ShiVi ff: can I call you mine? (Part 13- page 7) - Page 4

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Beautiful part... thanks. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thank u so much.... I will update fast 🥰🥰

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Beautiful part... thanks. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thank u so much.... I will update fast 🥰

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Loved it!💜💜

hihi cant wait till Dhara and Raavi meet again 😂

The meeting will be interesting 🙃🙃

Part 9 - Reply

Raavi pov

As soon as we reach rishita house..... Her mom n dad were so happy to see us.....

Rishita father- finally tum log aa gaye!!!! (Smiling)

Then we both run n hug him....

Janadhan uncle was not less than my father..... From childhood he has treated me as his own daughter..... He has given me alot of love n care from the very first time we meet.... N aunty she is a sweet heart..... She is so good n amazing....

We broke the group hug

Janadhan- itni der kyun laga diya??

Rishita- woh papa kuch shoppings kar rahe teh... (Smiling)

Raavi- waise uncle app kaise hoon??

Janadhan- mein toh theek hoon beta.... Aur tum?? (Smiling)

Raavi- mein bhi theek hoon (smiling)

Then aunty come out of the kitchen...

Kalyani- aa gayi meri betiya!!!! (Smiling)

Rishita- kaise hai app maa??? (Hugging her)

Kalyani - mein achi hoon!!!! (Breaking the hug) tu toh humein miss bhi nahi karti na!! (Emotional)

Rishita- app bhi na kya baat karte hoon..... Mein app logo ko bina miss kare reh sakti hoon kya!! (Making a pout)

Kalyani- meri beti... (Kissing Rishita's forehead)

Then she look at me

Kalyani- tu waha kya kar rahi hai...... Idar aa!!! (Smiling)

Then I went towards her n she hug me...

Kalyani- kaisi hai raavi??? (Caring my hair)

Raavi- mein achi hoon aunty aur app?? (Breaking the hug)

Kalyani- mein bhi theek hoon..... Aur abb toh tum dono bhi aa gaya ho tho abb mein kaafi khush hoon!!!! (Smiling)

Rishita- maa.... Hum fresh hokar aate hai ... (Smiling)

Kalyani- theek hai... (Smiling)

Then rishita n I went to her room...

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov ....

It's been fifteen minutes that we have reach home.... Bhabhi mood is very bad.....

As soon as we reach home..... Krish warn us that Bhabhi is really angry..... At first dev n I thought gombi told her everything.....

But agar gombi ko batana hi hota toh kab ka baata dete na !!

Dev- kya baat hai bata na krish???

Krish- nahi paata yaar!!!

Shiva- kuch toh hua hoga!!! 🤔

Dev- bhabhi ka mood toh theek tha phir kya huwa??

Krish- hai theek toh tha..... Hum log video game lekar aa rahe the..... Aur achanak se unka mood karab ho gaya.... (Confused)

Shiva- kya bol raha hai tu..... (Shock)

Krish- theek bol raha hoon mein.... Mujhe bhi shock laga tha

Dev- chal!!!!!chalkar dekhte hai akir baat kya hai....

Krish- marna hai kya..... Mein nahi ja raha (scared)

Shiva- chup chap se chal.....

Then I and dev hold krish hand n drag him to the kitchen....

Honestly kaafi daar lag raha hai!!!

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We enter the kitchen to see bhabhi making dinner...

Shiva- bhabhi.... Kya bana rahi hoon!! (Smiling)

Dhara- karele ki sabji!!!! (Rudely)

Dev- lagta hai aaj bhabhi ka mood bohot zyada karab hai!! (Whispering to Shiva)

Shiva- sach kaha!!! (Whispering to dev)

Dhara- yeh kya baatein ho rahi hai... (Suspiciously)

Shiva- ku.... Kuch nahi bhabhi..... Hum toh bass aise hi (Nervously)

Dhara- toh tu itna nervous kyu ho raha hai.... Tum log ko kya lagta hai mein bewakoof hoon... Batao kya baat ho rahi hai!!! (Suspiciously)

Dev- bhabhi apka mood kyu karab hai??? Kya baat hai?? ('Concerned)

Dhara- kuch nahi hai.....

Shiva- kuch toh hai bataye na!!! (Requesting)

Krish- hum bhi bewakoof nahi hai.... Humein bhi pata hai ki app jhut bol rahi hai.... Kuch toh hai bataye na bhabhi please!!!! (Requesting)

Then we hug her....

Dhara - woh ajj.........

Then dhara bhabhi told us everything...... Her meeting with that strange girl ........ N the way she was behaving with bhabhi...

I was shock..... How can someone do all this.....

We were really piss...

Dhara- so yahi huwa hai.... (Irritated)

Dev- bhabhi bhul jaye uss baat ko ... Na hi hum us ladki se milne wale hai aur na hi uska humare saath koyi bhi rishta hai..... Ignore her!!! (Calmly)

Dhara- ignore kar diya tha..... Bt phir jab hum krish ka game kharid kar aa rahe teh.... Tab bhi meine usse dekha car main jate huwe..... Pata nahi kyu but us ladki ka chehra mujhe irritate karta hai... (Angrily)

Shiva- bhabhi relax..... Waise log toh humesha milte hai na..... Agar hum unhe important denge toh humein hi irritation hogi..... Ignore her.... (Consoling)

Krish- ha abb please app usse bhul jao... Aur apna mood acha karo....(smiling)

Then he had a group hug!!!

Shiva pov end

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After few hours

Raavi pov

It was already 9:00 pm.... We were sitting in our room after having the dinner....

