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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 4 : First


Raavi pov...

We all were having alot of fun..... The game was amazing.... Bohot logo ke secrets pata chala hai.....

Mallini- chalo na hum sab dance karte hai (excitingly)...... Waise bhi subha hone wala hai... (Frown)

Riya- ha let's play the music..... Oo wait.... Shiva (turning to Shiva) u sing a song... Waise bhi teri awaz toh bohot achi hai .... (Smiling)

Ha mujhe bhi sunni hai!!!!! 😚

Shiva- par mein kaise..... (Nervously)

Rishita-chalo na Shiva .... Tum kar sakte ho.... (Cheering)

Everyone- Shiva !!!!!! Shiva!!!! (Cheerful)

Then mallini hand him the guitar....

Then he started playing the guiter....

Really guys who can play guitar looks dam hot!!!!! 🥵

(song : saari raat)


Ni ajj rehne de, saari raat tere

Aanchal ke tale

Ni so rehne de saari raat tere baahon mein mujhe

Ni ajj rehne de, saari raat tere

Aanchal le tale

Ni so rehne de saari raat tere baahon mein mujhe

Dev took rishita hand n went on the center n start dancing.. Samuel took Priscilla.... Nikhil took both Mallini n riya ..... They all start dancing......


Ik vaari teri mainu yaad jo aave

Ni saari saari raat na jaave

Ankhiyon mein kabhi teri dekh lu hanju

Haye meri bhi aankh bhar jaave


Ho.... Oo... Oo...

Rakhna hai tujhe dil se lagaake

Ho... O... Oo...

Saari zindagi bass apna banaake


All were having so much fun..... While dancing nikhil approach me bt I send him back ....

Chahe kitna bhi irritated karle he don't make me feel lonely !!! 😁

While I was busy on my thoughts..... Shiva came n ask me for a dance...

Shiva- hey will u dance with me???

Always 😍

I nodded... Then he hold my hand..... N took me to the stage....

He pull me closer

My heart skipped a beat.....shiver run down my spine


Ni ajj rehne de saari raat teri aanchal ke tale

Ni so jaane de saari raat teri baahon mein mujhe

Ni ajj rehne de saari raat teri aanchal ke tale

Ni so jaane de saari raat teri baahon mein mujhe


While dancing we both were lost in each other eyes...... New feeling were developing in my heart .. I could see the same for him in his eyes...

Our first dance was indeed special for both of us!!!!

The party was over n went it was now time to leave for home

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We all were walking in the streets....

It was already 4:00 am.... We have to reach home fast.... Or else if mom ko pata chalna then toh...... (Scared)

So all of u depart from the outhouse

Nikhil n Samuel decided to drop Priscilla, riya n mallini... Since their house were in the same colony....

While dev told us that he n shiva will drop us..... Since our colony was near to each other.....

Dev n rishita were walking together n spending some quality time ...... Actually rishita wanted me to spend time with shiva n therefore she told that she had to discuss something important with dev..... So I had to walk with shiva....

Isn't that our first walk together!!! 😍

Dev n rishita were walking in the front..... Whereas me n shiva were walking a distance away from them.... Since we both didn't wanted to disturb them....

Both of us were walking silently...

Shiva- oi hello miss topper!!!! Atleast baat to karo..... Since hum saath ja rahe hai toh atleast baat toh kar hi sakte hai right?? (Irritated)

Raavi- thik hai...... Toh batao kya baat karni hai???

Shiva- kuch bhi...... (I look at him confusingly) thik hai apni introduction hi de do....

Raavi- acha thik hai ....naam toh tum jaante hi ho Raavi..... Abhi mein medical ki padhai kar rahi hoon....

Shiva- yeh sab toh pata hai mujhe!!!!

Raavi- toh phir kya???

Shiva- apne likes ke baare main hi batao do??

