HUMARI SHAADI MEIN - SHIVI OS PART7- PG8 UPDATED - Page 2

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hey guys here is the 3rd part............hope you'll like this one.........do review and suggest new idea too........

PART3

After reading raavi’s message, shiva hurriedly came up. He was pretty shocked. Raavi was not there and terrace was beautifully decorated with red and pink heart shaped balloons with a cards lying on table which read ‘sorry………. I love you’. He smiled at this. Suddenly, shiva got a jerk as raavi hugged him from back.

Sh: (softly and smiling) raavi…………(as brought her in front of him)ye surprise kis khu-

He paused as soon as he saw her eyes wet and head down. He got tensed.

Sh: (worriedly) raavi……… kya hua? Tu aise ro kyun rahi hai? Kisi ne kuch kaha kya?kya hua bolna, raavi?

Raavi again hugged him and cried harder. Shiva hugged her back. Shiva’s heart was sinking with each sob. His promise to himself was breaking. He promised himself that he would never let raavi cry. But raavi was crying on very first day. Raavi’s grip tighten on him.

Ra: (still crying) I am sorry shiva….. I am really really sorry……(she broke their hug and looked shiva who was looking at her in confusion) …….. I am sorry ki maine tujhe inferior feel karaya……. I sorry maine tujhe kabhi ye feelnhi karaya kit u mere liye kya hai………..tujhe humesha chhota feel karavaya……….tujhe humesha ye jataya ki main khush nhi hu…..humesha compromise aur adjustment ki baat ki……. Mujhe sirf apni takleef dikhayi di, tere dard ko main kyun nhi samjh pai………(caressing his cheek)Maine tujhe bahut hurt kiya hai na……… I am sorry shiva…… I am really rea-

She was stopped when shiva hugged her back. He held her tightly so that he can take all her pain.

Ra: shi…….

Sh: (holding her tightly) shhhh…….ekdum chup…..ye kya rona dhona lagarkha hai…….teri koi galti nhi thi raavi…..tujhe sorry bolne ki koi jaroorat nhihai……….(broke their hug, tugged her hairs and wiped her tears) aaj ke baad tu nhi royegi………jo hua usse ek bura sapna samjh ke bhul jaate hai……..aaj se humari life me sirf khushiyaan hongi……..samjhi?

Raavi gave him a beaming smile and he kissed her forehead. they sat onthe bench and just looked at the beautiful moon.

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NEXT DAY

Suman, prafulla, shiva and raavi are all set for puja in somnath temple.Suman decided to conduct it so for shiva-raavi’s future life. Shiva and raavi want to perform puja with whole family but Dhara had to go to doctor with gautum, rishita had to go to office for an important meeting, dev need to go Ahmedabad and krish had an important test in college. They left for temple.

As the day was auspicious one, there were many pujas scheduled. All four had to stand in long queues for hours. They finally completed puja and it tookmore than half of the day. It was 4 in the evening. Suman asked shiva to take raavi on a bike ride and come comfortably after spending some time.

Shiva and raavi went on a romantic bike ride. they went through the roads so somnaath. They enjoyed this. They loved spending time together. They really missed this in last 4months.

Shiva-raavi reached home around 7 and it was already dark. As they entered the house, they found it completely dark. They called their family butno one answered. Suddenly all the lights opened and everyone shouted‘surpriseeeeeeeeeeee’. Shiva –raavi took 2 second to adjust themselves in the light. To their amazement, whole house was decorated beautifully. All the memebers were dressed as if there was a big function at house. Shivi looked them with confused. Dhara and anita came to them and pointed towards a small board which was cobered with cloth. Rishita and disha removed the cloth and theboard read ‘SHIVA💖RAAVI………SHIVI KI SHAADI’. Shiva-raavi were happy and shocked at same time. It was their marriage, once again when everyone will be happy and especially they will be happy. Both of them were on ninth cloud.Krish told them that this was suman’s and prafulla’s idea. Shivi were amazed.They went to both of them and took blessing. Today for the first time, shiva hugged his maami. Prafulla was also happy as her daughter was happy. Shivi thanked their family for all this. Dhara says them that it’s their engagement today and asked them to get ready quickly. Raavi went to dhara’s room to get ready and rishita and disha helped her. raavi thanked disha for coming to which disha reply that friends are never thanked. Shiva got ready in his room remembering their marriage 7 months before. He thought that one should never say never.

