Originally posted by: milkcakejamun
Nope 😔
Chikki's story is turning out to be much longer than I originally thought... I'm at 3000+ words now paired with a flashback scene, jealousy, kissy kissy romance....
Here's a preview to hold you over:
He took a deep breath as he turned to the direction the girl was in. Please don't let me see something that I will regret... His eyes landed on a girl who was completely drenched in the rain. She had her back to him at the moment, but whenever she swayed, he noticed just how tight her school uniform clung onto her.
It's none of my business—The girl turned with a blissful smile. Her hair was completely matted against her face, framing every bit of her beauty. Shiva's eyes widened as his eyes trailed down... They're right... you can see everything. His hands immediately clenched into fists. Idiot chipkali... I gave you an umbrella... what are you doing?!? He turned to the boys who were riveted by Raavi's body, and all he could see was red...
He took an angry step towards the boys, ready to smack the boys for having such disturbing thoughts.
"Shiva, I'll let it slide today because you were trying to help someone. But, in the future, please stay out of trouble. Otherwise I really will have to tell your parents."
He relaxed his hands... he couldn't afford to hit those boys. Turning to Raavi, his jaw clenched. This idiot, stupid girl... does she not understand what she's capable of doing? Does she not understand that the thin shirt does nothing?!? He glanced down at his own shirt with dismay. Even if he were to offer his shirt, he was afraid she would still be exposed.
This is sooo beautiful ❤️❤️
This is soo shiva.his silent protector.always.
I still have hopes for flashbacks.they could add such beauty and depth to their story.
Sighhh.
What a waste of potential by the makers🤕🤕🤕
Shiv Shakti