Raavi- I like to read books, mujhe poetry aur quote pasand hai..... Mujhe crafts works karna bhi pasand hai..... Aur apne family ke saath time spend karna..... Aur tum??? (Excitingly)

Shiva- mujhe travelling karna, party karna..... Nayi chize explore karna kaafi pasand hai..... Aur family ke saath fun karna

I smile....

Shiva- waise tumne notice kiya hum dono ki likes kaafi different hai..... Hum dono kitne different hai na (smiling)

Raavi- different yet similar..... We both love spending time with family... (Smiling)

Shiva- right!!!! Waise kon kon hai tumhare family mein??

Raavi- mein, mom n dad...... Aur tumhare??

Shiva- mere bare bhai gombi n bhabhi dhara..... Phir dev, mein aur mera chota bhai krish..... (Smiling)

Raavi- oo good.... (Smiling)

Then we normally talk about schools n all...

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We were outside my house door....

Shiva- cho we have reach your home!!!!

Dev- how will u guys get in!!! (Looking at the closed door)

Rishita- you two don't worry..... We have a lot of experience ..... We will manage!!!! (Laughing)

Raavi- yes we will manage u guys too go n take rest.... (Smiling)

Dev hug rishita....

Dev- take care....

Rishita- u two....

Dev- bye raavi... (Smiling)

Raavi- bye take care!!!

Shiva - k bye girls.... (Smiling)

Shiva was smiling at me...... I smile too.... Both of us were staring each other..... Rishita n dev were observing us.....

Dev- chale shiva!!!!

Shiva- ha chalo..... (Smiling)

Then they went....

Rishita- oo ho.... Smiling n all (teasing)

Raavi- zyada mat soch!!! (Irritated)

Rishita- jaise tu usse dekh rahi thi aur woh tujhe...... Woh sab mujhe zyada sochne main majboor kar rahe hai !!! (Teasing)

Raavi- yeh sab baate chor aur andar chal... Isse pehle ki maa ko pata chale...

Then we went inside...... Thankfully mom didn't saw us....N sleep

Raavi pov end..


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Shiva pov.....

After dropping rishita n raavi, dev n I return to home......

In the way

Dev- ek baat puchu??? (Seriously)

Shiva- puch na....

Dev- tu raavi ko like karta hai???

I was shock...

Shiva- yeh tu kya bol raha hai..... Mein woh bhi raavi ko like.... Tera dimag toh thik hai na?? (Irritated)

Dev- dekh sach sach bata jaise tu usse dekh raha tha..... Uske saath dance kar raha tha.... Kuch hai kya??? (Excitingly)

Shiva-dev tu zyada soch raha hai..... Mein woh bhi usse like kabhi nahi.... Bhai hum dono mein na zameen aur Aasmaan ka fark hai..... Mein usse kabhi like nahi kar sakta... (Irritated)

Dev- thik hai ...

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We reach the home... It was already 5:00 am.... We were hoping that no one is awake.....

Dev- chal awaz maat nikal na..... (Whispering)

Shiva- k (whispering)

We both were going to our room..... When we both feel someone pulling our ears ....

Both dev n i look at each other

Ajj toh paka gaye!!!! 😰

At this time we were justing praying that woh dhara bhabhi na ho .....

We turn....

Thank God!!!! 😮

Dev- gombi app?? (Smiling)

Gautam- ha ghadhero.... Kaha se aa rahe ho??? (Suspiciously)

Shiva- kahi se bhi nahi gombi... Hum toh morning walk se aa rahe hai.. (Nervously)

He pull our ears more tightly....

Dev&shiva- ahhh... Gombi dard ho raha hai!! (Pleading)

Gautam- dard toh hoga hi..... Pehle toh jhoot bolna ban karo.... Morning walk pad kon jeans, T-shirt aur jacket pehen kar jaata hai (angrily) ..... Party karne gaye teh na (calmly)

Dev- woh gombi......... (Nervously)

Gautam- jhoot toh bolna mat... (Angrily)

Dev n I look at each other .....

