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My Minor Wife Part 1
Suman is sleeping on the bed after doctor's check up, Shiva is sitting beside her and holding her hand with tears flowing through his eyes watching her mother's condition...
Gombhi and Doctor come out of the house...
Gombhi: Doctor sahab, meri maa ki tabiyaat kaisi hai, woh thik hogi naa...
Doctor: Don't worry Mr Pandya, she will be okay, don't give her any stress and take care of her and make sure she eats and sleeps well... kisi tension ke wajah se uski BP high hogai hai, meine davaiya de diya hai so she will be okay...
Gombhi: Thank you doctor...
Doctor: Achha Mr Pandya, mein chalta hun, take care...
As soon as doctor leaves Gombhi gets a call from Kaka and he too leaves for the Pandya Store informing Dhara...
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Shiva had slept beside Suman refusing to come out for a lunch despite Dhara's pleadings and said that he won't eat anything until her mother wakes up...
At the evening Suman wakes up and saw Shiva sleeping holding her hand and slowly caresses his head making him wake up with jerk and looks up at her...
Shiva hurriedly: Maa aap thik hai? How do you feeling now? kuch chahiye aapko?... sarr mei dart nahi ho rahi hain na?... dawaiyi de dun kya?....
Suman: Arey bas, bas, Shiva, mein thik hoon, shant ho jaa meri bachha (caresses her face lovingly calming him down)....
Shiva stops his blabbing and looks at Suman for a moment and immediately hugs her tightly sobbing like a little kid...
Shiva: I'm so sorry Maa, yeh sab meri galti hai, sab mere wajah se hua hai, Kaash mei sab thik kar pata, Kaash mein waha hota tho uss Maami ki zubaan keech le thi, jo aapki beizzati ki... How dare she speak so much nonsense to you...
Suman: Shant ho jaa beta, Uss khagdi toh kuch bhi bak bak karti rehti hai...
Shiva: Nahi Maa, uski koi haq nahi banta hai ki woh aap se iss tarah se baat kare...
Suman: Haan mein jaanti hun ki, agar tum waha hota toh tu usse kuch bhi bolne nahi de tha... Chalo abh mera sher... Dekho khud ko, kya haal bana rakha hai apna... Bada sher se Kitten ban ke beitha hai yaha....(laughs a little)
Shiva too laughs watching his mother back to normal...
Suman(Patting his back): Yeh hui na baat! Tum aise haste rehna....
At the door Gombhi and Dhara were standing and watching Mother - Son duos emotional talk and smiling ear to ear with tears in their eyes...
Gombhi: Maa...
Suman and Shiva looks up and Suman's face fell and turns other side ignoring him...
Suman: Aye Shiva, iss Bhagodi ki beti ki pati se bol chala jaye yaha se, mujhe nahi baat karni issey...
Gombhi looks on sadly while Dhara tries to interfere...
Dhara: Maa, please eisa mat boliye... woh...
Before she could complete she threw a stick toward them...
Dhara: Shiva.... Apne Dhara Mata se bol agar mujhe zinda dekha chahti hai tho, mujhse dur reh... Chale jao sab log mere kamrey se... aur Shiva tu bhi jaa...
All leaves without uttering a word as they remember doctor's advice...
Everyone are sitting in the dining table with dull face thinking about Suman and how she was hurt because of them...
Krish: Bhai... hum log achha nahi kiya, Maa ko bohot gehri choth pochai hai...
Dhara: Kal function mein jo bhi hua, uske zimmedar mein hun... aaj pehli baar mujhe ehsaas ho rahi hain ki, mein bohot galat kar diya tum teeno ke sath, Tum teeno ko kabhi apne zindagi ka faisla nahi lene di hai, I forgot that you all have had grown up enough to take care of yourselves... mein ek minute ke liye bhul gayi ki mein, maa nahi, sirf Bhabhi hoon, Bhabi Maa jaisi ban sakti hai, par kabhi maa ki Jagah nahi le sakti... (cries feeling guilty)...
Gombhi, Shiva and Krish, Dev
comes near her and consoles giving her a hug...
Suman: Yeh lo ji, tum sab log abhi bhi Bhabhi Maa se chipak ke beitha hai, aur mein waha kaisa hoon, kisi ki parwah nahi hai(sadly)...
Gombhi with tears filled eyes : Maa aisa mat boliye na please... Hum sab aap se bohot pyaar karte hai, Aap nahi jaanti ki aap humare liye kya hai...
Shiva, Krish Dev looks at Suman with tears and holds their ears...
