HUMARI SHAADI MEIN - SHIVI OS PART7- PG8 UPDATED

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Hey guys.......going to start a new story on shivi...........this will be about shivi remarrige after all misunderstandings are clarified and confession of feelings also done...........💖💖💖💖

want you guys to give suggestion about it...........do tell me that what do you expect from shivi's love marrige and what all can be done to make it better............👍👍👍👍



prt 1 is almost ready......gonna post it by tomorrow......stay tuned🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Hey guys here I am with the first part of HUMARI SHAADI MEIN.........as I said this will completely revolve around shivi's marrige all over again are confession........I am not going to give huge twists and turns here.......just some difficulty and a nuaghty romantic story............hope you guys like it....

PART 1

‘Kyunki main tujhse pyaar karta hu, raaviiiii!!!!!!!!!!!’ he shouted onthe top of his voice. She got stiffened at this.

FEW HOURS BACK

Shiva was unable to sleep and kept tossing on his mattress. Today suman fixed his and disha engagement date which was just the next day of his and raavi’s divorce date. He was crystal clear to disha. He told her everything to her and she too understood it. But the problem was she can’t back out because of her parents and she didn’t have any valid reason to do so but shiva had it.She was continuously saying him to confess but he was not sure. And today suddenly suman called the pandit and fixed the date. He picked up his phone and saw disha message which said ‘shiva please………isse phele aur derr ho jaye tum ye rishta tod do……..jitna late karoge utna hi humari family ko humiliation face karna parega……. I know ki raavi aur tumhare beech me bahut kuch hau….but I know that she loves you….uski aakhon me dikhta hai…….ek baar usse bata kar ke toh dekho…..’ He didn’t reply. He knew that he’ll have to stop this as soon as possible but how.

He was getting reastless. He need to see raavi to calm himself. He took a deep breath and went outside his room. He headed towards her cot but found it empty. His eyes ran to the door which was opened. This was enough to scare him.‘what the fudge!!!! Where was raavi this hour? Is she alright?’ his mind was occupied by these thoughts. He got was hell afraid after getting the thought of kidnapping. Then he searched for her phone and slipper. Both were not there. This is not kidnapping for sure. She went out willing. Shiva called her numerous times but she didn’t pick.

Raavi was sitting in the temple in front of the idol of lord shiva. She was scattered, she wanted it to let this frustration out. Shiva was calling her for last three hours but she kept her phone on silent as she didn’t want to talk to anyone especially shiva. What was there to talk? When he was not able to utter a word in front of suman kaki, then what he wants to say now? She kept sobbing and pouring her heart out in front of the idol. She complaint Him for all that was happening. She asked why He made the situation so miserable that she can neither see it nor can speak anything. She wants to tell him that she wants him for her entire life but what about the fact that he hates her and what about her self-respect? She never felt so helpless in her life.

She was crying with her head on her knees when she heard some one’s foot step sound. She lifted her head as she heard a familiar voice called her out.She turned to the source of the sound and found panting heavily. Anger and tension was evident on his face. He angrily came to her, held her hand and dragged her out of the temple. Raavi was not less angry.

Ra: (jerking his hand off) shiva chod mujhe………aur chala ja yahanse……..mujhse akela chood de……….

Sh: (held her by her shoulders) samjhti kya hai tu khudko?.............bin bataye itni raat ko ghar se baahar chali aayi, upar se phone tak nhi utha rahi……..akal kya bech di hai tune…….3 ghante se paagalo kitarah tujhe dhund rah ahu tujhe……pura somnaath chaan maara…….aur tu ek phone uthane me dikat ho rahi thi tujhe………pata hai kaise kaise khayaal aa rahe the dimag me……..kitna dar gya tha main, tujhe kuch-

Ra: (jerking off his arms again) kyu drr gya tha tu? meri chinta kab seho gyi tujhe?........tu jaa apni disha ke paas……tujhe kya fakr padta hai ki main kya feel kar rhi hu…..main jeeyu ya maru, tujhe kya fark padta hai aur kyun padega?..........

Sh: (at top of his voice) mujhe fark padta hai, KYUNKI MAIN TUJHSE PYAARKARTA HU RAAVI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Raavi got stiffened at this. ‘whatdid he just said? Did I hear it rightly? Or it is a dream?’ she thought and pinched herself to confirm. This was true. This was the happiest thing in herlife.

