ShiVi ff: can I call you mine? (Part 13- page 7) - Page 3

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Raavi pov

As we enter the restaurant..... I must say that the interior was beautiful...... Perfectly elegant design..

It was simple yet elegant!!!!

Raavi- nice place!!! (Smiling)

Rishita- of course hamare in-laws ki hai!!! (Proudly)

Raavi- hamare nahi tumare in-laws ki... (Sad)

Rishita- chala abb senti maat hoon....upar chalte hai (smiling)

Raavi- upar??? (Confused)

Rishita- yes yeh toh niche ka floor yeh.... Upar toh open spaces hai... (Excitingly)

Raavi- open space. ....chal!!!!! (Excitingly)

We didn't see anything down floor we directly went to the upper floor....

The upper floor was more good.... There were less people up.....

We both settle ourselves..... Then a waiter came to take our order....

Waiter- mam what will u like to order?? (Politely)

Rishita- raavi what will u have??

Raavi- tu hi order karde na.... (Smiling)

Rishita- k ....... 2 chicken fried rice with 2 watermelon lemonade... (Smiling)

Waiter- sure mam..... (Smiling)

The waiter went....

Rishita- yaha ke chicken fried rice is awesome ...... Bohot tasty hai.....bhabhi ki recipe hai (Smiling)

Raavi- bhabhi????

Rishita- ha dev ki dhara bhabhi... (Smiling)

Raavi- dhara......... 🤔

Yeh naam toh suna suna hai !!! 🤔

Rishita- kis soch main par gayi tu raavi??? (Tens)

Raavi- meine yeh naam suna hai....... Dhara.... (Lost)

Rishita- suna hoga..... Shiva ne bataya hoga... (Teasing)

Raavi- rish!!!!! Tu pagal ho gayi hai....... Pata hai na ki Shiva mujhse baat nahi karta so I don't know anything about his family..... Tu bhi na!!! (Irritated)

Rishita- acha acha .... Thik hai, gussa maat ho.... Tu ajj itni weird kyu behave kar rahi hai??? (Tens)

Raavi- sorry...... Pata nahi jab se uss lady se mili hoon..... Mood karab hogaya hai mera (frustrated) ...... Sorry !! (Smiling)

Rishita- abb dekh na jab food aa jayega tab tera mood bhi thik ho jayega.... (Smiling)

Raavi- hmm....

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

Bhabhi and krish went...... Dev n i were getting bored....

Shiva- kitna boring hai ajj ka din.... Na koyi fun ..... Aur ajj toh restaurant mein bhi koyi Ladki bhi nahi hai!!!! (Disappointed)

Dev- sach kaha tune jab hum busy hote hai tab toh restaurant main kitni ladkiya aati hai.... Aur ajj toh hum free hai tab koyi ladki nahi hai.... (Disappointed)

Shiva- tu sayad bhul gaya hoga.... Teri girlfriend hai..... Meri tara single nahi hai tu.... Rishita ko bata du!!!! (Laughing)

Dev- seriously abb tu mujhe dhamki de raha hai.... (Annoyed)

At that time gombi came.....

Gautam- yeh mein kya dekh raha hoon!!!!!(shock) ... Mere dev aur Shiva yaha!!! (Sarcastically)

Dev- kya gombi app bhi na!!! (Irritated)

Shiva- yeh sab app ki wajah se hai..... Apne hi humein mazboor kiya hai.... (Making a sad pout)

Gautam- u two should be thankful that i haven't tell anything to dhara.... (Pulling their ears)

Dev- gombi kya kar rahe hoon..sab dekh rahe hai!!!! (Requesting)

Shiva- hamari bhi kuch izzat hai.... Please choro!!!! ( Requesting)

Gombi left our ears.....

Gautam- sudhar jao tum dono.....

Shiva- yeh toh kabhi nahi ho sakta... (Laughing)

Before gombi can again pulled our ears.... We run upper floor....

