Shivi TS : My Minor Wife ❤️ Part 4 updated on page 13 - Page 9

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My Minor Wife Part 4

Suman coughs to bring back Shiva from his "Lala Land" on which Shiva gets startled and looks around here and there being embarrassed....

Suman: Shiva beta...kiya hua?

asks Suman in teasingly while Shiva shakes his head nervously...

Shiva smiling: K..kuch nahi, kuch bhi to nahi...

and turns to other side and sees Raavi approaching him..

Raavi: Sorry...sorry...itna time laga li maine...chaliye...

Shiva just nods making a way for Raavi while she reaches Suman to take blessings... while Shiva too joins her...

Suman smiling: Khush raho, meri

bachho...hamesha sath raho...

Shivi gives a smile to Suman while she pinches Shiva's hand and winks at him unnoticed by Raavi.... watching this Dhara giggles covering her mouth... Shiva looks up at Dhara and sighs...then his eyes fall on Raavi who was looking at them confused...

Raavi: Kiya hua?...sab thik hai na?....

Shiva: Haan...haan Raavi sab thik hai, bhilkul thik hai...

Suman and Dhara makes a serious face composing themselves and smiles to Raavi...

Dhara: Woh...sab thik hai Raavi...tum dono jao fatafat, it's already late...

Shiva: Haan Chalo Raavi...

Saying that, Shiva drags Raavi with him and hurriedly makes his way toward the door before his Maa and Bhabhi puts him into more trouble with their teasings....

As soon as they left Suman and Dhara burst out laughing....

Suman: Kisi ki nazar na lage meri bacho par...

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Raavi was standing in front of Big Mall with wide open mouth as she was seeing it for the first time... Shiva comes from behind and smiles watching her....

Shiva: Raavi.. apni moonh band kar nahi toh makhi ghus jaayenge...

With it Shiva closes her mouth with one finger and walks in the market followed by Raavi who gives him cute pout and an embarrassing smile...

When Raavi step in the Mall her eyes got wide with surprise and excitement...

Raavi: Woow Shiva ji... Kitna pyaari jagah hai yeh, Sab kuch milti hai kiya yahan?...

Shiva: Yeh Shopping Mall hai Raavi... Of course we can find anything you want to buy here... Why are you behaving like you didn't saw Shopping malls... Shopping mall hi toh hai, iss mei itna exited hone ki kiya baat hai... (Shakes his head)

Raavi sadly: Haan Shiva ji I didn't come here before as Maasi always keep me away from outside life na...

Shiva shocked: What!...(fists his hand in anger) Uss Maami ki toh...I'm gonna kill her... How dare she!...

Raavi: Please Shiva ji aap gussa mat ho jaiye... Waise bhi, abh toh Maasi Ma hume preshan nahi karne wali...Agar kiya bhi toh, abh hum chup nahi baithne wali... I will give her back... (with confidence and determination)....

Shiva looks at her and smiles proudly...

Shiva: Arey wah... Meri cute si bholi si biwi sherni bangayi?.... That's my girl (pinches her face lightly)...

Raavi: Woh toh, mein bachpan se thi, par hume support aur confidence dene wale nahi the naa... (Gets sad for a while, but composes herself)... Par abh... Aap hai naa Shivaji?... Till you are here with me, I'm not scared of anyone...because I know that you will always protect me(smiling widely with a drop of tears)....

Shiva gets emotional and overwhelmed by Raavi’s words and gently caresses her face wiping a long tear which come out of her eyes... While Raavi looks at him being great full to him and of course to her fate for sending this man in her life, who is standing and will stay in front of her like a wall, protecting her from everyone who will try to harm her... Her supporter, her hero, her Husband!...

Shiva composing himself: Chalo abh, hume dheer saare shopping bhi karna hai, tum meri tareef ghar jaa ke bhi kar sakte hai...

Raavi just nods her head smiling happily and Shiva holds her hand smiling back and they head toward the boutiques to do shopping....

Shiva: Hume second floor jaana hai, there we will buy a new dresses for you... Then we will go to the third floor where you can buy things which are necessary for your college... Books, notebooks, pens and all...

While Raavi smiles widely in excitement....

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Shivi on the way to back home...

Raavi excitedly: Thank you Shiva ji... Aapne mere liye itna kuch kar rahi hai... I don't know how to thank you for whatever you did and doing for me...

Shiva stops his bike for a moment and looks back at Raavi and gets down while Raavi too gets down not understanding why they had stopped in the middle of the road...

Raavi: Shiva ji, kiya hua?... Is everything okay?... Why did you stop the bike?...

Shiva: Raavi, yeh bike tab tak nahi chalega, jab tak tum meri ek sawaal ka jawab nahi dogi...

