Ek Pyaar Ka Naghma Hai (Finale on pg 6)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hola Amigos, so last couple of episodes have been a bit frustrating to say the least! All the toxicity from Suman is seriously spoiling the moods so to cheer us all up, here's presenting my new ff series! Hope ya'll like it :)

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Raavi paced back and forth in the kitchen! She was shaking with all the insults she had to endure in a span of a mere few minutes. She tried her best to be a dutiful daughter, a sister, a wife, and a daughter-in-law but nothing she did was enough. She didn't know what sins she had committed to deserve such humiliation and venom from the family she had always loved and thought of her own. Tears started rolling down her eyes uncontrollably. Why was she always burdened with guilt for the mistakes she didn't have a part in making? Why did no one care about her? Why did no one love her? Was she such a bad person that she didn't even deserve respect? Her mind spiraled out of control as it kept playing the humiliating moments on a loop! Her heart raced really fast and she started feeling out of breath. She was physically suffocating and felt like the earth was shaking under her feet. She couldn't move and started blacking out! She held the kitchen island to steady herself and slowly walked to a nearby water jug and poured some water into a glass with trembling hands. She was just about to take a sip when someone grabbed her from behind startling her. She spun around and accidently threw the water at the person who held her by the arm. The glass fell on the floor and shattered! She felt dizzy and out of breath and collapsed but not before noticing Shiva holding her as she fell on the floor.

Shiva had noticed Raavi listening to every ill-spoken word of Suman. He saw her trembling and slowly backing away towards the kitchen. He wanted to stop his mother from uttering one more word against Raavi but seeing Raavi so shaken up, he followed her instead. He stopped at the door and saw her pacing in the kitchen. He got worried when she started shaking and breathing heavy. She was sobbing silently but uncontrollably and her tears drowned Shiva to a point of suffocation as he slowly walked up to her. When she started trembling more while pouring the water, he held her arm to steady her but she spun around and threw water at him instead and then collapsed. His heart sank as she fell on the floor. He quickly wrapped his arms around her and sat down on the floor with her. He could feel her trembling in his arms. He tightened his arms around her. Soon her silent sobs turned into hysterical cries as she held on to him. Seeing Raavi in this state nearly killed Shiva. He blamed and hated himself for causing her so much pain.

"Raavi, I am sorry! I am so sorry! Raavi please please mujhe maaf karde!" He pleaded.

Raavi heard Shiva's pleas but the agony in her heart was too strong! She was exhausted! Shiva felt Raavi go still in his arms and panicked. He lifted her head off of his shoulder and shook her a little but Raavi was unconscious. He rested her head on his shoulder again and started rubbing her hands which were ice cold. She still didn't move. Frightened, he carefully propped her against the kitchen island and grabbed the water jug. He took her back in his arms and splashed water on her face. She slowly moved and opened her eyes a little. He took some water in the palm of his hand and made her drink it. She did and he made her drink water like that a couple more times until the color on her face returned and she opened her eyes. Relieved, he cupped her face and kissed her forehead and hugged her again. Raavi couldn't fight with him anymore as she realized that regardless of what happened to her, she was his forever and loved him with all her heart! She hugged him back tightly and lost herself in him. Shiva and Raavi sat entangled for a long moment when Shiva heard a commotion outside. Raavi was still wrapped up in his arms when he looked up and saw Krish standing at the door.

Krish got worried seeing the shattered glass on the floor and Raavi motionless in Shiva's arms. He looked at his brother and saw the pain in his eyes, too. Suddenly Suman called him and asked if he found Shiva. Krish saw Shiva frown when he heard his mother's voice. Krish loved Raavi and Shiva. To him, his youngest Bhai and Bhabhi were the most amazing and selfless people in the whole world and deserved all the happiness. Seeing them together made him really happy as he smiled at Shiva. Shiva looked at his half-ticket, no-filter baby brother and smiled back. Krish gave a flying kiss to his Bhai-Bhabhi and turned around closing the kitchen door behind him. Shiva heard Suman inquiring about him and Krish telling her that no one was in the kitchen. Shiva was thankful for some alone-time with Raavi as he caressed her face gently and hugged her again!


Continued on pg 3 ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am SOOO IN for this!

The forum has been budding with Raavi breakdown stories... and I couldn't be happier//

Wanting it since a whole week.

Please continue soon. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was beautiful ❤️

It's high time raavi has a breakdown.she has endured too much.

Thank you for writing this 🤩

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Love this ❤️


I always want Raavi to stand up for herself.


More than that she should know her self value and think does being part of this toxic family is worth it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was beautiful! Perfect for me to read after the last 2 episodes. I want Raavi to get her happiness back. Thank you for writing this❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is very much needed right now... For Shiva to choose Raavi over anyone else, and for her to know that... I'm liking Krish here BTW...

Loved it and will wait for the next update!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Krish is a Cutie

Shivi deserve every Happiness ❤️

Glad Shiva came to check on her

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was great and want more😍🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so heart touching and beautiful❤️

Loved reading this❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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🥰❤️So beautifully written, please update soon 💕

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