Dev, Shiva, Krish: Sorry Maa...
Dev: Aaj ke baad we promise to never make you feel ashamed because of us...
Shiva: We will lesten whatever you say, we will never let you down and feel abounded...You are our first priority...
Gombhi: You are our everything Maa, we are nothing without you, please forgive us for hurting your feelings...
Sum wipes her tears and smiles signing them to come close and opens her arms...
Everyone rushes to her happily and hugs her... while Dhara looks at them smiling...
Suman looks at Dhara: Aye Bhagodi ki beti, waha kadhe, khada kya kar rahi hai, aao gi bhi, ya nahi aur mujhe special puja karni hogi Dhara Devi ki naam pe?...
Dhara shook her head wiping her tears and runs to hug her: Nahi naa aap mere liye kisi devi se kaam nahi hai, sorry maa mere wajah se aap ko kitna kuch sehna padha, I promise you that I will never let you down...
Suman: Chalo thik hai, I will forgive you all for the last time, but with one condition... If you agree...
All in one go: Aap jo bhi kahen ge hume manzur hai...
Suman smiling widely: Acha!... pakka?...Are you sure?... listen, I'm warning you all, you won't be able to back off after that!...
All nods their heads...
Krish: 100 % Maa abh bas order kariye...
Suman: To phir thik hai, sun lijiye....
All looks at Suman curious and waits to hear what condition is it...
Suman: I want Dev and Shiva to marry with in one week...
Everyone gasped in shock and looks at Suman...
Shiva: Kya?... Shaadi?... aur woh bhi ek hafte mein?...
Dev: Yes, mom it's impossible... Woh hum kaise...
before they complete Suman cuts them off...
Suman: Chup! bhilkul Chup!... mujhe kuch nahi sunna, Tum dono ki Shaadi hogi! Bas, baat khatam!... I have even liked the girls for you two... and tomorrow you will go to the date with them...
Dev and Shiva looks on... while Krish giggles watching his brother's condition...
Krish: Don't worry maa, they will go, inn dono ke paas koi option bhi nahi hai...Akhir vaada kiya, toh zaror pura karna padega...
Dev and Shiva looks up at Krish giving dead glares while Krish gets scared and looks down...
Gombhi with stern voice: Krish, tum chup re! aur Maa you don't worry, yeh dono jayenge kal date pe...waise bhi dono ki umar bhi shaadi ke hai, Dev is 29 and Shiva is 28 now...
Suman: Wohi toh mein keh rahi hun... Agar abhi nahi karenge shaadi toh kab karenge?... Jab yeh dono mere umar ke ho jayenge?...
Krish burst out laughing at Suman's words and looks at Dev and Shiva... while all gives him a look after which he gets silent...
Dhara supports Suman: Maa aap bhilkul thik kaha, yeh do bandariyon ki shaadi kar dijiye...
Suman: Of course kara dungi! Tum dekhna!...
Dev and Shiva(gets happy watching her mother's smile): Jaise aapki marzi maa, hume manzur hai, Bas aap eise hasti rehna...
Once again they had a group hug after which everyone sit to have a diner...
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Next morning... Gombhi went early for the store, while Krish went to his collage, Dhara is busy with household chores and Suman calls Dev and Shiva to her room to give them the photos with all information of the girls with whom they should meet today...
Suman forwarding a photo to Dev: Dev yeh ladki ki photo hai jo tu milne jaa rahi hai, dekhle...
Dev takes the photo and gets shocked and looks up at Suman who wink at him smiling... while Shiva looks at Dev then turns to Suman confused....
Dev: Maa, yeh... matlab... aapko kaise?...
Suman: Haan, Haan...Dev... Yeh Rishita hai, Meri hone wali bahu aur tumari girlfriend jisse tum 4 saal se secretly date karta hai...
Shiva shocked: Kya?!...
Shiva looks up at Dev not able to register what he just heard... His brother has a girlfriend?... Then realization hit him as he remembered how Dev used get a call from the person named as "R" in his phone... earlier he didn't give much attention to it... but now he got it, the reason behind his brother's weird behavior... it was his girlfriend Rishita... he come out from his thoughts by Suman's voice...
Suman: Haan Shiva, tumne thik suna... Dev has a girlfriend...
Dev hesitates to speak: Woh maa, aapko ka kaise pata chala?... Rishita ke baare mein...