Really aunty cook so delicious food..... I love it.... After having the dinner we spend some time with them n now we are at rishita's room resting.....

I was busy writing my diary while rishita was busy in her phone....

Rishita- waise raavi ek baat puchu ?? (Curiously)

Raavi- abb puche bina toh tu rehne wali nahi hai..... Puch!!! (Sarcastically)

Rishita- tu yeh apne diary main kya likhti hai..... I mean I am your best friend and you share everything with me..... Toh aisa kya hai jo mujhe nahi pata Aur iss diary ko pata hai!!!

Raavi- asa kuch nahi hai madam..... Kuch zyada hi soch rahi hai app!!!! Is diary mein bass meri baatein hai jo tujhe already pata hai.... K na (frown)

Rishita- jhoot maat bol..... Agar mujhe pata hota toh tu mujhe yeh diary parne deti..... I m sure kuch toh raaz hai iss main..... Tu jaha bhi jaati hai isse apne saath rakti hai..... Zaroor koi na koi secret hai!!!! (Suspiciously)

Raavi- meri maa...... Bohot sochti hai app......isme aisa kuch nahi hai.... Aur ha yeh na personal diary hai so yeh humesha mere saath hi rehta hai (annoyed)

Rishita- thik hai thik hai...... Jitna chupana hai chupa le ek din toh mein iss diary ko zaroor padhungi.....dekh lena (irritated)

Raavi- himat bhi mat karna (frown)

Then both of us got busy in our work..

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov...

It was around 9:15 pm..... I was in my room feeling bored..... Dev n I decided to go out at night..... Bt then gombi has lock all the doors n windows n warn us not to go anywhere....

Dev came in my room.... N sit beside me

Dev-shiva kaafi bored ho raha hai!!!

Shiva- ya yaar ..... Gombi bhi na!!! (Irritated)

Krish- tum dono yaha!!

Krish came

Shiva- aur tu yaha !!!! (Shock)

Krish- I m feeling bored!!!

Dev- go n sleep!!!!

Krish- u guys sleep so late..... N telling me to sleep early (frowns) ......

Shiva- tu bacha hai krish!!! (Laughing)

Dev- ha baby krishu..... Go n sleep.. (Childishly)

Krish- thik hai thik hai (sarcastically) ..... Phir yeh video game bhi mein akele hi khelta hoon... (Smirking)

Video game!!!!!

Mast idea hai...... Wase bhi bored toh ho hi rahe hai..... Isse acha toh video game hi khel lete hai!!!!

Krish was leaving...... Dev n I stare each other...

Dev- krish ruk na..... Tu toh bura hi man gaya!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- tu toh hamare acha sa cute sa bhai hai na..... (Smiling)

Dev- aur chal ek ache bhai ki tara video game share kar!!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- chal khelte hai... (Smiling)

Krish - nahi nahi dev ne toh kaha na sone ko..... Toh mein chala sone ke liye... (Smirking)

Shiva- dev toh idiot ha..... Hai na dev (looking at dev.... Dev nodded) chal na khelte hai.... Tu bhi bored hum bhi bored.... Isse acha hai ki hum sab masti kare!!! (Smiling)

Krish- thik hai....

This krish is really very innocent!!!! 😁

Then we all started playing his new video game...

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

Rishita - raavi!!!!! (Shouting)

This girl will literally kill me one day!!!!

Raavi- rish!!!! Kya huwa aur itna kyu chila rahi hai (irritated)

Rishita- dekh raavi...... (Showing me her phone) Shiva facebook par online hai!!! (Excitingly)

I already know...... I have seen it!!!

Raavi- hai toh

Rishita- toh kya!!!! Chal text kar usse!!!

Raavi - mein nahi karne wali..... ( I lay down beside her) waise bhi woh mujhe reply bhi nahi karta (sad)

Rishita- hi toh bol..... Reply karega!!!!

Raavi- nahi..... Woh nahi karta!!!! N waise bhi agar woh first text nahi karta thats mean he dont wanna talk to me.... N I can't force him to talk to me!!! (Sad)

Rishita- (snatching my phone) tujhe se kuch nahi hoga!!!

Raavi- rishita mera phone de..... Rish!!!! (Shouting)

She was running in the room..... I try to catch her....

Rishita- lo send hogaya...... (Giving me the phone)

Raavi- kya kiya tune...... ( I look at my phone)

Hi!!!

Raavi- tune kyu send kiya!!!! (Irritated)

Rishita- thank u bol mujhe..... Kitni help karti hoon mein teri love story mein....

Help!!! 😒

Rishita- abb tu uska reply aane ka wait kar (smiling)

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Rishita- reply aaya!!! (Curiously)

Raavi- nahi!!!

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Rishita - reply aaya!!!

Raavi- nahi

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Rishita- aaya!!!!

Raavi- nahi!!!!!

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Rishita- rep.......

Raavi-nahi aaya aur na hi aayega..... Tu kyu nahi samajhti ki Hum sirf do baar mile hai..... Uske man mein mere liya koi feeling nahi hai (sad)

Rishita- abhi nahi hai..... Bt mujhe pata hai baad mein hoga.... Aur dekh lena ek din reply zaroor aayega!!!! (Hugging me)

Raavi- I so wish!!!! Chal abb 10:30 ho gaya hai.... So ja!!!(breaking the hug)

Rishita- good night!!!

Raavi- good night!!!!

Then rish sleep...... I was trying hard to sleep bt I couldn't...... So I open my dairy....

