ShiVi OS ft Suman and Gaura- Heart to heart (updated) - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Incredible 💯❤


Amazing 👏


Loved it 🤩


I dont like that scene where gaumbi didn't see Suman 😕 and that thing was not even cleared after that 😒.

Loved this beautiful story ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Really enjoyed reading this!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

OMG❤️.....this is incredible...loved it like anything👍🏼.....it's really one of the best shivi stories I have read👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Updated Vaishaliiii

Tell me hw it was🌺

Wait I will get back to you🤗

BTW i love when you address me with my name, I don't know why😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

This is so so so soooooo beautiful

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Woaahhh❤️...This is one superbb OS....and I loved this Shiva☺️... You made us feel every emotion...My heart beat just like Raavi's when Shiva spoke and heart went out to Suman.....Only two more words.... Loved it🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Mahi giving us what we want😍

Loved how Suman and Dhara understood Shiva at the end.

And ShiVi progression

See I hate Dhara bhakti. I also hate how Gaumbi ignored Suman. I also hate it when Gautam takes excessive side of Dhara. I hate it when Suman uses wrong words for Dhara or anyone else.

But... Dhara has done a lot for the fam and bros. Their relationship won’t change for anyone. Shiva can’t reduce Dhara’s space in his life but he can increase Raavi’s place till high above🤷🏻‍♀️

Dhara understood him because at the end of the day he will always stay her child. She has given him the principles the audience love so much.

And I am fed up of Shivi being stuck so pushed them🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

This one is so beautiful I loved each and every dialogue 👏

Coming to Suman's pain that is really great you explained it well🤗

And also Shiva's dialogue to Raavi

These type of scenes are definetly needed for any relationship😊

And I am glad I can read it here Wonderful update 👍🏼

Thank you for this story😳😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

I told you I loves your One shots🤗

I loved this one seriously

firstly the convo between Suman and Shiva, Suman is so capable I hope she gives some sense to Shivi.

You know I don't say this often but I would love readers to copy paste this script with closed eyes. it was this good trust me.

I loved Shivi ka heart to heart talk, so intense so mature.

Maahi you penned it down so perfectly.

Do write more Maahi🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

This was moreeeee then perfect…

Loveeeed This Shiva..

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