Raavi: Kaisa sawaal hai, Shiva ji?...

Shiva: Raavi, mujhe tum yeh bata, mein kaun hun?...

Raavi gets confused by his question...

Raavi: Mein kaun matlab Shiva ji?... Aap... Aap toh Shiv... Shiva Pandya hai...

Shiva: Right, I'm Shiva Pandya... Mein Shiva hun Raavi, Shiva Pandya... Teri Pati hun yaar... koi teri padosi Shiva Pandya nahi hun jo tum mujhe baar baar thank you bol de...

Raavi: Haan Shiva ji...Meine kab kaha ki aap meri pati nahi hai... Aap mere liye sirf Pati nahi, balki Pati se bhi ziyada hai...

Shiva looks on at her last sentence and gets happy and excited for some unknown reason which confused him to the core at the same time...

Shiva: Pati se bhi ziyada kiya Raavi?...

Raavi: Aap mere liye my lucky angel hai, jo meri andhere zindagi ko apna roshan se baar ke jeene ka ek umeed, wajah di hai Shiva ji... I'm really grateful to you... Thank you so much...

With that Raavi hugs Shiva tightly while Shiva gets surprised and Happy and slowly hugs her back.... After some time they break the hug and looks at each other...

Raavi: Shiva ji aap kuch kehne wale the kiya?... I mean... Aap mujhse naraaz hai kiya?...

Shiva: Heh?... Haan... Woh mein... I mean No yaar... Mujhe na bas ek request hai tumse... No, ek nahi do do request hai...Kiya tum puri kar payegi?...

Raavi confused: Ji...bhilkul... Boliye na kiya request hai?...

Shiva: Hmmm... Pehla wala... First requested yehi ki... Kiya tum mujhe baar baar thank you bolna chhor degi?... I mean.. It's not that I'm complaining... But... You know whenever you thank me I feel strange...I can't explain... Mujhe itna saara thank you nahi chahiye yaar... I'm your husband Raavi for God's sake... Tujhe support karna, care karna, khush karna, teri har ek khwaish ko puri karna mera farz hai... Mein tere liye sab kar sakta hun Raavi, mujhe tumse yeh sab ke liye thank you nahi chahiye... I mean of course chahiye, but not too much...

Raavi interrupting: Paar Shiva ji Meri Thank you bolne mein kiya problem hai aapko?... I mean I'm sorry...

Raavi keeps silent and looks down embarrassed for interrupting him without his completing his words... While Shiva looks on smiling for his cute wife's cute antics and losts himself for a moment in Raavi’s cute pout...

Raavi: Sorry for interrupting you... Continue please...

Shiva composing himself: Haan woh... Mein kiya keh raha tha?...

Raavi: Yehi ki.. Aapko Thank you nahi chahiye... Kush aur Chahiye...

Shiva’s eyes gets wide hearing Raavi and looks there and here being embarrassed...

Shiva: K.. Kiya... Thik se bol na maine kab kaha ki mujhe kuch aur chahiye...

Raavi innocently: Yeh toh obvious hai na... Agar aapko thank you nahi chahiye toh, zarur aapko kuch aur chahiye... Toh bol dijiye na kiya dun mein aapko?...

Shiva: Arey bas kar yaar Raavi... Mere kehne ka matlab yeh nahi tha, I just want your happiness... Aur tum yeh apni Thank you se mujhe parai ladka feelings deti hun mujhe... Jaise ki mein teri Pati nahi koi aur padosi ki beta hun... I mean... Woh... Hmm..

Raavi smiles widely realizing what her Husband wants to say... While Shiva gives her a "What" look...

Raavi: Haaw... Shiva ji you are so cute... I got it what you wanted to say...Thik hai... Aage se mein koi aisi galti nahi karungi, jiske wajah se aapko koi takleef ho... Par Shiva ji aap bhi yeh baat achhe se samaajlo ki Mein aapko koi padosi ghar ki beta nahi samajti hun... Aap meri Pati Shiva Pandya hai Raavi ka Shiva... (bites her tongue in embarrassment realizing what she just blurted) Woh.. I mean... Jaise aapki marzi Shiva ji...

Shiva gets happy hearing Raavi’s words but he didn't show up to avoid future embarrassing moments for Raavi and himself...

Shiva smiling: Thank You Raavi ji...

Raavi: And second request kiya hai...

Shiva: Haan... Aur dusri request, yehi ki.. Kiya tum Mere naam se yeh jo tumari "Ji" hai na jo tum har baar add karti ho, Kiya tum issey hata sakti hai?... Aur mujhe sirf Shiva naam se bula sakti hai.. Please...