Dev- hum upar ja rahe hai... (Shouting)

Then we both reach upper flood..... Seriously the terrace area is more beautiful than the lower one......

Dev n I turn towards each other n start laughing!!!!

Dev- hum bhi kithe Shaitaan hai na !!! (Laughing)

Shiva- ha.... Bohot zyada!!!(laughing)

Then we both saw two girls facing back side.....

Dev n I turn to each other..... N smile

Dev- chal!!!

Then we went towards them..... N sit behind them.....

Dev- ajj mausam kitna romantic hai na!!!!

Shiva- sach mein !!!!! Pad kya kaare hum singles ko tho koyi puchta hi nahi !!!!!

Dev- iss mausam mein bass ek achi si ladki ko dekh lo na toh ase hi pyaar ho jayega!!!! (Smiling)

Then the two girls turn.......

We both were shock.... We were left dumbstruck ...... Dev ke chehre se toh glow hi chali gayi...

Dev- rish......rishita...tum!!!!!! (Scared)

Rishita was angrily looking at dev ..... While raavi was shock seeing us...

Rishita- dev tum!!!!!! (Angrily)

Then she stood up.....then raavi then dev n at last I....

Rishita- so..... Yeh mausam kitna romantic hai...... Singles ko tho koyi puchta hi nahi..... Iss mausam main bass ek achi ladki ko dekhlo tho pyaar ase hi ho jayega!!!!! (Angrily)

Dev- baby woh toh...... (Scared)

Rishita- dev mujhe na tumse baat hi nahi karni hai..... Chal raavi (holding her hand)

While they were leaving.... Dev hold her hand

Dev- rishita!!!!!! Please ek baar toh meri baat suno..... Please mujhe maff kardo Please!!!!! (Requesting)

Rishita- kya baat karni hai ha..... Tum ase hi kissi bhi ladki ko bina dekhne flirt karne lagte hoon... Dev!!!! (Broken)

Rishita was almost gonna cry....

Ajj toh gaye!!!!

Dev- rishita please meri baat toh suno.... I m sorry!!! (Requesting)

Rishita- nahi suni koyi baat dev tumne mujhe kaafi hurt kiya hai.... Jab ek ladka ase kisi bhi ladki se flirt kar sakta hai....toh kya woh sach mein ek hi ladki se jur ke rehega???..... Chal raavi!!! (Angrily)

They were leaving.... Rishita stop n turn back..

Rishita- hamare bich mein jo bhi thak woh ajj katam!!!! (Hurt)

Then she hold raavi hand n was leaving

Raavi- ruk!!!! (Stop rishita)

Rishita- kya huwa?? (Shock)

Raavi- dev ki baat toh sunle!!!

Rishita- raavi Tu bhi!!!!! Kya baat suni hai abb (shock)

Raavi- rishita ase walk out karne se nahi hoga..... Atleast ek baar uski baat toh sunle..... Please ..... Dekh rishita please ase relationship mat thod..... Rishte kaafi pyaar se jurta hai ase kisi bhi misunderstandings ko bich main maat aane deh..... (Requesting)

This girl!!!! 🥺

Rishita just crying!!!!!

Raavi- rishita please meri baat sun aur ek baar dev ki baat sunle please... (Consoling)

Then raavi went near her ears..... N told her something..... Rishita expression changes....

🤨🤨

Rishita- aao dev!!!!

Then rishita took dev to other side.....

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It was already 3 minutes since rishita n dev went to talk..... Still they didn't return..... Here I was standing with raavi..... Raavi wasn't even talking with me..... Forget about talking she was not even looking at me.... I was getting restless...

Shiva- raavi woh!!!!

Raavi- tum log kyu sirf apne baare mein sochte ho hai..... (Angrily)

I was shock..... She literally was gonna kill me..... She was looking so angry....