Raavi pov end

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Thats it

The end

dhara is pissed but she is wrong......hope gets to know what actually happened.....

raavi🤗 nahi aaya reply to na aaye.....jane do usko

rishita u shouldnt have sent the msg

Part 10 : My dairy

Raavi pov.....

I was not able to sleep..... So I open my diary....

Hi bestie!!!!! This is your new friend Raavi!!!! Here I will share some of my few thoughts, my secrets n all..

I flip some randome page

Date - 1 feb 2011 (Tuesday)

Ajj mera pehle din tha new school main.... Kaafi nervous thi .... I didn't even knew how am I going to make new friends......

(My father recently got transfer in somnaath ..... So we had to shift here.... )

I was very scared how am I going to adjust here......

At morning mom wake me up.... Honestly I didn't even wanted to go to school..... I know nothing about the school.....

Par fir mom n dad ne samajhaya mujhe..... Aur phir mein maang gayi...

Jab school mein enter kiya..... Kaafi daari huwi thi..... Thought mom n dad teh mere saath phir bhi ek ajib sa daar tha...... Then they took me to my class .... Class 5 section A....

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Everything was going fine..... Luckily I made a friend 'Rishita'. She was very sweet to me..... She made me feel very comfortable.....

N that day I saw him...... For the first time mujhe koyi ladka pasand aaya tha.... Uski cute si smile..... Uski innocent looks.... Uski masti..... Mujhe bohot pasand aa gaya....

Phir rishita ne kaha ki uska naam 'SHIVA' hai....

Today I wasn't able to talk with him.... Bt tomorrow I will surely talk with him....

K k I want to sleep now so good night....

~Raavi

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I smile looking at that page!!!!!

Seriously kya din tha woh!!!! Itni saari masti ki thi mein n rishita ne.... Us ek din ne mujhe meri bestie aur mera pyaar dono de diya!!!

Then again I turn some pages

Date - 15 March 2013 (Friday) ...

Today is Shiva's birthday....... I wish I could just hug him n wish him..... Bt the sad reality is that I can never do that.....

All this years I have been trying to talk with him bt then whenever he is around me I just can't focus on anything....

Abb toh rishita bhi mujhe tease karne lagi hai..... Kehti hai ki crush sirf 4 months thak hota hai.... Aur usse zyada hum kisiko like kare toh woh love hota hai...... Bt usse bhi kya kaho....... Ha pyaar karne lagi hoon mein Shiva se ...... Bohot zyada..

Aaj toh birthday wish karne se bhi daar laga ... Wish bhi nahi kar payi aur na hi yeh gift de payi.....

It's k ajj nahi de payi toh kya huwa kal de dungi n wish bhi kar dungi!!!

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This brought a smile on my face

Sach mein abhi bhi mein waise hi hoon.... Jab bhi Shiva ko dekhti hoon nervous ho jati hoon aur kisi bhi chiz par focus nahi kar pati!!!!

I tried not to fall in love
But my heart disagree.
Love makes one weep.
Then why your are the one,my heart seeks.
My heart pay no heed to me..
I pay no heed to my heart.

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Sometimes you make me feel like I actually have a chance with you but when I try to take that chance
You make me realised I never really had...

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It hurts to love someone and not to be loved in return...
But the most painful thing is to love someone and never have the courage to tell them..

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Before I met you, I never knew what it was like to be able to look at someone and smile for no reason

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Things that makes me love you

1) You make me laugh
2) your voice
3) your smile
4) when you secretly look at me..
5) when you live life to the fullest
6) ur sleepy voice

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The first time I met you it wasn't love at first sight...
My love for you formed gradually, your personality, your voice, your hair, your eyes, your humor....
The way you looked away and smile, gradually it all came clear to me.... You were exactly what I was looking for

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Date -11 June 2016

Today was the last day of class 10..... But again I miss it..... I miss to tell him that I love him..... The day was really bad..... All the friends were separating from each other......

School life bhi kitni achi hoti hai na!!! .... The school which I never wanted to attention...... Bt today it has become the school that I never wanted to leave...... Pehle din kitni nervous thi..... Aur aaj kitni dukhi hoon.....

I can't even express how much I will miss this school.... My friends..... My teachers...... The tiffin time.... The morning assembly..... The holiday time..... I will miss everything...

Meine mera school life kaafi enjoy kiya..... I regret only one thing n that is I was not able to confess my feelings..... I m feeling very low...... I wish meine class 5 mein hi bol diya hota toh aaj mujhe regret nahi hota..... Bt maybe destiny wanted something else....

Rishita told that he is planing to take commerce.... Whereas I m planing to take science....... Aaj last time tha jab hum mile..... Par aaj bhi ek baat bhi exchange nahi kiya..... Mein tho usse yeh gift thak nahi de payi.....

I don't even know will I ever be able to meet him or not........

Par koyi nahi if we are destine to meet we will definitely meet... Bt ya I will never stop loving him!!!!

~Raavi

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I had tears in my eyes...... I was very much emotional reading my diary.....

I have spend my whole teenage hood loving him...... I don't know how am I gonna survive without him......

Raavi pov end

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Knock knock!!!!!

Rishita mother- rishita raavi utt jao beta dekho subah ke 10 baj gaye hai!!! (Knocking at the door)

Raavi n rishita wake up with a jerked!!!!

Rishita n raavi- 10 !!!!!!! (Shouting)

Raavi then got up n open the door!!!