Shiva- ha gombi hum party karne gaye teh..... (Nervously)

Gautam- (he left our ears) oi ghadhero itni raat ko kyu gaye ..... Subha jaha jaana chahte ho jao.... Par raat ko maat jao..... Agar dhara ko pata chala na tum logo ko stick se maregi....

Shiva- please bhabhi ko mat batana please.... (Requesting)

Dev - ha please bhabhi ko kuch bhi maat batana.. (Requesting)

Gautam - thik hai nahi bataunga..... Pad next time se dhyan rakhna....

Shiva- ji.....

Gautam- now go n sleep before dhara wake up...

Dev&shiva- (hugging gombi) thank u....

Gautam- k k go ...... (Smiling)

Shiva pov end

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Thats it

The end

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Loveeed This

Cant wait to read more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Awesome ❤️ Love to read more

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Please update the next part soon. Eagerly waiting for it.😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Part 5: Meeting the family


Author pov

The day was very bright..... Cold wind passing through the window.... Our two princess were sleeping so cutely.....

Did I say cutely!!!! 😳

Prafulla- raavi rishita!!!!!! (Shouting)

Prafulla was continuosly knocking at the door

Prafulla- jaldi utto beta already 10:00 am ho gaya hai!!!! (Shouting)

Prafulla- (thinking) hostel me itni jaldi utti hai..... Toh ghar main kyu nahi!!!

Jagat just came from the market....

Jagat-prafulla!!!! (Shouting from the Hall)

Prafulla- aayi!!!! (Shouting) raavi rishita jaldi utt jao!!!!! (Shouting)

Prafulla went to the Hall....

Inside raavi room....

Rishita- raavi utt!!!! (Sleepy voice)

Raavi- nahi rishita tu pehle utt!!! (Sleepy voice)

Rishita- raavi utt na please!!!! (Sleeping)

Raavi- dekh kal raat bhi tune mujhe sone nahi diya aur abb bhi sone nahi de rahi!! (Sleeping)

Prafulla- raavi!!!!! Rishita!!!!!! Jaldi shower lekar aa jao...... Dekho papa ne garam garam samosa lekar aaye hai!!!! (Shouting from the Hall)

Raavi n rishita open their eyes.....

Raavi &rishita- samosa... (Excitingly shouting)

Both look at each other!!!!! N wake up n took their dresses.....

Raavi run inside the washroom....

Rishita- raavi!!!(shouting) yeh toh cheating hai... (Irritated)

Raavi- cheating nahi baby...... Pehle hi kaha tha utt ja... (Laughing)

Rishita- tu bohot bari cheater hai.. (Irritated)

Raavi- agar samosa khaane ke liye cheating karna pare toh hai cheater hoon (laughing)

This girls!!!!! N their nautanki!!!!! 😅

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In pandya niwas

A lady is shown working in the kitchen..... She was making breakfast...

Gautam- dhara!!!!(back hugging her)

Dhara- ha!!!!!

Gautam- ajj school nahi gayi!!!

Dhara- gombi ajj Saturday hai.... Saturday mein school ki holiday hoti hai.... (Turning back)

Gautam- mein toh bhul hi gaya tha.... (Then he move closer) mein soch raha tha ki aaj restaurant mein na ja kar ghar main hi rahu!!!! (Looking at her lips)

Dhara- (keeping her hand around his neck) my dearest husband apko restaurant jaana hi hoga..... Aaj apke special clients aane wale hai.... Abb choro mujhe....

Dhara free herself from gautam grip

Gautam- dhara tu bhi na.... (Making a puppet face)

Dhara- aur yeh teen bandar kaha hai!!! (Smiling)

Boy- mein yaha hoon (shouting)

Dhara- krishu!!!! (Smiling)

Krish- bhabhi.... Good morning!!! (Smiling)

Dhara- subha ke 10 baj gaye hai aur tu abhi utta hai...

Krish- nahi bhabhi mein toh 6 mein hi utt gaya.... Bhul gaye ajj mein accountancy ki tuition thi 7 baje.....mein toh abhi tuition se aaya hoon... (Making a puppet face)

Dhara- sorry krishu mein toh bhul gayi!!! (Holding her ears)

Krish- it's k..... Waise Shiva aur dev kaha hai!!!!