Meine toh sirf 'raavi woh' hi bola tha!!😟

Raavi- tum boys ko kyu lagta hai ki relationship itni asani se katam ho jata hai...... Tum log toh jaldi move on kar sakte hoon lekin hum girls...... Hum move on nahi kar sakta..... Tum log toh kisi se bhi flirt karte hoon..... Kya kabhi socha hai hum ladkiyo ko kaisa lagta hai apne pyaar ko kisi aur ke saath flirt karte huwe dekh kar!!!! (Hurt)

Raavi literally bursted out...... She was very angry or so to say hurt!!!!

Hurt??? By y??? 🤔

Shiva- raavi woh!!!! (Guilty)

Rishita- please Shiva ...... Kuch bhi maat bolna (folding hands)

She almost broke n was crying ...... I hug her.....

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

Rishita n I were enjoying our sweet times when we heard two boys talking Or so to say flirting with us....

Both rishita and i look at each other to see who this boys are ..... N we turn to see the biggest shock...

Dev And Shiva!!!!!!

Rishita was broken to see dev so i was to see Shiva..... K k Shiva doesn't love me...... Bt still I m hurt..... Woh kaise kisi bhi ladki se flirt kar sakta hai....

Rishita literally bursted out at dev..... She was even ready to break this relationship.... Bt I told him

Raavi- (in rishita ears) rishita please yeh stupid decision maat le..... Tu dev se sacha wala pyaar karti hai..... I know u cant stay without him ..... Maana usne galti ki hai..... Bt he deserve a chance na..... Dekh yeh rishta maat thod nahi toh baad mein meri Tara regret karegi.... Mein jaanti hoon yeh pain jab tum kisi se pyaar kare aur woh tumse pyaar na kare.... Meri baat sun dev Tujhe pyaar karta hai...ek baar uski baat sun (calmly)

Rishita understood me n took dev to talk..... Here Shiva n I were left....

Honestly I was super angry on him..... I literally wanted to kill him..... Kitna immature act karta hai yeh ladka....

I bursted out at him..... Nahi hota control abb....

I started crying.... Shiva hug me....

For a moment the world stop.... I forgot everything that had happened.... The only thing I could sense was he is hugging me......

Raavi pov end

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That's it

The end

This was sooo amazing…..

Poor Rishita she really was hurt….

Aaaww Shiva hugged Raavi..

Cant wait for the next chapter..

I read the 1st page and den missed on other updates ...

read dem together 😊

dhara without knowing don't take sides 😡

shiva and dev maar khane taiyyar ho jao😆

abhi hug chal raha hai to 😳

loved it

waiting

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

I read the 1st page and den missed on other updates ...

read dem together 😊

dhara without knowing don't take sides 😡

shiva and dev maar khane taiyyar ho jao😆

abhi hug chal raha hai to 😳

loved it

waiting

Thanks alot.... Hope u are liking it 😃😃

Part 8 : meeting gombi

Raavi pov....

I was in the best moment of my life.... I was feeling love in his embrace..... The way he hold me making me feel. Safe with him..... His care, protection, love , understanding, I could feel everything in his embrace....

After 60 seconds we both leave each other..... We both look at each other awkwardly...

Shiva- wo..... Woh.... R u fine?? (Awkward)

Raavi- ya I m (wiping my eyes) ..... Thank u (smiling)

Shiva- thank u kis liye??? (Confused)

Raavi- for everything..... (Smiling)

Shiva- everything????(Confused)

At that time rishita n dev came holding hands...

Shiva- sab theek hai na...

Rishita- yes sab theek hai abb!!! (Smiling)

Then she hug me....

Rishita-(in my ears) thank u so much raavi!!!!! Agar tu mujhe nahi samjhati toh ajj mein sayad sab kho deti!!!