Both shiva and raavi were ready. Raavi damn beautiful in pink-grey lehnga whereas shiva was not at all less in his grey sherwaani. Shiva just couldn’t take his eyes off raavi. She was looking like angel. He remembered the time when he said ‘tera pari banna mushkil hai…tera chudail banna confirm hai……’ and smirks. Raavi also just stared shiva as if she was seeing him for last time. Krish and disha came to shiva and raavi respectively and snapped their fingers to bring them back to reality. Shiva and raavi looked awkward after this which made them laugh.

Now this was the time to exchange the rings. Dhara gave shiva the ring and asked him to make raavi wear it. As soon as shiva was about to put the ring krish intruppted.

Kr: (with high voice) aree ek min……….(came to shivi) kya shiva…….ab toh teri shaadi pure mann se ho rahi hai…toh thoda sa romantic gesture toh dikhana…...(shivi looked at him with confusion)……aree mera matlab ki ghutne pe baith kar puch ki ‘raavi, will you marry me?’phir jab bhabhi hn bole toh unhe ring pehna kar I LOVE YOU bol.

Everyone looked krish with amazement. Now family was divided into twoteam. First team, which have rishita, suman, disha, gautum and krish, said that shiva can be romantic whereas second team which have dev, dhara, prafulla andanita in it, who wanted shiva to do this but said that he is not so romantic.Raavi knew that shiva need to be challenged for this.

Ra: (pretending to be normal) kya bol raha hai krish?.........shiva aur romantic…..durr durr tak koi lena dena nhi hai……………tu bhi kya baat leke aa jata hai………….chhod…….tu bhi na, kuch bhi bolta-

Raavi stopped in middle of sentence when she saw shiva kneeling down.She was happily shocked. Everyone hooted and clapped.

Sh: (holding raavi’s hand) raavi, aaj tak tujhse bahut lada……par ab tujhe utna hi khush rakhna chahta hu………raavi teri life ka sab se bada sawaal puchne ja raha hu………..RAAVI, WILL YOU MARRY ME ONCE AGAIN?

Everyone hooted and asked raavi to reply.

Ra: (with happy tears) yes………. I will………….

Everyone clapped and shiva slipped the ring into her hand. Shiva stood up and hugged raavi. Now, it was raavi’s turn. Prafulla gave raavi the ring. Shiva forwarded his hand to her to find raavi sitting down on her knees in front ofhim.

Ra: (putting ring in front of him) mr.shiva pandya, will you love to spend your entire life with your and only yours chipakli?..........

Shiva was so happy to see that she fully accepted him. he lifted her up and nodded his head in yes. Everyone hooted and clapped. Shivi took blessing of elders and wishes of other family members. Everyone was very happy for them.

This was time for dance. First dance should be by the couple on a romantic number says rishita and all agrees to her. Krish played 'SAJDE' song and dragged shivi to the center.

sajde kiye hai laakhon, laakhon duae maangi, paaya hai manie phir tujhe.......

Chahat ki teri maine, Haqq mein hawayein maangi, Paya hai maine phir tujhe

shiva-raavi set he stage on fire with their romantic performance. as they danced, they got lost in each other. looking into each other's eyes, they forgot the world. they were so lost that they didn't even observe that the song was over. they came back to reality when they heard the family members clapping. now it was time for group dance. everyone decide to do garba this time, so krish played 'dholi taaro dhol baaje'. everyone shacked leg except dhara. suman was too strict on her. she had many dreams for shiva's wedding but last time situation was not supportive and this time her health. she couldn't help this but just pouted.

Dance marked the end of the function and now it was time to chat. Everyone were recalling shivi’s childhood fight and krish teased shiva by saying, “gaumbi, aapko yaad hai ki ladka tha jo kehta tha ‘pyaar….uss maami ki behn ki betise……impossible……….mera naam shiva…….mujhe pighlana aasaan nhi’ ………….kaun tha vo insaan” to which he earned a slight slap on head by shiva.

As they continue, dhara interrupted.

Dh: raavi, tu apna saaman pack karle……hmm?

Ra: (in amazement) kyun di?...........hum kahin jaa rahe hai kya?

Pr: aree……tujhe mere saath ghar chalna hai wapis, isliye…………(verycasually)

Shivi together: (high voice with shocked faces) NHIIIIIIII…………


so ending this part here only...........will try to update it as soon as possible🤗🤗🤗

Part 4 page 4

Edited by virangna2005 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pliz update next part soon

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Love it!! Loved the confession in the temple and reveal to the family! The only part that bothers me was Durdasha in their life. But that's my problem as I just don't like her in the show as she comes off as creepy.