Dhara- woh dono tho (smiling)........ Woh dono abhi thak bhi nahi utte!!!! (Shock)

Then dhara turn to gombi....

Dhara- woh dono abhi bhi so rahe hai??

Gautam- ha dhara!!!!

Dhara- itni der thak..... Kal toh 9 mein hi so gaye the.....

Gautam was getting sweats..

Gautam-(thinking) kaha pasa diya hai in dono ne!!!!! 😰

Krish- bhabhi go n wake them up...... Mein bhi bag rak kar aata hoon

Dhara- k (caring his cheeks)

Then krish went to his room..... While dhara n gombi went to dev n Shiva room..... First she went to dev room

Dhara- dev!!!! (Shouting)

She knock at the door..... N found that the door was open.... She went inside to check dev bt didn't found him...

Dhara- gombi dev kaha hai???

Gautam-mujhe nahi pata... (Nervously)

Dhara look at gombi suspiciously n went towards Shiva room...

Dhara-shi..... (She saw that the room was open)

She went inside the room n saw dev n Shiva sleeping..... Gautam follow her...

Dhara- yeh dev Shiva ke room mein kya kar raha hai..... Raat ko tho apne room main hi soya huwa tha.... Par abb... (Suspiciously)

Gautam-(thinking)ajj toh paka marne wale hai!!!! (Scared) 😰

Dhara wake them up..

Dhara- dev.... Shiva utto!!! (Shaking them)

Dev- thodi der please!!! (Sleeping)

Shiva- abhi abhi toh soye hai!!! (Sleeping)

Dhara-abhi abhi!!!!

Gautam- dhara Tu jakar krish ko breakfast de na...usse bhuk lagi hogi... Abhi abhi tuition se aaya hai.... Mein in dono ko utta dungi... (Nervously)

Dhara- pad....

Krish- bhabhi bhuk lagi hai!!! (Shouting)

Gautam- jaldi jaldi ja....

Then gombi send dhara

Gautam- oi utt jao!!!! (Waking them up)

Still dev n Shiva were not waking....

Gautam saw the water jar nearby

He took it n throw water on them ...

Dev n Shiva wake up with a jerk

Dev- gombi..... (Frustrated)

Shiva- yeh kya hai... (Frustrated)

Gautam- dhara aayi thi.....

Dev-bhabhi !!!(scared)

Gautam-jaldi utt jao n shower lekar niche aana aur ha dhara bula rahi hai.... Aur ha agar woh puche ki kyu tu (to dev) Shiva ke room mein soya... Toh bolna ki teri room ka AC kam nahi kar raha tha isliye tu yaha akar soya.....

Shiva- hmm...... Gombi jhoot!!!! (Smirking)

Gautam- agar jhoot nahi bola na toh woh tum logo ki asi halat kar dengi ki tum logo kabhi bahar jaane ki soch bhi nahi sakte... (Angrily)

Dev- k k maaf!!!

Gautam- jaldi aana...

Then gautam went from there..... Dev went to his room n took shower.... While Shiva took shower in his bathroom....

Author pov end

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Raavi pov

Mein aur rishita samosa kaafi shauk se kha rahe teh..... Both of us are crazy for samosa

Jagat- aram se khao!!!! Yeh sab tum dono ke liye hi hai!!! (Smiling)

Rishita- uncle yeh raavi hai na yeh sab kha legi!!!! (Complaining)

Raavi- acha ji madam...... Tum toh kha hi nahi na.. (Sarcastically)

Prafulla- yeh dono itne bare ho gaye hai.... Phir bhi abhi thak bachpana nahi gaya... (Smiling)

Jagat- aur mein chahta hoon ki kabhi bhi na jaye!!!! (Smiling)

At that time rishita father call her...

Ring ring.....