Raavi- it's k!!! (Then I broke the hug)

Shiva- yeh tum dono kya baat kar rahe hoon!!!! Pehle bhi raavi ne tumare (to rishita) ears par kuch kaha n u decided to talk to dev..... Aur abb bhi (suspiciously)

Dev- yeh girls ki baat hai we won't understand dude!!! (Laughing )

Rishita- dev bilkul theek bol raha hai... (Smiling)

At that time the waiter came with the food...

Raavi- rish!!!! Hamara order aa gaya!!!

Rishita- aa..... Chalo sit down!!! (Smiling)

Then the waiter kept the food on the table n while going he was smirking at dev n Shiva..d

Rishita n I sat down.... The food look so tempting

Raavi- kaafi tempting hai!!! (Excitingly)

Rishita- taste tho aur acha hai.... (Smiling)

Then we both have a bit....

Raavi- wow!!!!!! It's amazing!!! (Excitingly)

Rishita- kaha tha na... It's the best chicken fried rice in whole Somnath!!! (Excitingly)

We both were so much enjoying that we forgot about the boys!!!

I look at Shiva n dev n then rishita 😅

Raavi- u guys too sit na!!! (Smiling)

Then both the boy took their sit...

Rishita- dev try na!!! (Taking some rice in the spoon)

Dev- nahi tum log khao.... (Smiling)

Raavi- bohot saara hai..... Hum dono akele katam nahi kar payenge!!! (Smiling)

Rishita- raavi bilkul theek bol rahi hai.... Dev have!!! (Smiling)

Then rishita feed him!!!

They look so beautiful together!! 😍

Both Shiva n I gave them a smile.....

We look at each other...

We both were awkward..... Of course to be around a couple is really awkward ..... Specially for us singles!!!

I gave him a spoon...

Raavi- khao na.... (Smiling)

Shiva- hmm.....

Then he took the spoon n started eating....

The first time we were sharing food!!😍

We all enjoy our time

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

After having the food..... We all were talking.... Spending some times together...

Dev- waise tum dono ki holidays kab thak hai?

Raavi- 1 month!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- uske baat?? (Curious )

Rishita- uske baat results n then classes.... 1 month ke baad fir delhi jayenge n we will stay in our hostel... (Sad)

Shiva- k....... Waise tum logo ki breaks nahi hoti??? I mean summer breaks n all??

Raavi- hoti hai.....

Shiva- toh tum log breaks mein toh nahi aate..... I mean I saw rishita coming last year.... Bt u didn't??

Rishita-actually summer breaks mein hum raavi ke masi ke ghar rehte hai.... Aur last time winter break mein masi chahti thi ki raavi unke saath hi Christmas manaye ..... Isliye raavi ke mom n dad bhi delhi aa gaye.... N I have to come here to spend time with my parents n dev!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- ooo....

Dev- abb teri (looking at Shiva) questions katam ho gayi hai toh phir Christmas ki planing kare...(smiling)

Raavi- hai karte hai na (excitingly)..... Waise ajj ka date kya hai??

Dev- it's 15 December!!!

Rishita- still 10 days.... (Frown)

We chuckle....

Raavi- it's k rishita uske pehle hum planing karte hai na kya kya karna hai!!!! (Excitingly)

Rishita- ha bohot maza aayega..... Party..... Shoppings... Bohot maza karenge!!! (Excitingly)

Dev- bilkul.... (Smiling)

While we were talking..... Suddenly gombi came up from nowhere .... He saw us n came towards us...

Gombi look at us suspiciously...

Of course bhai ko kisi ladki ke saath dekhenge toh doubt toh hoga hi!!! 🤭

Dev- gombi app!!! App yaha??(Shock)

Unka hi restaurant hai!!! Woh toh aayenge hi na!!! 🤦‍♂️

I saw rishita body language changes..... She was scared n nervous at the same time...... Whereas raavi was chill...

Maybe she don't know gombi!! 🤔

Gautam- Shiva yeh kya teri girlfriend hai??? (Suspiciously looking at raavi)..

