Progression ft ShiVi (updated part 9) *COMPLETED* - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omg...so intense...❤️❤️😍😍 incredible!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Woww ❤❤. Can't wait to read next part.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

This is amazing. ❤️

How could you just end the chapter there ? 😭

The story is getting intense and I really loved this ShiVi journey so far.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Update sooon....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Wow wow wow...the last two chapters were super intense❤️

I am loving this so much. Shiva and Raavi both are in pain and completely broken....💔😭

Do update soon...want to know what happens next❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loving how this is going. The question is will she or won't she reveal her feelings?! I hope Shiva's able to understand what she wants even if she doesn't voice it. Continue soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved Raavi's dialogue

Waiing for next chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Amazing update, it was so intense👏

Loved Raavi's words❤️

Glad that Shiva witnessed Raavi burning her past😊

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Love it ❤️

What a wonderful update👏👏


I want to know what Ravi will tell to Shiva .


Waiting for the next part.

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Short update 😔 But nice😊

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PART-9


R:Voh...voh mujhse kese pata tujhe nahi dikha teri galti(looks away)

Shiva pulls her close & makes her look into his eyes...her fist with papers get loosened)

S:Dikha!

They share an intense stare but suddenly she realised that he took all papers freeing from

her fist & gets up too & says..."wapas de Shiva!

S:Nahi dunga ja!Le sakti hai toh leke dikha..dekh teri chudailo ki aawaz se chilla mat ghar mein sab so rahe hai !!!!

(runs out of room & closes the kadi of door & caging in her that room so that he could read this in peace...he knew what he was doing, was wrong but he wanted to know why she saved that papers...)

He was curious about what she felt & obviously he would be because though out of rage he had told her to leave but didn't wanted her to leave.

R:Shiva mujhe pata hai tu yahin hai kholna darvaza!Tu ese nahi kar sakta!!!(she huffs in anger)

S:Ae chipkali chup reh warna teen chipkali aur bhej dunga(like a whisper)

(Shiva & Raavi both sat in opposite direction with support of the door.Shiva opened the papers...there were 3-4 papers half burnt, crumbled but still he started reading the 1st one)

1."Aaj Shiva ki diary mein pehli entry hai...matlab pehli bhi thi but aaj bohot alag baat hai...Kal Shiva ne meri jaan bachai, firse...aur to aur usne mujhe "Raavi" kehker pukara...uske muh se mera naam (not visible due to burnt:kitnaa pyara lag raha tha ki bas sunti hi rahu)

Par isse mai Thank you kese bolu?

Haan dil ka bohot (burnt & not visible:achha hai aur aaj usse meri chinta ho rahi thi..mujhe bachane apni pith tod deta yeh...gadheda!(Rest was burnt)

(Shiva went into the flashback of Khandar day when he saved her and how worried was he when she was unconcious)

Shiva was overhwhelmed,shocked? confused?He was clueless...he took the second one..

2."Kisine tel giraya tha...mai gir jaat aur sar fatt jaata toh?Par mere hero ne mujhe bacha liya aur davai bhi lagai..yeh itna zyada(burnt & not visible:caring hai mujhe nai pata tha..)

He was really confused now, he wanted to read that whole and he wanted to read that whole now...(innervoice)Mai bhi gadheda hu na yeh dikhna chahiye tha na!(sighs)

He opens the 3rd one...


3."Kal se pata nahi maine Shiva ko kitna bura bola...par us bandar ka dimag bhi to tedha chalta hai kya hota agar mujhe pehle bata deta toh kya ho jata?Gadheda!

...par fir bhi dil se bohot achha hai par kya usse mujh par thoda sa bhi bharosa nahi?mujhe kyu nahi bataya?voh mujhse kuch share kyu nahi karta?kya voh mujhe apna nahi samajta?mujhpe trust nahi hai kya usse??..

pata nahi...aaj mere birthday party mein bhi itna achha se behave kiya...mujhe itna acha laga,kitna pyara lag raha tha na...jab hasta hai to kitna cute lagta hai par yeh gadheda toh hasta hi nahi..."

Shiva was smiling like a kid does when he gets the chocolate...but when he thought about how she felt that he didn't trusted her...he was now so overwhelmed he would just hug her and would never part.


He finally gathered courage, got up and went into the room but he sees Raavi was asleep now;she was looking so peaceful, co cute...like a little baby he thought.


He went towards her, put the papers in her hand and covered her body with blanket...but Raavi in her sleep subconciously held his fingers and Shiva smiled even more now...he went near her, tucked her hair strands behind her ear...he caressed her cheek and kissed her forehead, in her sleep she smiled, as if she loved his touch, she actually did; her face looked contented.


S:Shayad tune mujhe nahi par maine tujhe samajhne mein galti kardi...galti to nahi par overreact kardia..

pan tu to mera gussa jaanti haina?mujhe nahi pata tha Raavi tu mujhe samajhne lagi hai...vese...vese chipkali tu itni bhi buri nahi hai...(stares at her and continues)

aur ab mai bhi...shayad..tujhe...samajhne laga hu..

Ab teri aankhein padhna aasan hojayega...❤









Hey lovelies so this is the end part of this ffs i hope u love it...❤

Will be back soon with another story...till then takecare 💓


-S_Verma & @Iktaara22



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