with her at least an hour. By the time of breakfast, raavi stood in pandya niwas to help dhara. After breakfast and spending some quality time with raavi, shiva left for work. In every 2 hrs, they either called or texted each other. Then after returning home, shiva dropped raavi back at maami’s place. And their day ended with a chat or call.This become the usual habit for both of them now. All this made them felt as if they were getting married for the first time and it was a love marriage with family’s consent. These days were the happiest one in the whole life. Thoughts and dreams of their future with each other was making them overwhelmed. Whole family was overwhelmed. They were happy to see their kids this happy. All wished to god ‘kisi ki nazar na lage.

One day raavi asked shiva to accompany her to the temple to which shiva happily agreed. They both went to the temple. They both preformed the puja and prayed for their happy life ahead.They remembered the day when they grew apart at the same place. Their eyes filled up as they recalled that day. Shiva held her hand and looked at her as if he was saying ‘vo din kabhi wapis nhiaayega……hum phir kabhi durr nhi honge…..’.raavi too assured him with her eyes. After the puja, they distributed they offerings among the needy who blessed them saying ‘humesha khush raho……..tumhari Jodi salaamat rahe’. Raavi and shiva thanked them with their beaming smile.

After completing puja, Shiva-raavi were about to leave when one of shiva’s friend met them. Firstly, he congratulate them for their wedding. He says that he never thought that shiva-raavi will fall for each other but destiny plays well. Actually, he wanted to talk with shiva in personal. So, Shiva went with friend and asked raavi to wait for him there only.

Raavi was waiting for shiva when sneha and her other friends arrived.


so here I end this part......hope you guys liked it...........I am writing the story in such a way that it makes justice to the show...........do review guys............and thanks for love you all showed till now🤗💖😘😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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UPDATE IT SOON PLEASE

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I’m loving this! Very cute!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suparna2210

I’m loving this! Very cute!

thank you so much🤗🤗

many more cute thinks to come...stay tuned

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Posted: 3 years ago
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still working on next part will try to update soon🤗🤗

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thank you dear💖💖🤗🤗

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hey guys here is the next part........hope you'll like it........do review....

PART 7

Raavi was waiting for shivawhen sneha and her other friends arrived. They all rushed to her whereas Raaviremembered the past and her got angry. Shiva told her everything happened onthat day. She was regretting for making such friends. They came to raavi andhugged her, but raavi didn’t hugged them back. This went unnoticed by them.

Sneha: (hugging raavi)raaviiii……kaisi hai tu?.........itne din hog aye tune baat hi nhi ki…………ussshiva ko maine do baatein kya boli tune toh baat karna band kr diya(raavi washell angry but didn’t say anything)…….(without raavi’s reaction) lekin acha huaki tujhe time rehte meri baat samjh aa gyi aur tune use divorce lene kadecision le liya……….

Rahul: hn, raavi………….ussetoh ye bhi nhi pata ki logo se kaise pesh aaya jaata hai………….

Shiva came back but stoppedat distance seeing raavi with her friends but raavi didn’t observed him. Shivanoticed the anger on her face. He was sure that raavi gonne burst today.

Sudheesh: vahi toh………vaisedivorce ho gya ya pending hai……….sayad pending hai……tune abhi bhi sindoor lagarakha hai…………aree hata de…….iski koi jarrorat nhi hai………….

The last thread of raavi’spatience collapsed at this.

Ra: (sarcastically) sahikaha……par hata ke bhi koi fayada nhi haina……kyunki kuch dino baad mujhe phir se yahi sindoor bharna hai……..

All got confused at herstatement. Shiva stood at a distance and chuckled at her sarcasm. She was indeed his chipkali. Won’t listen toanyone, once she get angry.

Ra: (sarcastically) areesamjhe nhi………..main phir se shaadi kar rahi hu ………….

Before raavi could tellthem that it was shiva, sneha hugeed her.

Sneha: oh raavi!!!! I am sohappy for you……….tu finally uss raaksash ko chod kar life me aage bad rahihai………..

Rahul: hn…..vo tere laayaknhi tha……….acha ye bata who that lucky one? Jiski kismat me tu likhi hai……….

Ra: (immediately) shiva……..

As raavi said, all theirface turned to shocked. shiva chuckled seeing this which caught raaviattention. Raavi came to him and dragged him upto her friends.

Ra: (widely smiling) yeraha shiva……..my would be husband……itne shock me kyun ho tum sab………news achinhi lagi……….lage na lage… I don’t care(taking a step forward towards herfriends)…………aur aise mat dekho…….shiva na bahut acha hai…..mujhe humesha khushrakhega……..(pointing towards sneha) tumhari tarha nhi ki kisi ko bina jaaneuski insult kare….(pointing towards Rahul and sudheesh) ya tumhari tarha nhi kikisi aur ki biwi ko bhaga ke le jaane ki baat kare……….aur haan, aana jarrorshaadi me……date aur venue card ke though bhej dungi okay.