Suman: Mujhe Dhara ne bataya hai... She had heard the conversation between you two and told me about it... we became really happy about it... then waited you to tell us about her by yourself... but you were buddu and didn't tell us anything about Rishita... Then I send Dhara to her house and we come to know that her Nani is none other than My old friend... Then Me and Dhara phir se gayi hai Motiben ki ghar tere aur Rishita shaadi ke baare mei baat karne...
Shiva and Dev curious: Phir?... Did they agreed for the marriage?...
Suman rolling her eyes at them annoyed: Dev... tumara hath mein kya hai, beta?...
Dev confused: Photo...
Suman: Kiski photo?...
Dev: Rishita ki...
Suman: Tujhe kya lagta hai, why did I give you her photo?...
Dev gets more confused and looks at Shiva not knowing what to answer... while Shiva just shook his head at him...
Suman dramatically: Aye Somnath what I will do with a stupid son of mine?... Aye gadhere! ... of course they agreed for the marriage... if not why would I show you her photo and ask you to go for a date with her....
Slowly confused face of Dev turns into happy one and immediately hugs her mother in happiness and kisses her cheeks... while Shiva looks on at Dev's sudden act, but smiles looking at his happy kiddy face...
Dev happily: Maaa I love, I love you, I love you sooo much... thank you, you are the best....
Dev pulls back and holds her hand smiling widely, while Suman pats his cheek...
Suman: Woh toh mein hoon, but aap sab bhul gaye the shayad...
Dev: Thank you so much Maa...
Suman: Thank you mujhe nahi, Dhara ko bol, kyunki agar woh nahi bata thi toh teri jaisa gadhere ki muh se kahan kuch nikal tha hai...
Dev pouting: Sorry Maa...
Suman chuckles at his son's act and pulls his cheeks while he winches... then her eyes fall on Shiva who is smiling widely watching their cute antics... Suman coughs to bring Shiva back from his trance....
Suman: Shiva... Abh tumari baari, idar aa beta...
Shiva comes near and sits in front of her waiting for her to speak further... She gives another photo to Shiva smiling...
Suman: Yeh teri hone wali patni ka photo hai, dekh lena...
Shiva: Uski photo dekh ke mein kya karunga, ussi se milne jaa rahi hoon naa... waha jaa ke dekh lunga achhe se...
Suman: Arey par...dekho toh sahi....
Shiva: Maa please...
Suman giving up: Thik hai, jaise teri marzi... abh jao tum dono...
Suman blesses them while Shiva takes a photo from her and went out along with Dev...
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Shiva reaches to the place where he should meet with the girl with whom he should meet as per Suman's sayings he only know that her name is Sneha Sharma.... Shiva waits for her... after 10 minutes of waiting... someone pats his back and he turns to see a young beautiful standing in front of him... she looked too much younger than him...
Sneha: Hii... Shiva, right?... (Shiva just nods)
Only one question comes in his mind watching her and he immediately asks before she could say something...
Shiva: Please don't mind me for asking... but how old are you?...
Sneha confused: 19...
Shiva: Ohh...
Then Shiva gets a call from Krish and he immediately runs from there apologizing and promising to meet with her another day....
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In the evening... Shiva and Krish were standing in front of Suman with low head as Suman find out about their plan to escape the date... she looked at them upset...
While Gombhi, Dev and Dhara watched them and feel bad as today no one can defend them from Suman's anger...
Suman clapping: Wah Shiva, Wah... tumse toh yeh umeed nahi thi... why did you lied to me saying that the girl rejected you... she didn't rejected you ghadere, it's you who rejected her, it's good that her parents called me and informed how you have had made a fool of her... or else, here I was sitting and scolding her without her fault... tujhe sharam nahi aaya?... Ladki ko chakma de kar wahan se bhaagne ki kya zaroorat thi tujhe... agar pehle bol deta ki tujhe shaadi nahi karna toh, I would have agreed... but nahi, tu toh Shiva hai, Shiva, ek number ka ghadera...
Shiva looks up at Suman: Kya? Maa aap sach mein meri shaadi postpone kar leti kya?...if I said to you that I'm not ready for the marriage and I didn't liked that girl?... and moreover she is too young for me... 19 saal ki hai...
Suman: Haan, kar leti postpone...
Shiva's face lit up hearing Suman's words...
Suman: Magar, abh nahi, abh toh teri shaadi hoke rahegi... aur yeh Suman Pandya ka vaada hai...
Everyone gasped in shock at Suman's declaration... but didn't say anything...
Shiva: Kya?... Kiske sath?... Sneha toh reject karegi mujhe maa...