Shiva, who didn’t realise what he said, was now realizing it. This wasnot planned. He thought that he’ll apolozise her after the divorce but what hesaid, it was a reflex. He didn’t know how she’ll react but now he need to sayit otherwise he’ll die within. He looked into her eyes which were shocked at this. He brought her closer to him, held her tighter and again said in softvoice “raavi main tujhse pyaar karta hu, bahut bahut pyaar……… please mujhe maafkrde….maine jo kiya jaanke kiya kyunki mujhe laga ki mere saath khush nhi hai,compromise kar rhi hai……..main nhi jaanta ki tu kya sochti hai……..bas main itnajaanta hu ki main tujhe khush dekhna chahta tha……….tere character pe sawaaluthane ka koi iraada nhi tha, par jo tere dosto ne kaha uske baad mera gussasaatve aasman me tha……….maine ye sab plan kiya tha, ye divorce, ye insult sabkuch….. taaki tu mujhse nafrat kare aur jaake apni life jiye………main disha seengagement nhi kar raha hu….usse main ye baat bol bhi chukka hu….. main jaanta hu ki tu khush nhi hai meresaath, tu chahe toh ja sakti hai……..mujhe dil tot ne ka koi-”. He stopped asshe hugged him tightly, happy tears flowed down her cheeks and she said “I loveyou too shiva!!!! Main bhi tujhse bahut bahut pyaar karti hu………please kabhimujhe mat chodna, kabhi ye mat sochna ki main tere saath khush nhi hu, kabhiphir se ye stupid ideas mat lana apne dimag me………I love you shiva, I love somuch”. After listening her, he hugged her back. lord somnaath blessed them withheavy unseasonal rain.

They walked to the house in rain with hand in hand. Shiva told each andevery thing he thought and he did. Raavi got so angry at this. She was annoyedthat why didn’t tell her about his insecurities. Shiva knelt down in front ofher holding his ears and asked her for his forgiveness. He asked her to punishhim but not to leave him. she says that she’ll surely punish him and hispunishment is that he has to tolerate his chipkali for entire life. Shivachuckle at this and hugs her again after placing a kiss on her forehead.

They finally reached home after getting so wet. They rushed to theirroom and changed quickly. Raavi called shiva to have some tea so that theydon’t catch cold. They both sat on the swing and secretly took each other atglance. They spend two min in silence. Finally raavi took initiative to breakthe ice.

Ra: (sipping tea) gharwalo ko kab btana hai?(innocently ask)

Sh: (in naughty tone) meri aur disha ki shaadi ke baad……….

Ra: (slapping his shoulder) shivaaaa!!!!!!chida mat……….(she turned herface other side in annoyance)

Sh: (hugging her from back) kal……..rishita bhabhi ki birthday kebirthday party me……………(smiling)

Ra: (with slight sadness) aur disha?...........

Sh: (assuring her) usse sab pata hai…….usse main subh call karke sab btadunga……vo apne maa papa se baat kar legi………vo bahut understanding hai……..ussephel din se hi pata tha aur usne mujhe bol bhi diya tha…….main bhi gadheda thajo baat yahan tak pahunch gyi

Ra: (cupping his face) sab thik hoga shiva……tu tension mat le……..hmm?

He nodded in yes. They both headed to sleep. Shiva asks raavi to comewith him and sleep in the room. But raavi refuses giving the excuse of family.Shiva knew that she was making excuses but he also knew that it was just about some hours only. Raavi lied on her cot and shiva on the floor near the entrance of theroom. They looked each other without even blinking. They drifted to deep sleep.They slept so peacefully after so long. They were relaxed and happy after so long.


will continue soon............give your hopes from shivi's marrige, I'll try to cover them all................

PART2- PG2

Edited by virangna2005 - 3 years ago
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this was so awesome

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Interesting... Will wait for your next update love...

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thank you🤗🤗🤗🤗

upcoming will be better.......stay tuned🤗🤗🤗🤗

and do give suggestins for shivi's love marrige💖

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please give me some suggestion so that I can write better😊😊😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Interesting... Will wait for your next update love...


glad you liked it🤗🤗

I will try my level best to make it more interesting.......please give your suggestion so that I can make a better story😊😊😊😊

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thanks dear🤗🤗

do suggest something interesting for shivi's wedding so that this story turns to be better🤗🤗🤗

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guys here is the 2nd part......hope you'll like this too.......in my story all character are shown good except dev's in laws..........all type of reviews are welcomed..........🤗🤗🤗

PART 2

Next morning, shiva woke up with beaming smile on his face. This was morning of his new life. It was best morning he ever experienced not because of fragrance of flower or pure sunshine but because it was a morning that came his life after a long hurting night of 4 months. After 4 months they were together.He remembered one of his lines he said to his dhara Bhabhi- ‘kuch kissoon ke hissoon me subh nhi hoti…..’but his story wasn’t this type. Though it took long but sunshine came to his dark life.