Raavi- good morning aunty!!! (Sleepy voice)

Rishita mother- good morning beta!!!! (Then she enter the room) rishita chal utt..... Tum dono kitne der thak sote hoon!!

Rishita- maa bass 5 minutes....

Rishita mother- 5 minutes nahi chalo uttho aur fresh ho jao..... Mein breakfast lagati hoon!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- k aunty!!!!

Then rishita mother went.....

Raavi- chal utt!!!

Rishita- reply aaya!!! (Sleeping)

Raavi- iss ladki ka kya karu mein!!!!! 🤦‍♀️..... Rishita mein shower lene ja rahi hoon..... Tu bhi utt ja abb!!!

Telling this raavi went to take shower!!

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Raavi pov....

I was waiting for rishita .... Since she has gone to take shower.....

Yeh ladki kitna time le rahi hai!!!!! Jab thak woh nahi aati phone hi check karti hoon!!! ☺

I look at the time it was around 10:30

Really aaj toh kaafi late utthe hai hum dono!!!

As soon as I turn on my net..... There were many notifications.....

I open my notifications n to my surprise....... Shiva finally reply me!!!!

Raavi- rishita!!!! (Excitingly)

Rishita- kya huwa!!! (From the bathroom)

Raavi- Shiva ka reply aaya hai !!!! (Excitingly)

Rishita- kya????? (Shock)..... Kya bol raha hai woh (excitingly)

Raavi- Tu bahar aa.... Phir dikha thi hoon!!!! (Excitingly)

Rishita- raavi suspense create mat karna..... Jaldi baata!!! (Excitingly)

Raavi- pehle mujhe toh dekhne de!!! (Laughing)

Then I open the message....

Hello!!!!! -12:45 am

So sorry raavi woh bhai ke saath video game khel raha tha toh message nahi dekha!!!! -12:45 am

Waise kaisi ho???? -12:46am

Kal mile??? Coffee par??? -12:46am

(This message is deleted) -12:55am

Sayad tum so gayi hoon!!!! -1:00am

K agar message mile toh reply karna -1:00 am

I was surprised......

Did he really reply me??? 😳😳

Then I read the message again!!!!! I was super happy!!! I was behaving like a 13-14 years old teenage girl, getting reply from the crush!!!!!

At that time rishita came n snatch my phone...

Rishita- hello....... So sorry raavi woh bhai ke saath video game khel mein busy tha...... Waise kaisi hoon....... Kal mile (surprise) ..... Coffee par (giving a teasing smile) ....... Sayad tum so gayi hoon...... K agar message mile toh reply Karna!!!!!!!

Then rishita gave me my phone n gave me a teasing smile.....

Rishita- wah!!!!!! Meine toh socha tha ki bass hello kahega..... Lekin Shiva ne toh coffe par hi bula liya!!! (Teasing)

My cheeks heated n I was blushing.....

Rishita- waise tu coffee par to jayegi hi na!!!! (Teasing)

Raavi- pata nahi???

Rishita- kya pata nahi..... Chup chap se jaana hi hoga thik hai na!!!! N enjoy karna tere Shiva ke saath (teasing)

Raavi- rish!!!!!!

Rishita mother - khana lag gaya hai (shouting from the hall)

Rishita - chal abhi khana khane..... Uske baad baat karte hai is date ke baare main... (Teasing)

Raavi- tu ja.... Mein reply kar deti hoon!!! (Blushing)

Rishita- thik hai!!!!! (Teasing)

K meet u around 2:00 pm in XYZ cafe!!!! 😊 -10:50am...

Pata nahi what m I going to talk with him!!!!! 😆😆

Raavi pov end.

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Meanwhile

Shiva pov

I was having my breakfast very peacefully......

Dhara- Shiva juice!!!!

Shiva- ji bhabhi!!!

Gautam- dhara aaj humein bahar jaana hai!!!

Dhara- lekin kyu???

Gautam- bhul gayi aaj hamari date hai!!! (Teasing)

Dhara- gombi???? (Shock)

Dev- date!!!! (Teasing)

Shiva- aaj toh maze hi maze hai gombi!!! (Teasing)

Dhara- tum bhi bacho ke saman kya baat kar rahe hoon... (Hesitate)

Gautam- yeh bache nahi shaitan hai!!!! Aur kya hi sharam apne patni ko hi toh date par leja raha hoon !!! (Proudly)

Krish- bilkul thik bol rahe hai gombi!! (Teasing)

Dhara-sach mein mere ghar mein teen nahi char shaitan hai!!! 🤦‍♀️

We all laugh.....

Buzz buzz ...

I open my phone to see a notifications.

K meet u around 2:00 pm in XYZ cafe!! 😊😊

Raavi!!! ...... Yeh raavi ne mujhe message kyu kiya..... Aur kyu milne ke liye bula rahi hai!!!! 😳😳

Then I open the message to see all the conversation...

I was shock!!!

Meine yeh kab baja!!!! 😳😳

I remember I sleep around 11:00 pm.... Then how this!!!!!!

I look at dev n krish suspiciously....

Yeh dono honge ! ! ! ! 😠

They two accidentally look at me..... I look at him suspiciously..... They look at each other shockingly..... N then look at me...... I could see fear in their eyes.....

Abb toh sure hai yahi dono hai!!!! 😠

Dhara- kya hua Shiva??? Khana kha!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- ji bhabhi...... (Smiling)

Bhabhi n gombi were busy talking..... I kept on staring dev n krish while this two were avoiding eye contact

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After finishing the breakfast..... Before dev n krish could run I catch them n took them to my room...