Shiva was just looking ather smiling. His heart fluttered at the way she was taking stand for him. Raaviwas right now hell angry at her friends. Before her friends could say anythong,she held shiva’s hand and left.

Shiva was taking glance athis angry bird through the rear view mirror during the drive. He was smiling ather continuously which was making her more furious. Instead of going home,shiva took raavi to the park. She angrily went and set on the bench. Shivabrought two ice cream cup and went to her. She was still angry. He sat besideher, opened one cup of ice cream and forwarded a bite towards her mouth. Raavitturned her head in rejection.

Sh: (like a child) yeah kyabaat hui……….unka gussa mujh pe kyun nikal rahi hai……..dekh toh sahi terifavourite ice cream laaya hu…….ab toh gussa thuk de…….

Ra: (snatching the cup fromhis hand keeping it down) nhi khaani………..aur main unka gussa nhi nikal rahi hutujh pe…….tu vahan khade hoke sab sun raha tha lekin tu kuch nhi bola iss baatka gussa aa raha tha mujhe tujh pe………….(choking)kya nhi bola unhone tujhe partu khade khade hasta raha…………(turning her face in annoyance)

Sh: (hugging her frombehind) kya bolta main jab meri chikali bol rahi thi……mere liye khadi ho rahithi……..(turning her towards him) aree jab tu hai mere saath de rahi hai toh aurkya chaiye mujhe………..

Ra: (hugged him and startedcrying) sorry shiva……mere vo dost tujhe kya bolte hai……kaash maine unhe phelehi chup kara diya hota….. sab mere galti hai mere dost hi aise hai………

Sh: (patting her back)shhh…shaant ho ja……….teri koi galti nhi………aur yaad hai us din store me tune kyakaha tha……..hum dono ke mann me ek dusre ke liye kya hai vo matter kartahai….kisi aur ki baton se hume koi lena dena nhi hai………tere dost mere baare mekya sochte hai, mujhe koi fark nhi padta……agr tu mere baare aisa sochti tohbol……

Ra: (broke the hug andanswered quickly) nhi……bikul nhi…….tu jaisa hai mujhe vaise hi pasand hai…….votere baare me jaante hi kya hai….

Shiva smiled at her andhugged her back. Shiva took the cup and made raavi eat ice cream.

After spending some timetogether, shiva dropped raavi at her maasi’s place. Before leaving, raaviplaced a kiss on his cheek shocking him. She blushed and left. What shiva coulddo was blush and smile.

(after few day……….on arandom afternoon)

Kanta visited pandya niwasto meet suman. Raavi gave them tea and was about to leave the room when sheheard kanta saying something about her. She leaned to the door and heard their conversation.Kanta told suman that how people are making gossips about shiva and raavi’srelationship and how they are bad mouthing raavi. Kanta says that people evensaid that raavi is not worthy for shiva and falls for every second boy she met.Raavi felt bad. Though she didn’t show but it hurts. Suman was too hurt. Not because raavi isgoing to be her daughter in law but because whole somnaath kenw raavi sincechildhood still they are saying so.

Su: (smiling casually) unhebolne de jo bolna hai……..mujhe koi fark nhi padta…….jab main sachai jaanti hu,mera pariwaar sachai jaanta hai aur shiva sachai jaanta hai toh logo ki batonse kya lena………main jaanti hu ki raavi ka mann ganga jaisa pavitr hai……….koikhot nhi hai…….

Kanta: (smiling) hn…..jaaneanjaane me main bhi raavi ko bahut glt samjh liya……(suddenly rememberssomething) aree, tujhe pata hai ek din vo pichli gali ki hansa aur hetal haina…….jaane kya bol rahi thi raavi ke baare me…….main rokti isse phele shivavahan aa gya…….kya bhadka dono pe……vo toh ek sabd nhi sun sakta raavi kekhilaaf……….bahut pyaar karta hai raavi se………raavi kismat wali hai……….

Su: (proudly) heera haimera shiva, heera!!!.......jo raavi ki khushi ke liye use khd se durr kar saktahai vo kaise uske baare me kuch galt sun sakta hai……….aur kismet wali sirfraavi nhi, shiva bhi hai……….raavi jaise bade aur saaf dil ki ladki dunde se bhina mile……….itna kuch ho gya phir hum sab ko maaf kar diya………..

Raavi heard all this. Hereyes filled with tears of happiness and heart swelled up with pride. She knewthat shiva will never say that what he has done for her. He will alwayssecretly do everything for her as always. She was happy that suman was also inher support. She felt blessed getting shiva and this loving family in her life.

(same night)

Raavi was sitting on thebed surfing internet when she heard some sound from the balcony. She got alertand a bit scared at this. If felt someone is trying to invade the house. She tookher purse and started hitting the person badly.


will try update soon .........till then enjoy it guys.🤗🤗🤗

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