So first day after confession, shouldn’t start with good morning kiss by the beloved one. He thought, he ran out of the room and rushed to towards the kitchen happily but found only dhara and rishita there. He entered the kitchen and wished rishita a very happy birthday. Both were already mad at shiva as he agreed for 2nd marriage. Shiva knew this and thought that tonight all their anger will be vanished. He looked here and there for raavi but didn’t found her. he went in the hall but didn’t found her. he was looking for her when krish came.

Kr: (who saw him searching for someone)………taak te rehte tujhko sanjh sawere….nanio me basiya jaise nain ye tere…(he went to shiva as he sang the song)

Sh: (slapping krish’s head)abee tansen ke number ek dushman……kyun mere Kanpur ki band bajane pe tula hai……….

Kr: (suspiciously) phele tu ye bata tu dhund kisko raha hai, hn???

Sh: (in reflex) vo main ra-……..rashita, I mean, rishita bhabhi ko dhund raha tha……..hn…….birthday wish karna tha na……..isliye………..(biting his tongue for mistake)

Ri: (heard shiva as she came with breakfast) par tumne toh mujhe wish kar diya na kitchen me……….dobara kyun?(In somewhat rough voice)

Sh: (got afraid) vo…..vo Bhabhi………main vo………ache se nhi kar payana………..toh isliye……..HAPPY BIRTHDAY BHABHI….(said as he gave her small side hug)

After this he left to avoid any awkward situation again. All of them looked shiva in amazement but krish was suspisious too. ‘ra-…….raavi. was he about to say raavi?’ he thought.

Shiva entered the room with annoyed expressions. ‘sab dikh gaye, pann jisse dekhna tha vo nhi dikhi……..yeh chipkali hai kahan??’. He picked up his phone and saw raavi’s message which says “so sorry shiva……..tujhse bina mile jaa rahi hu, but maasi maa ki tabiyat thik nhi thi isliye urgently mujhe aana pada…….I am so sorry..... I love you 💖”. He sighed in annoyance. First day relationship, how can she do it to him. he got ready for the store and left without having breakfast. Dhara and rishita were shocked at his behavior. ‘abhi toh itna khush tha abhi aise muh latka liya ’ they thought.

Elsewhere, raavi was hell annoyed at her maasi. How dare she lied her?she was absolutely fine, then why she called her. prafulla justifies it by saying that she want to spend some time with her and if she called her sweetly then she would never come. Prafulla emotionally blackmails her to spend some hours with her. prafulla kept raavi busy whole day and finally she got free when there was only an hour left for party. She knew that shiva would be hell angry at her. she thought she’ll get ready so beautifully that her bhoothnath will forget his anger.

It was time for celebration at pandya niwas. Family planned a surprise birthday party for rishita but krish spilled the beans in front of rishita last night. Everyone arrived. Disha and her parents also here. Disha told her parents about shiva and raavi’s patch up. Initialy they were angry but disha explained them and they agreed. Raavi came with anita and prafulla. Kirti was too invited. She was looking very beautiful. Shiva who was inspecting the decoration, got his eyes stuck on her for some minutes. ‘hey bhagwaan, itna sundar lagna zaroori hai kya.’ But as soon as he thought this, he remembered that he need to be angry. He turned away his eyes shocking raavi. She knew that he was annoyed and she knew how to pacify him.shiva headed towards kitchen and raavi followed without getting into anyone’s notice. She found shiva and hugged her from the back.

Ra: (pleading tone) sorry shiva…………main tujhe bata ken hi japaayi…….maasi ne achaanak se bula liya mujhe……..(shiva stood mute, raavi went in front of him and found his eyes teary)………kya hua shiva……..tere aankho me aasun kyun hai….kuch hua kya?......(worriedly)

Sh: (hugging her and in husky voice) raavi, tu aise mat kiya kar………phlehi itne time tak maine tujhe khud se itna durr rakha……..please tu mujhe aise chodke mat jaaya kar……..(tighten her hold)

Ra: (broke her and cupped his face) tu gadhera hai kya……..itni si baat………dekh main yhi hu……kahin nhi jaungi…….samjha?(wiping his tears)

They hugged each other more tightly. They broke apart when they heard loud sound of plate falling down. This was krish who just saw something really unexpected.

