guys here is the 2nd part......hope you'll like this too.......in my story all character are shown good except dev's in laws..........all type of reviews are welcomed..........🤗🤗🤗
PART 2
Next morning, shiva woke up with beaming smile on his face. This was morning of his new life. It was best morning he ever experienced not because of fragrance of flower or pure sunshine but because it was a morning that came his life after a long hurting night of 4 months. After 4 months they were together.He remembered one of his lines he said to his dhara Bhabhi- ‘kuch kissoon ke hissoon me subh nhi hoti…..’but his story wasn’t this type. Though it took long but sunshine came to his dark life.
So first day after confession, shouldn’t start with good morning kiss by the beloved one. He thought, he ran out of the room and rushed to towards the kitchen happily but found only dhara and rishita there. He entered the kitchen and wished rishita a very happy birthday. Both were already mad at shiva as he agreed for 2nd marriage. Shiva knew this and thought that tonight all their anger will be vanished. He looked here and there for raavi but didn’t found her. he went in the hall but didn’t found her. he was looking for her when krish came.
Kr: (who saw him searching for someone)………taak te rehte tujhko sanjh sawere….nanio me basiya jaise nain ye tere…(he went to shiva as he sang the song)
Sh: (slapping krish’s head)abee tansen ke number ek dushman……kyun mere Kanpur ki band bajane pe tula hai……….
Kr: (suspiciously) phele tu ye bata tu dhund kisko raha hai, hn???
Sh: (in reflex) vo main ra-……..rashita, I mean, rishita bhabhi ko dhund raha tha……..hn…….birthday wish karna tha na……..isliye………..(biting his tongue for mistake)
Ri: (heard shiva as she came with breakfast) par tumne toh mujhe wish kar diya na kitchen me……….dobara kyun?(In somewhat rough voice)
Sh: (got afraid) vo…..vo Bhabhi………main vo………ache se nhi kar payana………..toh isliye……..HAPPY BIRTHDAY BHABHI….(said as he gave her small side hug)
After this he left to avoid any awkward situation again. All of them looked shiva in amazement but krish was suspisious too. ‘ra-…….raavi. was he about to say raavi?’ he thought.
Shiva entered the room with annoyed expressions. ‘sab dikh gaye, pann jisse dekhna tha vo nhi dikhi……..yeh chipkali hai kahan??’. He picked up his phone and saw raavi’s message which says “so sorry shiva……..tujhse bina mile jaa rahi hu, but maasi maa ki tabiyat thik nhi thi isliye urgently mujhe aana pada…….I am so sorry..... I love you 💖”. He sighed in annoyance. First day relationship, how can she do it to him. he got ready for the store and left without having breakfast. Dhara and rishita were shocked at his behavior. ‘abhi toh itna khush tha abhi aise muh latka liya ’ they thought.
Elsewhere, raavi was hell annoyed at her maasi. How dare she lied her?she was absolutely fine, then why she called her. prafulla justifies it by saying that she want to spend some time with her and if she called her sweetly then she would never come. Prafulla emotionally blackmails her to spend some hours with her. prafulla kept raavi busy whole day and finally she got free when there was only an hour left for party. She knew that shiva would be hell angry at her. she thought she’ll get ready so beautifully that her bhoothnath will forget his anger.
It was time for celebration at pandya niwas. Family planned a surprise birthday party for rishita but krish spilled the beans in front of rishita last night. Everyone arrived. Disha and her parents also here. Disha told her parents about shiva and raavi’s patch up. Initialy they were angry but disha explained them and they agreed. Raavi came with anita and prafulla. Kirti was too invited. She was looking very beautiful. Shiva who was inspecting the decoration, got his eyes stuck on her for some minutes. ‘hey bhagwaan, itna sundar lagna zaroori hai kya.’ But as soon as he thought this, he remembered that he need to be angry. He turned away his eyes shocking raavi. She knew that he was annoyed and she knew how to pacify him.shiva headed towards kitchen and raavi followed without getting into anyone’s notice. She found shiva and hugged her from the back.
Ra: (pleading tone) sorry shiva…………main tujhe bata ken hi japaayi…….maasi ne achaanak se bula liya mujhe……..(shiva stood mute, raavi went in front of him and found his eyes teary)………kya hua shiva……..tere aankho me aasun kyun hai….kuch hua kya?......(worriedly)
Sh: (hugging her and in husky voice) raavi, tu aise mat kiya kar………phlehi itne time tak maine tujhe khud se itna durr rakha……..please tu mujhe aise chodke mat jaaya kar……..(tighten her hold)
Ra: (broke her and cupped his face) tu gadhera hai kya……..itni si baat………dekh main yhi hu……kahin nhi jaungi…….samjha?(wiping his tears)
They hugged each other more tightly. They broke apart when they heard loud sound of plate falling down. This was krish who just saw something really unexpected.
