ShiVi OS ft Suman and Gaura- Heart to heart (updated) - Page 5

No words nothing can describe what I felt reading this

amazing

Wonderful

Superb

Fanatastic

Add a few from. Your sides to

Iss OS ne Toh makers k diye jakhmo par Marham Laga diya MAhiiiiii

the insecurity you explored and balance suman talked about yahi Keh rahi thi main uss din tumse

You described it so aptly

This is what happens when people converse. A heartfelt conversation resolves everything, a fact our dear ITV ignores resolutely. 😆

Loved how Shiva was so open about his feelings! ❤️

The parallels between the two scenes was very well done! Gautam finally understood his folly.👏

This story did so many things to my heart I cannot even begin to explain. 😅

I have no words to describe how beautiful this piece is !

The way Gautam ignored Suman that day pinched me too🥺. Now because of this, I feel lighter

The dynamic shared by Suman and Shiva has always been one of my favorites and how amazingly you've explored it. My heart is filled with so much peace after reading this. I feel serene.

Thank you for sharing this 🌺

Sooo beautiful ❤️

So intense and in character 😘

Just outstanding 😍😍 it's a masterpiece!! one of the best I read so far

Maahi🤗 this was lovely! Subah subah mujhe ye padne ko mila😃 Your stories touch tje heart. What a conversation between Suman and Shiva and between ShVI. Only you can write this way❤️ Thank you for giving us this wonderful creation.

Maahi!!! My darling this was completely and utterly awesome... I have read it twice now and I still want to read it again. This amount of growth in their relationship is something we can only ever imagine for now!! It's so deep. His promise to Suman and keeping it that many months down the line was really mind boggling.. Just the right moment.

I love love love it!! You have left me speechless. I need to gather my thoughts and will come back later to comment again.

PS: this is going in my re read kitty of ShiVi

Maahiii this is beautiful, just loved it ❤️❤️

Don't have words for it

It was fantastic.

This is going to be one of my favorites forever ❤️

How amazingly did you describe Sumans feelings and Shiva assuring her that he will always be there and set things straight 👏

Suman was the wise and emotional mother... she guided Shiva the best way possible.

Shivi Conversation has my heart ♥️

We will never see something like this in the Show, but I wish some day... our Indian Television Writers decide to write shows the way you guys write FF

Thank you so much for sharing this... going to read again