Rishita- dad ka call hai...... Mein attend karke aati hoon (smiling)..... Aur raavi akele mat khana (warning)

Everyone nodded.....

Mom n dad were having their breakfast while I was having the samosa...

After few minutes rishita came...

Raavi- kya huwa!!!!

Rishita- woh dad ke rahe the ki ghar aa jao.... Mein 1 week se yahi hoon na so.... (Sad)

I was sad..... If she is not here how r we gonna enjoy!!!

Raavi- jaana zaroori hai!!! (Making a puppet face)

Rishita- hmm....

Jagat- it's k rishita papa miss kar rahe honge tumhe... (Smiling)

Rishita- ji uncle...... Mein raavi ko bhi ke jao.... (Mom n dad look at her) woh mein toh yaha rehti hoon par raavi tho hamare ghar bhi nahi aati papa ko bura lagta hai.... Isliye 2-3 dino ke liye mein isse le jao.... (Requesting)

Prafulla- pad....

Rishita-please aunty please..... (Requesting)

Jagat- theek hai.... Pad 2-3 dino mein aa jana tum dono.... Tum dono na ho toh ghar suna suna lagta hai!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- thanks dad.... (Smiling)

I look at mom ...

Prafulla- theek hai pad jaldi aa jana.... (Smiling)

Then both me n rishita hug mom n dad

Rishita- thank u!!!!

After that we had our breakfast..... N did our packing

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

After taking shower.... I went down to see everyone having breakfast...

Dhara- aa gaya tu..... Sit (smiling )

Shiva- good morning everyone!!! (Smiling)

Krish- subha ke 10 baj gaye hai... (Sarcastically)

Shiva - mujhe time dekhna aata hai !!!! (Sarcastically)

All laugh at him

Bichare ka chehra dekhne layak tha!! 🤭

Dev - bachu tu abhi bhi bacha hi hai!! (Laughing)

Krish- aur tu Buddha!!!! (Sarcastically)

Dev!!!! 🤭🤭

All laugh at him

Dev-krish!!! (Angrily)

Dhara- kya krish..... Theek hi toh bol raha hai mera bacha.... Aur Shiva dev tum log toh kal jaldi so gaye teh na aur dev tu toh apne room main soya tha tho phir subha Shiva ke room mein....(suspiciously)

Dev - bhabhi woh.... Woh.... Actually mere room ki AC kam nahi kar rahi thi isliye mein Shiva ke room mein hi so gaya..... (Nervously)

Krish- woh toh theek hai par tu itna nervous kyu ho raha hai???(Suspiciously)

Yeh krish ka kuch karna parega!! 😑

Me n dev look at each other....

Gautam- krish Tu bhi na kitna sawal puchta hai..... Dhara toh teacher hai usse toh sawal puch ne ki aadat hai (bhabhi look at gombi) ... Pad tu toh student hai na..... Toh padhai par focus kar.... (Strictly)

Gombi best hai!!!! Dev aur gombi tho surely meri hi bhai hai😎..... Lekin yeh krish iska doubt hai mujhe!!!! 😒

Dhara- mera krishu toh padhai mein acha hai..... Hamesha tuition bhi jaata hai (caring his cheeks)

Krish was having a proud look 😌

Idiot hai yeh!!!! 😒

Dhara- pad yeh dev aur Shiva ko tho mein na hi books ke saath dekhti hoon na hi padhai karte huwe!!! Hamesha sirf phone par...... Pad pata nahi kaise pass hote hai yeh dono!!!!

Talent 😈

Shiva- bhabhi yeh ek talent hai jo yeh krish ke pass nahi hai!!! (Laughing)

Dev- ha!!! (Laughing)

Krish- bhabhi!!!! (Making a puppet face)

Gautam- bohot ho gaya..... Dhara mein restaurant ja raha hoon.....(smiling)

Dhara- thik hai...

Gautam- k bye!!!!!

Everyone- bye!!!!

Then Gombi went..... Then we all continue with our work!!!