Suman: Tujhe kya lagta hai?... pure Somnath mein sirf or sirf Sneha hi rehti hai kya, koi aur ladkiya bhi hai Somnath mein....
Krish excited: Kaun hai maa?... Photo dehao na please...
Suman: Chup, koi photo moto nahi dekgaungi, agar dekhna hai toh Shaadi ke din hi dekh lena uska chehra...
Shiva: Par maa, bina dekh ke kaise karunga uss se shaadi?...
Suman: Kya baat hai, bohot jaldi ho rahi hai tujhe ladki ki photo dekhne mein... Sneha ki toh bina dekh ke hi chala gaya tha... Noo, mujhe tum par koi barusa nahi hai....Shaadi ke din... nahi, Shaadi ke baat hi dekh lo...Bas!
Shiva: Par Maa... (comes close to her and sits on his knees)
Suman cupping his face: Dekh Shiva... please... tum mujhe khush dekhna chahti ho naa?...tum sab toh mujhe vaada kiya tha naa ki will listen to me..
Shiva nods: Haan maa...
Suman: Then please, I want see your happy married life, teri nanni si munni si bacho ke sath kheelna chahti hoon...
Shiva: Maa Gombhi aur Dev hain naa...
Suman: Haan hai, aur I know that they will also give me a grandchildrens, but mein teri baat kar rahi hoon... Mujhe chinta hai tera... Dekh... Dev has a girlfriend since 4 years... but you... you don't have any girlfriend Shiva... Meine tujhe kabhi kisi date par jaate hue nahi dekha, naa koi ladki pe interest nahi dekhayi hai aaj tak. bas kaam, kaam, Pandya Store and all... so abh vaaqt aagaya hai, Shiva, tujhe abh apne future par focus karni chahiye... please shaadi karlo naa... (looks at him with tears)
Everyone gets emotional and wipes their tears watching heartwarming conversation of Maa and Son duo...
Shiva wipes her tears and nods his head in agreement while Suman gets happy and kisses his forehead...
Suman: Thank you mera bachha... You don't worry Shiva, woh ladki Sneha se bhi achhi, hai, bholi, bhali, cute si, bhilkul teri Bhabhi ki tarah... 18 saal ki ladki hai...
Shiva shocked: Kya?... 18 saal ki ladki... Maa woh toh Sneha se bhi choti hai...Maa mei kaise... woh...
Suman: Bhale hi woh 18 saal ki bachi hai, par bohot samajdhar hai... bechari orphan hai, her parents passed away when she was 8 years old... since then she is living with her Maasi and MausaPaa... ek dum cinderella ki tarah hai... abh tu hi ban jaa uski prince charming (chuckles along with everyone)
Shiva glances at everyone for a moment before looking back at Suman: Kya Maa aap bhi naa...
Suman: Kya?... Sahi baat to bola hai... Kyu Gombhi? (looks at Gombhi for a confirmation)
Gombhi smiling: Of course maa... Mere bhai toh kisi prince charming se kaa6nahi hai...
Suman: Wohi toh mein keh rahi hoon... aur Haa ek aur baat, tum us ladki se jaanta bhi hai, bachpan mein bohot khel the the...
Shiva confused: Bachpan se jaanti hoon mein?... usse? (gets thinking)....
Suman: Arey yaad karne ki koshish kar... Raavi naam hai uska... woh... teri Maa hai naa uski behen Sarla ki beti hai...
Shiva: Sarla?... Maami ki behen?... Raavi? (trying to remember)...
After a while realization hits his mind and he finally remembers...
Shiva: Raavi!...MamiKiBehenkiBeti!...
Suman: Haan, haan wohi... Teri MamiKiBehenkiBeti!... tum usi se shaadi karega... bohot achhi hai... please Shiva haan bol de...
Shiva finally nods his head giving up watching her mother's cute pout and agrees to marry her... on which everyone gets happy...
Did he took right decision? He was confused to the core...but he couldn't deny to his mother and make her sad again.. But Raavi?... His MamiKiBehenkiBeti... whom he saw in childhood only and he doesn't even know how she looked now... moreover in childhood she used to call him Shiva bhaiya as he always protected her like his little sister... how can he marry a girl with whom he has 10 years ege gap...and the girl who used to call him bhaiya... now she is going to be his wife...What he should do now... decision is taken, so he can't back off...
Shiva come out from his thoughts and looks up at his mother who looked so happy... For this smile of his mother Shiva can do anything... even Marry to his MamiKiBehenkiBeti ...
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Edited by Malika1993.06 - 4 years ago