Raavi's another heartfelt apology for not making him feel secured was also❤️. And the wedding. Can't wait to see all the rituals again and Shivi remembering/acknowledging how they have completed each Shaadi rasam.


Look forward to the next part!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Love it!! Loved the confession in the temple and reveal to the family! The only part that bothers me was Durdasha in their life. But that's my problem as I just don't like her in the show as she comes off as creepy.


Raavi's another heartfelt apology for not making him feel secured was also❤️. And the wedding. Can't wait to see all the rituals again and Shivi remembering/acknowledging how they have completed each Shaadi rasam.


Look forward to the next part!

so glad you liked it...........💖💖

actually I taken everyone positive here whether it's maami, anita or disha.......negatives are janardan and kamini.........😅😅

disha character shown by makers is really too creepy......I don't why but from starting I wanted disha's character to be helpful towards shivi....but makers didn't show that so I decided to make her good here......😁😁

stay tuned.......I'll try my level best to make it light hearted with some twists(mainly in ending).....

this week I'll try to update 3 part if possible.....you'll be relieved from the crap shown by makers 😅😅

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so here is the 4th part........hope you guys like this one............made it very light hearted.........

PART 4

Dh: raavi, tu apna saaman pack karle……hmm?

Ra: (in amazement) kyun di?...........hum kahin jaa rahe hai kya?

Pr: aree……tujhe mere saath ghar chalna hai wapis, isliye…………(very casually)

Shivi together: (high voice with shocked faces) NHIIIIIIII………

Shivi looked around to find everyone looking at them and giggling.

Ra: (in awkwardness) mera matlab ki……main nhi ja sakti na….dhara di….dhara di ko aise akela chod ke….nhi jaa sakti……

Sh: (added to raavi) hn….hn, kaise jaayegi raavi……Bhabhi ke saath koi hona chahiye na…….

Everyone laugh out loud. All of them knew the real meaning of their saying.

Dh: (naughtily) aree kya raavi……tujhe kya lagta hai ki main apni health ka khayaal nhi rakh sakti?............4 hafto ki hi toh baat…..phir shaadi karke wapis yahin aana hai…………

Shivi shocked. ‘4 weeks, you mean 28 days, that is 672 hr……….nooooooo……’ they thought.

Kr: (laughing like anything) aree bahbhi rehne do……..4 hafte……..aree inko dekh ke saaf pata chal raha hai ki 4 hafte toh kya 4ghate bhi ek dusre se durr na rahe…….

On this, krish earned a slap on head from dev.

Ra: (with genuine voice) dhara di, main aapko aise chod ke nhi ja sakti…..aur kya badi baat hai ki main yahan rahoon ya maasi ke……

Dh: (seriously) nhi raavi tujhe jaana hoga…..shaadi tak tujhe wahin rehna hoga………

Ra: par dhara di, main to-

Di: (cutting raavi) agr dhara di ka dhyaan rakhne ki hai toh mere paas solution hai…..shaadi tak tum roj aake dhara di help kar dena aur main bhi aajaungi agr jaroorat hui toh……and rishita bhi toh hai…….(naughtily) hn agr koi aur problem hai toh phir…………

They both looked at disha awkwardly making her giggle.

Ri: hn hn……main work from home ke liye apply kar dungi……….koi problem nhi hai(with naughty smile)………..

Suman and prafulla were final with their decision. No more arguments on this topic. Shiva-raavi reluctantly agreed. But they were sad.

Krish suggested everybody to play antaakchadi. Two team formed, first:shiva, raavi, dev, anita, dhara and suman & second: krish, rishita, disha, gautum and prafulla. Shivi were least interested in the game. They just thinking how will they spend these 4 weeks?Ahh! It was hard to live away when there were misunderstanding but it’s harder when they resolved them. They knew that they can’t help it but still.

All started the game. Each team got a letter and they sang a song. Now, it was krish’s team turn to sing a song with H. all of them thought, when krish’s eyes fell on shivi, who looked slightly sad. Suddenly, krish sang out loud, “HUMARI SHAADI MEIIIIIIIINNNNNN” looking towards shivi. Everyone hooted and krish continued with complete action to tease shivi, “humari shaadi meiinn…..abhi baaaki hai hafte chaar ……..chaar sau varsh lageeee ….ye hafte kaise honge paar……..nhi kar sakta main……..aur ek din bhi intezaar…… aaj hi pehna du-”. Krish stopped as shiva threw a cushion on him saying “tu phir bola”. Everyone laughed and shiva saw raavi with slight smile. She shyly smiled back.