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That's it

The end

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This was awesome..

Cant wait for the next chapter.

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This was awesome..

Cant wait for the next chapter.


Thank you 😊🥰

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Part 6 : Fight


Raavi pov....

Me n rishita decided to roam around the market n do some shoppings.... N so we send the driver uncle home with the bags...

We were happily roaming around the shops buying dresses, accessories....

Rishita- kitne dino baad shopping pad aaye hai na!!! (Excitingly)

Raavi- ha yaar ajj toh ache se kapde kharidenge!!! (Smiling)

Rishita- sach mein maza aayega!!!!

While we were roaming around the shops...

Ring ring!!!!

Rishita- ek minute dev ka call aaya hai... (Blushing)

Raavi- jiju ka call..... Meri taraf se bhi hello bol dena!! (Teasing)

Rishita- Tu bhi na.... Mein abhi aati hoon tu yahi par rehna... (Blushing)

Raavi- thik hai ja!!! Aram se baat karke aana (teasing)

Then rishita went to pick up the call...

I was looking at some jhumkas... When I saw two teenager boys staring at me.... First I try to ignore them..... Bt then they came near me n were trying to touch me improperly!!!

At first I try to ignore them.... They were just 17-18 years... Whereas I was 21 years.... I thought they are small n so I gave them warning

Raavi- yeh boys please behave yourself!!! (Warning)

Boy 1- excuse me miss what r u trying to say!!! (Rudely)

Raavi- see I don't wanna create any scene here so please behave!!! (Angrily)

At first they listen to me....bt after some minutes they continue with the same act.....I control my angry bt then now it was going out of my head ..... N I gave them a tight slap 👋

All the people who were passing by that way look at us....

Boy 1- yeh kya kiya tumne!! (Angrily)

Raavi- abhi toh sirf thappad maara..... Aur tum logo ki himat kaise hui mujhe is taara se chune ki... (Angrily)

Boy 2- oi ladki yeh kya badtameezi kar rahi hai tu???? (Angrily)

Raavi- badtameezi mein kar rahi hoon ya tum log hai......(angrily)

I was gonna slap them again..... Bt an unknown lady came n hold my hand...

Lady- yeh kya harkat hai??? (Angrily)

Boy 1- dekho na dhara mam yeh ladki bol rahi hai ki hum usse bad way se touch kar rahe hai!!!! (Fake Crying)

The lady stare at me from head to toe..

Boy 2- mam hum ne kuch bhi nahi kiya..... hum toh bass saman dekh rahe teh!!! (Fake Crying)

Dhara- kisne tumhe inne maarne ka haq diya hai??? (Angrily)


Wah!!!! Kya zamana aa gaya hai..... Pehle kud asi thappad khane wali harkate karo aur phir kud ro!!!!


Raavi- haq??? (Shockingly) ..... Aur kisne inhein mujhe ase chune ka haq diya hai!!!! (Angrily)

Boy 1- mam humne kuch nahi kiya!!! (Fake Crying)

Dhara- yeh mere students hai aur mujhe pata hai yeh asa kuch nahi kar sakte!!!

Raavi- seriously!!!!! Aur apko lagta hai ki mein jhoot bolungi..... Like seriously!!! (Angrily)

Dhara- sayad koyi misunderstandings hui hogi...... Atleast maarne se pehle theek se soch toh lo.... Inki age dekhi hai... Tumse 3-4 years chote hai..... Aur yeh tumse Badtameezi karenge!!!

Raavi- mam.... In logo ne mujhe bad way se touch karne ki koshish ki hai.... Aur app bol rahi hai ki mujhe misunderstanding ho sakti hai..... App bhi ek teacher hai right???? Yeh sab toh humein teachers hi sikha teh hai na ki humein feel ho jata hai..... Meine feel kiya hai... (Angrily)

Boy 1- mam we swear humne kuch nahi kiya.... Yeh didi jhoot bol rahi hai!!! (Crying)

Raavi- abhi toh didi...... Inke aane se pehle toh oi ladki kaha tha na..... Tap kaha gayi thi tumari yeh respect!!! (Angrily)

Dhara- respect toh tumari bhi nahi dikh rahi..... Jaise tum in bacho aur mujhse baat kar rahi hoon!!!! (Angrily)


I was like seriously.... She dont even know anything...