Kr: (shocked) ye tum…dono…dono ki sulha……kab….kaha…kaise…?...............(didn’t wait for their answer) yes toh rocking news hai……..abhi sabko batahu……….(ran to hall)
Shiva ran after him and raavi to followed. Shiva tried to stop him but krish so excited to listen.
Kr: (in front of whole family singing)jiska mujhe tha intezaar ………………..jis ke liye dil tha bekaar………….. vo ghadi aa gyi aa gyi……..
Shiva wanted to bang his head on the wall and raavi was also somewhat embarrassed.
Everyone was too confused at krish’s action. Krish is about blurt out everything but shiva stopped him.
Sh: (slapping krish’s head and came near him) abee tu rukk zara……… rang me bhang dalva lo………
Everyone was confused at this. Shiva stood in centre taking attention of all. Raavi came and stood beside disha and disha gave her assuring look
Sh: (serious expressions) mujhe aap sab ko kuch batana hai……….MAIN DISHA SE SHAADI NHI KARNA CHAHTA……..(pandyas shocked, disha and family normal)………isliye nhi ki disha achi nhi ya usme koi kami hai(as he headed towards raavi and disha)…………….balki isliye kyunki MAIN RAAVI SE PYAAR KARTA HU(looked at raavi then to disha who nodded her head in assurance)
Shiva held raavi’s hand and bought her to the centre. He announces his love for raavi to all. Disha’s parents were sad but they were very understanding at the same time. Shiva apologized disha and her parents for all this. Disha hugged both of them and forwarded them her hand of friendship. Shiva-raavi happily accepted this. Only one person was annoyed, suman. But shiva knew how to pacify her.
Sh: (stood in front of suman) maa, aashirwaad nhi degi………..
Su: (sadily) jab tune thaan hi liya hai……toh main kya bolu……….(making faces)tujhe aisi ladki se pyaar hai jisne tujhe beech baazar tappad mara…….tujhe chhota mehsoos karawaya………….jo hasti hai tere kapdo par….tujhse khud se kam sajhti hai…………(with teary eyes)
Sh: (holding her hand) maa aisa kuch nhi hai…….ye sab mere khayaal the……….aur rahi baat thappad ki vo main deserve karta tha…….maine raavi ke character pe sawaal uthaya……mujhe nhi lagta ki jo raavi ne kiya vo galt tha…………….
Shiva continued to explain raavi’s worth and her efforts. Finally shiva was able to convience suman that raavi is best for him and was not wrong to the extend she thought. Suman called raavi and hugged both of them. She asks raavi to keep her shiva happy and said shiva to treat properly like a wife. ‘wife’ as suman said an idea stirks her head. After suman, shiva-raavi had to pacify the second and last opponent of their relation, his maami and her maasi. She was looking away in another direction when raavi hugged her and said that is she was happy. Prafulla looked her in annoyance which raavi gave a pleading look. Prafulla melted. She hugged her back. Though, she hated shiva but for her daughter’s happiness she was ready to accept him also. She says shiva that no matter what their relation is, he need to keep raavi happy always. Shiva nodded his head in yes which shocked everyone. He was so calm to maami. Everyone knew that why was it.
So, it was time to cut the cake. Rishita cut the make and fed first bitto shivi and thanked them for making her birthday so memorable. She fed cake to everyone. Krish palyed music ‘neend churai meri’ and dragged devishita and shivi on the floor. Both pairsdanced happily. After a while gautum-anita and krish-kirti joined them. Dhara sitting on swing saw them. She was sad because she can’t dance as she was pregnant but she was happier to she shiva-raavi together. As shiva danced, hefound raavi somewhat sad, lost somewhere. He tried to ask but wasn’t able to doso because of loud music. Dance marked the end of party.
Shiva wanted to talk to raavi. After changing, he went to kitchen but she was not there. He looked around hall but she was not found. Shiva picked uphis phone and saw a message by raavi which reads ‘shiva, mujhe abhi aake mil, chat par’. He got amused why was shecalling up stairs. He hurriedly went up only to get shocked.
so here I conclude this...........do give suggestions for upcoming, will try to add them..........🤗🤗🤗
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Edited by virangna2005 - 3 years ago