SHIVI’S ROOM

Raavi was packing her stuff in bag. She took shiva’s shirt from the cupboard, held it near her chest and kept it in her bag. Shiva, who was standing at the door, saw this. He came inside and hugged raavi from back. raavi smiled at this.

Ra: I’ll miss you……….(mix emotion of sadness and happiness)

Shiva didn’t say anything, just tighter his grip. She broke the hug and made him turn towards her. She again hugged him.

Ra: (like a small kid) tu mujhe miss nhi karega………….

Sh: (chuckled) tujh jaisi chipkali ko kaun mis karega……………

Ra: (playing his game backon him) acha……..toh thik hai…….main permanently maasi ke shift ho jaati hu…….thik rahega na…….

Sh: (broke the hug) ae chipkali, maami ki behn ki beti!!!!!tu na jayada ban mat warna yahin bandh dunga…………….(trying to angry but turned to be funny)…………(hugged her again) chaar hafte…….bas phir lene aaunga tujhe…………..permanently apne paas rakhne ko…….

Ra: (broke the hug and said in her usual cute manner) mujh mrs shiva pandya banana aa rahe ho, saan baan se ban than ke aana, somnaath ki sabse cute ladki ko lene aa rahe ho………..

Shiva just smiled widely on her. Such a cute wifey he is getting. It is said that people who get second chance in love are really very lucky. He felt blessed that he got a second chance to win her back.

CLOCK SHOWED 12PM

After long hectic yet bestday, raavi sat on her bed. She was at her maasi place. She took her phone and checked it out. She pouted as she didn’t find any message from shiva. ‘this bhootnath is just…….ughh……can’t he ask me about my well being…..when he used to claim that he hates me….he used to ask but now he claims that he loves her like anything, he can’t drop even a hello………he is really a bhootnath’ she thought. She thought and thought about shiva when her phone rang. This was shiva. raavi happily picked it.

Ra: (happily) finally tune call kiya………kab se wait kar rahi thi pta hai………….aree kahan gya kuch bol toh……….

Sh: mauka mile tabna………….teri zubaan toh rajdhaani se bhi tej chalti hai……..main kya karu ……………

Raavi was annoyed, first of all she was far from him and he is taunting.

Ra: (angrily) tune iss time taane marne ko call kiya hai……..

Sh: (happily) nhi……..maine tujhe ye puchne ke liye call kiya tha ki ice-cream khaayegi……………..

Ra: (jumping off her bed)ice-cream……hn…………..(kidoo style)par kaise………..iss time……..

Sh: tu bas neeche aa…….baaki meri tension……..love you

He said this as he cut the call. Raavi took her dupatta and quietly sneaked out of the house. As soon as she saw him she rushed into her arms almost unbalancing him.

Ra: I missed you………..(holding him tighly)

Sh: (hugging her back)I missed you too…………….par agr abhi teri maasi jag gyi toh, teri ice-cream miss hojayegi…………

Raavi slapped his armslightly on his shoulder. He chuckled. They walked through the roads and reached the only ice-cream parlour open at this time. Shiva asked raavi to sit inside the park while he went to buy ice cream.

Raavi sat on a bench. The park was not empty. There stood two boys who staring at raavi. She observes this and felt uncomfortable. Shiva was also somewhat far. The two guys start coming near to her which made raavi more uncomfortable. She got up and rushed to the entrance of the park when one of the boys held her dupatta and said in teasing voice, “laal dupatta wali tera naam toh bata……


so here I end this part.......do review and give suggestions...............🤗🤗🤗

part 5- pg6

Edited by virangna2005 - 3 years ago
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Cute update! Shivi are getting remarried.. loved their ice cream date!❤️

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Please update soonn............ Want yo read more of it🥰😍

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I effing love Dishu here😆 This was cute love🤗❤️

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Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

I effing love Dishu here😆 This was cute love🤗❤️

thank you so much💖💖

makers are making there disha creepy.......I'll make my disha cute😁😁

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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Please update soonn............ Want yo read more of it🥰😍

sure........many light hearted and cute things are on the way......stay tuned💖💖😁😁

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