Raavi- mam u don't know anything that happen !!!!! (Angrily)

The fight was getting big...... Rishita came running ...

Rishita- raavi kya kar rahi hai!!!! Chal yaha se!!!

Raavi- nahi rukh.... Ajj toh mein.... (Angrily)

Rishita- chal..... (Then rishita drag me)

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I was very angry....... So rishita took me near a garden....


How can someone do like this.... Sach mein ajj agar rishita na aati toh ajj toh paka baara wala panga ho jata ....


Rishita- chal chill ho ja!!!! (Giving me water bottle)

Raavi- kaise chill ho jao hai..... Un boys ne pehle toh badtameezi ki phir uski woh madam ne...... Jab unhe kuch pata nahi tha toh kyu middle mein aakar bolna tha..... (Frustrated)

Rishita- chill baby..... Itna gussa thik nahi hai... (Consoling)

Raavi- mujhe na bohot gussa aa raha hai..... Un logo ko tho mein.... (Angrily getting up from the bench)

Rishita- raavi shant..... Pata hai ki tu irritate hai..... Par abb bass..... Na hi hum un logo se dubara milne wale hai.... Jaane de na (consoling)

Raavi- un ladko ka toh pata nahi...... Bt i pray ki mein uss madam se toh kabhi bhi na milu...... (Frustrated)

Rishita- iss madam se toh milna hi parega..... Kis main itni himat ki meri pyaari raavi ko itna gussa dila diya.... I wish mein unka chehra dekh pati!!!! (Curious)

Raavi- acha hi huwa nahi toh tujhe bhi gussa aa jata..... (Irritated)

Rishita- chal abb tera mood thik karte hai..... Chal tujhe ek special place par lekar jaati hoon!! (Smiling)

Raavi- kaha???

Rishita- surprise!!!!

Raavi pov end

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Dhara was angrily sitting at their restaurant.....

Dhara pov

Ajj kal ke youths ko kya huwa hai..... baat thak karne ki tameez nahi hai.... Itna gussa!!!!! Uff..... Seriously na hi elders ko respect na hi youngers ke liye pyaar!!!!! Woh ladki kitni irritating thi..... Sirf boli ji ja rahi thi..... Sunna toh bilkul nahi hai!!!!! Sach mein bhagwaan is ladki ko kabhi bhi maat milana mujhse!!!! 😠

Dhara pov end

Gautam came with her favorite milk shake....

Gautam- abb gussa chod bhi de na..... Kitna irritate hoti rahegi!!! (Sweetly)

Dhara- nahi gombi!!!! Sach main she was so irritating!!!! Baat thak bhi karne ki tameez nahi thi usmein.....(frustrated)

Gautam- shant dhara shant....... Kya pata dhara tune use wrongly judge kiya hoga... Sayad woh asi lakki nahi hogi!!! (Calmly)

Dhara- tum bhi....... (Annoyed)

Gautam - dekh tune hi toh bola na ki tujhe saara incident nahi pata toh phir tu usse itni jaldi kyu judge ka rahi hai!!!(calmly)

Dhara- gombi agar tum waha par hote na toh phir tum bhi itna hi gussa hote..... Kitni badtameez ladki hai!!!! I wish I never get to see her face again!!! (Irritated)

Gautam- Tu itni irritate hai usse milkar ..... Toh soch agar uski jaisi ladki ko Shiva ya dev pyaar karta toh phir tu kya karti??? (Laughing

Dhara- uska toh pata nahi..... Pad ha mere dev Or Shiva kabhi bhi asi ladki se pyaar nahi kar sakte (proudly) ..... Aur Shiva toh bilkul nahi.... Pata hai na usse commitment se problem hai!! (Laughing)


(Author pov - dekhte hai!! 😏)


Gautam- chal abb yeh milkshake pi...