Shiva- yeh kya hai?? (Angrily showing the message)

Krish- tujhe nahi pata kya.... Yeh phone hai !!!! (Laughing)

Dev- Tu bhi na Shiva..... Chal humein jaane de (nervously)

Shiva- mujhe bhi pata hai yeh phone hai..... Aur yeh message!!! (Angrily)

Krish snatch my phone......

Krish- ooo toh tu date par ja raha hai!! (Teasing)

This boy!!! 😤😠

Shiva- kyu kiya tum dono ne yeh??? (Rudely)

Dev- ooo bhai teri setting kar rahe teh.... Kitna single life enjoy karega tu.... Abb toh relationship club mein aana hi hoga (Laughing)

Krish- aur tujhe toh khush hona chahiye humne teri date fixed kar diya!!! (Laughing)

Shiva- tum logo ka kuch nahi ho sakta.. (Frown)

Krish- Tu khush nahi hai Shiva.....

Shiva- raavi asi ladki nahi hai...... She is not a casual dating type of girl..... Woh real love mein believe karne wali ladki hai!!!!

Dev- matlab!!!

Shiva- woh na mere type ki nahi hai.... Usse serious wala relationship pasand hai..... Usse true love mein believe hai!!!

Krish- tujhe kaise pata... (Suspiciously)

Shiva- bass pata hai..... Jab usse milega na tab tujhe bhi pata chal jayega....

Krish - toh phir kya karenge??

Shiva- agar cancel kar diya toh usse awkward feel hoga!!!

Dev- chale ja na toh aur casually baatein karna..... (Smiling)

Shiva- awkward nahi hoga!!! (Confused)

Dev- nahi hoga!!! Chala ja na!!! (Consoling)

Shiva- thik hai (smiling)

Ha toh bol diya hai . ...... Par pata nahi kya baat karunga!!!! 🤔😑

Shiva pov end

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That's it

The end

Part 11 : coffee date

Raavi pov

It's been 2:30pm...... Till now Shiva has not arrive....

I was sitting in the cafe waiting for him...... I thought he will be on time.... Bt then he is Shiva , u can't expect anything....

Flashback

Rishita- raavi itni jaldi mat ja..... (Smirking)

Raavi- do baje ka time hai.... N it's already 1:30 .... I should move na... (Innocently)

Rishita- Tu na ek dam bewakoof hai..... Yaar ase date main na girls late jaati hai...... Agar tu jaldi jayegi toh Shiva ko lagega ki tu desperate ho rahi hai .... Samjhi (softly hitting on my forehead)

Raavi- asa nahi hai..... Aur waise bhi punctuality toh achi aadat hai na!!! Mein chalti hoon... (Smiling)

Rishita- aa bhagwaan mein is ladki ka kya karu!!! (Frown)

Raavi- kuch nahi bass mujhe wish kar!!! (Smiling)

Rishita- all the best aur hai aaj toh baata hi dena!!! (Hugging)

Raavi- hmm

Flashback end

Mujhe rishita ki baat maan leni chahiye!!!! Shiva kaha hai!!!

I was just looking around feeling embarrassed...... Already the waiter had come 2 times asking me for the order.....

Yeh log kyu time par nahi aa sakta!!! Punctuality bhi koyi chiz hoti hai!!! 😬

Now it was over ..... Before the waiter come one more time.... I have to call Shiva n ask him

Then I call him

Thankfully rishita gave me his number..

Ring ring

Shiva- hello!!!! Kon??

Raavi- hello Shiva.... Mein raavi bol rahi hoon.....tum kaha ho???

Shiva- oo so sorry raavi mein late ho gaya.....Abhi car mein hoon pochne wala hi hoon!!! Bass 5 minutes

5 more minutes!!!! 😬😬😑

Raavi- k!!!

Shiva- k bye!!!

Raavi- bye!!!

Then I cut the call....

Abb se rish ki baat hi suni paregi !!!! 😑

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

Aaj pehli baar kisi date par late ja raha hoon.....

Itna weird kyu lag raha hai...... Ase date par toh mein jaata rehta hoon.... Phir aaj aise nervous kyu lag raha hai!!!!

All day I was just thinking of what will I do...... What will I say..... How will I dress..... I was so nervous for the first time

Flashback

Dev- Shiva date par ja raha hai kisi competition par nahi ki tujhe itni nervousness ho rahi hai!!! (Laughing)

Krish- sach mein pehli baar itna nervous dekha hai woh bhi kisi ladki se milne jaane main.... (Smiling)

Shiva- tum dono please chup raho aur meri liye ek achi si dress select karo!!(tens)

Dev- hum charo bhai mein Teri dressing sense sabse achi hai..... Abb hum kya decide kare... (Frown)

Shiva- mujhe samajh main nahi aa raha ... What should I wear.... (Confused)

Krish- abb toh yeh raavi se milna hi hoga.... Shiva ko nervous kar diya use (sarcastically)

Dev- tu bhi milega na toh tujhe bhi achi lagegi.... Bohot pyaari hai raavi (smiling)

Shiva- teri toh girlfriend hai na (jealously)

Krish- oo jealous .... (Teasing)

Shiva- chup.... Tum dono se kuch nahi hoga.... Mein kud hi dekhta hoon (irritated)

Then Shiva kick them out of his room...
While his brother were just giving him a teasing smile

Flashback end

I reach the cafe..... While coming out of the car....... My heart was beating so fast.....

Yeh kya ho raha hai!!!!......Shiva nervous mat ho tu already raavi se mil chuka hai !!!