Raavi shocked: Kiya... Shiva ji aap yeh kiya baat kar rahe ho... Woh... Mein kaise... I mean... No, yeh nahi hoga mujhse, sorry Shiva ji...

Shiva huffs annoyed: Yaar Raavi, please mein kaunsi tujhe Mere naam se teri naam ko hatane ko bol rahi hun, sirf "Ji" hi toh hai...

On which Raavi looks up stunned but immediately looks away before Shiva could read her face expression...

Raavi: Ji Shiva ji.. Jaisi aapki marzi... Par kiya hua?.. Why don't you like me calling you "Shiva Ji"...It's sign of my respect for you.. Aur Suman maa keh thi hai ki mein aapko naam se nahi bula sakti... Par apne kehne par hi mein Shiva ji bulane lag gayi... Aur abh aapko isaey bhi problem hai...

Shiva: Haan meine hi bola tha ki tum mujhe Shiva hi bulao, par yeh "Ji" mujhe bhilkul bhi achha nahi lagta... You know it gives me a feeling of being too old... What do you think Raavi, Am I looking too older to you?... I know our age gap...but still yaar try to understand my feelings too... It doesn't sweet my image...

Complains Shiva with most cute face on which Raavi smiles widely and pinches his cheek out of his cuteness...

Raavi: Hayee meri pyaari Shiva ji... Oh sorry, sorry... Shiva ko achha nahi laga?... Thik hai... Jaise aapki marzi Shiva ji... Oops sorry... Shiva...

Shiva: Arey Raavi don't do that (rubbing his face)... I don't like it you know... Chalo abh waise bhi bohot dher ho chuki hai... Ghar walone bhi hume wait kar rahi hogi....

With this Shiva starts his bike while Raavi nods and sits back still smiling... And they head toward the house...

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Coming back to home Raavi excitedly showed everyone what they brought from the shopping mall... Her dresses, college things and of course everyone were so happy for her...

On the other hand Krish along with Dev Gombhi started pulling his leg and teasing him when they spotted Shiva looking and smiling being lost in Raavi’s beautiful yet angelic face....

Krish comes from the back and pats his shoulder bringing him back from his Dreamland...

Krish: Bhai saab... Kiya baat hai, hai?...Itna bhi ghoor ke mat dekh liya kar meri bhabi ko, nazar lag jayegi...

Dev and Gombhi too joins Krish..

Gombhi in serious tone: Haan Shiva don't watch her like that... It's not good, you know...

Shiva: Arey bhai what are you saying... Kaunsi mein kisi aur ki biwi ko dekh rahi hoon, apna biwi toh hai...

DevKrihGaumbhi in union: Ohhhh how sweet ha?... (giving him a teasing look)...

Shiva gets embarrassed and looks there and here to hide his blush, because he very well knew that his brothers will tease him more if he shows some kind of weakness like blushing and all...

Shiva: Woh... Aap bhi na bhai... Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai... Mein toh bas...

Gombhi: Arey mere bhai, chill maro... It's okay, you can watch her anytime you want...I'm happy to see you like that... Romeo bante hue...

Krish: Haan bhai... I'm so happy for you... Finally our Shiva found his Gauri...

Shiva: Abey chup ghadera(hits Krish's head lightly)...

Dev: Arey Shiva, kyu Krish ko maar rahe ho...Kiya galat bola issne?... Kiya Raavi teri Gauri nahi hai?... Don't you love her?...

Krish: Haan bhai, bol na... Aap Raavi bhabhi ko pyaar nahi kar the?... Aap ki dil mein kuch feelings nahi hai, Raavi bhabhi ko leke?...Kiya aap usko slow motion mein nahi dekh thi jab woh aap ke paas aati hai, jaise filmo mein hota hai?...

Shiva looks on stunned by his brothers questions for a moment and gets into dilemma about his own feelings toward Raavi...

Her smile, her happy face, her tears everything about her bothered him, he knows that he is getting effected by her a long back, but he never thought of it in other way... Or Did he?... Yes she is his wife, best friend, and he is her protector, husband, responsibility but falling in love with her is not that he imagined, or is that true?... Did he started to feel something for Raavi?...he thought and looked up at His three brothers who were watching him with questioning eyes....

Shiva closed his eyes for a while and took a deep breath... and Raavi’s face flashed in front of him and realization hit him up and he opened his eyes wide...

Shiva smiling widely: Yes bhaiyo... You all are right!... I THINK, I'M IN LOVE WITH RAAVI!...

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Both Shiva and Raavi are super cute ❤️

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Finally u r back I was waiting for the update for so long ..

It was lovely unique n most imp conversation n everything is normal...

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Waiting for next...

Abhi please timely update

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