Kr: (shocked) ye tum…dono…dono ki sulha……kab….kaha…kaise…?...............(didn’t wait for their answer) yes toh rocking news hai……..abhi sabko batahu……….(ran to hall)

Shiva ran after him and raavi to followed. Shiva tried to stop him but krish so excited to listen.

Kr: (in front of whole family singing)jiska mujhe tha intezaar ………………..jis ke liye dil tha bekaar………….. vo ghadi aa gyi aa gyi……..

Shiva wanted to bang his head on the wall and raavi was also somewhat embarrassed.

Everyone was too confused at krish’s action. Krish is about blurt out everything but shiva stopped him.

Sh: (slapping krish’s head and came near him) abee tu rukk zara……… rang me bhang dalva lo………

Everyone was confused at this. Shiva stood in centre taking attention of all. Raavi came and stood beside disha and disha gave her assuring look

Sh: (serious expressions) mujhe aap sab ko kuch batana hai……….MAIN DISHA SE SHAADI NHI KARNA CHAHTA……..(pandyas shocked, disha and family normal)………isliye nhi ki disha achi nhi ya usme koi kami hai(as he headed towards raavi and disha)…………….balki isliye kyunki MAIN RAAVI SE PYAAR KARTA HU(looked at raavi then to disha who nodded her head in assurance)

Shiva held raavi’s hand and bought her to the centre. He announces his love for raavi to all. Disha’s parents were sad but they were very understanding at the same time. Shiva apologized disha and her parents for all this. Disha hugged both of them and forwarded them her hand of friendship. Shiva-raavi happily accepted this. Only one person was annoyed, suman. But shiva knew how to pacify her.

Sh: (stood in front of suman) maa, aashirwaad nhi degi………..

Su: (sadily) jab tune thaan hi liya hai……toh main kya bolu……….(making faces)tujhe aisi ladki se pyaar hai jisne tujhe beech baazar tappad mara…….tujhe chhota mehsoos karawaya………….jo hasti hai tere kapdo par….tujhse khud se kam sajhti hai…………(with teary eyes)

Sh: (holding her hand) maa aisa kuch nhi hai…….ye sab mere khayaal the……….aur rahi baat thappad ki vo main deserve karta tha…….maine raavi ke character pe sawaal uthaya……mujhe nhi lagta ki jo raavi ne kiya vo galt tha…………….

Shiva continued to explain raavi’s worth and her efforts. Finally shiva was able to convience suman that raavi is best for him and was not wrong to the extend she thought. Suman called raavi and hugged both of them. She asks raavi to keep her shiva happy and said shiva to treat properly like a wife. ‘wife’ as suman said an idea stirks her head. After suman, shiva-raavi had to pacify the second and last opponent of their relation, his maami and her maasi. She was looking away in another direction when raavi hugged her and said that is she was happy. Prafulla looked her in annoyance which raavi gave a pleading look. Prafulla melted. She hugged her back. Though, she hated shiva but for her daughter’s happiness she was ready to accept him also. She says shiva that no matter what their relation is, he need to keep raavi happy always. Shiva nodded his head in yes which shocked everyone. He was so calm to maami. Everyone knew that why was it.

So, it was time to cut the cake. Rishita cut the make and fed first bitto shivi and thanked them for making her birthday so memorable. She fed cake to everyone. Krish palyed music ‘neend churai meri’ and dragged devishita and shivi on the floor. Both pairsdanced happily. After a while gautum-anita and krish-kirti joined them. Dhara sitting on swing saw them. She was sad because she can’t dance as she was pregnant but she was happier to she shiva-raavi together. As shiva danced, hefound raavi somewhat sad, lost somewhere. He tried to ask but wasn’t able to doso because of loud music. Dance marked the end of party.

Shiva wanted to talk to raavi. After changing, he went to kitchen but she was not there. He looked around hall but she was not found. Shiva picked uphis phone and saw a message by raavi which reads ‘shiva, mujhe abhi aake mil, chat par’. He got amused why was shecalling up stairs. He hurriedly went up only to get shocked.

so here I conclude this...........do give suggestions for upcoming, will try to add them..........🤗🤗🤗

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thank you🤗🤗🤗

here is part 2......hope you'll like😊😊😊

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