Dhara- thank u ....

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Dev , Shiva n krish enter their restaurant.....

Worker 1- aare dev, Shiva ,krish baba... App log yaha (smiling)

Dev- ji uncle.... Kaise hai app?? (Smiling)

Worker 1- theek hoon (smiling)

Shiva- aur uncle gombi kaha par hai?? (Smiling)

Worker 1- woh sir toh bahar apne client se milne gaye hai.... (Smiling)

Krish- uncle bhabhi bhi aayi hai na!!!! Kaha hai woh?? (Excitingly)

Worker 1- woh mam cash counter mein hai.... (Smiling)

Dev- ji uncle thank u.... App apna kam kariye... (Smiling)

Then the worker continue with his works while the brothers went to meet their bhabhi

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Shiva pov

As we went towards the cash counter we saw that Bhabhi was busy in her work.....

Krish- hello bhabhi!!! (Excitingly)

Dhara- (turn back) tum log yaha???(shock)

Dev&shiva- surprise!!!!

Dhara- surprise toh sach mein hui hoon ki ajj mere dev aur Shiva dosto ke saath party karne nahi gaye!!! (Sarcastically)


Ismein apki pati ki galti hai!!!!! Unhone Warning di hai ki aaj kahi nahi jaana!!! 🥺


Dev- kya bhabhi app bhi na..... Jab bahar jaate hai tab bhi datti (scold) aur abb bhi.... (Making a cry baby)

Krish- bhabhi inko chodo aur mere saath market chalo..... Mujhe kuch dikhana hai apko!!!! (Excitingly)

Dhara- kya dikhana hai...... Aur abhi toh bilkul nahi gombi nahi hai..... Mujhe yaha pad arrangements dekhni hai....

Krish- bhabhi please.... Dev aur Shiva hai na yaha pad woh log sab samal lenge!!!! (Requesting)

Shiva- hai bhabhi hum hai na!!!! (Smiling)

Dev- apko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!! (Proudly)

Dhara- tum log ho is liya toh daar lag raha hai!!! (Laughing)

Krish- bhabhi please woh stock katam hone wala hai.. Please!!! Apne last time promise kiya tha ki this time aap mujhe woh video game dogi..... (Making a puppet face)

Dhara- thik hai mein bag lekar aati hoon.... (Smiling)

Shiva pov end

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Raavi n rishita were standing outside a big restaurant....

Raavi- Tu mujhe yaha lekar aayi hai!!! (Annoyed)

Rishita- raavi yeh koyi manuli restaurant nahi hai..... Yeh Somnath ki famous restaurant hai.... 'THE FLAVOURS '

Raavi - toh!!!!! (Annoyed)

Rishita- raavi bhul gayi yeh pandya family ka restaurant hai!!! (Irritate)

Raavi- oo...... Sorry mein toh bhul hi gayi (smiling)

Rishita- yaha pad bohot tasty tasty khana milta hai.... Chal na andar..... Or Kya pata shiva bhi yaha pad hi ho!!! (Teasing)

Raavi- rishita tu bhi na (blushing)....... Sayad tujhe dev se milna hoga!!! (Teasing)

Rishita- nahi nahi.... Dev ko nahi pata.... Aur yeh plan achanak hi baana hai.... Tera mood theek karne ke liye!! (Hugging her)

Raavi- thanks ..... Toh jaldi chal mujhe toh abhi se hi bhuk lagi hai.... (Excitingly)

Rishita- chal.... (Smiling)

Inside the restaurant....

Dhara came with her bag....

Dhara- chalo krish...... Aur ha dev Shiva sab theek se samal na (smiling)

Shiva- ki bhabhi.... (Smiling)

Then dhara was going out n raavi was coming in......

They both cross each other.....

Bt didn't saw each other.....


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That's it

The end....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful part.... eagerly waiting for the next part.

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