Progression ft ShiVi (updated part 9) *COMPLETED* - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Both are in pain but hope it goes away soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome... can't wait for the next.... please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Things are so tangled right now. I hope Raavi will find a way to clear the confusion, soon.

Waiting for the next chapter...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I didn't like his last statement....he is accusing her....read 3 parts at the same time.....lovely.....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gud one but short 😔 Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing update👏

Shivi are in pain😭

Let's see how Raavi will handle Shiva's insecurities

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART 6


Kya..kya bol raha h tu"

"Are..vahi raaz jo tune is diary m mahino se nahii nahi itne saalo se chupa kr rkha h, muje toh laga tha tu bhul gyi hogi sab pn nahi, tu toh shadi hone k bd bhi...."said shiva

"Sharam aani chahiye tuje shiva" raavi said angrily

Move closer to her

"Aati h na..tujhse shadi karke, teri zindagi barbard karke, galti hogyi thi jo us din mandap pr aa gya bhabhi ki baat taal ni paya kyunki tujhe apni aankho se marta hua nahi dekh skta tha!!"

"Shiva yeh tu ky bole ja raha, zara sa bhi andaza h tuje"

Shiva show her the diary page-

Barabar bol raha hu mei...'tujhe bola tha na tu azad h yeh shadi chodkar jane k liye fr kyu nahi gyi tu, tera mera rishta khatam tu ja yaha se' tears rolling on his cheek.

Raavi couldn't manage to speak and answer his questions now.

"Tujhe yeh diary nahi padni chahiye thi shiva"

"Voh...voh tu so rhi thi tre pas aaya achnak yeh dikh gya galti hogyi!!" hesitates a little.

She makes him sleep on his bed, unknowingly shiva held raavi's hand tightly.

"(Blabbering) maine tujhe bola tha na nahi chodunga par tera faisla muje manzoor h"

Raavi whispers 'yeh ky ho gya h tuje shiva I'm really sry'

Shiva still in sleep 'tu duniya mein nahi aati..'

Tears roll down raavi cheek, she tries to let go of shiva's hand but his grip is so tight she kept it as it is.

She sits with support, tears rolling down, one after other as she was riding a guilt ride.

She knows that he wasn't angry, he was broke!!

Rays of sunshine fall on both, raavi opened her eyes, she was still in the same position her hand entangled in shiva's hand. She went near him

How calm he looked while sleeping.

She couldn't stop adoring him and series of flashback striked her- Him saving him from suicide, standing up when rishita insulted her, putting pallu on her shoulder when they were kidnapped, saving her in kandar, saving him from goons , then messages and videocall, her birthday, moments of them in car, his caressing her after he patted and killed Macchar, the reception dance and him calling her "RAAVI"

She was staring him, she adjusted his hair so that it doesn't distrub him, as she tried to remove her hand, he woke up.

The first thing he saw was her, their eyes met. They were so close they could feel each other heart beating at top speed. Their eye contact broke when raavi said "shiva..mera hath"

Shiva suddenly realized left her hand and distanced himself and place his hand over forhead "Aah!! Mera sar"

Raavi who was now leaving came back worried n asked "ky hua?? Sar dard zyda horha and went near him"

"Kuch...kuch nahi hua mujhe or tu kya chipak rhi h dur reh mujse" and walked off.

Raavi knew that he was going to avoid him know but at the same time she was clueless about what to do. She left for her daily routine, she entered kitchen and saw dhara bhabhi preparing breakfast.

Dhara" Aare raavi tu aa gyi mujhe na tujse baat krni h"

Raavi knew what was it about but still agreed

"Hn bolo na di

She was going to speak but saw rishita coming

"Sun raavi mei or rishita sbko chai nashta dekhkr aati hu tu sarbat banale"

Rishita confusingly "sarbat...hn garmi ho rhi h na"

Raavi understand the sigh...she make nimbu pani and take it to room

"Shiva yeh nimbu pani or dawai khale better feel krega"

Shiva in irritating tone"boldia na kuch nahi hua h or yeh sati savitri banne ka natak na mere samne mat kr smjhi"

Shiva started walking but raavi hold his wrist, he gulped and turns towards her.

Raavi know that aruging wouldn't work so she took the pill and offered him

He opened his mouth and after she put the pill, she immediately made him drink nimbu pani..

During all these only one thing which remained constant was their staring game.

As the glass got empty, shiva started walking off..

"Shiva sun toh muje kuch baat karni h"

"(Sighs) dekh, kal raat mujse bht badi glti hogyi h muje pta h"

"(Cutting in between) pan shiva sun toh"

"Nahi muje tujse baat karne m koi interest nahi h" walks away

"Gadheda, meri baat toh kabhi nahi sunta, jnti hu is baar glti meri h pr mei kya kru kuch samaj ni aa rha h"





Hey everyone ❤

Hope u r doing well, this is the 6th part i'll try to complete it asap..

My helping hand in this part to make it more intense @Iktara22...much love to u🥰


-S_Verma

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is getting super interesting!!! Waiting for more ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Beautiful update ❤♥


What will raavi do now ?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's Ravi past .she can't change it n what has changed is her emotions n feelings for dev n shiva too but for shiva it seems like reality where his wife loves his own brother .so he being hurt is natural . let's see how ravi clears her stand.

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