To fit in- A Shivi SS(Part 4 page 14)completed - Page 9

It was heartbreaking update 😭

Poor Raavi, what she had become😭

Glad that Shiva is not blind to Raavi's behaviour 😭

Hate Suman and Dhara, are they not seeing what Raavi going through

Waiting for next

Chikki, I just cried, literally (my cold is only a partial contributor, I assure you, it took the brokenness of Shivi for my eyes to overflow) .... This is such a beautiful piece. Do update the next part quickly if you can.... Let them have their happy ending, love, please🥺🥺

Chikki, this chapter is so pure. ❤️I could feel the knot on my chest. I feel like taking Raavi in a warm soothing embrace. 😭

You've written beautifully dear. This story has my whole heart. ❤

I loved the way you depicted Shiva's restlessness.

Waiting eagerly to read the next chapter. Honestly, I want this story to extend to some more chapters. You portray Shivi amazingly and I would love to read these "attempts of fitting in " on and on.

Update soon .

So beautiful ❤️

Shivi love eachother the way they are and don’t even know🤪

How well you described Shiva noticing everything and not liking this Raavi.

Ending

Continue soon

This wasso emotional n heart touching 😢♥

Loved it

Cont soon💯

Ohh Chikki... This was beautiful. ❤️ I actually felt so sad for Raavi.

In a way, it was Raavi giving Shiva a taste of his medicine. I hope this ends with Shiva and Raavi putting forth their expectations of one another and their future.

I would also love it if Shiva confronts the family for their idiocy- this "jaise chal raha hai chalne do" is crap. I have seen so many unhappy marriages up close because of this exact mentality 😕 People might feel divorce is not a solution- but in some cases it makes sense. I have seen couples spend a lifetime in apathy, but showing up in functions and events as a pair to satisfy society or staying together just for kids.

Somehow fictional Raavi in all the FF comes out better than in the show 😐 I love how she is not pulling gimmicks in anger, but seriously trying to resolve the issue, and reaching an acceptance of letting it go even if it hurts her. She is truly Shiva's Raavi 🙂

Originally posted by: barbieflora

I think my heart just broke🥺

It was just so beautiful! ❤

Thank you so much. I hope I heal your heart with the next part ❤️

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Holy hell that was an emotional wreck😭

God! I loved it! ❤❤

And don't be sorry for posting late...take your time👍🏼

So glad you liked it Maya and could feel it❤️

Originally posted by: Palak2812

This Raavi made me teary eyed

Ohh No

This is not that Raavi who Shiva and we love 🥺

Plz update the next one super soon

❤️❤️

Updating in a few minutes

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

this breaks my heart 🥺 😭😔

m sure things are going to change for good or worse ......shiva will say apologize to her and make her understand.....

Suman and dhara behaves as same age.....kya perfect bahu 😡

shiva pehle bhi understand karta tha situation....ab bhi kar raha hai....let's see

Hope you like the next part ❤️