I know raavi since childhood ..... Yes we don't talk bt still I know her nature......N already I have meet n talk with her for 2 days continuos....

Shiva shant!!! 😬

I calm myself n enter the cafe..... I saw that it was not too crowded..... They were only a few people .... I was searching for raavi n there I found her sitting in a corner looking at her phone !!!

My heart skip a beat looking at her....

She was looking very beautiful .....

I went towards her

Shiva- hello!!! (Smiling)

Raavi look up me him angrily !!!!

Aaj toh tu gaya beta!! 😅

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov

As I was busy looking at the Phone.... I heard someone saying hello....

Yeh waiter phir aa gaya !!!! 😒

I look up angrily..... Bt then my eyes fall on Shiva face ..... I immediately compost myself...

My heart skip a beat......He was looking so handsome n hot.....

Shiva- raavi I m really sorry..... I know mein kaafi late hoon.... I m really sorry!!! (Guilty)

Raavi- it's k.... Beto (sit) na!!!(smiling)

Then Shiva took his seat....

Shiva- I m again really sorry.... Please gussa mat hona!!! (Scared)

Raavi-nahi nahi it's k... Mein gussa nahi hoon.... Relax (calmly)

Shiva- sach mein!!!

Raavi- hai.....

Then after that we both went silent...

Abb kya baat karu Shiva se..... Rish ne toh kaha ki don't worry boys topic nikal dete hai..... Par Shiva toh chup chap beta huwa hai!!!! 😬

Shiva - (thinking) kuch toh kehna parega Shiva.... Atleast ask her about her wellbeing!!!!

Both of us look here and there...

Shiva & raavi- kaise/kaisi hoon tum?? (Together)

Both of us got awkward...... At that time the waiter came..

Waiter - mam order!!!! (Politely)

Phir se aa gaya!!! 🤦‍♀️

Shiva - can we order a little later!!! (Smiling)

Waiter- sure sir....

The waiter went giving me a weird look...

Of course 30 minutes se beti hoon main!!! 😅

Shiva n I look at each other...

Bohot ho gaya raavi tu hi topic nikal!!! 😬

Raavi - how r u??

Shiva- I m fine n u??

Raavi- me too!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- waise achi place hai na.... (Looking around)

Raavi- ha (smiling)

Abb kya baate karu!!!!! 😑

Raavi - kuch order kare!!!

Shiva- sure....

He call the waiter.....

Waiter- yes sir!!!

Shiva-bolo raavi.... What will u have??

Raavi- hmm......

Then I go throught the menu ....

Raavi & Shiva - Italian pasta!!!!...

We both look at each other n smile....

Shiva- two Italian pasta n .....2 cold coffee na???

Raavi- k (smiling)

Waiter- k sir!!! (Politely)

Then the waiter went....

Shiva- tumhe Italian pasta pasand hai!!!

Raavi- bohot zyada...... It's one of my favorite!!!!

Shiva- mera bhi favorite hai!!!! (Smiling) ..... Aur batao kya kya pasand hai khaane mein???

Raavi- mujhe indian food bohot pasand hai aur tumhe???

Shiva- mujhe bhi..... Indian toh best hai!!!! (Excitingly)

Raavi-aur mitte main mujhe kheer bohot pasand hai!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- ha mera bhi kheer favorite hai..... Bhabhi bohot tasty banati hai (excitingly)..... K khaana choro aur batao tumhe kya kya pasand hai!!!

Raavi- mujhe travelling bohot acha lagta hai.....

Shiva- hai travelling......... Meine bhi ek lists banaya kaha kaha travel karna hai!!! (Excitingly)

Raavi- kaha plan kar rahe hoon??... Meine toh decide kiya hai ki mein toh north-eastern side mein jaogi.... Bohot sundar sundar tourist places hai!!! (Excitingly)

Shiva- wow!!!!!...... (I look at him confusingly) hum dono ki planing kitni similar hai..... Mein bhi northern side mein jaane ki planing kar raha tha..... (Excitingly)..... Waise saath mein chale!!!!!.....

Raavi- chal toh sakte hai...(smiling)

Shiva- mein toh kabhi bhi free hoon.... Tum???

Raavi- mein toh nahi hoon...... Aur medical ki padhai katam hote hi 1 month ki holiday lekar jaogi... (Smiling)

Shiva- thik hai phir deal (forwarding hand)

Raavi-(shaking hands) deal!!!!!! (Smiling)

At that time the food arrive.....

Waiter- enjoy the meal!!!! (Politely)

Then the waiter when!!!!

Shiva- baat baad mein karte hai.... Abhi khaana kheye???

Raavi- k

Then both of us have the food

Raavi pov end

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Precap:

Rishita - kya huwa raavi??? Ase ro kyu rahi hai??? (Tens)

Raavi - rish!!!! Mera pyaar..... Mera pyaar adhura re gaya!!!! (Crying)

Rishita- raavi please baata mujhe daat lag raha hai (tens)

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That's it

The end

Please update the next part soon...

Part 12 : Heartbreak

Raavi pov....

Both Shiva n I were enjoying alot...... After eating our food..... We pay the bills n decided to leave the restaurant....

Shiva- tum ghar jaane mein late ho rahi ho ?? (Hesitate)

Raavi- nahi..... Kyu??? (Confused)

Shiva- drive par chalogi??? (Nervously)

Did I heard it right...... Did he ask me for a drive?? 😳

Raavi- hmm..... Theek hai chal sakte hai!!! (Smiling)

Then both of us went towards his car..... After taking our seats.... He start driving....

