ShiVi OS ft Suman and Gaura- Heart to heart (updated) - Page 6

Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Loved suman & Shiva and shivi conversation 🥰🥰🥰

Ending was perfect 👌👌👌

Amazing 😍😍🙌🙌

Haayyyyeeee.... it's soooo beautiful ❤️

U r gem mahiii 🖤

I totally loved it

Shivi r my wholetime fav. But here my fav part was suman shiva convo...🤗

I always felt Suman only has the power to make Shiva understood the delicacy of relations this easily and u portrayed it beautifully

This mother son duo ❤

Shivi heart to heart talk 🤪 ... waiting for it to happen in show too 😆

Shivi progression .... 🔥🔥

Gaumbhi finally realising his mistake .... happy happy ending 🥳

PS: Ur this writing has a different place in my heart altogether.... when Gaumbhi ignored Suman ... i felt really bad as i myself have seen such instances in real life too and no one to point out this ... i personally feel it is the duty of both man and wife to never let the mother feel insecure and vice versa ...... i loved ur take on this 🖤

It was an amazing work. I really wanted some resolve to that scene when Gaumbi hurts Suman, unintentionally yes, but unapologetically too. And the Shiva-Suman bonding was great, especially with how much Shiva takes after Suman. And the final scene with Shivi and Dhara was awesome too, I think in some ways Shiva is to Dhara what Gaumbi is to Suman.

All in all, loved it, I totally wouldn't mind if you wrote something on the way Shivi develops in the six month gap after their conversation. 😁

This was pure bliss❤️❤️

You have penned down every emotion so beautifully.The way suman asked maa ki kya auqaat hai teri zindagi mein beta was heartbreaking🥺. Shivi convesartion was beautiful❤️.

Omg!!! What did I just read ❤️

This was lovely Mahi!! ❤️

No one was out of their character and it felt so good on reading Suman's thoughts, it was penned so beautifully..

And my Shivi loved their progression and Shiva is Suman's most ladla for a reason and he proved it ❤️❤️

wow, and I thought nothing could beat Mine - but this takes the trophy for sure - my new absolute fav

sorry for the late comment, I got a bit distracted and then it took me time to read because of all the hindi dialogues 😆 but I am glad I took my time with it otherwise I don't think I would have understood the depth with which you have written shiva it's truly amazing - each line of his was so intense and impactful

the way he staked his claim and warned her the extent of what his love was going to be was so beautifully written and not only did he explain his eventual junooniyat - he told her he expected the same from her and I just love that so so so much

this was truly a beautiful piece, especially the part where Shiva made Gautam understand the error in his ways - it was done effectively and the right way 👏

love love love this - will be rereading this a million times, thanks for this momzi 🤗

Yeh kya padh liya maine!!!

This is such a unique and beautiful OS❤️

Loved everything about it!

I bow to you gal and I feel guilty and 🥺...you know I wrote the same things after the said episode that she was hurt to use dekha us mein kya ...baki sab to the na....but I never realized that he never paid any attention towards his mom.....I didn't see that...Suman shouldn't feel hurt but den y wouldn't she.....

and today you changed my perception gal....I never thought like you have written.....but while reading I went thru so many emotions....balance is must and what a way to show this....I hope and wish this is shown in the serial....i know high hopes but still....

Suman and Shiva’s conversation was brilliant, his and raavi's was beautiful....and the change which followed was endearing....

this is a brilliant piece you have written.....loved it to the core

Mahi🤗🤗🤗

You have no idea how much I tried to hold myself from reading it in the morning. So glad I did otherwise I wouldn't have been able to enjoy it as much as I did now.

If Mine is my fav ff, this is my favorite OS of yours! You should definitely write more on things like this.

Where do I even start about what I liked because I like everything!! Honestly, when I watched this episode, something was missing. I knew Gaumbi wasn't wrong in looking after Dhara, but I wanted him to glance and check on Suman too. But reading this, it made everything alright. The balance was missing. I want this to play out exactly like this. It's worth to be filmed and telecasted! Loved Suman and Shiva's conversation where she explains her concerns, and the best part was her telling him to learn to balance and respect his wife before he teaches anything to Gaumbi. And the way she removed his insecurities and pushed him to be the mature one in their relationship and take that first step to communicate.

And ShiVi scene, I loved it Soo much. I love this assertive, yet gentle Shiva! The way he asked her what she wants, gave her all the haqs, spelled out exactly what this relationship means for him, the similar expectations he has from her including the physical aspect of their relationship, and laying ground rules for things to work was just ❤️. And loved the way he agreed to her wishes. In a way, her wishes were pretty simple. I did wish she'd ask him to never hide anything from her (e.g kangan/property kaand). But it was still beautiful. Loved how he opened up to her about everything the same night after their conversation. And the way he made Gaumbi realize his mistake was very well done. I bet Raavi is indeed proud to be his wife!

I would love for you to reflect on those 5-6 months. If not, please write more of these kinds of OS! I am totally a sucker for it!❤️❤️🤗