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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

this was so good ❤️

shiva's giving me 🥰arnav singh raizada🥰 feels ❤️‍🔥

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

oh the ruthless business man troupe I love, continue soon jaan!

Thanks..., Sure 😇😇😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

this was so good ❤️

shiva's giving me 🥰arnav singh raizada🥰 feels ❤️‍🔥

Thanks alot 😇😇😇😇

Lols same same different different

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Interesting update👏

Shiva is a ruthless businessman

Where is Raavi

Waiting for next

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Interesting update👏

Shiva is a ruthless businessman

Where is Raavi

Waiting for next

Tomorrow I will upload next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

part 2:

Episode started with Dharat coming down from stairs to check the arrangements for dinner ..

Dhara : mohan ghar p kon kon majood hai?

Mohan: didi ghr p sirf shiva baba majood nai hn.. baki sb hn..

Dhara : kia shiva nai hai? is time wo bhi... wo kabhi bhi mujhe baghair bataye ghar s bahir rat ko jata to nai hai... aj kesay chala gaye...?

Mohan : han didi unhn n yeh bhi kaha tha k un ko dair ho skti hai ap sb log khana kha lijye ga...

Dhara : Acha... asa bola wo... chalo ho skta hai kuch important r urgent ho ap plz khana laga dijye mn ek dafa shiva ka fone try kar k ati hn...

Dhara left from kichen to called shiva but his fone is unreachable

Everyone started to gathered in dinning hall of pandya mention for dinner.....

Krish comes down playfully and start doing rounds and rounds happily with dhara

Dhara : are are krish.... yeh kia kar raha tu?

Krish : bhabhi dance kar raha hun wo bhi ap k sath....

Dhara smiles whole hheartly..

Dhara : lakin tu yeh dance kar kun raha hai?

Krish : kun k mn buht buht buht khush hn islye ...

Dhara took his all afflictions and pray for his well being ...

Dhara : bhagwan mere bachon ko hamesha ase hansta muskurata rakhay... par krish kuch bata to shai kis bat ki itni khushi hai tujhe...

Krish : wo na bhabhi aj na mera result announce hona tha

Dhara : phir?

Krish : mn na puray college mn top kia hai .....

Dhara surprised and her eyes filled with the tears of happiness

Dhara : yeh to buht achi khabar sunai hai tu n krish ... khoob age jao tarki karo tm sb... main abhi methai la intazam karti hn sb k liye..

everyone gathered and took their places on the dinning table and dhara kept basket of sweets on the table and every one including gombie get surprised

Gombie : dhara yeh methai.. kis khushi mn ..

dhara pleasingly broke the news of krish to everyone..

Dhara : wo kia hai na gombie aj na hamre krish n top kia hai apnay college mn isi khushi mn yeh methai hai sb k liye...

Gombie : sachi krish...

krish nodded..

everyone got happy and congratulate himon his victory..

Gombie happily hug krish dev n rishta also appriciates him..

suman gives bleesing to krish..

Dev : yeh hui na bat..

Rishita : congratulations krish... so proud of you..

krish suddenly realize the absence of shiva...

Krish : bhabhi shiva kahan hai?

Dhara : wo kisi kam s bahir gaya hai..

Krish ; aca mn use yeh news call kar k sunata hun..

Dhara : nahi mn n abhi fone kia tha band tha us ka fone... ajaye ga thori dair mn tu chal r khana kha le...

Krish: shyd signal pproblem ho.. ok ..

Scene 2 =

Here shiva following janardhan ...

shiva thought:

yeh janrdhn seth aj kal kuch zyada hawa mn ur raha hai... pata lagana pare ga chal kia raha hai is k dimagh mn... is jesay gadheron ko na shiva pandiya hi kafi hai...

suddenly shiva loses little bit his balance from car ... and lost the janardhan from sight ..

Shiva : are yar.. yeh janardhan seth kahan gum ho gay... kuch bhi ho aj kisi bhi qeemat p main yeh jan k rahon ga k yeh kia chupa raha hai... asa kia a gaya is k pass jo kal tk is ki awaz nai nikltii the r aj yeh mujhe blackmail kar raha tha... kuch to hai asa... mujhe pata lagana pare ga..

after some hit n miss situation

finally shiva caught up the sight of janardhan and again start following him...

suddenly janardhan reached a hut he goes in n shut the door ..

shiva saw him from distance

shiva thought :

is time yeh yehn is jhumparay mn kia kar raha hai? kuch to garbar hai ...

after sometimes janardhan left from there and shiva just then entered in the hut... and shocked to the core to see the sight....

He feld some one took the piece of land belw his feet

He felt his feet got frozen... Unable to mave them any more...

Scene = 3

its 1am

dhara still awake and waiting for shiva ...

suddenly she heard the voice of door closed and understrands shiva comes back...

dhara run toward the door..

shiva hsve back toward dhara

Dhara : tu a gaya shiva.... kb s intazar kar rahi the.. kahan tha itni dair ... tu chala bhi baghair bate gaya tha... sb theek to hai na?

Dhara puts hand on his shoulder.. shiva turns ..

dhara shocked to see the condition of shiva...

he was all trunked and his face drenched with tears ... the intensity of pain fully visible on his face... shiva just hug dhara without uttering a word and cried whole heartly...

Dhara : shiva.... mere bachay... kia hua ...? kia halat bana rakhi hai tu n ... bata to mujhe... ruk ruk mn paani le k ati hn..

shiva didnt have courage to tell dhara anything...

dhara went to fetch water and come back and make shiva drink...

shiva drank it and sits in dhara feet holds her hand tightly puut his head in her lap and slept there... and dhara stroking her hand in his hairs and head so that he felt some comfort in her lap...

precape : Dhara is restless in her room and thinking about shiva condition..