Shiva- aur batao.... Medical padhkar kya karne ki planing hai..... Matlab kis line ki doctor bana chahti ho??

Raavi - Gynaecologist !!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- oo..... Good!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- hmm.... Aur tum???

Shiva- mere ase fixed nahi hai.......

Raavi- ha........ (Shock)...... Toh tumara aim???

Shiva- aim toh pilot bane ka tha.... Par phir interest hat gaya..... Abhi toh mujhe life jeeni hai...... (Smiling)

Raavi- abhi se hi decide karlo aaga kya karna hai...... In fact tum toh already late ho gaye ho....... Decide karlo safe side mein rahoge !!!! (Calmly)

Shiva- yahi dr sahiba...... Mujhe safe side pasand nahi hai.... Mujhe risk lena pasand .... Adventurous chize karna pasand hai!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- par ek consistency toh maintain Karna parta hai na....... I mean agar risk lekar tum dhoop gaye toh plan B bhi toh ready Karna chahiye na...... (Thoughtfully)

Shiva- wahi toh hum plan B mein yakin nahi karte....... I m like a free bird I love to fly!!! (Dreaming)

Raavi- Freedom achi baat hai par I believe a life without aim is useless!!! (Absence mindedly)

Shiva stare at him

Yeh nahi bolna tha!!!! 😬

Raavi- I........ (Shiva interrupted)

Shiva- it's k I get it what u are saying..... Bt hum dono kaafi alag hai raavi...... Tum har kam plan ke according karti ho....... Aur mein go with the flow type ka hoon...... Humari thinking kaafi different hai na!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- ha!!!! (Awkwardly smiling)

Bt I still think one should definitely have an aim!!!! 🙄

Then all the way we talk about certain stuffs

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

After reaching the place

Raavi- (walking out of the car) yeh kaha lekar aa gaye tum!!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- my favorite place!!!!! (Smiling)

Then both of us walk.....

Raavi- kaafi sundar place hai..... (Smiling)

Shiva- hai....... Yaha aa kar dil ko sukoon aata hai.... (Dreaming)

Raavi- sach kaha...... (Smiling)

Then we both sat on a big stone n watch at the scenery....

Raavi- yaha aakar asa lag raha hai ki ghar hi na jao...... Bass puri zindagi idar re jaung (dreaming)

Shiva- is place ki khasiyat hi yahi hai!!!!! Bohot peacefull place hai.... (Smiling)

Raavi- bohot zyada......

Then we both enjoy the nature

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It was around 4:00 pm....

Shiva- raavi it's 4 pm..... Abhi chalna chahiye humein!!!

Raavi- thori der aur nahi reh sakte!!!! (With puppet face)

Shiva- reh toh sakte hai...... Par tumhein ghar jaane mein late ho sakta hai..... (Concerned)

Raavi- it's k.......... Oo ha chalte hai.... Mein toh bhul hi gayi mein toh rishita ke ghar mein rehti hoon!!!! (Smiling)

Shiva- rishita ke ghar!!!!! (Confused)

Raavi- ha woh hum dono ek dusre ke ghar visit karte rehte hai... (Smiling)

Shiva- oo...... Chalo!!! (Smiling)

Raavi- ha chalo........

While we were going...... Raavi got a call....

Raavi- shiva rish ka call aa raha hai.... Mein baat karke aati hoon...

Shiva- sure..... Mein yahi wait karta hoon... (Smiling)

While I was waiting.....I saw another come coming.....

Gombi ki car!!!!!

Shiva pov end

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Dhara pov.....

Both gombi n I were enjoying our date alot..... Firstly we went to a restaurant for lunch .... Then we went for shopping.... And then we decided to come to one of our favorite place.....

As we reach the place..... We saw Shiva car....

Dhara- gombi woh dekho Shiva ki car..... (Then I saw Shiva) aur woh Shiva.....

Gautam- yeh yaha kya kar raha hai?? (Shock)

Dhara- nahi pata!!!!

Then he stop the car n both of us come out....

Dhara- Shiva Tu yaha??? (Shock)

Gautam- Tu yaha kya kar raha hai.... (Shock)

Shiva- woh........

A girl interrupted...

Girl- shiv............

She look at me shockingly n I look at her shockingly

Dhara pov end

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Raavi pov

Raavi - hello rishita!!!!

Rishita- raavi kaha hai tu???

Raavi- mein abhi aa hi rahi hoon..... Kyu koyi problem ho gayi hai (tens)

Rishita- kuch problem nahi hai..... Mein bhi dev ke sath bahar hoon.... Bass socha ki saath mein ghar chalte hai....

Raavi- mein aa rahi hoon..... Tu ghar chali jaana (smiling)

Rishita- k theek hai bye..... N ya ghar mein aakar batana kya kya huwa hai!!! (Teasing)

Raavi- theek hai... (Blushing)

Then I cut the call....

Today is the best day of my life!!!!!!!
Thank you so much God!!!!! 😘😘

Raavi-shiv....... !!!!!!

I freeze...... I saw that lady...... She look at me shockingly n I at her....

Gautam- raavi tum!!!! (Smiling) ..... Tum yaha Shiva ke saath (teasing)

I couldn't form a word..... Gautam was looking at me smiling...... Bt that lady was looking at him shockingly...

Yeh lady gombi ke saath kyu khari (stand)hai !!!

