ShiVi OS ft Suman and Gaura- Heart to heart (updated) - Page 3

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Sirf teaser kyu Maahi😔

I am keen to know kya hoga age

I love your Oses😳

Continue soon plz🤗

Updated Vaishaliiii

Tell me hw it was🌺

Beautiful os, no words for it👏❤️

Suman's conversation with Shiva was beautiful❤️

Loved Shivi's conversation and the progress in their relationship❤️

Shiva made Gaumbi realise his mistake

You are so talented, Wished that show should have showed something like this🤗

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Interesting teaser👏

It seems intense

Updated

Do tell me if it was intense🖤🖤

Originally posted by: ShinyShine

My My My

Loved it

I soo want Suman to have a talk with Shiva and Dev in show to talk about their behaviour with their wives.

U wrote such a beautiful piece.

Thank u🌸

Even I want Suman And her sons to talk and Shivi to have a detailed convo.

This was beyond beautiful 💗💗

Loved how u portrayed Suman's feelings🥰

Maahi I love this so much - it had everything I wanted. Suman's insecurity, Shiva's realization that he sided with bhabhi too, Shivi convo, gaumbi realization and finally mad in love Shivi🤗

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Maahi I love this so much - it had everything I wanted. Suman's insecurity, Shiva's realization that he sided with bhabhi too, Shivi convo, gaumbi realization and finally mad in love Shivi🤗

Chiki cheeeks I am glad u love this🖤🐾🖤🐾🙂🙂

I have no words to explain how much I loved this OS.

*Taking you in a bone crushing hug* 🤗❤️

I've bookmarked this thread.

You really have magic on your fingertips. 🧿

As I read through, I've marked the lines I loved so that I could quote them while commenting. But there are too many. 🤗😆 I wouldn't want to spam. Raha nahi jaa raha.

She wanted her son, not Dhara's krishna, but her Shiva.

"Tere jaise woh gehrai nahin hai uski soch mein. Woh bas har pal mein jeena janti haindil khol ke. Sochna ya fir aage ki tension lena, ye sab woh nahin kar sakti. Shayad isi liye woh ladki tujhe sonp di gayi hai. Taaki tu use sambhal sake aur woh tujhe jeena sikha sake."

"Aapka beta hoon. Bhabhi ke liye jaan haazir hai. Kuch bhi kar sakta hoon unke liye. Par aap meri jaan hai Maa!"

"Betiyan nahin bete parayr hote hain. Shaadi ke baad Maa baap ko to bhool hi jate hain."

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There are more...

Let me quote Raavi here, "Could mere words be so intoxicating?"

Your words are indeed intoxicating. ❤️

Mahi giving us what we want😍

Loved how Suman and Dhara understood Shiva at the end.

And ShiVi progression

Maahiii❤️

This was such a heart warming OS. It was so beautiful❤️

SO many emotions bundled together and you have penned down each scene so well. I felt so emotional reading Shiva-Suman conversation. How I wish we get something like this on the show. The conversation has my whole heart. The reassurance Shiva gave to Suman, Suman beautifully pointing out his behavior towards Raavi...this was so heart touching❤️

Shivi scene after that was so beautiful...I loved this Shiva...Ek dum seedhi baat..no beating around the bush...the heart to heart conversation and their progress after that was such a treat to read...I wish we have atleast 5% of this in the show...Shivi have not had one normal conversation after the wedding

Finally Gaumbi realised his mistake through Shiva....❤️

I loved reading this Maahi...really much needed now...Thanks for this update🤗