Raavi was shock.....so was I

Girlfriend!!!!😳

We both look at each other...

Shiva- kya bol rahe ho app gombi?? (Shockingly)

Gautam- dekh shiva Tu daar maat mujhe sach sach baata!!!! (Smiling) aur dev yeh kya teri friend hai... (Looking at rishita)

Rishita n dev look at each other shockingly.

I chuckle.... Everyone gave me a weird look...

Kya??? Kya has kar galat kiya???🤦‍♂️
Of course gombi ne hasne wali baat hi toh ki hai..... Firstly mujhe aur raavi ko ek rishte main jhor diya jabki hum sirf friends hai aur jo actually ek relationship main hai unko friends bol rahe hai!! 🤭

Gautam- Tu kyu has raha hai!!! (Annoyed)

Shiva- gombi aap na ulta bol rahe hai.... (Laughing)

Gautam- matlab?? (Confused)

Dev- matlab ki yeh dono (pointing at me n raavi) friends hai.... Aur hum dono (pointing at him n rishita) relationship mein hai.... (Laughing)

The girls look at us shockingly.....

I understand them..... Instead of being scared that gombi catches them red handed..... Dev was laughing....

Rishita n raavi gave each other a weird look

Shiva- k k girls relax...... Gombi ki thinking kaafi modern hai.... He is just like our buddy..... Hum unse kuch nahi chupate... (Smiling)

Dev- yes rishita I already told him about u bass tumari photo nahi dikhayi so he got confused.... (Smiling)

Finally rishita n raavi face relax...

Gautam- it's k rishita darne ki koyi baat nahi hai..... Mujhe sab pata hai (smiling)

Rishita- hmm.....

Gautam- actually I never saw ur face so I got confused n I thought u guys r friends!!! (Smiling)

Dev-woh toh theek hai.... Par gombi apko raavi aur Shiva par kaise doubt hogaya... (Laughing)

Gautam- pata nahi... Bass feel hua aur bol diya ..... Waise nice to meet u two (smiling)

Rishita- hi bhaiya... (Forwarding hand)

Gautam- (shaking hands) hello rishita..... Waise tu bhi mujhe gombi hi bula... Bhaiya kaafi old wali feeling deta hai!!! (Laughing)

We all laugh....

Rishita- k gombi.... (Smiling)

Gautam- hello..... Mein gautam (forwarding hand to shake)

Raavi- (shaking hands) hi gombi..... Mein raavi!!! (Smiling)

Gautam- bohot acha laga tum dono se milkar... (Smiling)

Raavi- humein bhi.... (Smiling)

Gautam- mein jo bolne aaya woh toh bhul hi gaya.... Actually dev - Shiva dhara ka call aaya tha puch rahi thi ki tum log kab ghar aaoge!!! Usse call karke bol dena!!!

Telling this he went

Then I look at the time .. It's was 3:05 pm...

Shiva- dev humein chalna chahiye abb...

Dev- ha toh phir tum dono (to rishita n raavi) bhi humare saath chalo... (Smiling)

Shiva- ha dev theek bol raha hai....

Rishita- theek hai.... Raavi mein bill pay karke aati hoon... (Smiling)

Dev- mein bhi aata hoon... (Smiling)

Then both dev n rishita went....

I help raavi with her shopping bags.... There were so many bags.....

Y do girls go crazy while shoppings!!! 😬

After dev n rishita came.... We left for home..... First we drop rishita n raavi n then leave for our home

Shiva pov end

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That's it

The end

gautam met the future bahu's😆

I want dhara to see raavi😆

glad that dev and rishita talked

Beautiful part... thanks. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Loved it!💜💜

hihi cant wait till Dhara and Raavi meet again 😂

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

gautam met the future bahu's😆

I want dhara to see raavi😆

glad that dev and rishita talked

thank u , aur rahi baat raavi n dhara ki milne ki.. The meeting will be interesting 🙃🙃