Dhara - gombi tum isse jaante hoon!!!! (Shockingly)

Gombi!!!! Yeh kon hai....😳

Gautam- ha dhara yeh humare Shiva ki friend hai... (Smiling)

Hamare Shiva!!!!!! 😑

The lady was looking at Shiva n me shockingly...

Dhara - Shiva kya yeh teri girlfriend hai??? (Angrily)

Gautam- dhara abhi toh bola friend hai!!! (Annoyed)

Dhara- bol Shiva!!! (Raising her voice)

Shiva- app kyu gussa ho rahi hoon..... Yeh bass meri friend hai bhabhi....... (Calmly)

Bhabhi.......... Yeh Shiva ki bhabhi hai!!!! 😳😬

Dhara mam humne kuch nahi kiya!!!!

Yahi ki chicken fried rice bohot Achi hai...... Dhara bhabhi ki recipe hai!!!!!

Rishita words were ringing in my mind...... How couldn't I figure it out......

She look at me angrily.....

Dhara- Shiva Tu aisi ladki se dosti karta hai... (Angrily looking at me)

Tears were rolling down my eyes.....

Shiva- bhabhi app yeh kya bol rahi hoon?? (Shock)

Gautam- dhara kya ho gaya hai??? (Shock)

Dhara- gombi Shiva..... Yeh wahi ladki hai jisne mere saath bich sadak mein behas kiya tha..... Wahi kisne mere students ko blame kiya.... Aur mujhse badtameezi!!!! (Angrily)

Both Shiva and gombi got shock!!!!
I wasn't able to think anything..... I was shock.....

Shiva look at me shockingly follow by gombi....

Yeh sab ek misunderstanding hai!!!! 🥺

Shiva- raavi..... (Shock)

Raavi- Shiva woh sab ek misunderstanding thi..... Mein woh....(crying)

Dhara- oo.... Please jaise tumne waha par behave kiya na..... Misunderstanding clear kiya hai...

Gautam- dhara tujhe galat femi hui hongi!!! (Calmly)

Dhara- nahi gombi.......(angrily)

Raavi- bhabhi....... (Scared)

Dhara- bhabhi nahi hoon mein tumari (angrily shouting)......

Gautam- dhara!!!! ( angrily Shouting) ...... Baat toh sunle tu iski.... (Angrily)

Dhara- tum iske liye mujh par chila rahe hoon (angrily).....

Gautam- mein bass keh raha ho ki raavi ki baat toh sunle.... (Calmly)

Raavi- woh uss din ko bhi hui.... Woh ek misunderstanding thi (shivering)

Dhara- jhoot mat bolo (angrily holding my hand)

Shiva- bhabhi choriye raavi ka haat!!!! (Calmly)

Dhara- shiva.... (Angrily)

Shiva- bhabhi ghar chalte hai!!! (Calmly)

Gautam- hai dhara abhi ke liye ghar chalte hai tu bohot gussa mein hai (calmly)

Dhara- nahi ajj toh faisla hokar rehega.... Shiva Tu iss ladki se dubara nahi milega.... (Angrily)

My world was shattered..... How can she even say this......

Shiva meri duniya hai... Mein uske bina nahi reh sakti!!!! 🥺🥺

Shiva- theek hai bhabhi (silently)

Shiva!!!!!! 🥺🥺🥺

Shiva- bhabhi abb toh please chaliye.... (Requesting)

Gautam- ha dhara chal ghar!!!!

Then dhara bhabhi went with gombi.... While I kept looking at Shiva....

Shiva ase kaise bol sakta hai!!! 🥺🥺

Shiva also look at me...

Dhara- Shiva chal (inside the car)

Shiva-bhabhi app jao!!!

Dhara- Shiva chal......

Shiva- par bhabhi.....

Dhara- Shiva......

Telling Shiva stare at me n went towards his cars....... He sit on his car n keep looking at me..... I had tears in my eyes!!!!

Shiva please mujhe chorkar maat jao!!! 🥺🥺

Shiva left ...... I was heart broken....

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Raavi yeh kya galti kar diya tune..... Mein dhara bhabhi ko aram se bhi baat samjha sakti thi.... Phir uss din itna gussa kyu kiya...... Abb toh woh sab bhi mujhe misunderstand kar rahe honge!!!! Shiva ne bhi dosti thor diya..... Kitne mushkil ke baad hum dono ki dosti hui thi..... 🥺😭

I was walking alone on the road been heartbroken...... I was continuous crying..... I was broken...... At that time I heard horn....

I look backside to see dev n rishita..... They stop the car n came towards me...

Rishita hug me

Rishita- raavi Tu theek toh hai na.... (Break the hug) Kya huwa??? (Concerned)

I was too broken to answer anything....

Dev- rishita raavi ko ghar lejate hai!!!!

Then rishita took me to the car n made me sit.....

In all the journey..... I didn't talk with them.....

Ring ring...

Dev- rishita tumara phone!!!!

Raavi- o..... (Then she pick the call)

Rishita- hello maa...... O thik hai..... App dono kisi friend ke anniversary mein ja rahe hai...... K k..... Theel hai hum ghar hi ja rahe hai..... Theek hai hum khaana kha lengi.... K bye enjoy...

She cut the call

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We reach the home...... Before rishita n dev can ask me any question I just run away.......

I was crying.....

Rishita-raavi (hugging me) kya huwa.... Tu ase kyu ro rahi hai??? (Tens)

Raavi- rishita mera pyaar...... Mera pehla pyaar adhura re gaya (crying)

Rishita-raavi please bata kya hua mujhe daar lag raha hai!!!! (Tens)

Raavi pov end

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That's it

The end

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