Hope so guys you like it.. kindly do comments about it

Edited by aimmyangle - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Interesting update👏

What happened to Shiva, what was in the hut😲

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Interesting update👏

What happened to Shiva, what was in the hut😲

Thanks 😇😇😇 wi8 for the next part... 😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Thanks alot 😇😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Episode 3:

Episode started

Scene 1 =

its 3 AM

Dhara sleeps on swing in sitting posture and shiva still sleeping in her lap holding her hand and dhara hand in his hairs ...

shiva face and eyes was swelled .. dried tears form a shiny layer on his face...

suddenly shiva wakeup with jurk ... so that Dhara also...

Shiva realized he slept in Dhara lap...he quietly seprate his head from her lap and saw upward in Dhara's direction...

A deep silence ..

a string of tears start falling from Shiva's eyes ... and reflection of his tears form in Dhara eyes ... Dhara cant recognize the reason but she can feel his pain.. the untold words of him...

Shiva standsup to go to his room dhara holds his hand... Shiva turn back dhara holds him from his both shoulders... she saw deeply into his eyes which was turn red and swellen .. then suddenly Dhara loosen her grip and let him go ...

Shiva left for his room ..

Scene 2 =

Dhara comes back to her room ... shocked and confused... here Gombie was sleeping...

Dhara silently sit on bed.. Gombie wakeup and saw Dhara's condition ... and confused...

Gombie : Dhara kia hua tujhe?

Dhara still remains silent...

Gombie : Dhara bolti kun nai ... kia hua hai? Bata mujhe ..

Dhara : wo.. wo... wo..

Gombie : kia wo wo...

Dhara : wo wo.. shi... shi.. shiva....

Gombie : haye bhagwan... wo gadhera... kia kand kar k aya hai phr s?

Dhara starts crying uncontrollably..

Gombie realized that the matter is more serious then he think...

Gombie : Dhara sab theek to hai ? bol na.. ab mujhe dar lag raha hai.. kia hua shiva ko ? wo theek to hai na?

Dhara : wo theek nai hai Gombie... mera bacha takleef mn hai Gombie... mn n .. mn n dekha hai us ki ankhon mn... dard tha us ki ankhon mn ...

aj se phle mn n kabhi use ase nai dekha... wo toot gaya hai Gombie... bikhar gaya hai mera bacha... mn chah k bhi kuch nai kar pa rahi us k liye Gombie...

Dhara hugs him and cries alot...

Dhara : plz Gombie use sambhalo ja k .. kahin wo khud k sath kuch ghalat na kar k betahy...

suddenly she stop saying ... as she realize something..

Dhara : Gombie kahin use... kahin use pata to nai chal gaya... sach k bare mn...

and she start crying again...

Dhara: Gombie plz jao us k pass... plz

Gombie put strap of hairs behide her ear...

Gombie silently saw dhara...

Gombie : acha acha .. dhara mn jata hun us k pass.. lakin pahle tu smbhal khud ko... dekh kia halat bana rakhi hai tu n... tu so ja abhi kal subha hotay hi mn shiva s bat ksrts hun... abhi buht dair ho gai hai...

he make her lies on bed and dhara falls a sleep

scene 3 =

Here Shiva breaking the things in his room and got injured in that... blood starts sheading from his hand...

Shiva falls on ground and starts shouting and crying....

Shiva : kesay ho gaya yeh sab... kesay.... r .. r mujhe pata kesay nai chala... main itna andha kab ho gaya... mujhe pata hi nai chala...

mn asa nai honay de skta ... mar jaon ga mn warna... kuch nai hoga... main kuch honay nahi doon ga... ab main hoon na sab theek kar k dekhaon ga... ab bhagwan hai mere sath..

he wipes his tears and falls a sleep

its morning...

Dhara comes in Shiva's room with tea...and shocked to see the condition of room...

suddenly she caught the sight of Shiva sitting in corner by putting his head on his knees.. and sleeping... she saw his injuries on his hand...

Dhara goes near him and lovenly touch his hairs... Shiva wake up and Dhara holds his hand and ask

Dhara : yeh kia hua hai shiva?

Shiva react all bindasly... and smilingly reply

Shiva : kuch nai bhabhi.. bs ase hi choti si chot hai .. theek ho jaye ge... ap tension mat lo bhabhi .. sb theek hai...

Dhara surprised to she her old Shiva back...

shiva took the dish of tea from her hand... and put it on aside... and holds her hand and dance naughtly...

Dhara : tu theek to hai na shiva ..?

Shiva : han bhabhi mani aj s pahle itna theek kabhi nai tha... aj to main satwain asman pe hoon bhabhi..

Dhara : saatwain asman pe,... kun ? tere loutery nikal aye hai kia..?

Shiva : han bhabhi bs asa smjh lo k ap k shiva ki zindgi badal gai hai... ab ap dekhna k hamre zindgi mn khushian r good luck r piyar hi piyar aye ga...

Dhara : bhagwan kare aasa hi ho .. mere bachon ki zindgi hamesha khushian r piyar hi piyar ho...

Shiva : acha bhabhi abhi buht important meeting k liye jana hai... bad mn milta hun ap s..

Dhara : ok ...

Dhara left the room and shiva goes to take bath ...


precap: shiva talking on fone..

Shiva : han sb intazam ho gaya hai kia ?

Shiva : ok mn a k dekhta hun

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